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*** Indeed, its ''doubly'' impossible to sell the team -- the team charter states that the only way the Packers can change their existing ownership setup is to ''formally dissolve the team''. At which point, the shareholders receive back only ''the original purchase price of their shares''. Calculate the odds of any shareholder ever voting to dump the Packers franchise if they can't even make a dime off doing so.
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*** Indeed, its it's ''doubly'' impossible to sell the team -- the team charter states that the only way the Packers can change their existing ownership setup is to ''formally dissolve the team''. At which point, the shareholders receive back only ''the original purchase price of their shares''. Calculate the odds of any shareholder ever voting to dump the Packers franchise if they can't even make a dime off doing so.
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*** She's the main character, she has to be likable. Plus the series rely more on CharacterDevelopment then FOP (I assume, I don't watch that show, so I judged based on what I know of the show, so correct me if I'm wrong).
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*** She's the main character, she has to be likable. Plus the series rely relies more on CharacterDevelopment then FOP (I assume, I don't watch that show, so I judged based on what I know of the show, so correct me if I'm wrong).
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*** Perhaps 'ordinary' is a poor word for this situation. They care about their childrens' well-beings but can't relate to teenage issues, like wanting to have the latest fashions. So they're relatively balanced but quirky.
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*** Perhaps 'ordinary' is a poor word for this situation. They care about their childrens' well-beings children's well-being but can't relate to teenage issues, like wanting to have the latest fashions. So they're relatively balanced but quirky.
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* Ember explains this: "The more kids chanting, the stronger I get! ... Now that, they're chanting my name, my music CAN affect you!" Her PopularityPower gave her a big enough power boost to affect Danny.
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[[folder:Danny's inconsistent immunity to Ember's music]]
In Ember's first appearance, Danny is notably one of the few people who hears Ember's music and is ''not'' affected by it. Sam speculates that him being half-ghost has something to do with it, which might be an acceptable explanation. However, later that same episode, Danny succumbs to Ember mind controlling him to be obsessively in love with Sam. Why would his ghost powers give him immunity to one but not the other? And if it's not his ghost powers that gave him immunity, what did and why didn't it work on Ember's "love song"?
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* Because [[EvilIsSexy he sounds hot]].
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* Because [[EvilIsSexy he sounds hot]].hot.
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OK, this may take a while, and I'm terrible at explaining things but bear with me. It was because of the fight between Danny and Box Lunch that the Nasty Burger exploded, right? Danny blowing up that pack of sauce caused that boiler of [[MadeOfExplodium highly explosive sauce]] to leak, which lead to it's explosion, which lead to hilarity ensuing. And, the explosion caused Danny to obtain those test answers, which caused Lancer to suspect him of cheating, which caused him, Danny's family, Tucker and Sam to be at the Nasty Burger when it blew up. But, Box Lunch was only fighting Danny because Clockwork sent her to the present to eliminate him! If Clockwork didn't send her back, that fight wouldn't have happened, Danny wouldn't have gotten that answer sheet and the Nasty Burger wouldn't have exploded. Clockwork could've easily averted the bad future by not sending anybody back to kill Danny.
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OK, this may take a while, and I'm terrible at explaining things but bear with me. It was because of the fight between Danny and Box Lunch that the Nasty Burger exploded, right? Danny blowing up that pack of sauce caused that boiler of [[MadeOfExplodium highly explosive sauce]] to leak, which lead to it's its explosion, which lead to hilarity ensuing. And, the explosion caused Danny to obtain those test answers, which caused Lancer to suspect him of cheating, which caused him, Danny's family, Tucker and Sam to be at the Nasty Burger when it blew up. But, Box Lunch was only fighting Danny because Clockwork sent her to the present to eliminate him! If Clockwork didn't send her back, that fight wouldn't have happened, Danny wouldn't have gotten that answer sheet and the Nasty Burger wouldn't have exploded. Clockwork could've easily averted the bad future by not sending anybody back to kill Danny.
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[[folder:''WesternAnimation/TheUltimateEnemy''- The bad future could have easily been averted, and it's all Clockwork's fault for causing it.]]
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[[folder:Danny's punishment in "Pirate Radio"]]
Okay, what the hell was Danny's parents' problem with using the Emergency Ops Center, to the point where he got in trouble and punished for it in the end? Key word: ''emergency''. As in, it's for dangerous ghost attacks. ''AND THERE WAS A DANGEROUS GHOST ATTACK!'' They're supposed to be ghost hunters, and they couldn't stop to think that maybe Danny had a good reason to use it, considering how frequent ghost attacks are in Amity Park? Also, at the very least, Danny could have explained to his parents what happened and they would have believed him, and it's not like he would have to reveal his secret or anything since he did handle Ember and Youngblood without powers. Yes, the party at his house could have been a factor too, but that was entirely Dash and Kwan's fault, and if his parents knew that Danny and his classmates saved the city, then his grounding could have been less severe.
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Okay, what the hell was Danny's parents' problem with using the Emergency Ops Center, to the point where he got in trouble and punished for it in the end? Key word: ''emergency''. As in, it's for dangerous ghost attacks. ''AND THERE WAS A DANGEROUS GHOST ATTACK!'' They're supposed to be ghost hunters, and they couldn't stop to think that maybe Danny had a good reason to use it, considering how frequent ghost attacks are in Amity Park? Also, at the very least, Danny could have explained to his parents what happened and they would have believed him, and it's not like he would have to reveal his secret or anything since he did handle Ember and Youngblood without powers. Yes, the party at his house could have been a factor too, but that was entirely Dash and Kwan's fault, and if his parents knew that Danny and his classmates saved the city, then his grounding could have been less severe.
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