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* Neil trying to chase Uncle Prenderghast off with hummus. "It's ''spicy!''" Even funnier because it works!
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* Neil trying to chase scare off Uncle Prenderghast off with hummus. "It's ''spicy!''" Even funnier because it works!
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* At one point, Alvin ''grabs [[HartmanHips Courtney's]] butt''.
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* At one point, Alvin ''grabs [[HartmanHips Courtney's]] butt''. What makes it funny is how loud it is, there's an audible clap meaning he grabbed it pretty hard. Courtney is briefly shocked, meanwhile Alvin? Stone faced.
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* The actress in Norman's [[BadBadActing cheap scary movie]] screaming as a zombie inches slooooowly toward her... so slowly that she stops screaming for a moment and casts an exasperated look off-camera.
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* The actress in Norman's [[BadBadActing cheap scary movie]] screaming as a zombie inches slooooowly toward her... so slowly that she stops screaming for a moment and casts an exasperated look off-camera. She even has to [[StylisticSuck push away the boom mic away when it leans too far]] while screaming.
* Norman, on behalf of and quoting his grandmother, asks his parents to turn up the heater because her feet get cold. When you learn immediately afterwards that she's actually dead, [[ImColdSoCold it comes across as a]] ''[[ImColdSoCold very]]'' [[ImColdSoCold morbid joke.]] No wonder his parents and sister were so startled!
* Norman, on behalf of and quoting his grandmother, asks his parents to turn up the heater because her feet get cold. When you learn immediately afterwards that she's actually dead, [[ImColdSoCold it comes across as a]] ''[[ImColdSoCold very]]'' [[ImColdSoCold morbid joke.]] No wonder his parents and sister were so startled!
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* "Do I look crazy to you?" (goofy grin)
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* "Do I look crazy to you?" (goofy grin)grin, before blowing toilet roll out of his face)
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* When the angry mob makes their way to town hall, Mitch thinks it's the zombies at first. The following exchange is pretty hilarious:
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* When the angry mob makes their way to town hall, Mitch thinks it's the zombies at first. The following exchange is pretty utterly hilarious:
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* The zombie movie Norman watches in the opening has the actress look at the camera with annoyance when the zombie actor moves too slow, and then [[StylisticSuck she pushes the boom mic away]] while screaming.
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-->'''Ms. Henscher:''' No, no, Norman! With gusto! Like this! ''“They put her on trial and HAAAAAANGED HEEEEEEER!”'''''
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-->'''Ms. Henscher:''' No, no, Norman! With gusto! Like this! ''“They put her on trial and HAAAAAANGED HEEEEEEER!”'''''and'' '''''HAAAAAANGED HEEEEEEER!"'''''
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* The actress in Norman's [[BadBadActing cheap scary movie]] screaming as a zombie inches slooooowly toward her... so slowly that she stops screaming and casts an exasperated look off-camera.
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* The actress in Norman's [[BadBadActing cheap scary movie]] screaming as a zombie inches slooooowly toward her... so slowly that she stops screaming for a moment and casts an exasperated look off-camera.
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* The welcome sign for Blithe Hollow has the slogan “A great place to hang!” Complete with a smiling lynched witch for design.
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* The welcome sign for Blithe Hollow has the slogan “A great place to hang!” Complete with a smiling lynched witch for design.witch.
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-->'''Ms. Henscher:''' No, no, Norman! With gusto! Like this! ''”They put her on trial and HAAAAAANGED HEEEEEEER!”'''''
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-->'''Ms. Henscher:''' No, no, Norman! With gusto! Like this! ''”They ''“They put her on trial and HAAAAAANGED HEEEEEEER!”'''''
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* After [[OverlyLongGag Neil finally convinces Norman to throw the stick]], he does so causing it to promptly ricochet off a tree and bean Neil in the face.
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* After [[OverlyLongGag Neil finally convinces Norman to throw the stick]], he does so causing it to promptly ricochet ricochets off a tree and bean beans Neil in the face.
