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--->'''Pastor:''' "For God so loved the world, that He gave His only begotten Son, for whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life!"
--->'''Man:''' ''(thinking)'' ''I wonder who's winning the ball game?''
* [[http://www.chick.com/reading/tracts/1018/1018_01.asp "This better be good, or I'm going to jump."]] however, the rest of the Tract attempts to be [[DeusAngstMachina very depressing]].
--->'''Man:''' ''(thinking)'' ''I wonder who's winning the ball game?''
* [[http://www.chick.com/reading/tracts/1018/1018_01.asp "This better be good, or I'm going to jump."]] however, the rest of the Tract attempts to be [[DeusAngstMachina very depressing]].
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* Part of "This Was Your Life!" features a scene of the man currently being judged sitting in church as part of a review of his life. It's a small moment, but also very relatable:
--->'''Pastor:''' "For God so loved the world, that He gave His only begotten Son, for whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life!"
--->'''Man:''' ''(thinking)'' ''I wonder who's winning the ball game?''
--->'''Pastor:''' "For God so loved the world, that He gave His only begotten Son, for whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life!"
--->'''Man:''' ''(thinking)'' ''I wonder who's winning the ball game?''
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* The villainous coven in "First Bite" loses their candidate for the Anti-Christ, despite Satan's claim that he will not fail. It results in [[http://media.chick.com/tractimages67491/1047/1047_21.gif these two panels,]] which give the whole affair a slapsticky tone.
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* The villainous evil vampire coven in "First Bite" loses their candidate for the Anti-Christ, despite Satan's claim that he will not fail. It results in [[http://media.chick.com/tractimages67491/1047/1047_21.gif these two panels,]] which give the whole affair a slapsticky tone.
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Since the devils are described as "goofy".
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* Most of the [[ThoseTwoBadGuys two goofy devil's]] antics in [[http://www.chick.com/reading/tracts/0004/0004_01.asp "A Demon's Nightmare"]]....including the angry elevator-devil in the Hazmat-like heat-protection suit.
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* Most of the [[ThoseTwoBadGuys [[BumblingHenchmenDuo two goofy devil's]] antics in [[http://www.chick.com/reading/tracts/0004/0004_01.asp "A Demon's Nightmare"]]....including the angry elevator-devil in the Hazmat-like heat-protection suit.
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** The senator's wife choking him and telling him she's filing for divorce in the next panel, while he calls her "poopsy" (probably meant to be the G-rated version of a particular phrase...)
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** The senator's wife choking him and telling him she's filing for divorce in the next panel, while he calls her "poopsy" (probably meant to be with the G-rated version of a particular phrase...)most hilarious look on his face.
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** The senator's wife choking him and telling him she's filing for divorce in the next panel, while he calls her "poopsy" (which seems to be a favorite insult of Chick's; see "Ransom" above).
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** The senator's wife choking him and telling him she's filing for divorce in the next panel, while he calls her "poopsy" (which seems (probably meant to be a favorite insult the G-rated version of Chick's; see "Ransom" above).a particular phrase...)
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--> '''Samantha''': I ''hate'' my room now!!!
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--> '''Samantha''': I ''hate'' my room this stuff now!!!
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* Most of the [[ThoseTwoGuys two goofy devil's]] antics in [[http://www.chick.com/reading/tracts/0004/0004_01.asp "A Demon's Nightmare"]]....including the angry elevator-devil in the Hazmat-like heat-protection suit.
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* Most of the [[ThoseTwoGuys [[ThoseTwoBadGuys two goofy devil's]] antics in [[http://www.chick.com/reading/tracts/0004/0004_01.asp "A Demon's Nightmare"]]....including the angry elevator-devil in the Hazmat-like heat-protection suit.
