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-->'''Valentine:''' Absolutely, if we put little wheels on the bottom of our shoes we could just rooooooll around...
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-->'''Valentine:''' [[{{AreYouPonderingWhatImPondering}} Absolutely, if we put little wheels on the bottom of our shoes we could just rooooooll around...]]
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* When distracting the Sphinx, Valentine first throw it off guard with a nonsensical riddle, then points and declares "Look! An idiot!"
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* When distracting the Sphinx, Valentine first throw throws it off guard with a nonsensical riddle, then points and declares "Look! An idiot!"
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* This exchange between Helena and Valentine
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* This exchange between Helena and Valentine Valentine:
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** The full song can be listened to alone on the soundtrack; it includes a sudden growl of "SAUSAGES?!" and slightly creepy giggling of "You can't see me!" and "Silly boy! Where are you, silly boy?"
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o.O
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* Helena's riddle. What's green, hangs on a wall, and whistles. A trout. You can paint it green, you CAN hang it on a wall, and...well, she added the last part so it wouldn't be too obvious.
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* Helena's riddle. What's green, hangs on a wall, and whistles. whistles? A trout.herring. You can paint it green, you CAN hang it on a wall, and...well, she added the last part so it wouldn't be too obvious.
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not really much point in keeping this if there\'s no link.....not sure why a locked tumblr was linked to anyway. :P
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** Even better is the fact that there actually IS an answer to that riddle.
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** Even better is the fact that there actually IS an answer to that riddle: http://www.tumblr.com/blog/metronomeblue
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** Even better is the fact that there actually IS an answer to that riddle: http://www.tumblr.com/blog/metronomeblueriddle.
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since it\'s a quote and I\'ve seen this film a few too many times....
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** Plus, the Sphinx's inability to understand that Valentine is actually telling him the answer to the riddle. "If you have it, you want to share it. If you share it, you don't have it? [[spoiler:It's a 'secret'!]]"
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** Plus, the Sphinx's inability to understand that Valentine is actually telling him the answer to the riddle. "If you have it, you want to share it. If you share it, you don't have haven't got it? [[spoiler:It's a 'secret'!]]"
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** Plus, the Sphinx's inability to understand that Valentine is actually telling him the answer to the riddle. "It's a secret!"
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** Plus, the Sphinx's inability to understand that Valentine is actually telling him the answer to the riddle. "It's "If you have it, you want to share it. If you share it, you don't have it? [[spoiler:It's a secret!"'secret'!]]"
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Removing Nightmare Fuel potholes. NF should be on YMMV only.
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* It's a little squicky (and a tad bit [[NightmareFuel HORRIFYING]]) but seeing the Dark Queen casually spit up some shadows over dinner to check on a loud rumbling noise is kind of funny.
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* It's a little squicky (and a tad bit [[NightmareFuel HORRIFYING]]) horrifying) but seeing the Dark Queen casually spit up some shadows over dinner to check on a loud rumbling noise is kind of funny.
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^_^
-->'''Helena (as the Dark Queen):''' ''Ah'', you may think me a hard-hearted, black sock, but underneath this cold, dark exterior is a....naked, pink foot.
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** Which moments later, when he mentions not knowing what it looks like, leads to this line.
--->'''What if it WAS the chicken!?'''
--->'''What if it WAS the chicken!?'''
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** Which moments later, when he mentions not knowing what it looks like, leads to this line.
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-->'''Prime Minister:''' What if it WAS thechicken!?'''chicken!?
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-->'''Prime Minister:''' What if it WAS the
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-->'''Helena''': Are you thinking what I'm thinking?
-->'''Valentine''': Absolutely, if we put little wheels on the bottom of our shoes we could just rooooooll around...
* That's the future fruit. Only eaten by holy people. It takes 900 years to grow and they write entire books about the things they have seen.
--> [[spoiler:'''Valentine:''' I DON'T WANT TO BE A WAITER!]]
* At the very end, a real life counterpart of Valentine appears and talks to Helena, saying he's always wanted to join the circus. She tells him that he'd make a [[BrickJoke terrible waiter]] and they share a laugh. And then
-->'''What?'''
-->'''Valentine''': Absolutely, if we put little wheels on the bottom of our shoes we could just rooooooll around...
* That's the future fruit. Only eaten by holy people. It takes 900 years to grow and they write entire books about the things they have seen.
--> [[spoiler:'''Valentine:''' I DON'T WANT TO BE A WAITER!]]
* At the very end, a real life counterpart of Valentine appears and talks to Helena, saying he's always wanted to join the circus. She tells him that he'd make a [[BrickJoke terrible waiter]] and they share a laugh. And then
-->'''What?'''
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* That's the future fruit. Only eaten by holy people. It takes 900 years to grow and they write entire books about the things they have
--> [[spoiler:'''Valentine:''' NOOOOOO! I DON'T WANT TO BE A WAITER!]]
* At the very end, a real life counterpart of Valentine appears and talks to Helena, saying he's always wanted to join the circus. She tells him that he'd make a [[BrickJoke terrible waiter]] and they share a laugh. And
-->'''What?'''
-->'''Valentine's counterpart:''' What?
* If you're watching the scene at the mask shop again, focus on that music that Mrs. Bagwell is playing. It is just so [[SoBadItsGood hilariously]] ''weird''; yes, the music is fine, but the singing at times is just ''random howling''.
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** Even better is the fact that ther actually IS an answer to that riddle: http://www.tumblr.com/blog/metronomeblue
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** Even better is the fact that ther there actually IS an answer to that riddle: http://www.tumblr.com/blog/metronomeblue
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**Even better is the fact that ther actually IS an answer to that riddle: http://www.tumblr.com/blog/metronomeblue
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* At the very end, a real life counterpart of Valentine appears and talks to Helena, saying he's always wanted to join the circus. She tells him that he's make a [[BrickJoke terrible waiter]] and they share a laugh. And then
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* At the very end, a real life counterpart of Valentine appears and talks to Helena, saying he's always wanted to join the circus. She tells him that he's he'd make a [[BrickJoke terrible waiter]] and they share a laugh. And then
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--> [[spoiler: Valentine: I DON'T WANT TO BE A WAITER!]]
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--> [[spoiler: Valentine: [[spoiler:'''Valentine:''' I DON'T WANT TO BE A WAITER!]]
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* Valentine's horrified scream of "I DON'T WANT TO BE A WAITER!"
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* Valentine's horrified scream of "I That's the future fruit. Only eaten by holy people. It takes 900 years to grow and they write entire books about the things they have seen.
--> [[spoiler: Valentine: I DON'T WANT TO BE AWAITER!"WAITER!]]
--> [[spoiler: Valentine: I DON'T WANT TO BE A
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** Plus, the Sphinx's inability to understand that Valentine is actually telling him the answer to the riddle. "It's a secret!"
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* It's a little squicky (and a tad bit [[NightmareFuel HORRIFYING]] but seeing the Dark Queen casually spit up some shadows over dinner to check on a loud rumbling noise is kind of funny.
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* It's a little squicky (and a tad bit [[NightmareFuel HORRIFYING]] HORRIFYING]]) but seeing the Dark Queen casually spit up some shadows over dinner to check on a loud rumbling noise is kind of funny.