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** He finally gets it... And then his uncle's body falls on top of him, and his tongue rolls out onto Norman's face.
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** He finally gets it... And and then his uncle's body falls on top of him, and his tongue rolls out onto Norman's face.
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** Even earlier when that zombie was just standing there!
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** Even earlier earlier, when that zombie was just standing there!stands there as the van bears down on it!
** He finally decides to run screaming, only to run right ''back'' and retrieve his snack before fleeing in terror again.
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-->'''Norman's Grandmother''': Jackass.
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-->'''Norman's Grandmother''': grandmother''': Jackass.
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* And this with Courtney realizing she had been completely wasting her time with Mitch all that time.:
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* And this gem from Mitch, with Courtney realizing she had been completely wasting her time with Mitch all that time.:along:
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* "That statue just [[AccidentalInnuendo 'psst']] at us?"
* The hick woman pulling out a shotgun and firing on the zombies when the townsfolk first saw them. No running around and screaming in panic for these people!
* The hick woman pulling out a shotgun and firing on the zombies when the townsfolk first saw them. No running around and screaming in panic for these people!
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* "That statue just [[AccidentalInnuendo 'psst']] (pronounced "pissed") at us?"
* The hick woman pulling out a shotgun and firing on the zombies when the townsfolk firstsaw see them. No running around and screaming in panic for these people!
* The hick woman pulling out a shotgun and firing on the zombies when the townsfolk first
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** For that matter, the zombies' arrival in town. First, they see a billboard of a woman with money stuffed between her breasts and groan excitedly. But then they experience Culture Shock and get freaked out by the various stuff in town, gasping each time, such as a drunk couple stumbling out of a pub, a punk spray painting graffiti of a skull on a wall, a man eating a burger in his car and spraying ketchup over the windshield, and finally, a TV flipping through channels, first of a man using a machine gun, then a monster truck rally, a lipstick commercial, a nuclear explosion, a rock star concert, and lastly, ''a kids' show.'' Then, one of the zombies [[ScreamsLikeALittleGirl screams in a high-pitched voice!]] Part of it makes sense: the zombies are Puritans and are shocked that this home they have started as a place without sin has sex, violence and corruption wherever they look.
* At one point Alvin ''grabs [[HartmanHips Courtney's]] butt''.
* At one point Alvin ''grabs [[HartmanHips Courtney's]] butt''.
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** For that matter, the zombies' arrival in town. First, they see a billboard of a woman with money stuffed between her breasts and groan excitedly. But then they experience Culture Shock and get freaked out by the various stuff in town, gasping each time, such as a drunk couple stumbling out of a pub, a punk spray painting graffiti of a skull on a wall, a man eating a burger in his car and spraying ketchup over the windshield, and finally, a TV flipping through channels, first of a man using a machine gun, then a monster truck rally, a lipstick commercial, a nuclear explosion, a rock star concert, and lastly, ''a kids' show.'' Then, one of the zombies [[ScreamsLikeALittleGirl screams in a high-pitched voice!]] Part of it makes sense: the zombies are Puritans and are shocked that this home country they have started as founded to be a place without sin has is filled with sex, violence and corruption wherever they look.
* At onepoint point, Alvin ''grabs [[HartmanHips Courtney's]] butt''.
* At one
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* When Mitch gears it, leaving the six [[TheVoiceless voiceless]] zombies (bonus point on one of them coughing) in smoke, and their reaction when they see Judge Hopkins hanging on the speeding van for dear afterlife. It's even funnier when you realize in life the fastest thing they probably ever encountered was a horse drawn carriage, which also explains why [[FridgeBrilliance that one zombie just stood there]], [[FishOutOfTemporalWater staring at the van]] before it ran him over. No wonder the Judge was screaming.
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* When Mitch gears it, leaving the six [[TheVoiceless voiceless]] zombies (bonus point on one of them coughing) in smoke, and their reaction when they see Judge Hopkins hanging on the speeding van for dear afterlife. It's even funnier when you realize in life the fastest thing vehicle they probably ever encountered was a horse drawn horse-drawn carriage, which also explains why [[FridgeBrilliance that one zombie just stood there]], [[FishOutOfTemporalWater staring at the van]] van]], before it ran him over. No wonder the Judge was screaming.
