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Bonus Boss is a disambiguation
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* [[spoiler: The Wicked K BonusBoss. It's just absolutely nonsensical, and his opening line sets the mood for the entire battle.]]
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* [[spoiler: The Wicked K BonusBoss.boss. It's just absolutely nonsensical, and his opening line sets the mood for the entire battle.]]
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* While discussing the King of the Dead with the [[ObstructiveBureaucrat Chancellor]], Death turns his own words against him.
-->'''Death:''' Tell me about the King of the Dead.\\
'''Chancellor:''' His reign is eternal. His word is law. And his time is... invaluable. I ensure that he need only speak with those who are worthy.\\
'''Death:''' Then you must rarely see him, Chancellor.\\
'''Chancellor:''' ''(grumbles)''
-->'''Death:''' Tell me about the King of the Dead.\\
'''Chancellor:''' His reign is eternal. His word is law. And his time is... invaluable. I ensure that he need only speak with those who are worthy.\\
'''Death:''' Then you must rarely see him, Chancellor.\\
'''Chancellor:''' ''(grumbles)''
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-->'''Death:''' Oh, dammit.
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-->'''Death:''' [[ChronicHeroSyndrome Oh, dammit.dammit]].
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* Seeing Death be [[NotSoStoic completely done]] with the extended goose chase he's been sent on by the end of the Ivory Citadel.
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* Seeing Death be [[NotSoStoic [[RageBreakingPoint completely done]] with the extended goose chase he's been sent on by the end of the Ivory Citadel.
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'''Death:''' ''(plants his scythes to either side of Jamaerah's head)'' [[RageBreakingPoint WHERE IS IT?!]]
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'''Death:''' ''(plants his scythes to either side of Jamaerah's head)'' [[RageBreakingPoint [[NotSoStoic WHERE IS IT?!]]
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* Death being [[NotSoStoic completely done]] with the extended goose chase he's been sent on by the end of the Ivory Citadel.
-->'''Death:''' ''(brandishing his scythes)'' [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Where... is... the key..?]]\\
-->'''Death:''' ''(brandishing his scythes)'' [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Where... is... the key..?]]\\
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* Seeing Death being be [[NotSoStoic completely done]] with the extended goose chase he's been sent on by the end of the Ivory Citadel.
-->'''Death:''' ''(brandishing his scythes)'' [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Where... is... thekey..key...?]]\\
-->'''Death:''' ''(brandishing his scythes)'' [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Where... is... the
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* Death being [[NotSoStoic completely done]] with the extended goose chase he's been sent on by the end of the Ivory Citadel.
-->'''Death:''' ''(brandishing his scythes)'' [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Where... is... the key..?]]\\
'''Jamaerah:''' [[VillainsWantMercy Mercy, Horseman!]]\\
'''Death:''' ''(plants his scythes to either side of Jamaerah's head)'' [[RageBreakingPoint WHERE IS IT?!]]
-->'''Death:''' ''(brandishing his scythes)'' [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Where... is... the key..?]]\\
'''Jamaerah:''' [[VillainsWantMercy Mercy, Horseman!]]\\
'''Death:''' ''(plants his scythes to either side of Jamaerah's head)'' [[RageBreakingPoint WHERE IS IT?!]]
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* Karn's "Eh, me thinks you forgot me," from the other side of a locked door after you go into the room from the side...with his help.
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* Karn's "Eh, me thinks you forgot me," from the other side of a locked door after you go into the room from the side...with his help.help.
*[[spoiler: The Wicked K BonusBoss. It's just absolutely nonsensical, and his opening line sets the mood for the entire battle.]]
--> [[spoiler: Wicked K: En guarde, you boob!]]
*[[spoiler: The Wicked K BonusBoss. It's just absolutely nonsensical, and his opening line sets the mood for the entire battle.]]
--> [[spoiler: Wicked K: En guarde, you boob!]]
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Admit it, you chuckled at that part, too.
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* Death every time he delivers a sarcastic one-liner.
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* Death every time he delivers a sarcastic one-liner.one-liner.
* Karn's "Eh, me thinks you forgot me," from the other side of a locked door after you go into the room from the side...with his help.
* Karn's "Eh, me thinks you forgot me," from the other side of a locked door after you go into the room from the side...with his help.
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* When Karn throws Death to help him reach distant places, he sometimes says:
-->'''Karn:''' You (Death) jump like a lassie!
-->'''Karn:''' You (Death) jump like a lassie!
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-->'''Death:''' Your realm teeters on the brink of destruction and you ask me to ''feed'' you?!
