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** Before this, Spirit [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything had been watching Rain and trying to invite her over to join him in the pen he was in, first by nickering softly, then by pawing the ground and neighing loudly]]. Keep in mind, [[Pun he is the "stallion" of the Cimarron]].
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** Before this, Spirit [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything had been watching Rain and trying to invite her over to join him in the pen he was in, first by nickering softly, then by pawing the ground and neighing loudly]]. Keep in mind, [[Pun [[IncrediblyLamePun he is the "stallion" of the Cimarron]].
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** Before this, Spirit [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything had been watching Rain and trying to invite her over to join him in the pen he was in, first by nickering softly, then by pawing the ground and neighing loudly]]. Keep in mind, [[IncrediblyLamePun he is the "stallion" of the Cimarron]].
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** Before this, Spirit [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything had been watching Rain and trying to invite her over to join him in the pen he was in, first by nickering softly, then by pawing the ground and neighing loudly]]. Keep in mind, [[IncrediblyLamePun [[Pun he is the "stallion" of the Cimarron]].
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** Rain gets up and starts slowly circling Spirit, nickering softly and giving him "bedroom eyes," while the soundtrack plays soft tango music. Spirit watches Rain with each step, and at one points turns his head as she moves to walk behind him, making it look like [[EatingTheEyeCandy he's checking out her butt]].
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** Rain gets up and starts slowly circling Spirit, nickering softly and giving him "bedroom eyes," while the soundtrack plays soft tango music. Spirit watches Rain with each step, and at one points point turns his head as she moves to walk behind him, making it look like [[EatingTheEyeCandy he's checking out her butt]].
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** Spirit admits through narration that he actually was impressed and amused by this, implying that this when their gradual RelationshipUpgrade started.
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** Spirit admits through narration that he actually was impressed and amused by this, implying that this was when their gradual RelationshipUpgrade started.
