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** This troper thought it was awesome when Jiaan realizes [[spoiler:that Kavi didn't betray them again and then frantically tries to find a way to save him.]] This coming from a man who, two chapters ago, couldn't care less if he died a painful death.
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** This troper thought it was awesome when When Jiaan realizes [[spoiler:that Kavi didn't betray them again and then frantically tries to find a way to save him.]] This coming from a man who, two chapters ago, couldn't care less if he died a painful death.
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** This troper thought it was awesome when Jiaan realizes [[spoiler:that Kavi didn't betray them again and then frantically tries to find a way to save him.]] This coming from a man who, two chapters ago, could couldn't care less if he died a painful death.
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** "GOODBYE, SISTER!!" (Soraya was startled but [[CharacterDevelopement she didn't miss a beat in nodding and waving back]].)
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** "GOODBYE, SISTER!!" (Soraya was startled but [[CharacterDevelopement [[CharacterDevelopment she didn't miss a beat in nodding and waving back]].)
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** "GOODBYE, SISTER!!" (Soraya was startled but [[CharacterDevelopement she didn't miss a beat in nodding and waving back]])
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** "GOODBYE, SISTER!!" (Soraya was startled but [[CharacterDevelopement she didn't miss a beat in nodding and waving back]])back]].)
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