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* Murphy yet again mocking Harry's chivalry. While talking to her over the phone about Arturo Genosa, Harry is reluctant to say any words related to a certain female body part, rationalizing "A gentleman just doesn't say some words in front of a lady." That doesn't stop him from holding the phone with his shoulder and gesturing despite her not being in the room. Murphy is only too happy to disabuse him of his notion.
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* Murphy [[RunningGag yet again again]] mocking Harry's chivalry. While talking to her over the phone about Arturo Genosa, Harry is reluctant to say any words related to a certain female body part, rationalizing "A gentleman just doesn't say some words in front of a lady." That doesn't stop him from holding the phone with his shoulder and gesturing despite her not being in the room. Murphy is only too happy to disabuse him of his notion.
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'''Harry''': Give me your gun.\\
'''Thomas''': Why?\\
'''Harry''': So the next time you start talking, I can shoot your wise ass.
'''Thomas''': Why?\\
'''Harry''': So the next time you start talking, I can shoot your wise ass.
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* After Thomas tells Harry they're half-brothers and he refuses to believe him, he and Harry get into a minor fight and the former gets the latter in an armlock and Harry responds by sinking his teeth into the offending arm. That's the point where you stop reading for a second to appreciate the fact that yes, Harry Dresden did just ''[[{{Irony}} bite a vampire]]''.
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* After Thomas tells Harry they're half-brothers and he refuses to believe him, he and Harry get into a minor fight and the former gets the latter in an armlock and Harry responds by sinking his teeth into the offending arm. That's the point where you the reader will probably stop reading for a second to appreciate the fact that yes, Harry Dresden did just ''[[{{Irony}} bite a vampire]]''.
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* It was quite ironic Harry addressed Thomas as kid [[spoiler: before he's revealed to be his older half brother]].
* Prior to that reveal, here's Harry's brief summary of why he and Thomas get along so well:
--> Thomas was an annoying wiseass who tended to make everyone he met want to kill him, and when I have that much in common with someone, I can't help but like him a little.
* Prior to that reveal, here's Harry's brief summary of why he and Thomas get along so well:
--> Thomas was an annoying wiseass who tended to make everyone he met want to kill him, and when I have that much in common with someone, I can't help but like him a little.
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* It was quite ironic Harry addressed Thomas as kid [[spoiler: before he's revealed to be his older half brother]].
* Prior to that reveal, here'sHarry's brief summary of why he and Thomas get along so well:
--> Thomas -->Thomas was [[TheGadfly an annoying wiseass who tended to make everyone he met want to kill him, him]], and when [[HeroicSelfDeprecation I have that much in common with someone, someone]], [[BirdsOfAFeather I can't help but like him a little.little]].
* Prior to that reveal, here's
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''I wasn't even going to touch that one.''
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-->'''Bobby''': Who the hell are you?\\
'''Harry''': I the hell am Harry.
'''Harry''': I the hell am Harry.
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'''Harry''': I
"I the hell am
He pulled out his own gym bag and slammed the car door closed. "You always a wiseass?"\\
"No. Sometimes I'm asleep."
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-->'''Harry''': ''(to Jake)'' He thought I was a ''stunt penis?
** Also from the same conversation:
-->'''Bobby''': Are you always a smart-ass?\\
'''Harry''': No. Sometimes I'm asleep.
** Also from the same conversation:
-->'''Bobby''': Are you always a smart-ass?\\
'''Harry''': No. Sometimes I'm asleep.
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** Also from the same conversation:
-->'''Bobby''': Are you always a smart-ass?\\
'''Harry''': No. Sometimes I'm asleep.
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-->Now that he wasn't threatening violence, I could see that this kid was a jewel. He could potentially provide some lucky wiseass with straight lines for the rest of his natural life, and you can't put a price on that.
* Murphy mocking Harry's chivalry. While talking to her over the phone about Arturo Genosa, Harry is reluctant to say any words related to a certain female body part, rationalizing "A gentleman just doesn't say some words in front of a lady." That doesn't stop him from holding the phone with his shoulder and gesturing despite her not being in the room. Murphy is only too happy to disabuse him of his notion.
-->'''Harry''': He doesn't believe in using [[FakeBoobs surgically altered... uh... You know]].\\
'''Murphy''': ''(brightly)'' Boobs? Jugs? Hooters? Ya-yas?\\
'''Harry''': I guess.\\
'''Murphy''': Melons? Torpedoes? Tits? Gazongas? Knockers? Ta-tas?\\
'''Harry''': ''(incredibly embarrassed)'' Hell's ''bells,'' Murph!\\
'''Murphy''': ''(laughs)'' You're cute when you're embarrassed.