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-->'''Mitch''': You're Freeze framing mom's exercise [=DVD=]s again?
--> '''Neil''': [[BlatantLies No.]] ''(The next shot shows he's doing exactly that)''
--> '''Neil''': [[BlatantLies No.]] ''(The next shot shows he's doing exactly that)''
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-->'''Mitch''': You're Freeze framing mom's exercise [=DVD=]s Are you freeze-framing Mom's aerobics [=DVD=] again?
--> '''Neil''': [[BlatantLiesNo.]] ''(The No!]] ''(the next shot shows he's doing exactly that)''
--> '''Neil''': [[BlatantLies
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* Towards the beginning of the film, after the students sing a song in a school play, the audience claps, however one guy cries out "You Suck!"
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* Towards the beginning of the film, after the students sing a song in a school play, most of the audience claps, however but one guy cries out "You Suck!"suck!" At a bunch of kids doing their ''school play.''
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* When the angry mob makes their way to town hall, Mitch thinks it's the zombies at first. The following is pretty hilarious:
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* When the angry mob makes their way to town hall, Mitch thinks it's the zombies at first. The following exchange is pretty hilarious:
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** Earlier in that same scene, Neil was pretty proud of himself for reading '''twenty six''' pages in a book.
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** Earlier in that same scene, Neil was is pretty proud of himself for reading '''twenty six''' '''twenty-six''' pages in a book.
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-->'''Courtney''': I can't believe this is your plan! I'm gonna get bitten, and start eating peoples' brains... I'm supposed to be vegan!
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-->'''Courtney''': I can't believe this is your plan! I'm gonna get bitten, and start eating peoples' people's brains... I'm supposed to be vegan!
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* As the witch is rampaging through the town you can hear the following on the car radio:
-->'''News Anchor''': Officials are urging people to PANIC AND RUN FOR THE-- (The radio is turned off)
-->'''News Anchor''': Officials are urging people to PANIC AND RUN FOR THE-- (The radio is turned off)
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* As the witch is rampaging through the town town, you can hear the following on the car radio:
-->'''News Anchor''': Officials are urging people to PANIC AND RUN FOR THE--(The radio (the channel is turned off)changed)
-->'''News Anchor''': Officials are urging people to PANIC AND RUN FOR THE--
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* When Mitch accidentally drives over a zombie, runs out to see if its okay and accidentally breaks off the head in his hands.
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* When Mitch accidentally drives over a zombie, runs out to see if its okay okay, and accidentally breaks off the head in his hands.
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* When the group is trying to get into Town Hall, they all turn to Alvin, assuming that he knows how to pick locks because he's a delinquent. He assures them that he can totally do that, and proceeds to grab an announcement board, ''break the window on the door and use the opening to unlock the door from the other side''. The fact that he's so proud of this, combined with everyone else's confused stares just sells it. And the cherry on it? The sign board he grabs had a poster for a ''crime prevention seminar''.
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* When the group is trying to get into Town Hall, the town hall, they all turn to Alvin, assuming that he knows how to pick locks because he's a delinquent. He assures them that he can totally do that, and proceeds to grab an announcement board, ''break the window on the door and use the opening to unlock the door from the other side''. The fact that he's so proud of this, combined with everyone else's confused stares just sells it. stares, is priceless. And the cherry on it? top? The sign board he grabs had a poster for was advertising a ''crime prevention seminar''.
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* Perry [[TemptingFate tempts fate]] by asking where the police are when needed. A policewoman then immediately crashes into his car with a motorbike.
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* Perry [[TemptingFate tempts fate]] by asking where the police are when needed. A policewoman then immediately crashes into his car with a motorbike.motorbike and collides with Perry, tackling him to the ground.
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** Shortly after the above...
