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** To elaborate a bit, Thornton is written by Garth in a way that's clearly supposed to evoke [[DaChief ball-busting, hammy police chiefs]] in action movies, the sort of role you'd expect to be played by a burly, imposing actor with a deep, commanding voice and lots of charisma... none of which applies to Richard Ayoade. Basically, imagine your typical Creator/SamuelLJackson movie, but replace Jackson with the nerdiest, scrawniest, most white-bread and non-intimidating person you could possibly find and you've got an idea of what Dean Learner's "depiction of the truth" is like .
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* The various [[LittlestCancerPatient cute sick kids with comically horrible diseases]] Garth is shown caring for, especially the one who's apparently in the hospital because he's a crack addict.
* The way that [[ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything the "doctors" act more like cops]]. What, your doctor doesn't carry a gun into the office when they do your checkup?
* The way that [[ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything the "doctors" act more like cops]]. What, your doctor doesn't carry a gun into the office when they do your checkup?
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-->'''Dagless''': Larry?
-->(''Renwick graphically explodes into LudicrousGibs, coating the room in gore'')
-->'''Dagless''': [[AskAStupidQuestion Are you alright?]]
** As Thornton gets on Dag's case for his use of the shovel, he's holding it. The script, however, calls for him to crush a paper cup out of anger, so the shovel randomly disappears in one shot and is wordlessly replaced with a cup to crush, after which the shovel is back.
* As the scene at Renwick's funeral ends, Thornton comforts a visibly affected Liz in the background... and as he does so, one can see Dean Learner taking the opportunity to grope Madeline Wool's ass. At the same time, [[StyrofoamRocks a gravestone nearby can be seen wobbling in the wind]].
* "I believe that no living thing, be it human, animal or plant, should be hurt in the making of a TV show. So I personally feel very bad about that cat we killed."
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** After chewing out Liz, the Chef turns to walk away, pauses, and then turns back and slaps Liz's tray out of her hands before turning and walking away again.
* The Temp's dying speech, which quickly turns out to just be a skimpy rewrite of the research Garth did to justify the character's accent, resulting in Dag and the Temp spending the latter's final moments on Earth giving a grade-school lesson about Bermuda's relation to the UK.
* Liz's actions in the episode are revealed to be because [[MenstrualMenace she was on the rag]]. And Dag's solution to the whole crisis is to ''lobotomize'' her to get her back under control. In case it isn't apparent yet, [[{{Understatement}} Garth has some very big problems with women]].
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* As Dag flees from the hospital staff, Thornton suddenly shouts - in a very poorly dubbed in line - "WATCH OUT HE'S GOT A STICK" to try and explain why Dag gets a stick in the next scene despite not having it before.
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* At the end of the episode, the characters have to give an extremely fast and awkward {{Infodump}} to explain what the hell has even been happening, something that was very obviously dubbed in in post.
* The lengthy discussions about all the different types of "[[UnfortunateNames Homos]]" (they're referring to the genus of animals that includes humans).
-->"But if we're all basically homos, shouldn't we get along?"
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* Garth and Sanch stopping dead in the middle of the episode [[MerchandiseDriven to give an advertising pitch for batteries]].
* The hilariously awful sex scene at the start, if it can even be called that, acted out by two extras who very clearly could not give less of a shit. "[[DullSurprise Let's do it here, I'm really horny.]]"
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kZQz3dbn0Pk The chase]] from "The Apes of Wrath" complete with [[SugarWiki/AwesomeMusic Eighties chase music]] and engine noises dubbed over in spite of the fact that everyone is riding ordinary bicycles, only to make ordinary bicycle noises during the brief conversations during the 'chase', and then when the chase goes on foot, there's an inexplicable obstacle course (complete with small trampolines) and Dagless tackles the ape into an inexplicable pile of boxes.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kZQz3dbn0Pk The chase]] from "The Apes of Wrath" complete with [[SugarWiki/AwesomeMusic Eighties chase music]] and engine noises dubbed over in spite of the fact that everyone is riding ordinary bicycles, only to make ordinary bicycle noises during the brief conversations during the 'chase', and then when the chase goes on foot, there's an inexplicable obstacle course (complete with small trampolines) and Dagless tackles the ape into an inexplicable pile of boxes. There's even shots where Dagless is being played by a stunt double who doesn't even ''try'' to look like him!
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* Reed breaking up a fight between Dag and Sanchez by firing a shotgun into the ceiling:
-->'''Reed:''' Knock it off, you two! This is a hospital!
-->'''Reed:''' Knock it off, you two! This is a hospital!
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[[AC: Episode 1: "Once Upon a Beginning"]]
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-->'''Sanchez:''' You have no idea what this feels like, old timer!
-->'''Thornton:''' I've been there, ''hombre''! When I heard my wife died ''I could barely finish my lunch!'' But right now Dag and I are more worried about your downstairs!
-->'''Thornton:''' I've been there, ''hombre''! When I heard my wife died ''I could barely finish my lunch!'' But right now Dag and I are more worried about your downstairs!
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-->'''Sanchez:''' You have no idea what this feels like, old timer!
-->'''Thornton:'''timer!\\
'''Thornton:''' I've been there, ''hombre''! When I heard my wife died ''I could barely finish my lunch!'' But right now Dag and I are more worried about yourdownstairs!downstairs!
* When Sanchez's girlfriend succumbs to her broccoli disease and passes away, Rick Dagless hands over the remains not to a coroner or anything like it, but ''the hospital's kitchen staff'' so they can be boiled (featuring a cameo by Creator/StephenMerchant again).