* Murphy mocking Harry's chivalry. While talking to her over the phone about Arturo Genosa, Harry is reluctant to say any words related to a certain female body part, rationalizing "A gentleman just doesn't say some words in front of a lady." That doesn't stop him from holding the phone with his shoulder and gesturing despite her not being in the room. Murphy is only too happy to disabuse him of his notion.
-->'''Harry''': He doesn't believe in using [[FakeBoobs surgically altered... uh... You know]].\\
'''Murphy''': ''(brightly)'' Boobs? Jugs? Hooters? Ya-yas?\\
'''Harry''': I guess.\\
'''Murphy''': Melons? Torpedoes? Tits? Gazongas? Knockers? Ta-tas?\\
'''Harry''': ''(incredibly embarrassed)'' Hell's ''bells,'' Murph!\\
'''Murphy''': ''(laughs)'' You're cute when you're embarrassed.
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* Murphy yet again mocking Harry's chivalry. While talking to her over the phone about Arturo Genosa, Harry is reluctant to say any words related to a certain female body part, rationalizing "A gentleman just doesn't say some words in front of a lady." That doesn't stop him from holding the phone with his shoulder and gesturing despite her not being in the room. Murphy is only too happy to disabuse him of his notion.
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-->'''Murphy''': [[Music/GeorgeMichael Sex is natural, sex is good. Not everybody does it, but everybody should.]]\\
'''Harry''': ''I'm'' the wiseass, ''you're'' the cop. Respect my boundaries.
'''Harry''': ''I'm'' the wiseass, ''you're'' the cop. Respect my boundaries.
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** [[invoked]] On a similarly metatextual level, Harry snarkily calling Thomas "kid" during the first few chapters of this novel [[HilariousInHindsight becomes rather amusing]] after TheReveal roughly halfway through the novel that [[spoiler:Thomas is actually Harry's ''older'' half-brother]].
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* The first meeting of Harry and Lara. After accepting a job for Thomas, he ended so pissed over the con that he decided to have a "talk" with him. Lara decided to intervene, using a pair of miniature guns and her glamour but it fails against Harry and after a second try:
-->'''Lara:''' [[OhCrap Empty night.]] You are [[TheDreaded Harry Dresden]].\\
-->'''Lara:''' [[OhCrap Empty night.]] You are [[TheDreaded Harry Dresden]].\\
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* The first "proper" meeting of Harry and Lara. After accepting a job for Thomas, Thomas that has gone ''thoroughly'' south, he ended so pissed over the con that he decided to have a "talk" with him. him (read: beat him up and demand some straight answers). Lara decided to intervene, using a pair of miniature guns and her glamour [[StupidityInducingAttack glamour]], but it [[NoSell fails against Harry and after against]] Harry's HeroicWillpower. After a second try:
try also goes nowhere:
-->'''Lara:''' [[OhCrap Empty night.]] You are [[FamedInStory Harry]] [[TheDreadedHarry Dresden]].\\
-->'''Lara:''' [[OhCrap Empty night.]] You are [[FamedInStory Harry]] [[TheDreaded
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'''Lara''': Why are you threatening my brother?\\
'''Harry''': It was a slow night and everyone else was busy.\\
'''Lara''': ''[[[ShutUpKirk casually shoots him in the ear]]]''
** At the start of the conversation, when she draws on him, Harry's first thought was that [[ArousedByTheirVoice her voice is hot]], and the second was wondering how Lara caught up to them so quickly in "do me" stiletto heels. His ''third'' thought was remembering that it would be bad to get shot.
** Lara [[ItMakesSenseInContext shoots Thomas]] and Harry manages to drive her off momentarily, and warns Thomas that they shouldn't move until they know where she is.
-->'''Thomas''': [[SarcasmMode That'll get her. The old sitting duck ploy.]]\\
'''Harry''': It was a slow night and everyone else was busy.\\
'''Lara''': ''[[[ShutUpKirk casually shoots him in the ear]]]''
** At the start of the conversation, when she draws on him, Harry's first thought was that [[ArousedByTheirVoice her voice is hot]], and the second was wondering how Lara caught up to them so quickly in "do me" stiletto heels. His ''third'' thought was remembering that it would be bad to get shot.
** Lara [[ItMakesSenseInContext shoots Thomas]] and Harry manages to drive her off momentarily, and warns Thomas that they shouldn't move until they know where she is.
