History FromBadToWorse / Fanfic

30th Dec '16 8:15:24 PM nombretomado
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* Even though some parts of it are less dark than others, and there is even some fluff here and there, DragonAgeTheCrownOfThorns is afflicted with this to a moderate extent. The GuileHero dwarven noble protagonist even lampshades it, multiple times, like when talking to [[spoiler:Trian]] and another time in one of the most recent chapters, after [[spoiler:the psychic clash between the prince and the Archdemon made the latter smarter and more-selfaware.]] On the bright side, nothing seems too hopeless yet, and the fact that six full Origin wardens made it into the main cast should help fix things... probably.

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* Even though some parts of it are less dark than others, and there is even some fluff here and there, DragonAgeTheCrownOfThorns ''Fanfic/DragonAgeTheCrownOfThorns'' is afflicted with this to a moderate extent. The GuileHero dwarven noble protagonist even lampshades it, multiple times, like when talking to [[spoiler:Trian]] and another time in one of the most recent chapters, after [[spoiler:the psychic clash between the prince and the Archdemon made the latter smarter and more-selfaware.]] On the bright side, nothing seems too hopeless yet, and the fact that six full Origin wardens made it into the main cast should help fix things... probably.
27th Dec '16 9:07:29 PM Nyame
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-->'''Sengoku''': Let me see if I have this straight. We have lost Enies Lobby. We have lost CP9. We have lost a dozen battleships. We have lost thousands of soldiers. We are still trying to locate where Kizaru landed. And we have months' worth of repair work to perform on the Gates of Justice. And meanwhile, the Straw Hat Pirates and their sixty allies all left the island alive?

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-->'''Sengoku''': Let me see if I have this straight. We have lost Enies Lobby. We have lost CP9.[=CP9=]. We have lost a dozen battleships. We have lost thousands of soldiers. We are still trying to locate where Kizaru landed. And we have months' worth of repair work to perform on the Gates of Justice. And meanwhile, the Straw Hat Pirates and their sixty allies all left the island alive?
27th Dec '16 9:07:08 PM Nyame
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*** Jewelry Bonney and Traflgar Law team up and attack Marine Base G-76, taking it over and allowing the surrounding public to run roughshod over the place, with the former even procuring a direct line to Marineford ''just'' to rub it in Sengoku's face.

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*** Jewelry Bonney and Traflgar Trafalgar Law team up and attack Marine Base G-76, taking it over and allowing the surrounding public to run roughshod over the place, with the former even procuring a direct line to Marineford ''just'' to rub it in Sengoku's face.
27th Dec '16 9:04:14 PM Nyame
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** Not only that, but the Straw Hats' assault has the incited the other Super Rookies to commit dangerous acts, and it even causes some of the Emperors to act out, either to one-up the Straw Hats and/or too draw Marine attention away from them. In brief:

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** Not only that, but the Straw Hats' assault has the incited the other Super Rookies to commit dangerous acts, and it even causes some of the Emperors to act out, either to one-up the Straw Hats and/or too to draw Marine attention away from them. In brief:



*** Eustass Kid attacks Blackarm Island (implied to be the island where [[Anime/OnePieceFilmZ Z]] trains his recruits), drawing out a conflict that needs to be resolved soon if the Marines want high-quality recruits to replace all their incoming losses.

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*** Eustass Kid attacks and Killer attack Blackarm Island (implied to be the island where [[Anime/OnePieceFilmZ Z]] trains his recruits), drawing out a conflict that needs to be resolved soon if the Marines want high-quality recruits to replace all their incoming losses.



*** Jewelry Bonney and Traflgar Law team up and attack Marine Base G-76, with the former even procuring a direct line to Marineford ''just'' to rub it in Sengoku's face.

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*** Jewelry Bonney and Traflgar Law team up and attack Marine Base G-76, taking it over and allowing the surrounding public to run roughshod over the place, with the former even procuring a direct line to Marineford ''just'' to rub it in Sengoku's face.



** And it all comes to a head in Chapter 42. To summarize, the entire day is labeled "'''The Darkest Day in the Entire History of the World Government.'''"

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** By the time the Straw Hats finally escape, the butcher's bill in the ''immediate area alone'' is as follows:
-->'''Sengoku''': Let me see if I have this straight. We have lost Enies Lobby. We have lost CP9. We have lost a dozen battleships. We have lost thousands of soldiers. We are still trying to locate where Kizaru landed. And we have months' worth of repair work to perform on the Gates of Justice. And meanwhile, the Straw Hat Pirates and their sixty allies all left the island alive?
** And it all comes to a head in Chapter 42. 8% of the countries that comprise the World Government have either seceded or were overthrown, another 12% are staving off revolutions and uprisings, Marine HQ has lost contact with dozens of bases and vessels all around the world, and pirate activity is at an all-time high. To summarize, the entire day is labeled "'''The Darkest Day in the Entire History of the World Government.'''"
23rd Dec '16 8:10:46 AM Nyame
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23rd Dec '16 8:08:25 AM Nyame
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*** Cavendish decided he's getting overshadowed, so he raids a supply ship headed for Totland... ''just'' as Big Mom starts craving for the specific thing he stole, sending ''her'' on a rampage and forcing the World Government to send Jinbe, Doflamingo, and Kuma against her in hopes of calming her down.

