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* The fact that the sheer absurd scale of Miriam's pigtails actually becomes a plot point.
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* The fact that the sheer absurd scale of Miriam's pigtails are of such a ridiculous scale that they actually becomes become a plot point.
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* The Golem sent shopping. Not only do the monster with a basket on his arm and the terrified reactions of the townspeople create a comic effect; it's also hard to watch the Golem holding the shopping list to the shopkeeper's face without mentally subtitling [[GagSub "This is a robbery"]].
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* The Golem sent shopping. Not only do the monster with a basket on his arm and the terrified reactions of the townspeople create a comic effect; it's also hard to watch the Golem holding the shopping list to the shopkeeper's face without mentally subtitling [[GagSub "This is a robbery"]].robbery"]].
* The fact that the sheer absurd scale of Miriam's pigtails actually becomes a plot point.
* The fact that the sheer absurd scale of Miriam's pigtails actually becomes a plot point.
