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'''Zeetha:''' Agatha—I have been wandering for three years now, and you are the first person who has ever ''heard'' of [[AdvancedAncientAcropolis Skifander]]. I was beginning to think that I had ''[[MistakenForInsane made it all up]]'' while I was ''feverish''. [[HopeBringer You let me know that my home—my family—]]''[[HopeBringer does]]'' [[HopeBringer exist]].
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'''Zeetha:''' Agatha—I have been wandering for three years now, and you are the first person who has ever ''heard'' of [[AdvancedAncientAcropolis [[HiddenElfVillage Skifander]]. I was beginning to think that I had ''[[MistakenForInsane made it all up]]'' while I was ''feverish''. [[HopeBringer You let me know that my home—my family—]]''[[HopeBringer does]]'' [[HopeBringer exist]].
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* Upon first meeting Agatha and realizing she's on the run from Baron Wulfenbach, [[ShootTheDog Master Payne's circus turns her away in order to protect themselves]], [[IDidWhatIHadToDo something they're NOT happy to do]]. But when a wild clank attacks them and [[GoodSamaritan Agatha returns to save them]]? They [[FakingTheDead fake her death]] and take her in, no questions asked.
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* Upon first meeting Agatha and realizing she's on the run from Baron Wulfenbach, [[ShootTheDog Master Payne's circus turns her away in order to protect themselves]], [[IDidWhatIHadToDo something they're NOT happy to do]]. But when a wild clank attacks them and [[GoodSamaritan Agatha Agatha]] returns to [[BigDamnHeroes save them]]? They [[FakingTheDead fake her death]] and take her in, no questions asked.
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* [[https://www.girlgeniusonline.com/comic.php?date=20050204 Zeetha apologizes to Agatha]] for throwing a tantrum on her during their first meeting, before thanking her for saving the caravan and, more importantly, for letting her know she's not crazy.
-->'''Zeetha:''' I never got a change to thank you, or to ''apologize'' for my earlier outburst.\\
'''Agatha:''' That's okay. [[CommonalityConnection To lose everyone]]—it's ''[[CloseToHome awful]].''\\
'''Zeetha:''' Not so awful ''now.''\\
'''Agatha:''' Oh?\\
'''Zeetha:''' Agatha—I have been wandering for three years now, and you are the first person who has ever ''heard'' of [[AdvancedAncientAcropolis Skifander]]. I was beginning to think that I had ''[[MistakenForInsane made it all up]]'' while I was ''feverish''. [[HopeBringer You let me know that my home—my family—]]''[[HopeBringer does]]'' [[HopeBringer exist]].
-->'''Zeetha:''' I never got a change to thank you, or to ''apologize'' for my earlier outburst.\\
'''Agatha:''' That's okay. [[CommonalityConnection To lose everyone]]—it's ''[[CloseToHome awful]].''\\
'''Zeetha:''' Not so awful ''now.''\\
'''Agatha:''' Oh?\\
'''Zeetha:''' Agatha—I have been wandering for three years now, and you are the first person who has ever ''heard'' of [[AdvancedAncientAcropolis Skifander]]. I was beginning to think that I had ''[[MistakenForInsane made it all up]]'' while I was ''feverish''. [[HopeBringer You let me know that my home—my family—]]''[[HopeBringer does]]'' [[HopeBringer exist]].
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-->'''Countess:''' You saved our lives and tried to save Olga's, even after we sent you away. [[IOweYouMyLife We]] ''[[IOweYouMyLife had]]'' [[IOweYouMyLife to do this]].
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* In the final pages of ''Literature/AgathaHAndTheSiegeOfMechanicsburg'', after Gil fights with Agatha and is removed by Franz, there's a moment where he and Klaus confer privately; it's made clear that while Gil is ''very'' angry about the mental overlay that's been inflicted on him, he also knows that it isn't his father's fault, he didn't want to do it and was forced to on Lucrezia's order, and he reassures Klaus that they'll fight back against Lucrezia and defeat her.
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* In the final pages of ''Literature/AgathaHAndTheSiegeOfMechanicsburg'', after Gil 'Gil' fights with Agatha and is removed by Franz, there's a moment where he and Klaus confer privately; it's privately:
** Gil reveals that due to him, Agatha and Tarvek all being hooked into the ''Si Vales Valeo'' procedure, all three of them are somehow now in synch and instinctively 'know' each other on some level, meaning Agatha was very quickly able to work out that the overlay of Klaus was in control.
** It's made clear that while Gil is ''very'' angry about the mental overlay that's been inflicted on him, he also knows that it isn't his father's fault, he didn't want to do it and was forced to on Lucrezia's order, and he reassures Klaus that they'll fight back against Lucrezia and defeat her.
** Gil reveals that due to him, Agatha and Tarvek all being hooked into the ''Si Vales Valeo'' procedure, all three of them are somehow now in synch and instinctively 'know' each other on some level, meaning Agatha was very quickly able to work out that the overlay of Klaus was in control.
