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calls Jessica "Beloved Wife" and she calls him "Beloved Husband" after they both learn from the Old Man what the phrases mean (they had seen the phrases inscribed on a pair of gravestones that they came across on their journey and had no idea what they meant).
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* Logan calls Jessica "Beloved Wife" and she calls him "Beloved Husband" after they both learn from the Old Man what the phrases mean (they had seen the phrases inscribed on a pair of gravestones that they came across on their journey and had no idea what they meant).
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* After leaving the domed city, Logan and Jessica come across a pair of gravestones inscribed with "Beloved Husband" and "Beloved Wife," phrases with which they are unfamiliar. After meeting the Old Man, they ask him about the phrases on the gravestones. After the Old Man explains what the phrases mean, Logan calls Jessica "beloved wife," and she calls him "beloved husband."
calls Jessica "Beloved Wife" and she calls him "Beloved Husband" after they both learn from the Old Man what the phrases mean (they had seen the phrases inscribed on a pair of gravestones that they came across on their journey and had no idea what they meant).
calls Jessica "Beloved Wife" and she calls him "Beloved Husband" after they both learn from the Old Man what the phrases mean (they had seen the phrases inscribed on a pair of gravestones that they came across on their journey and had no idea what they meant).
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* Francis 7's death is [[TearJerker oddly heart-warming]]. After being shot, he sees the life-clock on Logan's hand-which has turned clear due to their leaving the dome-and spends his last moments joyful, believing his friend had been granted Renewal.
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* Francis 7's death is [[TearJerker oddly heart-warming]]. After being shot, he sees the life-clock on Logan's hand-which hand - which has turned clear due to their leaving the dome-and dome - and spends his last moments joyful, believing his friend had been granted Renewal.
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* Francis 7's death is [[TearJerker oddly heart-warming]]. After being shot, he sees the life-clock on Logan's hand -which has turned clear due to their leaving the dome- and spends his last moments joyful, believing his friend had been granted Renewal.
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* Francis 7's death is [[TearJerker oddly heart-warming]]. After being shot, he sees the life-clock on Logan's hand -which hand-which has turned clear due to their leaving the dome- and dome-and spends his last moments joyful, believing his friend had been granted Renewal.
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* Francis 7's death is [[TearJerker oddly heart-warming]] as he sees the life-clock on Logan's hand -turned clear due to their leaving the dome- and spends his last moments joyful, believing his friend had been granted Renewal.
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* Francis 7's death is [[TearJerker oddly heart-warming]] as heart-warming]]. After being shot, he sees the life-clock on Logan's hand -turned -which has turned clear due to their leaving the dome- and spends his last moments joyful, believing his friend had been granted Renewal.
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* Logan calls Jessica "Beloved Wife" and she calls him "Beloved Husband" after they both learn from the Old Man what the phrases mean (they had seen the phrases inscribed on a pair of gravestones that they came across on their journey and had no idea what they meant).
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* Logan calls Jessica "Beloved Wife" and she calls him "Beloved Husband" after they both learn from the Old Man what the phrases mean (they had seen the phrases inscribed on a pair of gravestones that they came across on their journey and had no idea what they meant).meant).
* Francis 7's death is [[TearJerker oddly heart-warming]] as he sees the life-clock on Logan's hand -turned clear due to their leaving the dome- and spends his last moments joyful, believing his friend had been granted Renewal.
* Francis 7's death is [[TearJerker oddly heart-warming]] as he sees the life-clock on Logan's hand -turned clear due to their leaving the dome- and spends his last moments joyful, believing his friend had been granted Renewal.
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* Logan calls Jessica "Beloved Wife" and she calls him "Beloved Husband" after the both learn from the Old Man what the phrases mean (they had seen the phrases inscribed on a pair of gravestones that they came across on their journey and had no idea what they meant).
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* Logan calls Jessica "Beloved Wife" and she calls him "Beloved Husband" after the they both learn from the Old Man what the phrases mean (they had seen the phrases inscribed on a pair of gravestones that they came across on their journey and had no idea what they meant).
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* Logan calls Jessica "Beloved Wife" and she calls him "Beloved Husband" after the both learn from the Old Man what the phrases mean (they had seen the phrases inscribed on a pair of gravestones that they came across on their journey and had no idea what they meant).