-->'''Courtney''': I can't believe this is your plan! I'm gonna get bitten, and start eating peoples' brains... I'm supposed to be vegan!
-->'''Courtney''': I can't believe this is your plan! I'm gonna get bitten, and start eating peoples' brains... I'm supposed to be vegan!
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* The drama teacher, Ms Henscher, just for being an absolute LargeHam, with Creator/AlexBorstein rivaling Creator/BrianBlessed himself.
-->'''Ms. Henscher:''' No, no, Norman! With gusto! Like this! ''”They put her on trial and HAAAAAANGED HEEEEEEER!”'''''
-->'''Ms. Henscher:''' No, no, Norman! With gusto! Like this! ''”They put her on trial and HAAAAAANGED HEEEEEEER!”'''''
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* The welcome sign for Blithe Hollow has the slogan “A great place to hang!” Complete with a smiling lynched witch for design.
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-->'''Neil''': I don't have boobs! They're pec-tor-als! ''(Alvin punches him)'' Ow! My boobs!
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-->'''Neil''': I don't have boobs! They're pec-tor-als! These are pectorals! ''(Alvin punches him)'' Ow! My boobs!
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* When the group is trying to get into Town Hall, they all turn to Alvin, assuming that he knows how to pick locks because he's a delinquent. He assures them that he can totally do that, and proceeds to grab an announcement board, ''break the window on the door and use the opening to unlock the door from the other side''. The fact that he's so proud of this, combined with everyone else's confused stares just sells it. And the cherry on it? The sign board he grabs had a poster for a ''crime prevention seminar''.
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* The silly image of Norman standing directly in between his parents' respective paunches when they're talking to each other in front of him at the beginning.
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* The silly image of Norman directly in between his parents' respective pot bellies when they're talking to each other in front of him at the beginning.
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-->'''Mitch''': You're not freeze framing mom's exercise [=DVD=]s, are you?
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-->'''Mitch''': Neil! Will you get the door?
--> '''Neil''': I'm busy.
-->'''Mitch''': You'renot freeze Freeze framing mom's exercise [=DVD=]s, are you?[=DVD=]s again?
--> '''Neil''': I'm busy.
-->'''Mitch''': You're
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-->'''Mitch''': I think it's the zombies.
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-->'''Mitch''': There's something moving out there. I think it's the zombies.
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* When Mitch gears it, leaving the six [[TheVoiceless voiceless]] zombies (bonus point on one of them coughing) in smoke, and their reaction when they see Judge Hopkins hanging on the speeding van for dear afterlife. It's even funnier when you realize in life the fastest thing they probably ever encountered was a horse drawn carriage, which also explains why [[FridgeBrilliance that one zombie just stood there, staring at the van]] before it ran him over. No wonder the Judge was screaming.
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* When Mitch gears it, leaving the six [[TheVoiceless voiceless]] zombies (bonus point on one of them coughing) in smoke, and their reaction when they see Judge Hopkins hanging on the speeding van for dear afterlife. It's even funnier when you realize in life the fastest thing they probably ever encountered was a horse drawn carriage, which also explains why [[FridgeBrilliance that one zombie just stood there, there]], [[FishOutOfTemporalWater staring at the van]] before it ran him over. No wonder the Judge was screaming.
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* And this:
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* And this:this with Courtney realizing she had been completely wasting her time with Mitch all that time.:
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--> '''Neil''': No. ''(The next shot shows he's doing exactly that)''
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--> '''Neil''': No. [[BlatantLies No.]] ''(The next shot shows he's doing exactly that)''
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-->'''Mitch''': Not mentally!
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-->'''Mitch''': [[DumbMuscle Not mentally!mentally]]!
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* The actress in Norman's cheap scary movie screaming as a zombie inches slooooowly toward her... so slowly that she stops screaming and casts an exasperated look off-camera.
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* The actress in Norman's [[BadBadActing cheap scary movie movie]] screaming as a zombie inches slooooowly toward her... so slowly that she stops screaming and casts an exasperated look off-camera.