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--> '''Raoden''': Maybe next time we don't start [[TooDumbToLive experiments with fire]]. Kolo?

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--> '''Raoden''': Maybe next time we don't start our experiments [[TooDumbToLive experiments with fire]]. Kolo?
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* When Raoden figures out [[spoiler:how to fix the Aons by adding a chasm line]], he's so excited that he immediately applies this new knowledge to the Aon he's working on...which just so happens to be the Aon for a giant fireball. [[DidntThinkThisThrough In a library]]. They are then forced to halt research for half an hour just to put it out.
--> '''Raoden''': Maybe next time we don't start [[TooDumbToLive experiments with fire]]. Kolo?
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* Sarene trolls Hrathen by interrupting his big speech to Arelon, asking why Jaddeth prefers people to animals. When Hrathen answers that it is because humans do not indulge their base lusts, Sarene asks why Jaddeth would encourage ambition then, since arrogance is also a lust. Hrathen is left sputtering and loses the crowd entirely.
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* [[https://www.brandonsanderson.com/elantris-deleted-scenes-the-mad-prince/ The deleted scenes revolving around the cut character of the "Mad Prince" Eton, Raoden's brother, whose role was basically entirely taken by Telrii.]] Brandon has noted that he was still fond of Eton as a character, partly because of his interactions with Hrathen, and as shown, they're ''hilarious''. Poor Hrathen quickly realizes that Eton is utterly uncontrollable, his oath to Shu-Dereth basically meaningless and he's beginning to regret backing Eton as a puppet king due to how utterly chaotic and unpredictable he is, having to deal with Eton's random and contradictory commands and his inexplicable obsession with the made-up game of "stones" which Eton ''claims'' was invented in Fjorden, much to Hrathen's bewilderment. Even after Eton dies, his method of conducting executions (having the executioner perform the swing with their eyes closed, if the strike connects, the prisoner is guilty, if it misses, the prisoner is innocent) is seen by Hrathen as one last slap in the face from beyond the grave since it [[spoiler:allows Raoden to walk away from his trial an innocent man.]]

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* [[https://www.brandonsanderson.com/elantris-deleted-scenes-the-mad-prince/ The deleted scenes revolving around the cut character of the "Mad Prince" Eton, Raoden's brother, whose role was basically entirely taken by Telrii.]] Brandon has noted that he was still fond of Eton as a character, partly because of his interactions with Hrathen, and as shown, they're ''hilarious''. Poor Hrathen quickly realizes that Eton is utterly uncontrollable, his oath to Shu-Dereth basically meaningless and he's beginning to regret backing Eton as a puppet king due to how utterly chaotic and unpredictable he is, having to deal with Eton's random and contradictory commands and his inexplicable obsession with the made-up game of "stones" [[{{Calvinball}} "stones"]] which Eton ''claims'' was invented in Fjorden, much to Hrathen's bewilderment. Even after Eton dies, his method of conducting executions (having the executioner perform the swing with their eyes closed, if the strike connects, the prisoner is guilty, if it misses, the prisoner is innocent) is seen by Hrathen as one last slap in the face from beyond the grave since it [[spoiler:allows Raoden to walk away from his trial an innocent man.]]
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* [[https://www.brandonsanderson.com/elantris-deleted-scenes-the-mad-prince/ The deleted scenes revolving around the cut character of the "Mad Prince" Eton, Raoden's brother, whose role was basically entirely taken by Telrii.]] Brandon has noted that he was still fond of Eton as a character, partly because of his interactions with Hrathen, and as shown, they're ''hilarious''. Poor Hrathen quickly realizes that Eton is utterly uncontrollable, his oath to Shu-Dereth basically meaningless and he's beginning to regret backing Eton as a puppet king due to how utterly chaotic and unpredictable he is, having to deal with Eton's random and contradictory commands and his inexplicable obsession with the made-up game of "stones" which Eton ''claims'' was invented in Fjorden, much to Hrathen's bewilderment. Even after Eton dies, his method of conducting executions (having the executioner perform the swing with their eyes closed, if the strike connects, the prisoner is guilty, if it misses, the prisoner is innocent) is seen by Hrathen as one last slap in the face from beyond the grave since it allows Raoden to walk away from his trial an innocent man.