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-->'''Thornton:'''
'''Thornton:''' I've been there, ''hombre''! When I heard my wife died ''I could barely finish my lunch!'' But right now Dag and I are more worried about your
* When Sanchez's girlfriend succumbs to her broccoli disease and passes away, Rick Dagless hands over the remains not to a coroner or anything like it, but ''the hospital's kitchen staff'' so they can be boiled (featuring a cameo by Creator/StephenMerchant again).
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X6iJRNHUOT4 So, what happened between you]] [[ColdHam and this Renwick customerrrrrrrrrrrrrr?]] (''FascinatingEyebrow'')
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GjOEcoMy2fI You and he were... buddies, weren't you?]]
* The first thing that happens in the series is a cat appearing in the hallway. [[SpecialEffectFailure You can see the hands carrying the cat dropping it into the shot,]] and Madeleine/Liz is standing ready to pet the cat for several seconds before it is dropped into shot. Then there's the dialogue...
-->'''Cat''': ''[telepathically, in Todd Rivers' voice]'' Just leave!\\
'''Liz''': [[DullSurprise Funny... I think that cat just told me to leave.]]
* Sanchez at one point tries taking the pulse of a dead victim who is obviously a burned corpse.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GjOEcoMy2fI You and he were... buddies, weren't you?]]
* The first thing that happens in the series is a cat appearing in the hallway. [[SpecialEffectFailure You can see the hands carrying the cat dropping it into the shot,]] and Madeleine/Liz is standing ready to pet the cat for several seconds before it is dropped into shot. Then there's the dialogue...
-->'''Cat''': ''[telepathically, in Todd Rivers' voice]'' Just leave!\\
'''Liz''': [[DullSurprise Funny... I think that cat just told me to leave.]]
* Sanchez at one point tries taking the pulse of a dead victim who is obviously a burned corpse.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GjOEcoMy2fI You and he were... buddies, weren't you?]]
* The first thing that happens in the series is a cat appearing in the hallway. [[SpecialEffectFailure You can see the hands carrying the cat dropping it into the shot,]] and Madeleine/Liz is standing ready to pet the cat for several seconds before it is dropped into shot. Then there's the dialogue...
-->'''Cat''': ''[telepathically, in Todd Rivers' voice]'' Just leave!\\
'''Liz''': [[DullSurprise Funny... I think that cat just told me to leave.]]
* Sanchez at one point tries taking the pulse of a dead victim who is obviously a burned corpse.
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* Thornton Reed using the term [[DefconFive "Defcon 4]] situation" to describe a search for an eye-beast that Rick is hiding.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8IkM64_M-wk Sanchez is accosted]] by a [[ItMakesSenseInContext telekinetically levitated iron]]. He draws his pistol and shoots it. [[HoistByHisOwnPetard His own weapon suddenly comes to life]]. Sanch throws the weapon down, stamps on it and ''draws another pistol'' with which to shoot the first pistol.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8IkM64_M-wk Sanchez is accosted]] by a [[ItMakesSenseInContext telekinetically levitated iron]]. He draws his pistol and shoots it. [[HoistByHisOwnPetard His own weapon suddenly comes to life]]. Sanch throws the weapon down, stamps on it and ''draws another pistol'' with which to shoot the first pistol.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kZQz3dbn0Pk The chase]] from "The Apes of Wrath" complete with [[SugarWiki/AwesomeMusic Eighties chase music]] and engine noises dubbed over in spite of the fact that everyone is riding ordinary bicycles, only to make ordinary bicycle noises during the brief conversations during the 'chase', and then when the chase goes on foot, there's an inexplicable obstacle course (complete with small trampolines) and Dagless tackles the ape into an inexplicable pile of boxes.
* The Temp in the opening of the second episode has the camera wrongly-placed so that his shoulders are cropped off of the bottom of the shot, leaving only his head and the blank wall in the shot.
* A staff member being menaced by a floating stapler runs away with little sense of urgency, taking breaths in the middle of his flat screaming, even after he finishes a phone call. You can't even call it a run, it's more like a ''mild jog''.
-->'''Dag:''' I ran the only way I knew how... [[CaptainObvious by putting one foot in front of the other in quick succession.]]
* The Temp in the opening of the second episode has the camera wrongly-placed so that his shoulders are cropped off of the bottom of the shot, leaving only his head and the blank wall in the shot.
* A staff member being menaced by a floating stapler runs away with little sense of urgency, taking breaths in the middle of his flat screaming, even after he finishes a phone call. You can't even call it a run, it's more like a ''mild jog''.
-->'''Dag:''' I ran the only way I knew how... [[CaptainObvious by putting one foot in front of the other in quick succession.]]
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[[AC: Episode 1: "Once Upon a Beginning"]]
* Any of the readings from [[StylisticSuck Garth's novels]]. The first one from ''Slicer'' stands out.
--> '''Garth Marenghi:''' Something was pouring from his mouth. He examined his sleeve. Blood!? Blood. Crimson copper-smelling blood, his blood. [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment Blood]]. [[RunningGag Blood]]. [[OverlyLongGag Blood]]. (Checks line)...[[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking And bits of sick]].
* The first thing that happens in the series is a cat appearing in the hallway. [[SpecialEffectFailure You can see the hands carrying the cat dropping it into the shot,]] and Madeleine/Liz is standing ready to pet the cat for several seconds before it is dropped into shot. Then there's the dialogue...
-->'''Cat''': ''[telepathically, in Todd Rivers' voice]'' Just leave!\\
'''Liz''': [[DullSurprise Funny... I think that cat just told me to leave.]]
* [[https://www.youtube.
* The Temp in the opening of the second episode has the camera wrongly-placed so that his shoulders are cropped off of the bottom of the shot, leaving only his head and the blank wall in the shot.
* A staff member being menaced by a floating stapler runs away with little sense of urgency, taking breaths in the middle of his flat screaming, even after he finishes a phone call. You can't even call it a run, it's more like a ''mild jog''.
