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** It is put on record that on the instances where he had enough money, Roger would buy chicken from the store [[InsaneTrollLogic and then go to KFC to try and get the workers to cook it for him]]. And because the workers are his "enimies", [[SkewedPriorities they proceed to do so, while also spitting on it]].
** Roger winds up getting so mad [[BerserkButton (due to sensing one of his enimes dying, which he hates for some reason)]], he somehow manages to punch the fat off the fat guy bothering him, leaving him skinny.
** The description of what happens when the lights go out is rather humorous-[[FauxHorrific mist comes out of cereal boxes, bacon begins flying around, pancake mix spills over the counters and the freezers begin freezing too cold for their contents]].
** Roger winds up getting so mad [[BerserkButton (due to sensing one of his enimes dying, which he hates for some reason)]], he somehow manages to punch the fat off the fat guy bothering him, leaving him skinny.
** The description of what happens when the lights go out is rather humorous-[[FauxHorrific mist comes out of cereal boxes, bacon begins flying around, pancake mix spills over the counters and the freezers begin freezing too cold for their contents]].
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** It is put on record that on the instances where he had enough money, Roger would buy chicken from the store [[InsaneTrollLogic and then go to KFC to try and get the workers to cook it for him]]. And because the workers are his "enimies", "enimes", [[SkewedPriorities they proceed to do so, while also spitting on it]].
** Roger winds up getting so mad [[BerserkButton (due to sensing one of hisenimes "enimes" dying, which he hates for some reason)]], he somehow manages to punch the fat off the fat guy bothering him, leaving him skinny.
** The description of what happens when the lights go out is ratherhumorous-[[FauxHorrific humorous: [[FauxHorrific mist comes out of cereal boxes, bacon begins flying around, pancake mix spills over the counters and the freezers begin freezing too cold for their contents]].
** Roger winds up getting so mad [[BerserkButton (due to sensing one of his
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** The occasional words being misspelled, like Roger complaining that he will "strve" if he doesn't get the bread and one of his enemies saying that the pancakes are too "string".
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** The occasional words being misspelled, like Roger complaining that he will "strve" if he doesn't get the bread and one of his enemies "enimes" saying that the pancakes are too "string".
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** It is put on record that on the instances where he had enough money, Roger would buy chicken from the store [[InsaneTrollLogic and then go to KFC to try and get the workers to cook it for him]].
** Roger somehow punching the fat off the fat guy bothering him, leaving him skinny.
** Roger somehow punching the fat off the fat guy bothering him, leaving him skinny.
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** "[[CaptainObvious He can only buy things when they are on sale so he oinly buys things when they are on sale because he doesn’t have any much money.]]"
** It is put on record that on the instances where he had enough money, Roger would buy chicken from the store [[InsaneTrollLogic and then go to KFC to try and get the workers to cook it forhim]].
him]]. And because the workers are his "enimies", [[SkewedPriorities they proceed to do so, while also spitting on it]].
** Roger winds up getting so mad [[BerserkButton (due to sensing one of his enimes dying, which he hates for some reason)]], he somehowpunching manages to punch the fat off the fat guy bothering him, leaving him skinny.
** It is put on record that on the instances where he had enough money, Roger would buy chicken from the store [[InsaneTrollLogic and then go to KFC to try and get the workers to cook it for
** Roger winds up getting so mad [[BerserkButton (due to sensing one of his enimes dying, which he hates for some reason)]], he somehow
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** "[Roger] lived in a big city where unusual things seemed to happen everyday. [[MoodWhiplash For example, his uncle died.]] [[UnusuallyUninterestingSight Anyway[.]"]]
** The reason why everyone in Roger's life turned on him? [[DisproportionateRetribution He decided to abandon his life as a banker in order to become a hobo]] [[ThatManIsDead (including changing his name from "Ron" to "Roger").]]
--->Because of this [[KickTheDog his friends thought they didn’t like him anymore so they said “your our enimy now!!!”]] and Roger was like [[KickTheDog “oh no, I have no friends but loads of enimes ”]]
** It is put on record that on the instances where he had enough money, Roger would buy chicken from the store [[InsaneTrollLogic and then go to KFC to try and get the workers to cook it for him]].
** The reason why everyone in Roger's life turned on him? [[DisproportionateRetribution He decided to abandon his life as a banker in order to become a hobo]] [[ThatManIsDead (including changing his name from "Ron" to "Roger").]]
--->Because of this [[KickTheDog his friends thought they didn’t like him anymore so they said “your our enimy now!!!”]] and Roger was like [[KickTheDog “oh no, I have no friends but loads of enimes ”]]
** It is put on record that on the instances where he had enough money, Roger would buy chicken from the store [[InsaneTrollLogic and then go to KFC to try and get the workers to cook it for him]].
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--->Roger ran to a exit and was almost out when he tripeed on something, he looked down and saw his enimie saying “help me, the pancakes were too string” and then he said “no i am roger, you were ron’s friend not mine, [[PokeThePoodle smelly]]” and he ran out the door. [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment He was safe, he got out, he escaped, he avoided death, he was alive,]] [[BadassBoast he was tall, he was safe, he was ROGER.]] [[NegatedMomentOfAwesome Then he wenty back in for the bread but forgot about the monsters!]]
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** After getting out of the supermarket, Roger (via the narration) boasts for a bit about how he was able to survive. [[TooDumbToLive He then promptly goes back inside.]]
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'''Suggestion:''' Stop Frank, he's a menace. It has now spread to Sudoku. I am not making this up.\\
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'''Suggestion:''' Stop Frank, he's a menace. It has now spread to Sudoku.[[GridPuzzle Sudoku]]. I am not making this up.\\
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* [[http://slimebeast.com/forum/slimy-stories/whatever Whatever]] is equally funny and NightmareFuel laden. Basically, it's an open letter written by your average young single guy to a...thing...that lives in his home. This thing is apparently a frightening EldritchAbomination, but his letter to it shows that he wants to be understanding and try to work out a livable situation that is good for the both of them. He just has a few issues to bring to the attention of "whatever":
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* [[http://slimebeast.com/forum/slimy-stories/whatever wikidot.com/whatever/ Whatever]] is equally funny and NightmareFuel laden. Basically, it's an open letter written by your average young single guy to a...thing...that lives in his home. This thing is apparently a frightening EldritchAbomination, but his letter to it shows that he wants to be understanding and try to work out a livable situation that is good for the both of them. He just has a few issues to bring to the attention of "whatever":
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*** On a similar note, the ending to [[http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/My_Perfect_World,_Shattered My Perfect World, Shattered.]] The name of the scientist writing these entries? [[Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog Dr. Ivo Robotnik.]]
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* The ending to [[http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/My_Perfect_World,_Shattered My Perfect World, Shattered.]] The name of the scientist writing these entries? [[Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog Dr. Ivo Robotnik.]]
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/user/MichaelLeroi/featured Michael Leroi]] and crew's ''WebVideo/BadCreepypasta'', in which they read and mock creepypastas, including WebOriginal/JeffTheKiller, VideoGame/{{SonicExe}}, and The Real Chuck E. Cheese, Squidward's Suicide, etc.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/user/MichaelLeroi/featured Michael Leroi]] and crew's ''WebVideo/BadCreepypasta'', in which they read and mock creepypastas, including WebOriginal/JeffTheKiller, Literature/JeffTheKiller, VideoGame/{{SonicExe}}, and The Real Chuck E. Cheese, Squidward's Suicide, etc.