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* [[https://www.brandonsanderson.com/elantris-deleted-scenes-the-mad-prince/ The deleted scenes revolving around the cut character of the "Mad Prince" Eton, Raoden's brother, whose role was basically entirely taken by Telrii.]] Brandon has noted that he was still fond of Eton as a character, partly because of his interactions with Hrathen, and as shown, they're ''hilarious''. Poor Hrathen quickly realizes that Eton is utterly uncontrollable, his oath to Shu-Dereth basically meaningless and he's beginning to regret backing Eton as a puppet king due to how utterly chaotic and unpredictable he is, having to deal with Eton's random and contradictory commands and his inexplicable obsession with the made-up game of "stones" which Eton ''claims'' was invented in Fjorden, much to Hrathen's bewilderment. Even after Eton dies, his method of conducting executions (having the executioner perform the swing with their eyes closed, if the strike connects, the prisoner is guilty, if it misses, the prisoner is innocent) is seen by Hrathen as one last slap in the face from beyond the grave since it allows [[spoiler:allows Raoden to walk away from his trial an innocent man.]]
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* [[https://www.brandonsanderson.com/elantris-deleted-scenes-the-mad-prince/ The deleted scenes revolving around the cut character of the "Mad Prince" Eton, Raoden's brother, whose role was basically entirely taken by Telrii.]] Brandon has noted that he was still fond of Eton as a character, partly because of his interactions with Hrathen, and as shown, they're ''hilarious''. Poor Hrathen quickly realizes that Eton is utterly uncontrollable, his oath to Shu-Dereth basically meaningless and he's beginning to regret backing Eton as a puppet king due to how utterly chaotic and unpredictable he is, having to deal with Eton's random and contradictory commands and his inexplicable obsession with the made-up game of "stones" which Eton ''claims'' was invented in Fjorden, much to Hrathen's bewilderment. Even after Eton dies, his method of conducting executions (having the executioner perform the swing with their eyes closed, if the strike connects, the prisoner is guilty, if it misses, the prisoner is innocent) is seen by Hrathen as one last slap in the face from beyond the grave.

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* [[https://www.brandonsanderson.com/elantris-deleted-scenes-the-mad-prince/ The deleted scenes revolving around the cut character of the "Mad Prince" Eton, Raoden's brother, whose role was basically entirely taken by Telrii.]] Brandon has noted that he was still fond of Eton as a character, partly because of his interactions with Hrathen, and as shown, they're ''hilarious''. Poor Hrathen quickly realizes that Eton is utterly uncontrollable, his oath to Shu-Dereth basically meaningless and he's beginning to regret backing Eton as a puppet king due to how utterly chaotic and unpredictable he is, having to deal with Eton's random and contradictory commands and his inexplicable obsession with the made-up game of "stones" which Eton ''claims'' was invented in Fjorden, much to Hrathen's bewilderment. Even after Eton dies, his method of conducting executions (having the executioner perform the swing with their eyes closed, if the strike connects, the prisoner is guilty, if it misses, the prisoner is innocent) is seen by Hrathen as one last slap in the face from beyond the grave.grave since it allows Raoden to walk away from his trial an innocent man.
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* [[https://www.brandonsanderson.com/elantris-deleted-scenes-the-mad-prince/ The deleted scenes revolving around the cut character of the "Mad Prince" Eton, Raoden's brother, whose role was basically entirely taken by Telrii.]] Brandon has noted that he was still fond of Eton as a character, partly because of his interactions with Hrathen, and as shown, they're ''hilarious''. Poor Hrathen quickly realizes that Eton is utterly uncontrollable, his oath to Shu-Dereth basically meaningless and he's beginning to regret backing Eton as a puppet king due to how utterly chaotic and unpredictable he is, having to deal with Eton's random and contradictory commands and his inexplicable obsession with the made-up game of "stones" which Eton ''claims'' was invented in Fjorden, much to Hrathen's bewilderment. Even after Eton dies, his method of conducting executions (having the executioner perform the swing with their eyes closed, if the strike connects, the prisoner is guilty, if it misses, the prisoner is innocent) is seen by Hrathen as one last slap in the face from beyond the grave.

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'''Kiin:''' Is she slowing down at all? I’m running out of supplies.

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'''Kiin:''' Is she slowing down at all? I’m running out of supplies.supplies.
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* Hrathen has a tendency to accompany his departure with a CapeSwish. The fist time Sarene seen him do it, she's disappointed he didn't trip on it.

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* Hrathen has a tendency to accompany his departure with a CapeSwish. The fist first time Sarene seen him do it, she's disappointed he didn't trip on it.



-->'''Galladon:''' ''(sigh)'' I’m not so bored with death that I want to abandon it in favor of an existence of pure pain. Kolo?\\

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-->'''Galladon:''' ''(sigh)'' I’m not so bored with death that I want to abandon it in favor of an existence of pure pain. Kolo?\\[[VerbalTic Kolo?]]\\



''([[ObliviousToLove Sarene]] shakes off Daora's concerns and returns to her favorite past-time as of late: [[HypocriticalHumour finding new and increasingly creative ways to annoy Spirit]])''
* Sarene [[spoiler:returns form Elantris]] and realizes she's hungry. As soon as she enters [[SupremeChef Kiin's]] dining room, she starts eating. And eating. And eating....

