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* Zenmaru's going to fight the second match against the [[BladeOnAStick Myoujin Ryuu]], and we get the following dialogue (paraphrased):
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* Zenmaru's going to fight the second match against the [[BladeOnAStick Myoujin Ryuu]], Ryuu, and we get the following dialogue (paraphrased):
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-->'''Naoyoshi''':"Zenmaru, take care of it, but try to not die.."
-->'''Zenmaru''':"Yessir!"
-->'''Gama''':" And if you realize you're about to lose, give up, allright?"
-->'''Zenmaru''': (slightly annoyed)"Eh?!"
-->'''Ranmaru''':"... [[BrutalHonesty Hey, big guy! The Divine Spears are strong! They're gonna kill you]]!"
-->'''Zenmaru''': (angry) "I'm NOT gonna Die!!"
-->'''Zenmaru''':"Yessir!"
-->'''Gama''':" And if you realize you're about to lose, give up, allright?"
-->'''Zenmaru''': (slightly annoyed)"Eh?!"
-->'''Ranmaru''':"... [[BrutalHonesty Hey, big guy! The Divine Spears are strong! They're gonna kill you]]!"
-->'''Zenmaru''': (angry) "I'm NOT gonna Die!!"
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-->'''Zenmaru''':"Yessir!"
-->'''Gama''':"
-->'''Zenmaru''': Yessir!
-->'''Gama''': And if you realize you're about to lose, give up,
-->'''Zenmaru''':
-->'''Ranmaru''':"...
-->'''Ranmaru''':...[[BrutalHonesty Hey, big guy! The Divine Spears are strong! They're gonna kill
-->'''Zenmaru''':
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-->'''Gama and Zenmaru (both with a [[FaceFault really shocked face]])''': "This guy is a Huuuge freak!!!"
-->'''Senka (in TranquilFury)''' I Understand... (Kashitarou boast) I understand... that you're disgusting four eyed freak.." (cue to MegatonPunch).
* Gama and Zenmaru's reaction to being groped in evety inch of their bodies by Kashitarou.
-->'''Zenmaru (utterly shocked and shaking)''': "Waaah... getting touched by that pervert..."
-->'''Gama (catatonic)''': "... [[HeroicBSOD I want to go home...]]"
-->'''Senka (in TranquilFury)''' I Understand... (Kashitarou boast) I understand... that you're disgusting four eyed freak.." (cue to MegatonPunch).
* Gama and Zenmaru's reaction to being groped in evety inch of their bodies by Kashitarou.
-->'''Zenmaru (utterly shocked and shaking)''': "Waaah... getting touched by that pervert..."
-->'''Gama (catatonic)''': "... [[HeroicBSOD I want to go home...]]"
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-->'''Gama and Zenmaru (both with a [[FaceFault really shocked face]])''': "This guy is a Huuuge huuuge freak!!!"
-->'''Senka (in TranquilFury)''' IUnderstand...understand... (Kashitarou boast) I understand... that you're a disgusting four eyed freak.." (cue to the MegatonPunch).
* Gama and Zenmaru's reaction to being gropedin evety inch of their bodies by Kashitarou.
-->'''Zenmaru (utterly shocked and shaking)''':"Waaah...Waaah... getting touched by that pervert..."
-->'''Gama (catatonic)''': "...\\
'''Gama (catatonic)''':...[[HeroicBSOD I want to go home...]]"]]
-->'''Senka (in TranquilFury)''' I
* Gama and Zenmaru's reaction to being groped
-->'''Zenmaru (utterly shocked and shaking)''':
-->'''Gama (catatonic)''': "...
'''Gama (catatonic)''':...[[HeroicBSOD I want to go home...
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* Kashitarou's proposal to Senka, involving [[AssShove "beeping an apple in her beephole"]]. Plus, Gama and Zenmaru's shocked and terrified reactions and Senka's [[TranquilFury following]] [[MegatonPunch answer]].
* Gama and Zenmaru's reaction to being groped in evety inch of their bodies by Kashitarou
-->'''Zenmaru (utterly shocked)''': "Waaah... getting touched by that pervert..."
* Gama and Zenmaru's reaction to being groped in evety inch of their bodies by Kashitarou
-->'''Zenmaru (utterly shocked)''': "Waaah... getting touched by that pervert..."
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* Kashitarou's proposal to Senka, involving [[AssShove "beeping which start by offering her an apple, and then...
-->'''Senka''':"What... is this supposed to be a present for me?"
