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--> '''Jeannie:''' ''[[DeadpanSnarker He's deid and still talkin'!]]''
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--> '''Jeannie:''' ''[[DeadpanSnarker ''[[OOCIsSeriousBusiness He's deid and still talkin'!]]''
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* Rob Anybody's [[SarcasmMode tragic death]]
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* Rob Anybody's [[SarcasmMode tragic death]]death]]:
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* Rob Anybody's [[SarcasmMode tragic death]]:
-> '''Jeannie:''' Wullie! Big Yan! Come quick! He willna tak' a drink! I think he's ''deid''!
-> '''Anybody:''' Ach, this is no' the time for strong licker. My heart is heavy, wumman."
-> '''Jeannie:''' ''He's deid and still talkin'!''
-> '''Jeannie:''' Wullie! Big Yan! Come quick! He willna tak' a drink! I think he's ''deid''!
-> '''Anybody:''' Ach, this is no' the time for strong licker. My heart is heavy, wumman."
-> '''Jeannie:''' ''He's deid and still talkin'!''
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* Rob Anybody's [[SarcasmMode tragic death]]:
->death]]
--> '''Jeannie:''' [[FunetikAksent Wullie! Big Yan! Come quick! He willna tak' a drink! I thinkhe's ''deid''!
->he's]] ''[[FunetikAksent deid!]]''
--> '''Anybody:''' Ach, this is no' the time for strong licker. My heart is heavy, wumman."
-> --> '''Jeannie:''' ''He's ''[[DeadpanSnarker He's deid and still talkin'!''talkin'!]]''
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--> '''Jeannie:''' [[FunetikAksent Wullie! Big Yan! Come quick! He willna tak' a drink! I think
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--> '''Anybody:''' Ach, this is no' the time for strong licker. My heart is heavy, wumman."
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* Rob Anybody's [[SarcasmMode tragic death]]:
-> '''Jeannie:''' Wullie! Big Yan! Come quick! He willna tak' a drink! I think he's ''deid''!
-> '''Anybody:''' Ach, this is no' the time for strong licker. My heart is heavy, wumman."
-> '''Jeannie:''' ''He's deid and still talkin'!''
-> '''Jeannie:''' Wullie! Big Yan! Come quick! He willna tak' a drink! I think he's ''deid''!
-> '''Anybody:''' Ach, this is no' the time for strong licker. My heart is heavy, wumman."
-> '''Jeannie:''' ''He's deid and still talkin'!''
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* After the Feegles in scarecrow-disguise catch a coach and settle in for the ride, Feegles in various "body" parts decide to detach and stretch their own legs, as the other passengers watch in fascinated horror. Then Daft Wullie -- in the scarecrow's pelvis -- pops the trousers' buttons and pokes his head out of the crotch, and sees the passengers staring. He babbles at them about "opper-tickle aloosyns", then pops back into the crotch:
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* After the Feegles in scarecrow-disguise catch a coach and settle in for the ride, Feegles in various "body" parts decide to detach and stretch their own legs, as the other actual human passengers watch in fascinated horror. Then Daft Wullie -- in the scarecrow's pelvis -- pops the trousers' buttons and buttons, pokes his blue-skinned, red-haired head out of through the crotch, fly, and sees the passengers staring. He babbles at them about "opper-tickle aloosyns", then pops back into the crotch:
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* The Nac Mac Feegles pretending to be a human so that they can catch the coach. "I talk to my knees but they dinna listen to me."
* Rob Anybody's struggles with literacy.
* The Feegle scarecrow.
* Rob Anybody's struggles with literacy.
* The Feegle scarecrow.
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* The Nac Mac Feegles pretending to be a human so that they can catch the coach. "I talk They steal clothes, boots, and beards from all over the Chalk to my knees but they dinna listen make a "tattie-bogle" (a scarecrow) and then have to me."
work together to make the scarecrow walk, talk, and attempt to fool all the actual humans:
-->'''Rob Anybody:''' “Okay, let’s gae! We havena got all day. And youse knees, you’re sacked! Crivens, I’m walkin’ like I got a big touch of the stoppies! You gae up to the stomach and send doon a couple of good knee men!”
*Rob Anybody's struggles with literacy.