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-->'''Death:''' Your realm teeters on the brink of destruction and [[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe you ask me to to]] ''feed'' you?!
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--->'''Death''': Oh, dammit.
* Death's reply when Maker Elder Eideard says they must [[spoiler: resurrect the now-destroyed Corrupted Guardian?]]
--->'''Death''': How many times would you have me [[spoiler: kill him?]]
* Perhaps this wont seem that funny in the translation to text, but the combination of Death's incredulity and Blackroot's cheerful obliviousness might elicit a few chuckles.
-->'''Death''': Your realm teeters on the brink of destruction and you ask me to ''feed'' you?!
-->'''Blackroot''': *happily* If it's not too much trouble!
* Death's reply when Maker Elder Eideard says they must [[spoiler: resurrect the now-destroyed Corrupted Guardian?]]
--->'''Death''': How many times would you have me [[spoiler: kill him?]]
* Perhaps this wont seem that funny in the translation to text, but the combination of Death's incredulity and Blackroot's cheerful obliviousness might elicit a few chuckles.
-->'''Death''': Your realm teeters on the brink of destruction and you ask me to ''feed'' you?!
-->'''Blackroot''': *happily* If it's not too much trouble!
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* Death's reply when Maker Elder Eideard says they must
--->'''Death''':
-->'''Death:''' How many times would you have me
* Perhaps this
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-->'''Death''': A fine sport.
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-->'''Death''': A fine sport.
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-->'''Death''': A fine sport.sport.
* Death every time he delivers a sarcastic one-liner.
* Death every time he delivers a sarcastic one-liner.
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* At the end of a sidequest where you help the Makers rebuild an ancient construct, Death requests that the construct doesn't tell anyone that he helped it without reward.
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* At the end of a sidequest where you help the Makers rebuild an ancient construct, Death [[LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain requests that the construct doesn't tell anyone that he helped it without reward.reward]].
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-->'''Death:''' "Pup" it is then.
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-->'''Death:''' "Pup" it is then.then.
* Death's opinion on Construct-tipping.
-->'''Death''': A fine sport.
* Death's opinion on Construct-tipping.
-->'''Death''': A fine sport.
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-->'''Blackroot''': *happily* If it's not too much trouble!
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-->'''Blackroot''': *happily* If it's not too much trouble!trouble!
* Karn's introduction:
-->'''Karn:''' Folks around town call me "pup" or "lad", but I prefer my own name... "Karn".
-->'''Death:''' "Pup" it is then.
* Karn's introduction:
-->'''Karn:''' Folks around town call me "pup" or "lad", but I prefer my own name... "Karn".
-->'''Death:''' "Pup" it is then.
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--->'''Death''': How many times would you have me [[spoiler: kill him?]]
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--->'''Death''': How many times would you have me [[spoiler: kill him?]]him?]]
* Perhaps this wont seem that funny in the translation to text, but the combination of Death's incredulity and Blackroot's cheerful obliviousness might elicit a few chuckles.
-->'''Death''': Your realm teeters on the brink of destruction and you ask me to ''feed'' you?!
-->'''Blackroot''': *happily* If it's not too much trouble!
* Perhaps this wont seem that funny in the translation to text, but the combination of Death's incredulity and Blackroot's cheerful obliviousness might elicit a few chuckles.
-->'''Death''': Your realm teeters on the brink of destruction and you ask me to ''feed'' you?!
-->'''Blackroot''': *happily* If it's not too much trouble!
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--->'''Death''': Oh, dammit.
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--->'''Death''': Oh, dammit.dammit.
* Death's reply when Maker Elder Eideard says they must [[spoiler: resurrect the now-destroyed Corrupted Guardian?]]
--->'''Death''': How many times would you have me [[spoiler: kill him?]]
* Death's reply when Maker Elder Eideard says they must [[spoiler: resurrect the now-destroyed Corrupted Guardian?]]
--->'''Death''': How many times would you have me [[spoiler: kill him?]]
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* At the end of a sidequest where you help the Makers rebuild an ancient construct, Death requests that the construct doesn't tell anyone that he helped it without reward.
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* At the end of a sidequest where you help the Makers rebuild an ancient construct, Death requests that the construct doesn't tell anyone that he helped it without reward.reward.
* Death's reaction to having to help Uriel when he goes to Earth:
--->'''Death''': Oh, dammit.
* Death's reaction to having to help Uriel when he goes to Earth:
--->'''Death''': Oh, dammit.
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* At the end of a sidequest where you help the Makers rebuild an ancient construct, Death requests that the construct doesn't tell anyone that he helped it without reward.