-->'''Thomas''': [[SarcasmMode That'll get her. The old sitting duck ploy.]]\\
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** [[invoked]] At the start of the conversation, when she draws on him, Harry's first thought was that [[ArousedByTheirVoice her voice is hot]], and the second
** The following argument results in Lara [[ItMakesSenseInContext
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* This ''amazing'' comment about Murphy and her motorcycle.
-->'''Harry:''' It's not my fault all women like motorcycles, Murph. They're basically huge vibrators. With wheels.
** Later, after Harry and Murphy survive jousting with a limo on her bike, Murphy is laughing hysterically.
-->'''Harry:''' What? Why are you laughing?\\
-->'''Harry:''' It's not my fault all women like motorcycles, Murph. They're basically huge vibrators. With wheels.
** Later, after Harry and Murphy survive jousting with a limo on her bike, Murphy is laughing hysterically.
-->'''Harry:''' What? Why are you laughing?\\
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* This ''amazing'' comment conversation about Murphy and her motorcycle.
-->'''Harry:''' It'smotorcycle when she and Harry are meeting up with Kincaid to discuss how they're going to take out Mavra.
-->Murphy swung off the bike and took off her helmet. She shook out her golden hair, which looked good when it was somewhat mussed. "Good morning, Harry."\\
At the sound of her voice, the puppy I'd been carrying in my pocket started thrashing around until he managed to stick his head out, panting happily up at Murphy. "Morning," I said. "You sound pretty chipper."\\
"I am," she answered. She scratched the puppy's head. "Sometimes I forget how much I like riding the bike."\\
"Most chicks do," I said. "Roar of the engine and so on."\\
[[VitriolicBestBuds Murphy's blue eyes glittered with annoyance and anticipation]]. "Pig. You really enjoy dropping all women together in the same demographic, don't you?"\\
"It's not my fault all women like motorcycles, Murph. [[FreudWasRight They're basically huge vibrators. Withwheels.
wheels]]."\\
She tried for an angry expression, [[ActuallyPrettyFunny but part of a laugh escaped her throat, and she let it turn into a wide smile]]. "You're bent, Dresden."
** Later, after Harry and Murphy [[ItMakesSenseInContext survive jousting with a limo on herbike, motorbike]], Murphy is suddenly starts laughing hysterically.
-->'''Harry:''' --->'''Harry:''' What? Why are you laughing?\\
-->'''Harry:''' It's
-->Murphy swung off the bike and took off her helmet. She shook out her golden hair, which looked good when it was somewhat mussed. "Good morning, Harry."\\
At the sound of her voice, the puppy I'd been carrying in my pocket started thrashing around until he managed to stick his head out, panting happily up at Murphy. "Morning," I said. "You sound pretty chipper."\\
"I am," she answered. She scratched the puppy's head. "Sometimes I forget how much I like riding the bike."\\
"Most chicks do," I said. "Roar of the engine and so on."\\
[[VitriolicBestBuds Murphy's blue eyes glittered with annoyance and anticipation]]. "Pig. You really enjoy dropping all women together in the same demographic, don't you?"\\
"It's not my fault all women like motorcycles, Murph. [[FreudWasRight They're basically huge vibrators. With
She tried for an angry expression, [[ActuallyPrettyFunny but part of a laugh escaped her throat, and she let it turn into a wide smile]]. "You're bent, Dresden."
** Later, after Harry and Murphy [[ItMakesSenseInContext survive jousting with a limo on her
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* Harry's completely irrelevant question right before they all go up against Mavra's scourge.
-->'''Kincaid:''' Any questions?\\
'''Harry:''' Why are hot dogs sold in packages of ten but hot dog ''buns'' are sold in packages of eight?\\
''(Kincaid, Murphy, and Ebenezar all glare at him)''
-->'''Kincaid:''' Any questions?\\
'''Harry:''' Why are hot dogs sold in packages of ten but hot dog ''buns'' are sold in packages of eight?\\
''(Kincaid, Murphy, and Ebenezar all glare at him)''
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* Harry's completely irrelevant question right before they he, Kincaid, Murphy and Ebenezar all go up against Mavra's scourge.
-->'''Kincaid:''' Any questions?\\
'''Harry:''' Why are-->"Okay," Kincaid said. "Anyone have any questions?"\\
"Why do they sell hot dogssold in packages of ten but hot dog ''buns'' are sold in packages of eight?\\
''(Kincaid, Murphy,eight?" I said.\\
[[DeathGlare Everyone glared at me]]. I should probably leave off wizarding andEbenezar all glare at him)''chase my dream of becoming a stand-up comedian.
'''Harry:''' Why are
"Why do they sell hot dogs
''(Kincaid, Murphy,
[[DeathGlare Everyone glared at me]]. I should probably leave off wizarding and
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-->'''Harry''': (to Jake) He thought I was a ''stunt penis?''