After the Feegles in scarecrow-disguise catch a coach and settle in for the ride, Feegles in various "body" parts decide to detach and stretch their own legs, as the other passengers watch in fascinated horror. Then Daft Wullie -- in the scarecrow's pelvis -- pops the trousers' buttons and pokes his head out of the crotch, and sees the passengers staring. He babbles at them about "opper-tickle aloosyns", then pops back into the crotch:
-->'''Daft Wullie:''' “I’m thinkin’ I fooled ’em easily, no problemo!”
*The When Miss Level learns of the Feegles' plan to get inside Tiffany's head to fight the Hiver, she insists on them taking a bath first. As she listens at the door to make sure they're obeying, she gets a lesson in the Feegle scarecrow.view of the world:
--> “Hey, there’s a big yellow duck here. Who’re ye pointin’ that beak at, yer scunner—”
--> There was a wet quack and some bubbling noises as the rubber duck sank.
-->'''Rob Anybody:''' “Okay, let’s gae! We havena got all day. And youse knees, you’re sacked! Crivens, I’m walkin’ like I got a big touch of the stoppies! You gae up to the stomach and send doon a couple of good knee men!”
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-->'''Daft Wullie:''' “I’m thinkin’ I fooled ’em easily, no problemo!”
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--> “Hey, there’s a big yellow duck here. Who’re ye pointin’ that beak at, yer scunner—”
--> There was a wet quack and some bubbling noises as the rubber duck sank.
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* Miss Level, having trouble controlling her second self [[spoiler: when it no longer has a body attached to it]], complains that it's as impossible as not picturing a pink rhinoceros when someone's mentioned one. Granny Weatherwax manages to get her to buck up and start getting the hang of it by telling her with the utmost sincerity that she, Granny, is ''[[HeroicWillpower not]]'' picturing a pink rhinoceros. Then, near the end of the novel, we get this exchange:
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* Miss Level, having trouble controlling her second self [[spoiler: when it no longer has a body attached to it]], it, complains that it's as impossible as not picturing a pink rhinoceros when someone's mentioned one. Granny Weatherwax manages to get her to buck up and start getting the hang of it by telling her with the utmost sincerity that she, Granny, is ''[[HeroicWillpower not]]'' picturing a pink rhinoceros. Then, near the end of the novel, we get this exchange:
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* Miss Level, having trouble controlling her second self [[spoiler: when it no longer has a body attached to it]], complains that it's as impossible as not picturing a pink rhinoceros when someone's mentioned one. Granny Weatherwax manages to get her to buck up and start getting the hang of it by telling her with the utmost sincerity that she, Granny, is ''[[HeroicWillpower not]]'' picturing a pink rhinoceros. Then, near the end of the novel, we get this exchange:
-->'''Tiffany:''' [[ExactWords You don't know what a rhinoceros looks like, do you?]]
-->'''Granny:''' (''happily'') That's right!
-->'''Tiffany:''' [[ExactWords You don't know what a rhinoceros looks like, do you?]]
-->'''Granny:''' (''happily'') That's right!
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* Granny Weatherwax's reaction when she realizes that she's gone on [[CharacterFilibuster a bit of a rant]] about what she thinks witchcraft ''should'' be about (as opposed to how Mrs. Earwig thinks it should be).
-->“Anyway, that’s what I think,” she added in the tones of someone who suspects that she might have gone just a bit further than she meant to.
-->“Anyway, that’s what I think,” she added in the tones of someone who suspects that she might have gone just a bit further than she meant to.
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* When Miss Level confronts Tiffany (who's been possessed by the Hiver), "Tiffany" tells her, in typical surly teenager style, she was just "out" doing "nothing" with "nobody". Miss Level dryly remarks that [[FormerTeenRebel she remembers going "out" and doing "nothing" as a girl]].
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* At one point, Daft Wullie feels hurt because Rob Anybody said he didn't have the brains of a beetle. Rom cheers him up by apologizing and saying: ''"Daft Wullie, ye ''do'' hae the brains o' a beetle, an' I'll fight any scunner who says different!"'' Which, one chapter later, leads to this exchange between Granny Weatherwax and Daft Wullie:
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* At one point, Daft Wullie feels hurt because Rob Anybody said he didn't have the brains of a beetle. Rom Rob cheers him up by apologizing and saying: ''"Daft Wullie, ye ''do'' hae the brains o' a beetle, an' I'll fight any scunner who says different!"'' Which, one chapter later, leads to this exchange between Granny Weatherwax and Daft Wullie:
