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** In the next book, a nightmare-plagued Dervish demands to know if Grubbs is really with him or if he's an illusion sent just to torment Dervish. Grubbs jokingly [[GenerationXerox replies that Michaelangelo himself couldn't make an illusion so gorgeous]].
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** In the next book, a nightmare-plagued Dervish demands to know if Grubbs is really with him or if he's an illusion sent just to torment Dervish. Grubbs jokingly [[GenerationXerox replies that that Michaelangelo himself couldn't make an illusion so gorgeous]].
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** In the next book, a nightmare-plagued Dervish demands to know if Grubbs is really with him or if he's an illusion to torment him. Grubbs jokingly [[GenerationXerox replies that Michaelangelo himself couldn't make an illusion so gorgeous]].
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** In the next book, a nightmare-plagued Dervish demands to know if Grubbs is really with him or if he's an illusion sent just to torment him. Dervish. Grubbs jokingly [[GenerationXerox replies that that Michaelangelo himself couldn't make an illusion so gorgeous]].
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* In "Demon Thief", when Shark is fighting a horde of demons in the Demonata realm, he demands to know if Kernel and Dervish are illusions sent to torture him further. Dervish replies that no illusion could look as good as he does.
** In the next book, a nightmare-plagued Dervish demands to know if Grubbs is really with him or if he's an illusion to torment him. Grubbs jokingly [[GenerationXerox replies that Michaelangelo himself couldn't make an illusion so gorgeous]].
** In the next book, a nightmare-plagued Dervish demands to know if Grubbs is really with him or if he's an illusion to torment him. Grubbs jokingly [[GenerationXerox replies that Michaelangelo himself couldn't make an illusion so gorgeous]].
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* If everyone [[DrivesLikeCrazy drove like my maniac of an uncle]], the roads would be awash will blood.
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* If ''If everyone [[DrivesLikeCrazy drove like my maniac of an uncle]], the roads would be awash will with blood.''
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* If everyone [[DrivesLikeCrazy drove like my maniac of an uncle]], the roads would be awash will blood.
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* If everyone [[DrivesLikeCrazy drove like my maniac of an uncle]], the roads would be awash will blood.blood.
* Beranabus calling Grubbs out on his cowardice, he, along with Dervish, are the masters of DeadpanSnarker and one can not help but fall into hysterics when Bran rips Grubbs' excuses for not fighting apart.
* Beranabus calling Grubbs out on his cowardice, he, along with Dervish, are the masters of DeadpanSnarker and one can not help but fall into hysterics when Bran rips Grubbs' excuses for not fighting apart.
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* Durst using the magic of the Old Ones to blow Lord Loss clear off the headland when he tires of the Demon Master stalking them.
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* Durst Drust using the magic of the Old Ones to blow Lord Loss clear off the headland when he tires of the Demon Master stalking them.
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-->'''Derv:''' They'd better be. because if I find out otherwise...
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-->'''Derv:''' They'd better be. because Because if I find out otherwise...
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-->'''Derv:''' Good.
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-->'''Derv:''' Good.Good.
* If everyone [[DrivesLikeCrazy drove like my maniac of an uncle]], the roads would be awash will blood.
* If everyone [[DrivesLikeCrazy drove like my maniac of an uncle]], the roads would be awash will blood.
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* When Derv is leaving his mansion for the weekend for the first time, he knows all too well what his nephew and his school mates are likely to get up to at their age.
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* When Derv is leaving his mansion for the weekend in Grubbs' hands for the first time, trusting him to do as he wills for a weekend, he knows all too well what his nephew and his school mates are likely to get up to at their age.
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* When Dervish begins to relapse into PTSD frenzies and general discontent after his fourteen-month long battle in Lord Loss's personal realm, Grubbs is always there to lighten the mood with the fabled Grady wit.
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* The first calming rhyme we hear Grubbs using on his uncle is: "Derv the perv".
* When Dervish begins to relapse into PTSD frenzies and general discontent after surviving his fourteen-month long battle in Lord Loss's personal realm, Grubbs is always there to lighten the mood with the fabled Grady wit.
* When Dervish begins to relapse into PTSD frenzies and general discontent after surviving his fourteen-month long battle in Lord Loss's personal realm, Grubbs is always there to lighten the mood with the fabled Grady wit.
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* Dervish joking that not only is Bill-E Grubbs' half-brother but that he's also the love-child of Cal and Meera as well!
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* Dervish joking that not only is Bill-E Grubbs' half-brother but that he's also the love-child of Cal and Meera as well!well!
* When Derv is leaving his mansion for the weekend for the first time, he knows all too well what his nephew and his school mates are likely to get up to at their age.