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-->'''Harry''': (to Jake) ''(to Jake)'' He thought I was a ''stunt penis?''penis?
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-->'''Harry''': He doesn't believe in using [[GagBoobs surgically altered... uh... You know]].\\
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-->'''Harry''': He doesn't believe in using [[GagBoobs [[FakeBoobs surgically altered... uh... You know]].\\
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* Harry bemoans the fact he makes more cash dealing with flaming monkey crap then he does literally saving the world.
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* [[invoked]] With two injured people (one with a gunshot wound) and a dead body on the scene, [[LawfulEvil Lara]] wants to cover up the situation and [[LawfulGood Murphy]] wants to call the police despite the time crunch, looking to [[ChaoticGood Harry]] to break the tie.
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* [[invoked]] With two injured people (one with a gunshot wound) and a dead body on the scene, [[LawfulEvil Lara]] Lara wants to cover up the situation and [[LawfulGood Murphy]] Murphy wants to call the police despite the time crunch, looking to [[ChaoticGood Harry]] Harry to break the tie.
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* Harry looking over Kincaid's vampire-slaying arsenal. After comparing his SimpleStaff to Kincaid's awesome high-tech explosive polearm:
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* Harry looking over Kincaid's vampire-slaying arsenal. After comparing his SimpleStaff staff to Kincaid's awesome high-tech explosive polearm:
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-->[[StunnedSilence Everyone stopped to blink at]] ''[[StunnedSilence that]]'' [[StunnedSilence for a second.]] I mean, come on. Impaled by a guided frozen turkey missile. Even by the standards of the quasi-immortal creatures of the night, [[DidntSeeThatComing that ain't something you see twice.]]\\
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* After Thomas tells Harry they're half-brothers and he refuses to believe him, he and Harry get into a minor fight and the former gets the latter in an armlock and Harry responds by sinking his teeth into the offending arm. That's the point where you stop reading for a second to appreciate the fact that yes, Harry Dresden [[StealthPun did]] [[VisualPun just]] ''[[{{Irony}} bite a vampire]]''.
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* After Thomas tells Harry they're half-brothers and he refuses to believe him, he and Harry get into a minor fight and the former gets the latter in an armlock and Harry responds by sinking his teeth into the offending arm. That's the point where you stop reading for a second to appreciate the fact that yes, Harry Dresden [[StealthPun did]] [[VisualPun just]] Dresden did just ''[[{{Irony}} bite a vampire]]''.
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* [[ActionGirl Murphy]] commenting that she's feeling repressed, stuck fulfilling the DamselInDistress stereotype. [[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu Then she calls Lord Raith a little prick.]]
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* [[ActionGirl Murphy]] commenting that she's feeling repressed, stuck fulfilling the DamselInDistress stereotype. [[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu Then she calls Lord Raith Raith]] a [[StealthPun little prick.]]
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* Prior to that reveal, here's Harry's brief summary of why he and Thomas get along so well:
--> Thomas was an annoying wiseass who tended to make everyone he met want to kill him, and when I have that much in common with someone, I can't help but like him a little.
--> Thomas was an annoying wiseass who tended to make everyone he met want to kill him, and when I have that much in common with someone, I can't help but like him a little.
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* "Ah, yes, the [[http://www.wikia.com/wiki/c:muppet:Crazy_Harry Bolshevik Muppet]] solution." Doubles as a SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome and BrickJoke when Harry yells "Bolshevik Muppet!" to alert Kincaid just before setting off the land mine - especially since Kincaid ''immediately'' understands and reacts appropriately.
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* [[invoked]] "Ah, yes, the [[http://www.wikia.com/wiki/c:muppet:Crazy_Harry [[https://muppet.fandom.com/wiki/Crazy_Harry Bolshevik Muppet]] solution." Doubles as a SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome and BrickJoke when Harry yells "Bolshevik Muppet!" to alert Kincaid just before setting off the land mine - especially since Kincaid ''immediately'' understands and reacts appropriately.
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-->[[FreudWasRight "My dick is bigger than your dick,"]] I said.
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* Murphy's reaction to Harry calling Ebenezar "Sir." Namely, she [[DramaticDrop drops her change of clothes]], turns to him in undisguised shock, and whispers ''Sir?"'' to a now-embarrassed Harry.
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* Murphy's reaction to Harry calling Ebenezar "Sir." Namely, she [[DramaticDrop drops her change of clothes]], turns to him in undisguised shock, and whispers ''Sir?"'' ''"Sir?"'' to a now-embarrassed Harry.