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* Whenever Ah-Ma rips Shen's silk clothes to annoy him.
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* While Shen is ranting about his lack of progress with Lianne and Zhan is standing close, someone interrupts their conversation by saying that Shen ''does'' like Lianne. Shen points his Guan Dao at Zhan's throat, only for the Wolf Boss to yelp that he didn't say it. Ah-Ma is revealed from Zhan's behind.
* During one of their spars, Shen traps Lianne in his hold with his Guan Dao, with only an inch separating his chest from her back. She suddenly takes an audibly deep breath of him and [[ShowSomeLeg presses herself against him in an intimate way]], wriggling herself free as his mind goes numb.
* During one of their spars, Shen traps Lianne in his hold with his Guan Dao, with only an inch separating his chest from her back. She suddenly takes an audibly deep breath of him and [[ShowSomeLeg presses herself against him in an intimate way]], wriggling herself free as his mind goes numb.
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* While Shen is ranting about his lack of progress with Lianne and Zhan is standing close, someone interrupts their conversation by saying that Shen ''does'' like Lianne. Shen points his Guan Dao at Zhan's throat, only for the Wolf Boss to yelp that he didn't say it. [[StealthHiBye Ah-Ma is revealed from Zhan's behind.
behind Zhan.]]
* During one of their spars, Shen traps Lianne in hishold with his Guan Dao, hold, with only an inch separating his chest from her back. She suddenly takes an audibly deep breath of him and [[ShowSomeLeg presses herself against him in an intimate way]], wriggling herself free as his mind goes numb.
* During one of their spars, Shen traps Lianne in his
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* During the reception of Master Thundering Rhino, Lianne has to give Shen clues like he was a child being told to behave. Eventually she plucks his downy feather to make him bow in respect to the Kung Fu master.
* Shen tells Lianne about him and Zhan playing in the city in their early teens. They ended up being chased by a group of drunken men until they came across an old white sheet. Shen stood on Zhan's shoulders and covered them with the sheet, leaving only his red eyes visible. Upon seeing the [[BedsheetGhost "ghoul"]] hissing out with a "demonic" voice, the drunkards ran away screaming.
* Shen tells Lianne about him and Zhan playing in the city in their early teens. They ended up being chased by a group of drunken men until they came across an old white sheet. Shen stood on Zhan's shoulders and covered them with the sheet, leaving only his red eyes visible. Upon seeing the [[BedsheetGhost "ghoul"]] hissing out with a "demonic" voice, the drunkards ran away screaming.
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* During the reception of Master Thundering Rhino, Lianne has to give Shen clues like he was were a child being told to behave. Eventually she plucks his downy feather to make him bow in respect to the Kung Fu master.
* Shen tells Lianneabout him when he and Zhan playing once played in the city in their early teens. They ended up being chased by a group of drunken men until they came across an old white sheet. Shen stood on Zhan's shoulders and covered them with the sheet, leaving only his red eyes visible. Upon seeing the [[BedsheetGhost "ghoul"]] hissing out with a "demonic" voice, the drunkards ran away screaming.
* Shen tells Lianne
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** Shen mentions Zhan trying once to come up with love poems for a dog maid.
* When Lianne's mother meets Shen for the first time, she says that [[InvertedTrope he's taller]] [[ExpectingSomeoneTaller than she thought]]. He's so baffled that he stares at her with [[JawDrop his beak hanging open]], amusing her.
* When Lianne's mother meets Shen for the first time, she says that [[InvertedTrope he's taller]] [[ExpectingSomeoneTaller than she thought]]. He's so baffled that he stares at her with [[JawDrop his beak hanging open]], amusing her.
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** Shen mentions that Zhan trying once tried to come up with love poems for a dog maid.
* When Lianne's mother meets Shen for the first time, she says that [[InvertedTrope he's taller]] [[ExpectingSomeoneTaller than she thought]]. He's so baffled that he stares at her with [[JawDrop his beak hanging open]], amusingher.the ill lady.