-->'''Kashitarou (with a straight face)''':"Hm, what? You can't tell by looking at it? I want to see how you look like with this -bleep-ing apple stuffed inher beephole"]]. Plus, Gama your -bleep-ing -bleep-hole! Just imagining it makes me all worked up! Now get down on all fours and Zenmaru's stick your ass out you little sow! Of course you're gonna do this for me, right? Senka, you've certainly got a likable face..."
-->'''Gama and Zenmaru (both with a [[FaceFault really shockedand terrified reactions and Senka's [[TranquilFury following]] [[MegatonPunch answer]].
face]])''': "This guy is a Huuuge freak!!!"
-->'''Senka (in TranquilFury)''' I Understand... (Kashitarou boast) I understand... that you're disgusting four eyed freak.." (cue to MegatonPunch).
* Gama and Zenmaru's reaction to being groped in evety inch of their bodies byKashitarou
Kashitarou.
-->'''Zenmaru (utterlyshocked)''': shocked and shaking)''': "Waaah... getting touched by that pervert..."
-->'''Senka''':"What... is this supposed to be a present for me?"
-->'''Kashitarou (with a straight face)''':"Hm, what? You can't tell by looking at it? I want to see how you look like with this -bleep-ing apple stuffed in
-->'''Gama and Zenmaru (both with a [[FaceFault really shocked
-->'''Senka (in TranquilFury)''' I Understand... (Kashitarou boast) I understand... that you're disgusting four eyed freak.." (cue to MegatonPunch).
* Gama and Zenmaru's reaction to being groped in evety inch of their bodies by
-->'''Zenmaru (utterly
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* Senka and Miika arguing on who's [[SeriousBusiness gonna cook for Gama]]... complete with barely contained rage, scary battle auras, death glares and elaborated insults... plus Yumeji pointing out that in the end they always force the Hyuga Brothers to cook instead.
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* Senka and Miika arguing on who's [[SeriousBusiness gonna cook for Gama]]... complete with barely contained rage, scary battle auras, death glares and elaborated insults... plus Yumeji pointing out that in the end they always force the Hyuga Brothers to cook instead.instead.
* After a whole year, Kashitarou descends from Juren Mountain and meets Senka again. His reaction? Pulls out the apple again and offers to "make her his slave". Cue to yet another well-deserved beatdown.
* After a whole year, Kashitarou descends from Juren Mountain and meets Senka again. His reaction? Pulls out the apple again and offers to "make her his slave". Cue to yet another well-deserved beatdown.
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-->'''Ranmaru''':"... [[BluntHonesty Hey, big guy! The Divine Spears are strong! They're gonna kill you!"
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-->'''Ranmaru''':"... [[BluntHonesty [[BrutalHonesty Hey, big guy! The Divine Spears are strong! They're gonna kill you!"you]]!"
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* Gama's reaction to hearing that Zenmaru is actually a member of the famous Ichinose Clan.
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* The dialogue after Ichiou's defeat, with Shinnojo chastising Iori for almost murdering the old spearman.
* Senka tries to seduce Iori so that he'll carry her on his back... only to be utterly rejected.
* Kashitarou's proposal to Senka, involving [[AssShove "beeping an apple in her beephole"]]. Plus, Gama and Zenmaru's shocked and terrified reactions and Senka's [[TranquilFury following]] [[MegatonPunch answer]].
* Gama and Zenmaru's reaction to being groped in evety inch of their bodies by Kashitarou
-->'''Zenmaru (utterly shocked)''': "Waaah... getting touched by that pervert..."
-->'''Gama (catatonic)''': "... [[HeroicBSOD I want to go home...]]"
* Senka and Miika arguing on who's [[SeriousBusiness gonna cook for Gama]]... complete with barely contained rage, scary battle auras, death glares and elaborated insults... plus Yumeji pointing out that in the end they always force the Hyuga Brothers to cook instead.
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* Zenmaru's going to fight the second match against the [[BladeOnAStick Myoujin Ryuu]], and we get the following dialogue (paraphrased):
-->'''Naoyoshi''':"Zenmaru, take care of it, but try to not die.."
-->'''Zenmaru''':"Yessir!"
-->'''Gama''':" And if you realize you're about to lose, give up, allright?"
-->'''Zenmaru''': (slightly annoyed)"Eh?!"
-->'''Ranmaru''':"... [[BluntHonesty Hey, big guy! The Divine Spears are strong! They're gonna kill you!"
-->'''Zenmaru''': (angry) "I'm NOT gonna Die!!"
* Gama's reaction to hearing that Zenmaru is actually a member of the famous Ichinose Clan.