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''([[ObliviousToLove Sarene]] shakes off Daora's concerns and returns to her favorite past-time pass-time as of late: [[HypocriticalHumour finding new and increasingly creative ways to annoy Spirit]])''
* Sarene [[spoiler:returns form from Elantris]] and realizes she's hungry. As soon as she enters [[SupremeChef Kiin's]] dining room, she starts eating. And eating. And eating....''eating''....



'''Kiin:''' Is she slowing down at all? I’m running out of supplies.

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'''Kiin:''' Is she slowing down at all? I’m running out of supplies.
supplies.
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'''Sarene:''' ''(sincerely)'' I assure you, Aunt, I have no interest [[ExactWords in Lord Shuden]].\\

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'''Sarene:''' ''(sincerely)'' I assure you, Aunt, [[HeIsNotMyBoyfriend I have no interest interest]] [[ExactWords in Lord Shuden]].\\



''(Sarene [[ObliviousToLove shakes off]] [[HeIsNotMyBoyfriend Daora's concerns]] and returns to her favorite past-time as of late: [[HypocriticalHumour finding new and increasingly creative ways to annoy Spirit]])''

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''(Sarene [[ObliviousToLove ''([[ObliviousToLove Sarene]] shakes off]] [[HeIsNotMyBoyfriend off Daora's concerns]] concerns and returns to her favorite past-time as of late: [[HypocriticalHumour finding new and increasingly creative ways to annoy Spirit]])''

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* [[ObliviousToLove Sarene]] is a little worked up because of Spirit (a.k.a. Raoden) and her growing fascination with him, so she works out her anger during fencing practice. Daora notices her behaviour and decides to talk to her about it. Unfortunately, she has the wrong guy pegged:
-->'''Daora:''' I’ve seen that look before, child. He’s not for you. But, of course, you’ve realized that, haven’t you?\\
''(Sarene pales and briefly wonders if Daora can read thoughts, before realizing she's referring to Shuden)''\\

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* [[ObliviousToLove Sarene]] Sarene is a little worked up because of Spirit (a.k.a. Raoden) and her growing fascination with him, so she works out her anger during fencing practice. Daora notices her behaviour and decides to talk to her about it. Unfortunately, she has the wrong guy pegged:
-->'''Daora:''' I’ve seen that [[LongingLook the look before, child. He’s not for you. But, of course, you’ve realized that, haven’t you?\\
''(Sarene pales
in your eyes]] these last few days, and briefly wonders if Daora can read thoughts, before realizing she's referring to Shuden)''\\I’ve also seen the frustration. The two emotions [[BelligerentSexualTension go together]] more often than youthful hearts expect.\\



''(Sarene shakes off Daora's concerns and returns to her favorite past-time as of late: [[BelligerentSexualTension finding new and increasingly creative ways to annoy Spirit]])'''

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''(Sarene [[ObliviousToLove shakes off off]] [[HeIsNotMyBoyfriend Daora's concerns concerns]] and returns to her favorite past-time as of late: [[BelligerentSexualTension [[HypocriticalHumour finding new and increasingly creative ways to annoy Spirit]])''' Spirit]])''

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* [[ObliviousToLove Sarene]] is a little worked up because of Spirit (a.k.a. Raoden), so she works out her anger during fencing practice. Daora notices her behaviour and decides to talk to her about it. Unfortunately, she has the wrong guy pegged:

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* Raoden and Galladon are waiting for new arrivals to Elantris in order to recruit them in Raoden's "gang". This involves hiding from [[AxeCrazy Shaor's men]], who would like nothing better than to leave them [[WoundThatWillNotHeal broken]]. Galladon questions the sanity of the plan:
-->'''Galladon:''' ''(sigh)'' I’m not so bored with death that I want to abandon it in favor of an existence of pure pain. Kolo?\\
'''Raoden:''' Galladon, someday you’re going to get over this determined pessimism of yours, and all of Elantris will collapse from the shock.\\
'''Galladon:''' Pessimism? Pessimism? [[TheCynic Me?]] Dulas are the most lighthearted, easygoing people in Opelon! We look at each day with—Sule? Don’t you dare leave when I’m defending myself!
* [[ObliviousToLove Sarene]] is a little worked up because of Spirit (a.k.a. Raoden), Raoden) and her growing fascination with him, so she works out her anger during fencing practice. Daora notices her behaviour and decides to talk to her about it. Unfortunately, she has the wrong guy pegged:



''(Kiin presents the fifth dish for Sarene to start wolfing it down unceremoniously)'' \\

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''(Kiin presents the fifth dish for dish; Sarene to start starts wolfing it down unceremoniously)'' \\
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* A bit of BlackComedy. Raoden has woken up to the worst day of his life: he's been taken by the Shaod, then he's thrown into Elantris by his father and chased by some half-crazy walking dead for the little food he's been given. Suddenly, he finally notices something rather important:

