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* Before that, after the whole hospital debacle, we have Yuki buying parenting manuals and promising not to fail at parentiing, which perks up Shigeru, them both agreeing that they'll succeed at parenting.
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* Before that, after the whole hospital debacle, we have Yuki buying parenting manuals and promising not to fail at parentiing, which parenting. This perks up Shigeru, them and they both agreeing agree that they'll succeed at parenting.
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* Before that, aft the whole hospital debacle, we have Yuki buying parenting manuals and promising not to fail at parentiing, which perks up Shigeru, them both agreeing that they'll succeed at parenting.
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* Before that, aft after the whole hospital debacle, we have Yuki buying parenting manuals and promising not to fail at parentiing, which perks up Shigeru, them both agreeing that they'll succeed at parenting.
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* Similarly, Shigeru [[spoiler: encouraging Mika to find Shigeo, Puni's father]]
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* Similarly, Shigeru [[spoiler: encouraging Mika to find Shigeo, Puni's father]]father]].
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* When Yuki first meets Puni and his and Shigeru's general (haphazard but well-meaning) care towards him. Also, the former's PapaWolf behavior towards Puni when he finds out that [[spoiler: Mika intended to abandon him]]. Likewise, though it's [[TearJerker heart-tugging]], Mika's [[spoiler: reunion with her son]] [[https://www.mangatown.com/manga/akkan_baby/v01/c000/149.html]]
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* When Yuki first meets Puni Puni, and his and Shigeru's general (haphazard but well-meaning) care towards him. Also, the former's PapaWolf behavior towards Puni when he finds out that [[spoiler: Mika intended to abandon him]]. Likewise, though it's [[TearJerker heart-tugging]], Mika's [[spoiler: reunion with her son]] [[https://www.mangatown.com/manga/akkan_baby/v01/c000/149.html]]son]].
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* Similarly, Shigeru [[spoiler: encouraging Mika to find Shigeo, Puni's father]]
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* Similarly, Shigeru [[spoiler: encouraging Mika to find Shigeo, Puni's father]]father]]
*Before that, aft the whole hospital debacle, we have Yuki buying parenting manuals and promising not to fail at parentiing, which perks up Shigeru, them both agreeing that they'll succeed at parenting.
*Before that, aft the whole hospital debacle, we have Yuki buying parenting manuals and promising not to fail at parentiing, which perks up Shigeru, them both agreeing that they'll succeed at parenting.
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* HeartwarmingMoments: When Yuki first meets Puni and his and Shigeru's general (haphazard but well-meaning) care towards him. Also, the former's PapaWolf behavior towards Puni when he finds out that [[spoiler: Mika intended to abandon him]]. Likewise, though it's [[TearJerker heart-tugging]], Mika's [[spoiler: reunion with her son]] [[https://www.mangatown.com/manga/akkan_baby/v01/c000/149.html]]
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* HeartwarmingMoments: When Yuki first meets Puni and his and Shigeru's general (haphazard but well-meaning) care towards him. Also, the former's PapaWolf behavior towards Puni when he finds out that [[spoiler: Mika intended to abandon him]]. Likewise, though it's [[TearJerker heart-tugging]], Mika's [[spoiler: reunion with her son]] [[https://www.mangatown.com/manga/akkan_baby/v01/c000/149.html]]
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* HeartwarmingMoments: When Yuki first meets Puni and his and Shigeru's general (haphazard but well-meaning) care towards him. Also, the former's PapaWolf behavior towards Puni when he finds out that [[spoiler: Mika intended to abandon him]]. Likewise, though it's [[TearJerker heart-tugging]], Mika's [[spoiler: reunion with her son]] [[https://www.mangatown.com/manga/akkan_baby/v01/c000/149.html]]
* Similarly, Shigeru [[spoiler: encouraging Mika to find Shigeo, Puni's father]]
* Similarly, Shigeru [[spoiler: encouraging Mika to find Shigeo, Puni's father]]