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* The opening of "The Royal Affair", with the [[SouthernGentleman KFC colonel-looking]] [[DirtyOldMan senator]] and his attorney:
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* The opening of "The Royal Affair", with the [[SouthernGentleman KFC colonel-looking]] SouthernGentleman [[DirtyOldMan senator]] and his attorney:
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* The opening of "The Royal Affair", with the [[UsefulNotes/KentuckyFriedChicken KFC colonel]]-looking [[DirtyOldMan senator]] and his attorney:
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* [[https://www.chick.com/products/tract?stk=0018 "The Trial"]], or more specifically when the mother realizes she's lost the case, with an OhCrap look on her face and a giant bag of money flying away in a [[ThoughtBubbleSpeech thought bubble.]]
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* The opening of "The Royal Affair", with the [[UsefulNotes/KentuckyFriedChicken {{KFC}} colonel]]-looking [[DirtyOldMan senator]] and his attorney:
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* The opening of "The Royal Affair", with the {{KFC}} colonel-looking [[DirtyOldMan senator]] and his attorney:
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* The opening of "The Royal Affair", with the {{KFC}} colonel-looking [[DirtyOldMan senator]] and his attorney:
-->'''Lawyer:''' I'm your attorney. You haven't lied to me, have you senator?
-->'''Senator:''' How dare you question my integrity?
-->''*The prosecutor plays the tape before the court*''
-->'''Lawyer:''' There goes your integrity, you DirtyOldMan!
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-->'''Lawyer:''' I'm your attorney. You haven't lied to me, have you senator?
-->'''Senator:''' How dare you question my integrity?
-->''*The prosecutor plays the tape before the court*''
-->'''Lawyer:''' There goes your integrity, you DirtyOldMan!
** The senator's wife choking him and telling him she's filing for divorce in the next panel, while he calls her "poopsy" (which seems to be a favorite insult of Chick's; see "Ransom" above).
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*** The thieves' getaway vehicle has a sign on it that says "Support Your Local Police."
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* In [[https://chick.com/products/tract?stk=23&ue=d "Ransom"]], two dim-witted criminals kidnap the wrong target (a rich woman's twin sister), who then leads them to Christ. Funny moments include the wife calling her husband "Poopsie", one of the criminals facepalming while a thought bubble shows a bag of money flying away, and the ending when the cops break in and rescue her:
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* In [[https://chick.com/products/tract?stk=23&ue=d "Ransom"]], two dim-witted criminals kidnap the wrong target (a rich woman's twin sister), who then leads them to Christ. Funny moments include the wife calling her husband "Poopsie", one of the criminals facepalming while a thought bubble shows a bag of money flying away, two not-so-vicious [[AngryGuardDog angry guard dogs]], and the ending when the cops break in and rescue her:
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** As usual in Chick tracts, it is also full of [[FunnyBackgroundMoment funny background moments]], with two "vicious dogs" being scared away by a small poodle and a cat, respectively (the thieves' dog is shown to be quite friendly, licking the victim's face and helping untie her); the thieves' dog biting an officer on the butt when they rescue her, and two random kids (shown in an earlier panel) also [[StickEmUp putting their hands up for no reason, with a couple cops side-eyeing them.]]
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** As usual in Chick tracts, it is also full of [[FunnyBackgroundMoment [[FunnyBackgroundEvent funny background moments]], with two "vicious dogs" being scared away by a small poodle and a cat, respectively (the thieves' dog is shown to be quite friendly, licking moments]]:
*** One of thevictim's face and helping untie her); cops is [[DonutMessWithACop munching on a donut]] during the rescue scene.
*** The thieves' dog biting an officer on the butt when they rescue her, and two random kids (shown in an earlier panel) also[[StickEmUp putting their hands up during said scene for no reason, with a couple cops side-eyeing them.]]
*** One of the
*** The thieves' dog biting an officer on the butt when they rescue her, and two random kids (shown in an earlier panel) also
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** Also the victim saying "How dare you invade our prayer meeting!" when the SWAT team busts in.