-->'''Dag:''' I ran the only way I knew how... [[CaptainObvious by putting one foot in front of the other in quick succession.]]
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GjOEcoMy2fI You and he were... buddies, weren't you?]]
* The whole scenario in the first episode when Renwick gets blown up, from his understatement that it '''really hurts''' to him somehow being alive after basically exploding, with only his head left intact to Dagless whacking his head with a spade, whereupon it flies away like a golf ball, or an obvious dummy. A DVD extra shows Garth's storyboards for the scene, which look like a secondary school student's homemade comic book.
[[AC: Episode 2: "Hell Hath Fury"]]
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8IkM64_M-wk Sanchez is accosted]] by a [[ItMakesSenseInContext telekinetically levitated iron]]. He draws his pistol and shoots it. [[HoistByHisOwnPetard His own weapon suddenly comes to life]]. Sanch throws the weapon down, stamps on it and ''draws another pistol'' with which to shoot the first pistol.
* The Temp in the opening of the second episode has the camera wrongly-placed so that his shoulders are cropped off of the bottom of the shot, leaving only his head and the blank wall in the shot.
* A staff member being menaced by a floating stapler runs away with little sense of urgency, taking breaths in the middle of his flat screaming, even after he finishes a phone call. You can't even call it a run, it's more like a ''mild jog''.
-->'''Dag:''' I ran the only way I knew how... [[CaptainObvious by putting one foot in front of the other in quick succession.]]
* "As I rounded the corner, I was muscular and compact, [[{{Dissimile}} like corned beef]]."
* The whole scenario in the first episode when Renwick gets blown up, from his understatement that it '''really hurts''' to him somehow being alive after basically exploding, with only his head left intact to Dagless whacking his head with a spade, whereupon it flies away like a golf ball, or an obvious dummy. A DVD extra shows Garth's storyboards for the scene, which look like a secondary school student's homemade comic book.
[[AC: Episode 2: "Hell Hath Fury"]]
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8IkM64_M-wk Sanchez is accosted]] by a [[ItMakesSenseInContext telekinetically levitated iron]]. He draws his pistol and shoots it. [[HoistByHisOwnPetard His own weapon suddenly comes to life]]. Sanch throws the weapon down, stamps on it and ''draws another pistol'' with which to shoot the first pistol.
* The Temp in the opening of the second episode has the camera wrongly-placed so that his shoulders are cropped off of the bottom of the shot, leaving only his head and the blank wall in the shot.
* A staff member being menaced by a floating stapler runs away with little sense of urgency, taking breaths in the middle of his flat screaming, even after he finishes a phone call. You can't even call it a run, it's more like a ''mild jog''.
-->'''Dag:''' I ran the only way I knew how... [[CaptainObvious by putting one foot in front of the other in quick succession.]]
* "As I rounded the corner, I was muscular and compact, [[{{Dissimile}} like corned beef]]."
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* [[DullSurprise "Look at that poor man. Not only has he just been screwed by an eye, but he's now giving birth."]]
[[AC: Episode 3: "Skipper the Eye-Child"]]
* Thornton Reed using the term [[DefconFive "Defcon 4]] situation" to describe a search for an eye-beast that Rick is hiding.
* [[DullSurprise "Look at that poor man. Not only has he just been screwed by an eye, but he's now giving birth."]]
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* When Dag goes out alone to face the Scotch Mist, he is attacked by a set of bagpipes. The pipes latch onto him, steal his trousers and turn his hair ginger.
* Any of the readings from [[StylisticSuck Garth's novels]]. The first one from ''Slicer'' stands out.
--> '''Garth Marenghi:''' Something was pouring from his mouth. He examined his sleeve. Blood!? Blood. Crimson copper-smelling blood, his blood. [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment Blood]]. [[RunningGag Blood]]. [[OverlyLongGag Blood]]. (Checks line)...[[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking And bits of sick]].
* The long terrifying rant Dag gives about having to spend a night in Glasgow that led to his hatred of Scots.
-->'''Sanchez''': My aunt lives in Scotland. She says it's quite nice.
-->'''Dag''': Well she's wrong.
* "I ran like my life depended on it. ''Which it '''diiiid.'''''"
* The whole scenario in the first episode when Renwick gets blown up, from his understatement that it '''really hurts''' to him somehow being alive after basically exploding, with only his head left intact to Dagless whacking his head with a spade, whereupon it flies away like a golf ball, or an obvious dummy. A DVD extra shows Garth's storyboards for the scene, which look like a secondary school student's homemade comic book.
* Any of the readings from [[StylisticSuck Garth's novels]]. The first one from ''Slicer'' stands out.
--> '''Garth Marenghi:''' Something was pouring from his mouth. He examined his sleeve. Blood!? Blood. Crimson copper-smelling blood, his blood. [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment Blood]]. [[RunningGag Blood]]. [[OverlyLongGag Blood]]. (Checks line)...[[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking And bits of sick]].
* The long terrifying rant Dag gives about having to spend a night in Glasgow that led to his hatred of Scots.
-->'''Sanchez''': My aunt lives in Scotland. She says it's quite nice.
-->'''Dag''': Well she's wrong.
* "I ran like my life depended on it. ''Which it '''diiiid.'''''"
* The whole scenario in the first episode when Renwick gets blown up, from his understatement that it '''really hurts''' to him somehow being alive after basically exploding, with only his head left intact to Dagless whacking his head with a spade, whereupon it flies away like a golf ball, or an obvious dummy. A DVD extra shows Garth's storyboards for the scene, which look like a secondary school student's homemade comic book.