** It's made clear that while Gil is ''very'' angry about the mental overlay that's been inflicted on him, he also knows that it isn't his father's fault, he didn't want to do it and was forced to on Lucrezia's order, and he reassures Klaus that they'll fight back against Lucrezia and defeat her.
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* In the final pages of ''Literature/AgathaHAndTheSiegeOfMechanicsburg'', after Gil fights with Agatha and is removed by Franz, there's a moment where he and Klaus confer privately; it's made clear that while Gil is ''very'' angry about the mental overlay that has been inflicted on him, he knows it isn't his father's fault and that he didn't want to do it, and reassures Klaus that they'll fight back against Lucrezia and defeat her.
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* In the final pages of ''Literature/AgathaHAndTheSiegeOfMechanicsburg'', after Gil fights with Agatha and is removed by Franz, there's a moment where he and Klaus confer privately; it's made clear that while Gil is ''very'' angry about the mental overlay that has that's been inflicted on him, he also knows that it isn't his father's fault and that fault, he didn't want to do it, it and was forced to on Lucrezia's order, and he reassures Klaus that they'll fight back against Lucrezia and defeat her.
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* [[https://www.girlgeniusonline.com/comic.php?date=20210728 Higgs makes Gunner Thomas Crothers,]] who's been trapped on Big Rat Island with no creature comforts (and a whole lot of creatures who wanted to eat him) for several years, [[MundaneMadeAwesome a cup of tea.]] Crothers' wonder is a joy to behold. And on the next page [[https://www.girlgeniusonline.com/comic.php?date=20210730 he's clearly savouring his brew.]]
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* In ''Literature/AgathaHAndTheClockworkPrincess'', Klaus describes Punch and Judy as "the two greatest people I have ever known." Heartwarming enough on its own, but more so when you remember that the most obvious people to compare them to would be the Heterodyne Boys, who everyone else sees as the greatest people the world has ever known. This is doubly so considering that they're constructs, not 'real' people. This justification has been used. Klaus clearly [[PetTheDog doesn't have the same views.]]
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* In ''Literature/AgathaHAndTheClockworkPrincess'', Klaus describes Punch and Judy as "the two greatest people I have ever known." Heartwarming enough on its own, but more so when you remember that the most obvious people to compare them to would be the Heterodyne Boys, who everyone else sees as the greatest people the world has ever known. This is doubly so considering that they're constructs, not 'real' people. This justification has been used. Klaus clearly [[PetTheDog doesn't have the same views.]]]]
* In the final pages of ''Literature/AgathaHAndTheSiegeOfMechanicsburg'', after Gil fights with Agatha and is removed by Franz, there's a moment where he and Klaus confer privately; it's made clear that while Gil is ''very'' angry about the mental overlay that has been inflicted on him, he knows it isn't his father's fault and that he didn't want to do it, and reassures Klaus that they'll fight back against Lucrezia and defeat her.
* In the final pages of ''Literature/AgathaHAndTheSiegeOfMechanicsburg'', after Gil fights with Agatha and is removed by Franz, there's a moment where he and Klaus confer privately; it's made clear that while Gil is ''very'' angry about the mental overlay that has been inflicted on him, he knows it isn't his father's fault and that he didn't want to do it, and reassures Klaus that they'll fight back against Lucrezia and defeat her.
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* In ''The Mechanicsburg Guild of Monsters'', Dr. Hembelbrog recalls how the Heterodyne Boys, once they took over, razed the Monster District to the ground in order to destroy the Fleshyards, and might have done the same to the monsters living there -- but the rest of Mechanicsburg came to their aid and took them in, protecting them from the new masters.
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-->'''Vanamonde''': In your travels, remember that ''you'' are the Great Dragon of Mechanicsburg--defender of the treasury--lurker in the dark--watcher over all that shines--and irreplaceable member of our great family! By this chain of office, let the world know that ''you'' are ''one of our own--protected by our lady--by the teeth and claws of her horde--by the hand of every denizen of our valley--'''and woe betide any who dares harm you'''''!
-->'''Franz''': (tearing up) Awww! You guys!
-->'''Franz''': (tearing up) Awww! You guys!
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-->'''Vanamonde''': In your travels, remember that ''you'' are the Great Dragon of Mechanicsburg--defender of the treasury--lurker in the dark--watcher over all that shines--and irreplaceable member of our great family! By this chain of office, let the world know that ''you'' are ''one of our own--protected by our lady--by the teeth and claws of her horde--by the hand of every denizen of our valley--'''and valley--'''[[RoaringRampageOfRevenge and woe betide any who dares harm you'''''!
-->'''Franz''':you]]'''''!\\
'''Franz''': (tearing up) Awww! You guys!
-->'''Franz''':
'''Franz''': (tearing up) Awww! You guys!