* When Lianne's mother meets Shen for the first time, she says that [[InvertedTrope he's taller]] [[ExpectingSomeoneTaller than she thought]]. He's so baffled that he stares at her with [[JawDrop his beak hanging open]], amusing
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-->'''Shen''': [[DeadpanSnarker I'm glad you find this so amusing...]]
-->'''Lianne''': It's good to see you put in your place every once in a while. If it wasn't so satisfying, I would call it ''endearing''.
-->'''Lianne''': It's good to see you put in your place every once in a while. If it wasn't so satisfying, I would call it ''endearing''.
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-->'''Shen''': [[DeadpanSnarker I'm glad you find this so amusing...]]
-->'''Lianne''':]]\\
'''Lianne''': It's good to see you put in your place every once in a while. If it wasn't so satisfying, I would call it ''endearing''.
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'''Lianne''': It's good to see you put in your place every once in a while. If it wasn't so satisfying, I would call it ''endearing''.
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* When Shen enters the dungeon to meet Po face-to-face after preparing for the dramatic meeting for forty minutes, the panda is too busy freaking out at the dungeon and Haun's skeleton next to him and brushes Shen off like he does in their canon first meeting.
* Master Mantis' [[NoodleIncident mention]] of an avalanche being the reason to Po and the Furious Five needing weeks to reach Gongmen City.
* Master Mantis' [[NoodleIncident mention]] of an avalanche being the reason to Po and the Furious Five needing weeks to reach Gongmen City.
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* When Shen enters the dungeon to meet Po face-to-face after preparing for the dramatic meeting for forty minutes, the panda is too busy freaking out at the dungeon and as well as Haun's skeleton next to him and brushes Shen off like he does in their canon first meeting.
* Master Mantis' [[NoodleIncident mention]] of an avalanche being the reasonto Po and the Furious Five needing needed weeks to reach Gongmen City.
* Master Mantis' [[NoodleIncident mention]] of an avalanche being the reason
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* Shen tells Lianne about him and Zhan playing in the city in their early teens. They ended up being chased by a group of drunken men until they came across an old white sheet. Shen stood on Zhan's shoulders and covered them with the sheet, leaving only his red eyes visible. Upon seeing the "ghoul" hissing out with a "demonic" voice, the drunkards ran away screaming.
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* Shen tells Lianne about him and Zhan playing in the city in their early teens. They ended up being chased by a group of drunken men until they came across an old white sheet. Shen stood on Zhan's shoulders and covered them with the sheet, leaving only his red eyes visible. Upon seeing the "ghoul" [[BedsheetGhost "ghoul"]] hissing out with a "demonic" voice, the drunkards ran away screaming.
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* When the Soothsayer trolls Shen exactly like she does in [[Funny/KungFuPanda2 the movie's throne scene]], Lianne watches with smirks and chuckling, adding to his frustration.
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* When the Soothsayer trolls Shen exactly like she does in [[Funny/KungFuPanda2 the movie's infamous throne scene]], Lianne watches with smirks and chuckling, adding to his frustration.
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* When Shen enters the dungeon to meet Po face-to-face after preparing for the dramatic meeting for forty minutes, the panda is too busy freaking out at the dungeon and Haun's skeleton next to him and brushes Shen off like he does in their canon first meeting.
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* When Shen enters the dungeon to meet Po face-to-face after preparing for the dramatic meeting for forty minutes, the panda is too busy freaking out at the dungeon and Haun's skeleton next to him and brushes Shen off like he does in their canon first meeting.meeting.
* It's mentioned in the epilogue that during the {{time skip}}, [[spoiler:Zian]] had once tried sitting on [[spoiler:his father's train]] and be pulled around. That had apparently been very annoying to [[spoiler:Shen]].
* It's mentioned in the epilogue that during the {{time skip}}, [[spoiler:Zian]] had once tried sitting on [[spoiler:his father's train]] and be pulled around. That had apparently been very annoying to [[spoiler:Shen]].
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** In that same scene, Shen needs to restrain himself from [[SomethingElseAlsoRises fanning out his train]]. That joke is used again during his {{first kiss}} with Lianne.
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* Shen is rendered into StunnedSilence for a long while when Lianne awkwardly brings up her concerns about their upcoming courtship. He has to blink ''twice'' before he regains his voice.