[[AC: Episode 4: "The Apes of Wrath"]]
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kZQz3dbn0Pk The chase]] from "The Apes of Wrath" complete with [[SugarWiki/AwesomeMusic Eighties chase music]] and engine noises dubbed over in spite of the fact that everyone is riding ordinary bicycles, only to make ordinary bicycle noises during the brief conversations during the 'chase', and then when the chase goes on foot, there's an inexplicable obstacle course (complete with small trampolines) and Dagless tackles the ape into an inexplicable pile of boxes.
* Despite devolving into an ape, Sanchez is still expected to perform surgery. When he botches one and kills the patient, he storms out of the operating theatre exclaiming "Not my fault! Monkey bastard hands!"
* Dean Learner, upon being asked about the fate of the missing actress Madeline Wool:
-->'''Learner''': I reckon she's probably somewhere in the Eastern Bloc. That's my hunch.
-->'''Interviewer''': You think she's still alive, then?
-->'''Learner''': No, I think she's probably just buried in the Eastern Bloc. ''If she got a burial.''
[[AC: Episode 5: "Scotch Mist"]]
* When Dag goes out alone to face the Scotch Mist, he is attacked by a set of bagpipes. The pipes latch onto him, steal his trousers and turn his hair ginger.
* The long terrifying rant Dag gives about having to spend a night in Glasgow that led to his hatred of Scots.
-->'''Sanchez''': My aunt lives in Scotland. She says it's quite nice.
-->'''Dag''': Well she's wrong.
* "I ran like my life depended on it. ''Which it '''diiiid.'''''"
[[AC: Episode 6: "The Creeping Moss from the Shores of Shuggoth"]]
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-->'''Thornton:''' I've been there, ''hombre''! When I heard my wife died ''I could barely finish my lunch!'' But right now Dag and I are more worried about your downstairs!
* Despite devolving into an ape, Sanchez is still expected to perform surgery. When he botches one and kills the patient, he storms out of the operating theatre exclaiming "Not my fault! Monkey bastard hands!"
* Despite devolving into an ape, Sanchez is still expected to perform surgery. When he botches one and kills the patient, he storms out of the operating theatre exclaiming "Not my fault! Monkey bastard hands!"
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-->'''Thornton:''' I've been there, ''hombre''! When I heard my wife died ''I could barely finish my lunch!'' But right now Dag and I are more worried about your downstairs!
* Despite devolving into an ape, Sanchez is still expected to perform surgery. When he botches one and kills the patient, he storms out of the operating theatre exclaiming "Not my fault! Monkey bastard hands!"downstairs!
* Despite devolving into an ape, Sanchez is still expected to perform surgery. When he botches one and kills the patient, he storms out of the operating theatre exclaiming "Not my fault! Monkey bastard hands!"
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* "I "I ran like my life depended on it. ''Which it '''diiiid.''''''''''"
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-->'''Dag:''' I ran the only way I knew how... [[CaptainObvious by putting one foot in front of the other in quick succession.]]
-->'''Chef:''' [[DullSurprise Sonofabitch.]]
* "I ran like my life depended on it. ''Which it '''diiiid.'''''
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* When Sanchez falls for a clinically ill patient ([[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext who's slowly but surely turning into broccoli]]), Sanchez must have a risky surgery in an attempt to save his... um... old boy, but they won't be able to save his new girlfriend. When they discuss it, Thornton attempts to comfort Sanchez with by sympathizing with this absolute gem of a quote:
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* When Sanchez falls for a clinically ill patient ([[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext who's slowly but surely turning into broccoli]]), Sanchez must have a risky surgery in an attempt to save his... um... old boy, but they won't be able to save his new girlfriend. When they discuss it, Thornton attempts to comfort sympathize with Sanchez with by sympathizing with this absolute gem of a quote:
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-->'''Thornton:''' I've been there, ''hombre''! When I heard my wife died ''I could barely finish my lunch!'' But right now Dag and I are more worried about your downstairs!
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-->'''Thornton:''' I've been there, ''hombre''! When I heard my wife died ''I could barely finish my lunch!'' But right now Dag and I are more worried about your downstairs!downstairs!
* Despite devolving into an ape, Sanchez is still expected to perform surgery. When he botches one and kills the patient, he storms out of the operating theatre exclaiming "Not my fault! Monkey bastard hands!"
* Despite devolving into an ape, Sanchez is still expected to perform surgery. When he botches one and kills the patient, he storms out of the operating theatre exclaiming "Not my fault! Monkey bastard hands!"
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* Thornton Reed using the term [[DefconFive "Defcon 4]] [[CriticalResearchFailure situation"]] to describe a search for an eye-beast that Rick is hiding.
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* Thornton Reed using the term [[DefconFive "Defcon 4]] [[CriticalResearchFailure situation"]] situation" to describe a search for an eye-beast that Rick is hiding.
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* The whole sequence when the eye-child bites Dag's hand [[TooDumbToLive when Dag for some reason moves his hand near its mouth]], causing him to fling it around in a panic and bash it to death comes off as intentionally awkward, with all the other actors standing around awkwardly glancing around, not even ''responding'' to what's going on, as if they're not sure what to make of what's happening.
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* The whole sequence when the eye-child bites Dag's hand [[TooDumbToLive when Dag for some reason moves his hand near its mouth]], causing him to fling it around in a panic and bash it to death comes off as intentionally awkward, with all the other actors standing around awkwardly glancing around, not even ''responding'' to what's going on, as if they're not sure what to make of what's happening.
* When Sanchez falls for a clinically ill patient ([[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext who's slowly but surely turning into broccoli]]), Sanchez must have a risky surgery in an attempt to save his... um... old boy, but they won't be able to save his new girlfriend. When they discuss it, Thornton attempts to comfort Sanchez with by sympathizing with this absolute gem of a quote:
-->'''Sanchez:''' You have no idea what this feels like, old timer!