-->'''Dervish Grady:''' Those staying over are all boys, I presume?
-->'''Grubitsch "Grubbs" Grady:''' Of course.
-->'''Derv:''' They'd better be. because if I find out otherwise...
-->'''Grubbs:''' You won't.
-->'''Derv:''' Good.
* When Derv is leaving his mansion for the weekend for the first time, he knows all too well what his nephew and his school mates are likely to get up to at their age.
-->'''Dervish Grady:''' Those staying over are all boys, I presume?
-->'''Grubitsch "Grubbs" Grady:''' Of course.
-->'''Derv:''' They'd better be. because if I find out otherwise...
-->'''Grubbs:''' You won't.
-->'''Derv:''' Good.
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* Dervish joking that not only is Bill-E Grubbs' brother but that he's the love-child of Cal and Meera as well!
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* Dervish joking that not only is Bill-E Grubbs' brother half-brother but that he's also the love-child of Cal and Meera as well!
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* Durst using the magic of the Old Ones to blow Lord Loss clear off the headland when he tires of the Demon Master stalking them.
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-->'''Grubitsch "Grubbs" Grady:''' Losing what -- your sanity? You can't lose what you never had.
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-->'''Grubitsch "Grubbs" Grady:''' Losing what -- your sanity? You can't lose what you never had.had.
* "Oh Grubbs, you're so manly!" Dervish gushes, fluttering his eyelids. "Get stuffed!" I grunt.
* Dervish joking that not only is Bill-E Grubbs' brother but that he's the love-child of Cal and Meera as well!
* "Oh Grubbs, you're so manly!" Dervish gushes, fluttering his eyelids. "Get stuffed!" I grunt.
* Dervish joking that not only is Bill-E Grubbs' brother but that he's the love-child of Cal and Meera as well!
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* When Dervish begins to relapse into PTSD frenzies and general discontent after his battle in Lord Loss's personal realm, Grubbs is always there to lighten the mood with the fabled Grady wit.
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* When Dervish begins to relapse into PTSD frenzies and general discontent after his fourteen-month long battle in Lord Loss's personal realm, Grubbs is always there to lighten the mood with the fabled Grady wit.
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'''Grubitsch "Grubbs" Grady:''' Losing what, your sanity? You can't lose what you never had.
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* Dervish's [[BlackComedy homecoming]] [[DudeNotFunny prank]] on Grubbs.
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* Dervish's [[BlackComedy homecoming]] [[DudeNotFunny prank]] on Grubbs.Grubbs.
* When Dervish begins to relapse into PTSD frenzies and general discontent after his battle in Lord Loss's personal realm, Grubbs is always there to lighten the mood with the fabled Grady wit.
-->'''Dervish Grady:''' I'm losing it, Grubbs.
'''Grubitsch "Grubbs" Grady:''' Losing what, your sanity? You can't lose what you never had.
* When Dervish begins to relapse into PTSD frenzies and general discontent after his battle in Lord Loss's personal realm, Grubbs is always there to lighten the mood with the fabled Grady wit.
-->'''Dervish Grady:''' I'm losing it, Grubbs.
'''Grubitsch "Grubbs" Grady:''' Losing what, your sanity? You can't lose what you never had.
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-->''"You should take more pride in your [[BodyHorror appearance]]," I tell him. "You'll never attract girls with an ugly mug like that."''
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-->''"You should take more pride in your [[BodyHorror appearance]]," I tell him. "You'll never attract girls with an ugly mug like that."''"''
* Dervish's [[BlackComedy homecoming]] [[DudeNotFunny prank]] on Grubbs.
* Dervish's [[BlackComedy homecoming]] [[DudeNotFunny prank]] on Grubbs.
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* Grubbs defeating Lord Loss at five game chess simultaneously... and not caring! Watching Lord Loss's spiral into greater and greater examples of VillainousBreakdown is hugely satisfying.
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* Grubbs defeating Lord Loss at mortal five game chess simultaneously... chess... and not caring! caring in the slightest! Watching Lord Loss's spiral into greater and greater examples of VillainousBreakdown is hugely satisfying.
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-->''Lord Loss doesn't respond. His eyes are fixed on the trapped king on the board to my left, as though he can spot a way out if he loks at it long enough.''
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-->''Lord Loss doesn't respond. His eyes are fixed on the trapped king on the board to my left, as though he can spot a way out if he loks looks at it long enough.''
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-->''"You should take more pride in your [TheGrotesque appearance]]," I tell him. "You'll never attract girls with an ugly mug like that."''