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* A bit of BlackComedy. Raoden has woken up to the worst day of his life: he's been taken by the Shaod, then he's thrown into Elantris by his father and father, chased by some half-crazy walking dead for the what little food he's been given. Suddenly, given by the priests and [[WoundThatWillNotHeal stubbed his toe]]. [[MoodWhiplash Suddenly]], he finally notices something rather important:
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* [[ObliviousToLove Sarene]] is a little worked up because of Spirit, so she works out her anger during fencing practice. Daora notices her behaviour and decides to talk to her about it. Unfortunately, she has the wrong guy pegged:

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* [[ObliviousToLove Sarene]] is a little worked up because of Spirit, Spirit (a.k.a. Raoden), so she works out her anger during fencing practice. Daora notices her behaviour and decides to talk to her about it. Unfortunately, she has the wrong guy pegged:



'''Sarene:''' ''(sincerely)'' I assure you, Aunt, I have no interest in Lord Shuden.\\

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'''Sarene:''' ''(sincerely)'' I assure you, Aunt, I have no interest [[ExactWords in Lord Shuden.Shuden]].\\
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* [[ObliviousToLove Sarene]] is a little worked up because of [[BelligerentSexualTension Spirit]], so she works out her anger on him during fencing practice. Daora notices her behaviour and decides to do something about it. Unfortunately, she :

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* [[ObliviousToLove Sarene]] is a little worked up because of [[BelligerentSexualTension Spirit]], Spirit, so she works out her anger on him during fencing practice. Daora notices her behaviour and decides to do something talk to her about it. Unfortunately, she :has the wrong guy pegged:



''(Sarene pales, thinking:)'' ''How could she know? Could the woman read thoughts?''\\
''(Daora is, in fact, referring to Shuden)''\\
'''Sarene:''' I assure you, Aunt, I have no interest in Lord Shuden.\\
'''Daora:''' ''(unconvinced)'' Of course, dear.

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''(Sarene pales, thinking:)'' ''How could she know? Could the woman pales and briefly wonders if Daora can read thoughts?''\\
''(Daora is, in fact,
thoughts, before realizing she's referring to Shuden)''\\
'''Sarene:''' ''(sincerely)'' I assure you, Aunt, I have no interest in Lord Shuden.\\
'''Daora:''' ''(unconvinced)'' Of course, dear.\\
''(Sarene shakes off Daora's concerns and returns to her favorite past-time as of late: [[BelligerentSexualTension finding new and increasingly creative ways to annoy Spirit]])'''
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* A bit of BlackComedy: Raoden has woken up to discover he's been taken by the Shaod, he's been thrown into Elantris by his father and chased by some half-crazy walking dead for the little food he's been given when he finally notices something rather important:

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* A bit of BlackComedy: BlackComedy. Raoden has woken up to discover the worst day of his life: he's been taken by the Shaod, then he's been thrown into Elantris by his father and chased by some half-crazy walking dead for the little food he's been given when given. Suddenly, he finally notices something rather important:
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* A bit of BlackComedy: Raoden has woken up to discover he's been taken by the Shaod, he's been thrown into Elantris by his father and chased by some half-crazy walking dead for the little food he's been given when he finally notices something rather important:
--> I don't have a heartbeat.
* Hrathen has a tendency to accompany his departure with a CapeSwish. The fist time Sarene seen him do it, she's disappointed he didn't trip on it.
* [[ObliviousToLove Sarene]] is a little worked up because of [[BelligerentSexualTension Spirit]], so she works out her anger on him during fencing practice. Daora notices her behaviour and decides to do something about it. Unfortunately, she :
-->'''Daora:''' I’ve seen that look before, child. He’s not for you. But, of course, you’ve realized that, haven’t you?\\
''(Sarene pales, thinking:)'' ''How could she know? Could the woman read thoughts?''\\
''(Daora is, in fact, referring to Shuden)''\\
'''Sarene:''' I assure you, Aunt, I have no interest in Lord Shuden.\\
'''Daora:''' ''(unconvinced)'' Of course, dear.
* Sarene [[spoiler:returns form Elantris]] and realizes she's hungry. As soon as she enters [[SupremeChef Kiin's]] dining room, she starts eating. And eating. And eating....
-->'''Lukel:''' ''(as she finishes the fourth plate)'' You’d better move faster, Cousin. You looked like you almost had time to taste that one.\\
''(Kiin presents the fifth dish for Sarene to start wolfing it down unceremoniously)'' \\
'''Kiin:''' You don’t care [how I cooked it], do you? I could have boiled it in dishwater, and it would be the same to you.\\
'''Sarene:''' I understand, Uncle. You suffer for your art.\\
''(a little later)''\\
'''Kiin:''' Is she slowing down at all? I’m running out of supplies.

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