-->'''Thornton:''' I've been there, ''hombre''! When I heard my wife died ''I could barely finish my lunch!'' But right now Dag and I are more worried about your downstairs!
* When Sanchez falls for a clinically ill patient ([[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext who's slowly but surely turning into broccoli]]), Sanchez must have a risky surgery in an attempt to save his... um... old boy, but they won't be able to save his new girlfriend. When they discuss it, Thornton attempts to comfort Sanchez with by sympathizing with this absolute gem of a quote:
-->'''Sanchez:''' You have no idea what this feels like, old timer!
-->'''Thornton:''' I've been there, ''hombre''! When I heard my wife died ''I could barely finish my lunch!'' But right now Dag and I are more worried about your downstairs!
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kZQz3dbn0Pk The chase]] from "The Apes of Wrath" complete with [[SugarWiki/AwesomeMusic Eighties chase music]] and engine noises dubbed over in spite of the fact that everyone is riding ordinary bicyles.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kZQz3dbn0Pk The chase]] from "The Apes of Wrath" complete with [[SugarWiki/AwesomeMusic Eighties chase music]] and engine noises dubbed over in spite of the fact that everyone is riding ordinary bicyles. bicycles, only to make ordinary bicycle noises during the brief conversations during the 'chase', and then when the chase goes on foot, there's an inexplicable obstacle course (complete with small trampolines) and Dagless tackles the ape into an inexplicable pile of boxes.
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* [[TheFunInFuneral Larry Renwick's funeral]] in "Once Upon a Beginning". Renwick bursts out of his coffin, in spite of the fact that in the previous scene he had exploded, but somehow survived as a disembodied head until Dag granted him a MercyKill. Dag pushes Renwick's grieving mother aside, even shooting her in the shoulder, before pumping [[BottomlessMagazines an unholy number of magnum rounds]] into Renwick, while Reed supports him with his shotgun, after which he uses a ''[[KillItWithFire flamethrower]]'' to [[NoKillLikeOverkill finish the job]]. To cap it all off, Sanchez simply states "[[CaptainObvious Well, that'll stop him]]." Not only that, but the footage of Reed and his shotgun is badly edited in, to the point that every time it cuts back to Dag, Reed is standing behind him doing nothing.
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* [[TheFunInFuneral Larry Renwick's funeral]] in "Once Upon a Beginning". Renwick bursts out of his coffin, in spite of the fact that in the previous scene he had exploded, but somehow survived as a disembodied head until Dag granted him a MercyKill. Dag pushes Renwick's grieving mother aside, even shooting her in the shoulder, before pumping [[BottomlessMagazines an unholy number of magnum rounds]] into Renwick, while Reed supports him with his shotgun, after which he uses a ''[[KillItWithFire flamethrower]]'' to [[NoKillLikeOverkill finish the job]]. To cap it all off, Sanchez simply states "[[CaptainObvious Well, that'll stop him]]." Not only that, but the footage of Reed and his shotgun is badly edited in, to the point that every time it cuts back to Dag, Reed is standing behind him doing nothing.nothing and just has his hands in his pockets.
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* The [[SpecialEffectsFailure clearly visible wires]] holding up the telekinetically held up objects in "Hell Hath Fury" are funny enough but become hysterical after Dean's excuses for it:
-->'''Dean Learner''': An eagle-eyed viewer might be able to see the wires. A ''pedant'' might be able to see the wires, but I think if you're looking at the wires, you're ignoring the story. If you go to a puppet show, you can see the wires, but it's about the puppets, it's not about the string. If you go to a ''Theatre/PunchAndJudy'' show and you're only watching the wires, you're a freak![[note]]''Punch and Judy'' is a hand-puppet show, [[DontExplainTheJoke thus there are no wires.]][[/note]]
-->'''Dean Learner''': An eagle-eyed viewer might be able to see the wires. A ''pedant'' might be able to see the wires, but I think if you're looking at the wires, you're ignoring the story. If you go to a puppet show, you can see the wires, but it's about the puppets, it's not about the string. If you go to a ''Theatre/PunchAndJudy'' show and you're only watching the wires, you're a freak![[note]]''Punch and Judy'' is a hand-puppet show, [[DontExplainTheJoke thus there are no wires.]][[/note]]
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* The [[SpecialEffectsFailure clearly visible wires]] holding up the telekinetically held up objects in "Hell Hath Fury" are funny enough but become hysterical after Dean's excuses incredibly pretentious excuse for it:
-->'''Dean Learner''': An eagle-eyed viewer might be able to see the wires. A ''pedant'' might be able to see the wires, but I think if you're looking at the wires, you're ignoring the story. If you go to a puppet show, you can see thewires, but wires. But it's about the puppets, it's not about the string. If you go to a ''Theatre/PunchAndJudy'' show and you're only watching the wires, you're a freak![[note]]''Punch and Judy'' is a hand-puppet show, [[DontExplainTheJoke thus there are no wires.]][[/note]]
-->'''Dean Learner''': An eagle-eyed viewer might be able to see the wires. A ''pedant'' might be able to see the wires, but I think if you're looking at the wires, you're ignoring the story. If you go to a puppet show, you can see the
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* "If you go to a puppet show to see the strings, you're a freak." Before that, the phrase, "An eagle-eyed viewer might be able to see the wires", in the middle of an episode where the wires holding up telekinetically-floating objects have ranged from exactly that kind of visibility to [[SpecialEffectFailure blatantly obvious]].