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-->''"You should take more pride in your [TheGrotesque [[BodyHorror appearance]]," I tell him. "You'll never attract girls with an ugly mug like that."''
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-->'''Grubitsch "Grubbs" Grady:''' [[WhamLine Chess is dumb]]. Like all games, it's silly and pointless. [[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulu? People who take it seriously are fools]]. I'm sorry, but I can't pretend to respect your foolishness any longer, regardless of what's at stake.
** This, from the same scene.
** This, from the same scene.
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-->'''Grubitsch "Grubbs" Grady:''' [[WhamLine Chess is dumb]]. Like all games, it's silly and pointless. [[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulu? [[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu People who take it seriously are fools]]. I'm sorry, but I can't pretend to respect your foolishness any longer, regardless of what's at stake.
** This, from the samescene.scene, when Grubbs wins his first match.
-->''"Checkmate." I mutter the word emotionlessly and scratch my left elbow. "Can I make your king melt?" I ask curiously.''
-->''Lord Loss doesn't respond. His eyes are fixed on the trapped king on the board to my left, as though he can spot a way out if he loks at it long enough.''
-->''"I asked if I could make your--"''
-->''The black king explodes into tiny shards. I duck to avoid the flying bits of crystal. When I look again, Lord Loss's face is peppered with shiny splinters. Blood trickles from the cuts.''
-->''"You should take more pride in your [TheGrotesque appearance]]," I tell him. "You'll never attract girls with an ugly mug like that."''
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-->''"Checkmate." I mutter the word emotionlessly and scratch my left elbow. "Can I make your king melt?" I ask curiously.''
-->''Lord Loss doesn't respond. His eyes are fixed on the trapped king on the board to my left, as though he can spot a way out if he loks at it long enough.''
-->''"I asked if I could make your--"''
-->''The black king explodes into tiny shards. I duck to avoid the flying bits of crystal. When I look again, Lord Loss's face is peppered with shiny splinters. Blood trickles from the cuts.''
-->''"You should take more pride in your [TheGrotesque appearance]]," I tell him. "You'll never attract girls with an ugly mug like that."''
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-->'''Grubitsch "Grubbs" Grady:''' [[WhamLine Chess is dumb]]. Like all games, it's silly and pointless. [[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulu People who take it seriously are fools]]. I'm sorry, but I can't pretend to respect your foolishness any longer, regardless of what's at stake.
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-->'''Grubitsch "Grubbs" Grady:''' [[WhamLine Chess is dumb]]. Like all games, it's silly and pointless. [[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulu [[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulu? People who take it seriously are fools]]. I'm sorry, but I can't pretend to respect your foolishness any longer, regardless of what's at stake.
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* Grubbs defeating Lord Loss at five games of chess simultaneously... and not caring! Watching Lord Loss's VillainousBreakdown is hugely satisfying.
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* Grubbs defeating Lord Loss at five games of game chess simultaneously... and not caring! Watching Lord Loss's spiral into greater and greater examples of VillainousBreakdown is hugely satisfying.satisfying.
-->'''Lord Loss:''' This is ridiculous, Grubitsch. ''(fake encouraging smile)'' If you throw the game away, you throw your life away too. You are already two games down. You cannot afford to lose again. You must concentrate. If not, you and your uncle--
-->'''Grubitsch "Grubbs" Grady:''' [[WhamLine Chess is dumb]]. Like all games, it's silly and pointless. [[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulu People who take it seriously are fools]]. I'm sorry, but I can't pretend to respect your foolishness any longer, regardless of what's at stake.
** This, from the same scene.
-->'''Lord Loss:''' This is ridiculous, Grubitsch. ''(fake encouraging smile)'' If you throw the game away, you throw your life away too. You are already two games down. You cannot afford to lose again. You must concentrate. If not, you and your uncle--
-->'''Grubitsch "Grubbs" Grady:''' [[WhamLine Chess is dumb]]. Like all games, it's silly and pointless. [[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulu People who take it seriously are fools]]. I'm sorry, but I can't pretend to respect your foolishness any longer, regardless of what's at stake.
** This, from the same scene.
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* Kernel Fleck [[FlippingTheBird gives some Kallid the Finger.]]
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* Kernel Fleck [[FlippingTheBird gives some Kallid the Finger.]]]]
* Grubbs defeating Lord Loss at five games of chess simultaneously... and not caring! Watching Lord Loss's VillainousBreakdown is hugely satisfying.
* Grubbs defeating Lord Loss at five games of chess simultaneously... and not caring! Watching Lord Loss's VillainousBreakdown is hugely satisfying.
