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** Smoker's cough?
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** Smoker's cough?cough?
* In chapter 10, Dark has to buy an entire box of bullets with his “snipper rifle”, even though he only needs one, and plans to sell the rest of the bullets when he’s done. He never plans to sell the rifle, so what did he intend to do with it after selling the ammo?
* In chapter 10, Dark has to buy an entire box of bullets with his “snipper rifle”, even though he only needs one, and plans to sell the rest of the bullets when he’s done. He never plans to sell the rifle, so what did he intend to do with it after selling the ammo?
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* How does one whisper "like moldy bread?"
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* How does one whisper "like moldy bread?"bread?"
** Smoker's cough?
** Smoker's cough?
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** Could just be a spelling error, could be because "moon" sounds prettier than "moan", so the author fudged, or it could somehow be a vague reference to the fact that Light's night is spelt with the kanji for moon...
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** Could just be a spelling error, could be because "moon" sounds prettier than "moan", so the author fudged, or it could somehow be a vague reference to the fact that Light's night name is spelt with the kanji for moon...
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** Could just be a spelling error, could be because "moon" sounds prettier than "moan", so the author fudged, or it could somehow be a vague reference to the fact that Light's night is spelt with the kanji for moon...
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*** The validity of it being a troll fic is questionable.
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*** The validity of it being a troll fic is questionable.questionable.
* How does one whisper "like moldy bread?"
* How does one whisper "like moldy bread?"
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** [[TrollFic Ahem...]]
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** [[TrollFic Ahem...]]]]
***The validity of it being a troll fic is questionable.
***The validity of it being a troll fic is questionable.
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* I know that in fanfics like these, the spelling is not only terrible but often inconsistent and It's a throw-away line, but why did the author have the desk lady point out that Naomi backwards is "I Moon" instead of "I Moan", a perfectly good SdrawkcabName result?
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* I know that in fanfics like these, the spelling is not only terrible but often inconsistent and It's a throw-away line, but why did the author have the desk lady point out that Naomi backwards is "I Moon" instead of "I Moan", a perfectly good SdrawkcabName result?result?
** [[TrollFic Ahem...]]
** [[TrollFic Ahem...]]