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* "If you go to a puppet show to see The [[SpecialEffectsFailure clearly visible wires]] holding up the strings, you're a freak." Before that, the phrase, "An telekinetically held up objects in "Hell Hath Fury" are funny enough but become hysterical after Dean's excuses for it:
-->'''Dean Learner''': An eagle-eyed viewer might be able to see thewires", in wires. A ''pedant'' might be able to see the middle of an episode where wires, but I think if you're looking at the wires holding up telekinetically-floating objects have ranged from exactly that kind of visibility wires, you're ignoring the story. If you go to [[SpecialEffectFailure blatantly obvious]].a puppet show, you can see the wires, but it's about the puppets, it's not about the string. If you go to a ''Theatre/PunchAndJudy'' show and you're only watching the wires, you're a freak![[note]]''Punch and Judy'' is a hand-puppet show, [[DontExplainTheJoke thus there are no wires.]][[/note]]
-->'''Dean Learner''': An eagle-eyed viewer might be able to see the
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X6iJRNHUOT4 So, what happened between you]] [[LargeHam and this Renwick customerrrrrrrrrrrrrr?]]
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X6iJRNHUOT4 So, what happened between you]] [[LargeHam [[ColdHam and this Renwick customerrrrrrrrrrrrrr?]]customerrrrrrrrrrrrrr?]] (''FascinatingEyebrow'')
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* One of the cafeteria staff in the second episode has the camera wrongly-placed so that his shoulders are cropped off of the bottom of the shot, leaving only his head and the blank wall in the shot.
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* One of The Temp in the cafeteria staff in opening of the second episode has the camera wrongly-placed so that his shoulders are cropped off of the bottom of the shot, leaving only his head and the blank wall in the shot.
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* Thornton Reed using the term [[CriticalResearchFailure "Defcon 4 situation"]] to describe a search for an eye-beast that Rick is hiding.
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* Thornton Reed using the term [[DefconFive "Defcon 4]] [[CriticalResearchFailure "Defcon 4 situation"]] to describe a search for an eye-beast that Rick is hiding.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kZQz3dbn0Pk The chase]] from ''The Apes Of Wrath'' complete with [[CrowningMusicOfAwesome Eighties chase music]] and engine noises dubbed over in spite of the fact that everyone is riding ordinary bicyles.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kZQz3dbn0Pk The chase]] from ''The "The Apes Of Wrath'' of Wrath" complete with [[CrowningMusicOfAwesome [[SugarWiki/AwesomeMusic Eighties chase music]] and engine noises dubbed over in spite of the fact that everyone is riding ordinary bicyles.
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* [[TheFunInFuneral Larry Renwick's funeral]] in "Once Upon A Beginning". Renwick bursts out of his coffin, in spite of the fact that in the previous scene he had exploded, but somehow survived as a disembodied head until Dag granted him a MercyKill. Dag pushes Renwick's grieving mother aside, even shooting her in the shoulder, before pumping [[BottomlessMagazines an unholy number of magnum rounds]] into Renwick, while Reed supports him with his shotgun, after which he uses a ''[[KillItWithFire flamethrower]]'' to [[NoKillLikeOverkill finish the job]]. To cap it all off, Sanchez simply states "[[CaptainObvious Well, that'll stop him]]." Not only that, but the footage of Reed and his shotgun is badly edited in, to the point that every time it cuts back to Dag, Reed is standing behind him doing nothing.
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* [[TheFunInFuneral Larry Renwick's funeral]] in "Once Upon A a Beginning". Renwick bursts out of his coffin, in spite of the fact that in the previous scene he had exploded, but somehow survived as a disembodied head until Dag granted him a MercyKill. Dag pushes Renwick's grieving mother aside, even shooting her in the shoulder, before pumping [[BottomlessMagazines an unholy number of magnum rounds]] into Renwick, while Reed supports him with his shotgun, after which he uses a ''[[KillItWithFire flamethrower]]'' to [[NoKillLikeOverkill finish the job]]. To cap it all off, Sanchez simply states "[[CaptainObvious Well, that'll stop him]]." Not only that, but the footage of Reed and his shotgun is badly edited in, to the point that every time it cuts back to Dag, Reed is standing behind him doing nothing.
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* The whole scenario in the first episode when Renwick gets blown up, from his Understatement that it '''really hurts''' to him somehow being alive after basically exploding, with only his head left intact to Dagless whacking his head with a spade, whereupon it flies away like a golf ball, or an obvious dummy. A DVD extra shows Garth's storyboards for the scene, which look like a secondary school student's homemade comic book.
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* The whole scenario in the first episode when Renwick gets blown up, from his Understatement understatement that it '''really hurts''' to him somehow being alive after basically exploding, with only his head left intact to Dagless whacking his head with a spade, whereupon it flies away like a golf ball, or an obvious dummy. A DVD extra shows Garth's storyboards for the scene, which look like a secondary school student's homemade comic book.
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"Moments" pages are Spoilers Off.
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* The first thing that happens in the series is a cat appearing in the hallway. [[SpecialEffectFailure You can see the hands carrying the cat dropping it into the shot.]]
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* The first thing that happens in the series is a cat appearing in the hallway. [[SpecialEffectFailure You can see the hands carrying the cat dropping it into the shot.shot,]] and Madeleine/Liz is standing ready to pet the cat for several seconds before it is dropped into shot. Then there's the dialogue...
-->'''Cat''': ''[telepathically, in Todd Rivers' voice]'' Just leave!\\
'''Liz''': [[DullSurprise Funny... I think that cat just told me to leave.]]
-->'''Cat''': ''[telepathically, in Todd Rivers' voice]'' Just leave!\\
'''Liz''': [[DullSurprise Funny... I think that cat just told me to leave.]]
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* [[BadBadActing Any]] [[DullSurprise of]] [[DaChief Thornton Reed's]] [[GoshDangItToHeck rants]]. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a8MsYislXJg Cool it Sanchez, or you'll get a knuckle supper]], indeed.