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* Some of the friendly and flirty [[VolleyingInsults banter]] between Zhan and Jade. For example, she suggests at one point that [[RealMenWearPink he picks flowers to make daisy chains]] in his spare time or that he's CompensatingForSomething by carrying a big hammer.
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* Some of the friendly and flirty [[VolleyingInsults banter]] between Zhan and Jade. For example, she suggests at one point that [[RealMenWearPink he picks flowers to make daisy chains]] in his spare time or that he's CompensatingForSomething {{compensating for something}} by carrying a big hammer.
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** Lord Goa, Lady Jing, Ah-Ma and Zhan all make knowing smiles at Shen, when he's being hugged by Lianne.
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** Lord Goa, Lady Jing, Ah-Ma and Zhan all make knowing smiles at Shen, Shen when he's being hugged by Lianne.
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* When Shen enters the dungeon to meet Po face-to-face after preparing for the dramatic meeting for forty minutes, the panda is too busy freaking out at the dungeon and Haun's skeleton next to him and brushes Shen off.
* When Shen enters the dungeon to meet Po face-to-face after preparing for the dramatic meeting for forty minutes, the panda is too busy freaking out at the dungeon and Haun's skeleton next to him and brushes Shen off.
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* Some of the friendly and flirty [[VolleyingInsults banter]] between Zhan and Jade. For example, she suggests at one point that [[RealMenWearPink he picks flowers to make daisy chains chains]] in his spare time or that he's CompensatingForSomething by carrying a big hammer.
* When Shen enters the dungeon to meet Po face-to-face after preparing for the dramatic meeting for forty minutes, the panda is too busy freaking out at the dungeon and Haun's skeleton next to him and brushes Shenoff.off like he does in their canon first meeting.
* When Shen enters the dungeon to meet Po face-to-face after preparing for the dramatic meeting for forty minutes, the panda is too busy freaking out at the dungeon and Haun's skeleton next to him and brushes Shen
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* Shen is rendered into StunnedSilence for a long while when Lianne awkwardly brings up her concerns about courtship.
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* Shen is rendered into StunnedSilence for a long while when Lianne awkwardly brings up her concerns about courtship.their upcoming courtship. He has to blink ''twice'' before he regains his voice.
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** When Ah-Ma enters Shen's room to tell him about Lianne, he orders Zhan to hide all the silk and velvet. After she has left, Shen notices that she has taken his handkerchief from his desk.
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* Some moments during the Moon Festival.
** When Lianne asks the nervous Shen to offer her his hand, he briefly thinks it's meaning something else and almost trips over himself.
** The knowing smiles made by Lord Goa, Lady Jing, Ah-Ma and Zhan to Shen who's being hugged by Lianne.
** Shen mentions Zhan trying to come up with love poems for a dog maid.
** When Lianne asks the nervous Shen to offer her his hand, he briefly thinks it's meaning something else and almost trips over himself.
** The knowing smiles made by Lord Goa, Lady Jing, Ah-Ma and Zhan to Shen who's being hugged by Lianne.
** Shen mentions Zhan trying to come up with love poems for a dog maid.
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** When Lianne asksthe a nervous Shen to offer her his hand, he briefly thinks it's meaning something else and almost trips over himself.
**The knowing smiles made by Lord Goa, Lady Jing, Ah-Ma and Zhan to Shen who's all make knowing smiles at Shen, when he's being hugged by Lianne.
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* Shen is rendered into StunnedSilence for a long while when Lianne awkwardly brings up her awkward concerns about courtship.
* When the Soothsayer trolls Shen exactly like she does in [[Funny/KungFuPanda2 the movie's throne scene]], Lianne watcheswhile smirking with smirks and chuckling, adding to his frustration.
* When the Soothsayer trolls Shen exactly like she does in [[Funny/KungFuPanda2 the movie's throne scene]], Lianne watches
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* Some of the friendly banter between Zhan and Jade. At one point she asks if he picks flowers to make daisy chains in his spare time.
* When Shen enters the dungeon to meet Po face-to-face after preparing for the dramatic meeting, the panda is busy freaking out at the dungeon and Haun's skeleton next to him.