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** As usual in Chick tracts, it is also full of [[FunnyBackgroundMoment funny background moments]], with two "vicious dogs" being scared away by a small poodle and a cat, respectively (the thieves' dog is shown to be quite friendly, licking the victim's face and helping untie her); the thieves' dog biting an officer on the butt when they rescue her, and two random kids (shown in an earlier panel) also [[StickEmUp putting their hands up for no reason, with a couple cops side-eyeing them.]]
** As usual in Chick tracts, it is also full of [[FunnyBackgroundMoment funny background moments]], with two "vicious dogs" being scared away by a small poodle and a cat, respectively (the thieves' dog is shown to be quite friendly, licking the victim's face and helping untie her); the thieves' dog biting an officer on the butt when they rescue her, and two random kids (shown in an earlier panel) also [[StickEmUp putting their hands up for no reason, with a couple cops side-eyeing them.]]
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* In [[https://chick.com/products/tract?stk=23&ue=d "Ransom"]], two dim-witted criminals kidnap the wrong target (a rich woman's twin sister), who then leads them to Christ. Funny moments include one of the criminals facepalming while a thought bubble shows a bag of money flying away, and the ending when the cops break in and rescue her:
-->'''Thief:''' Officer, you need to be ransomed?
-->'''Thief:''' Officer, you need to be ransomed?
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* In [[https://chick.com/products/tract?stk=23&ue=d "Ransom"]], two dim-witted criminals kidnap the wrong target (a rich woman's twin sister), who then leads them to Christ. Funny moments include the wife calling her husband "Poopsie", one of the criminals facepalming while a thought bubble shows a bag of money flying away, and the ending when the cops break in and rescue her:
-->'''Thief:''' Officer, you need to beransomed?ransomed!
-->'''Thief:''' Officer, you need to be
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-->'''Officer:''' '''[[BigWhat What??]]'''
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-->'''Officer:''' '''[[BigWhat What??]]'''WHAT??]]'''
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-->'''Officer:''' ''[[BigWhat What??]]'''''[[BigWhat What??]]'''
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* In [[https://chick.com/products/tract?stk=23&ue=d "Ransom"]], two dim-witted criminals kidnap the wrong target (a rich woman's twin sister), who then leads them to Christ. Funny moments include one of the criminals facepalming while a thought bubble shows a bag of money flying away, and the ending when the cops break in and rescue her:
-->'''Thief:''' Officer, you need to be ransomed?
-->'''Officer:''' ''[[BigWhat What??]]''
** Also the victim saying "How dare you invade our prayer meeting!" when the SWAT team busts in to rescue her.
-->'''Thief:''' Officer, you need to be ransomed?
-->'''Officer:''' ''[[BigWhat What??]]''
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-->'''Jail Guard''': Guard:''' You gentlemen have a visitor, a first-timer, so be nice.
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-->'''Christian Man''': Hi, fellas.
-->'''Bad Bob''': Oh no! Look what he brought with him. '''Get that clown out of here. I've had enough of that (SymbolSwearing) crammed down my throat!'''
-->'''Bad Bob''': Oh no! Look what he brought with him. '''Get that clown out of here. I've had enough of that (SymbolSwearing) crammed down my throat!'''
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-->'''Christian Man''': kid:''' Hi, fellas.
-->'''BadBob''': Bob:''' Oh no! Look what he brought with him. '''Get that clown out of here. I've had enough of that (SymbolSwearing) crammed down my throat!'''
-->'''Bad
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** In fact those little goofy devils show up in a number of tracts and are generally silly.
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[[caption-width-right:231: It's the [[NotSoAboveItAll smirking angel]] that really makes it.]]
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* Most of the [[ThoseTwoGuys two goofy devil's devil's]] antics in [[http://www.chick.com/reading/tracts/0004/0004_01.asp "A Demon's Nightmare"]]....including the devil angry elevator-devil in the Hazmat Hazmat-like heat-protection suit.
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*** The presumably-American GoodOlBoy country-fried county sheriff suddenly talking like a Scottish Highlander.
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