** Adding to it is the fact that he uses several curse words that would sound intimidating if his acting matched the character. However, the fact that the actor uses a deeper version of Ayoade's [[{{Series/TheITCrowd}} Maurice Moss]] voice makes any would-be tough lines fall so flat to hilariously-awkward effect.
** Adding to it is the fact that he uses several curse words that would sound intimidating if his acting matched the character. However, the fact that the actor uses a deeper version of Ayoade's [[{{Series/TheITCrowd}} Maurice Moss]] voice makes any would-be tough lines fall so flat to hilariously-awkward effect.
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* [[BadBadActing Any]] [[DullSurprise of]] [[DaChief Thornton Reed's]] [[GoshDangItToHeck rants]]. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a8MsYislXJg Cool it Sanchez, or you'll get a knuckle supper]], indeed.
**indeed. Adding to it is the fact that he uses several curse words that would sound intimidating if his acting matched the character. However, the fact that the actor uses a deeper version of Ayoade's [[{{Series/TheITCrowd}} [[Series/TheITCrowd Maurice Moss]] voice makes any would-be tough lines fall so flat to hilariously-awkward effect.
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* [[spoiler:[[TheFunInFuneral Larry Renwick's funeral]]]] in "Once Upon A Beginning". [[spoiler:Renwick bursts out of his coffin, in spite of the fact that in the previous scene he had exploded, but somehow survived as a disembodied head until Dag granted him a MercyKill.]] Dag pushes [[spoiler:Renwick's grieving mother]] aside, even shooting her in the shoulder, before pumping [[BottomlessMagazines an unholy number of magnum rounds]] into [[spoiler:Renwick]], while Reed supports him with his shotgun, after which he uses a ''[[KillItWithFire flamethrower]]'' to [[NoKillLikeOverkill finish the job]]. To cap it all off, Sanchez simply states "[[CaptainObvious Well, that'll stop him]]."
** Not only that, but the footage of Reed and his shotgun is badly edited in, to the point that every time it cuts back to Dag, Reed is standing behind him doing nothing.
* "If you go to a puppet show to see the strings, you're a freak."
** Before that, the phrase, "An eagle-eyed viewer might be able to see the wires", in the middle of an episode where the wires holding up telekinetically-floating objects have ranged from exactly that kind of visibility to [[SpecialEffectFailure blatantly obvious]].
** Not only that, but the footage of Reed and his shotgun is badly edited in, to the point that every time it cuts back to Dag, Reed is standing behind him doing nothing.
* "If you go to a puppet show to see the strings, you're a freak."
** Before that, the phrase, "An eagle-eyed viewer might be able to see the wires", in the middle of an episode where the wires holding up telekinetically-floating objects have ranged from exactly that kind of visibility to [[SpecialEffectFailure blatantly obvious]].
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* [[spoiler:[[TheFunInFuneral [[TheFunInFuneral Larry Renwick's funeral]]]] funeral]] in "Once Upon A Beginning". [[spoiler:Renwick Renwick bursts out of his coffin, in spite of the fact that in the previous scene he had exploded, but somehow survived as a disembodied head until Dag granted him a MercyKill.]] MercyKill. Dag pushes [[spoiler:Renwick's Renwick's grieving mother]] mother aside, even shooting her in the shoulder, before pumping [[BottomlessMagazines an unholy number of magnum rounds]] into [[spoiler:Renwick]], Renwick, while Reed supports him with his shotgun, after which he uses a ''[[KillItWithFire flamethrower]]'' to [[NoKillLikeOverkill finish the job]]. To cap it all off, Sanchez simply states "[[CaptainObvious Well, that'll stop him]]."
**" Not only that, but the footage of Reed and his shotgun is badly edited in, to the point that every time it cuts back to Dag, Reed is standing behind him doing nothing.
* "If you go to a puppet show to see the strings, you're a freak."
**" Before that, the phrase, "An eagle-eyed viewer might be able to see the wires", in the middle of an episode where the wires holding up telekinetically-floating objects have ranged from exactly that kind of visibility to [[SpecialEffectFailure blatantly obvious]].
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* "If you go to a puppet show to see the strings, you're a freak.
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* Creator/StephenMerchant as the chef meets a sticky end: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=86ByUwUgq94 Goddamn sonofabitch]].
** The fact that his typical MotorMouth tendencies are played for {{Narm}} in this case, as if the In-Universe actor just wanted to get his lines out of the way.
* "That thing's a potential killer! Look at these lab results!" '' *points at piece of paper with "POTENTIAL KILLER" written on it*''
** The fact that his typical MotorMouth tendencies are played for {{Narm}} in this case, as if the In-Universe actor just wanted to get his lines out of the way.
* "That thing's a potential killer! Look at these lab results!" '' *points at piece of paper with "POTENTIAL KILLER" written on it*''
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* Creator/StephenMerchant as the chef meets a sticky end: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=86ByUwUgq94 Goddamn sonofabitch]].
**sonofabitch]]. The fact that his typical MotorMouth tendencies are played for {{Narm}} in this case, as if the In-Universe actor just wanted to get his lines out of the way.
* "That thing's a potential killer! Look at these lab results!"'' *points ''[points at piece of paper with "POTENTIAL KILLER" written on it*''it]''
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* "That thing's a potential killer! Look at these lab results!"
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* From the very first episode:
-->'''Cat''': Just leave!
-->'''Liz''': Funny I think that cat just told me to leave.
-->'''Cat''': Just leave!
-->'''Liz''': Funny I think that cat just told me to leave.
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* The whole scenario in the first episode when [[spoiler: Renwick gets blown up]], from his Understatement that [[spoiler: it '''really hurts''']] to him [[spoiler: somehow being alive after basically exploding, with only his head left intact]] to Dagless [[spoiler: whacking his head with a spade, whereupon it flies away like a golf ball, or an obvious dummy]].
* The whole sequence when [[spoiler:the eye-child bites Dag's hand [[TooDumbToLive when Dag for some reason moves his hand near its mouth]], causing him to fling it around in a panic and bash it to death]] comes off as intentionally awkward, with all the other actors standing around awkwardly glancing around, not even ''responding'' to what's going on, as if they're not sure what to make of what's happening.
* The whole sequence when [[spoiler:the eye-child bites Dag's hand [[TooDumbToLive when Dag for some reason moves his hand near its mouth]], causing him to fling it around in a panic and bash it to death]] comes off as intentionally awkward, with all the other actors standing around awkwardly glancing around, not even ''responding'' to what's going on, as if they're not sure what to make of what's happening.
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* The whole scenario in the first episode when [[spoiler: Renwick gets blown up]], up, from his Understatement that [[spoiler: it '''really hurts''']] hurts''' to him [[spoiler: somehow being alive after basically exploding, with only his head left intact]] intact to Dagless [[spoiler: whacking his head with a spade, whereupon it flies away like a golf ball, or an obvious dummy]].
dummy. A DVD extra shows Garth's storyboards for the scene, which look like a secondary school student's homemade comic book.
* The whole sequence when[[spoiler:the the eye-child bites Dag's hand [[TooDumbToLive when Dag for some reason moves his hand near its mouth]], causing him to fling it around in a panic and bash it to death]] death comes off as intentionally awkward, with all the other actors standing around awkwardly glancing around, not even ''responding'' to what's going on, as if they're not sure what to make of what's happening.
* The whole sequence when
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kZQz3dbn0Pk The chase]] from ''The Apes Of Wrath'' complete with [[CrowningMusicOfAwesome Eighties chase music]] and engine noises dubbed over in spite of the fact that everyone is riding pedalbikes.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kZQz3dbn0Pk The chase]] from ''The Apes Of Wrath'' complete with [[CrowningMusicOfAwesome Eighties chase music]] and engine noises dubbed over in spite of the fact that everyone is riding pedalbikes.ordinary bicyles.
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* StephenMerchant as the chef meets a sticky end: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=86ByUwUgq94 Goddamn sonofabitch]].
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* StephenMerchant Creator/StephenMerchant as the chef meets a sticky end: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=86ByUwUgq94 Goddamn sonofabitch]].
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* A staff member being menaced by a floating stapler runs away with little sense of urgency, taking breaths in the middle of his flat screaming, even after he finishes a phone call.
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* A staff member being menaced by a floating stapler runs away with little sense of urgency, taking breaths in the middle of his flat screaming, even after he finishes a phone call. You can't even call it a run, it's more like a ''mild jog''.
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* The whole scenario in the first episode when [[spoiler: Renwick gets blown up]], from his Understatement that [[spoiler: it '''really hurts''']] to him [[spoiler: somehow being alive after basically exploding, with only his head left intact]] to Dagless [[spoiler: whacking his head with a spade, whereupon it flies away like a golf ball, or an obvious dummy]] .
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* The whole scenario in the first episode when [[spoiler: Renwick gets blown up]], from his Understatement that [[spoiler: it '''really hurts''']] to him [[spoiler: somehow being alive after basically exploding, with only his head left intact]] to Dagless [[spoiler: whacking his head with a spade, whereupon it flies away like a golf ball, or an obvious dummy]] .dummy]].
* The whole sequence when [[spoiler:the eye-child bites Dag's hand [[TooDumbToLive when Dag for some reason moves his hand near its mouth]], causing him to fling it around in a panic and bash it to death]] comes off as intentionally awkward, with all the other actors standing around awkwardly glancing around, not even ''responding'' to what's going on, as if they're not sure what to make of what's happening.
* The whole sequence when [[spoiler:the eye-child bites Dag's hand [[TooDumbToLive when Dag for some reason moves his hand near its mouth]], causing him to fling it around in a panic and bash it to death]] comes off as intentionally awkward, with all the other actors standing around awkwardly glancing around, not even ''responding'' to what's going on, as if they're not sure what to make of what's happening.
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-->'''Dag''': Well she's wrong.
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-->'''Dag''': Well she's wrong.wrong.
* The whole scenario in the first episode when [[spoiler: Renwick gets blown up]], from his Understatement that [[spoiler: it '''really hurts''']] to him [[spoiler: somehow being alive after basically exploding, with only his head left intact]] to Dagless [[spoiler: whacking his head with a spade, whereupon it flies away like a golf ball, or an obvious dummy]] .
* The whole scenario in the first episode when [[spoiler: Renwick gets blown up]], from his Understatement that [[spoiler: it '''really hurts''']] to him [[spoiler: somehow being alive after basically exploding, with only his head left intact]] to Dagless [[spoiler: whacking his head with a spade, whereupon it flies away like a golf ball, or an obvious dummy]] .
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-->'''Liz''': Funny I think that cat just told me to leave.
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-->'''Liz''': Funny I think that cat just told me to leave.leave.
* The long terrifying rant Dag gives about having to spend a night in Glasgow that led to his hatred of Scots.
-->'''Sanchez''': My aunt lives in Scotland. She says it's quite nice.
-->'''Dag''': Well she's wrong.
* The long terrifying rant Dag gives about having to spend a night in Glasgow that led to his hatred of Scots.
-->'''Sanchez''': My aunt lives in Scotland. She says it's quite nice.
-->'''Dag''': Well she's wrong.
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* "That thing's a potential killer! Look at these lab results!" ''[[ViewersAreMorons *points at piece of paper with "POTENTIAL KILLER" written on it*]]''
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* "That thing's a potential killer! Look at these lab results!" ''[[ViewersAreMorons '' *points at piece of paper with "POTENTIAL KILLER" written on it*]]''it*''