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* Some of the friendly banter and flirty [[VolleyingInsults banter]] between Zhan and Jade. At For example, she suggests at one point she asks if that he picks flowers to make daisy chains in his spare time.
time or that he's CompensatingForSomething by carrying a big hammer.
* When Shen enters the dungeon to meet Po face-to-face after preparing for the dramaticmeeting, meeting for forty minutes, the panda is too busy freaking out at the dungeon and Haun's skeleton next to him.him and brushes Shen off.
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* Whenever Ah-Ma rips Shen's silk clothes to annoy him.
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-->'''Shen''': [[SarcasmMode I'm glad you find this so amusing...]]
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-->'''Shen''': [[SarcasmMode [[DeadpanSnarker I'm glad you find this so amusing...]]
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* Shen tells Lianne about him and Zhan playing in the city in their early teens. They ended up being chased by a group of drunken men until they came across an old white sheet. Shen stood on Zhan's shoulders and covered them with the sheet, leaving only his red eyes visible. Upon seeing the "ghoul" hissing out with a "demonic" voice, the drunkards ran away screaming.
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* While Shen is ranting about his lack of progress with Lianne and Zhan is standing close, someone interrupts their conversation by saying that Shen ''does'' like Lianne. Shen points his Guan Dao at Zhan's throat, only for the Wolf Boss to yelp that he didn't say it. Ah-Ma is revealed from Zhan's behind.
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* Some moments during the Moon Festival.
** When Lianne asks the nervous Shen to offer her his hand, he briefly thinks it's meaning something else and almost trips over himself.
** The knowing smiles made by Lord Goa, Lady Jing, Ah-Ma and Zhan to Shen who's being hugged by Lianne.
** When Lianne asks the nervous Shen to offer her his hand, he briefly thinks it's meaning something else and almost trips over himself.
** The knowing smiles made by Lord Goa, Lady Jing, Ah-Ma and Zhan to Shen who's being hugged by Lianne.
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-->'''Lianne''': It's good to see you put in your place every once in a while. If it wasn't so satisfying, I would call it ''endearing''.
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-->'''Lianne''': It's good to see you put in your place every once in a while. If it wasn't so satisfying, I would call it ''endearing''.''endearing''.
* Some of the friendly banter between Zhan and Jade. At one point she asks if he picks flowers to make daisy chains in his spare time.
* When Shen enters the dungeon to meet Po face-to-face, the panda is busy freaking out at the dungeon and Haun's skeleton next to him.
* Some of the friendly banter between Zhan and Jade. At one point she asks if he picks flowers to make daisy chains in his spare time.
* When Shen enters the dungeon to meet Po face-to-face, the panda is busy freaking out at the dungeon and Haun's skeleton next to him.
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* During one of their spars, Shen traps Lianne in his hold with his Guan Dao, with only an inch separating his chest from her back. She suddenly takes an audibly deep breath of him and [[ShowSomeLeg presses herself against him in an intimate way]], wriggling herself free as his mind goes numb.
** While doing that, she teases him of [[LampshadeHanging being predictable due to being male]].
** While doing that, she teases him of [[LampshadeHanging being predictable due to being male]].
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* When Lianne's mother meets Shen for the first time, she says that [[InvertedTrope he's taller]] [[ExpectingSomeoneTaller than she thought]]. He's so baffled that he stares at her with [[JawDrop his beak hanging open]], amusing her.
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* When the Soothsayer trolls Shen exactly like she does in [[Funny/KungFuPanda2 the movie's throne scene]], Lianne watches while smirking and chuckling, adding to his frustration.
-->'''Shen''': I'm glad you find this so amusing...
-->'''Lianne''': It's good to see you put in your place every once in a while. If it wasn't so satisfying, I would call it ''endearing''.
* When the Soothsayer trolls Shen exactly like she does in [[Funny/KungFuPanda2 the movie's throne scene]], Lianne watches while smirking and chuckling, adding to his frustration.
-->'''Shen''': I'm glad you find this so amusing...
-->'''Lianne''': It's good to see you put in your place every once in a while. If it wasn't so satisfying, I would call it ''endearing''.