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*** Cavendish decided he's getting overshadowed, so he raids a supply ship headed for Totland... ''just'' as Big Mom starts craving for the specific thing he stole, sending ''her'' on a rampage and forcing the World Government to send Jinbe, Doflamingo, and Kuma against her in hopes of calming her down. Not only that, but Cavendish is deliberately leading her towards '''''Kaido's''''' territory, escalating the conflict.
9th Dec '16 12:37:43 AM iroanxi
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* ''FanFic/ThisBites'': The Straw Hats' assault on Enies Lobby, for the Marines and the World Government. Sengoku is so enraged that he plans on attacking the island with all available government forces. Unfortunately, fate is working against him.
** The Straw Hats are currently running rampant at one of the three major government strongholds trying to rescue Nico Robin, having turned Oimo and Kashi against the men stationed there. Not only that, but it's being broadcasted live on the SBS, for the entire world to hear, indelibly humiliating the Marines by making them look every bit as incompetent as Cross makes them out to be. [[spoiler:And then Robin finally tells the truth about Ohara, with the entire world as her audience]].
** Not only that, but the Straw Hats' assault has the incited the other Super Rookies to commit dangerous acts, and it even causes some of the Emperors to act out, either to one-up the Straw Hats and/or too draw Marine attention away from them. In brief:
*** Shanks goes on a rampage in the New World, tying up every Marine on that side of the Grand Line.
*** Cavendish decided he's getting overshadowed, so he raids a supply ship headed for Totland... ''just'' as Big Mom starts craving for the specific thing he stole, sending ''her'' on a rampage and forcing the World Government to send Jinbe, Doflamingo, and Kuma against her in hopes of calming her down.
*** Bartolomeo attacks a Celestial Dragon's yacht, and then insults one of the ''Five Elder Stars'', who send Akainu and five battleships after him.
*** Capone Bege raids Fort Lumose, stealing a ''fourth'' of the Marines' liquid assets.
*** X. Drake and Basil Hawkins somehow managed to piss off Moriah, sending the last available Warlord on a wild goose chase all around the Florian Triangle after them.
*** Eustass Kid attacks Blackarm Island (implied to be the island where [[Anime/OnePieceFilmZ Z]] trains his recruits), drawing out a conflict that needs to be resolved soon if the Marines want high-quality recruits to replace all their incoming losses.
*** Scratchmen Apoo and Captain Dugong attack Task Force Cerberus, capsizing all their ships in the process.
*** Jewelry Bonney and Traflgar Law team up and attack Marine Base G-76, with the former even procuring a direct line to Marineford ''just'' to rub it in Sengoku's face.
*** And finally, Urouge did ''something'' at Kyuka Island that left several high-ranking Marine officers shivering in horror.
** If that weren't enough, [[spoiler:Robin's tell-all on Ohara causes Water 7 to finally cut off the World Government. Several Marines (mainly giants) mutiny after hearing of how Saul (who was popular among other giants) died and that they had been hunting his ward for over twenty years]]. This forces Aokiji to be left behind so he can [[spoiler:quell the mutiny non-lethally]].
** The final straw is the crew outright ''disintegrating'' the World Government's flag during the SBS. Sengoku is so overwhelmed and enraged that he can't even go into his Buddha form any more and instead suffers a ''heart attack''. It is, as he puts it, by far and away the most humiliating incident for the Marines and the World Government since Roger's execution. And it's only going to get worse from there.
** And boy, does it get worse in Chapter 40. Spandam, being the idiot that he is, [[spoiler:had an operational black book. For [=CP9=], a covert black ops unit whose missions are so ethically and morally wrong that the World Government doesn't even acknowledge their existence for plausible deniability. A black book that Cross happens to find, and summarily reads for the SBS]]. Sengoku is so fed up that he's not even surprised anymore, just angry.
** And it all comes to a head in Chapter 42. To summarize, the entire day is labeled "'''The Darkest Day in the Entire History of the World Government.'''"
14th Nov '16 5:10:20 PM nombretomado
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* ''Fanfic/{{Reconciliation}}'' takes place after Hanako's bad ending in KatawaShoujo. [[DownerBeginning It starts out being depressing enough]], as Hanako has, out of guilt over [[spoiler:her outburst at Hisao and Lilly]] in the bad ending, isolated herself from Hisao and Lilly for eight years, ending up as a successful but lonely author while they got into a relationship. The first major plot development is [[spoiler:her hearing about Hisao's death]].

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* ''Fanfic/{{Reconciliation}}'' takes place after Hanako's bad ending in KatawaShoujo.''VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo''. [[DownerBeginning It starts out being depressing enough]], as Hanako has, out of guilt over [[spoiler:her outburst at Hisao and Lilly]] in the bad ending, isolated herself from Hisao and Lilly for eight years, ending up as a successful but lonely author while they got into a relationship. The first major plot development is [[spoiler:her hearing about Hisao's death]].
20th Oct '16 6:46:56 AM ClatoLawa
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* In ''Fanfic/SpotsOff'', what starts as a mundane (for the setting) bad day - waking up late, hairdryer breaking after a shower, missing breakfast after burning her toast, being antagonised by the class AlphaBitch upon arrival at school with none of her friends available to talk to and then having to skip lunch due to an Akuma attack - turns into an absolute ''nightmare'' when Marinette is publicly unmasked.
13th Aug '16 6:16:38 PM YamiVizziniX
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* In ''Fanfic/RitesOfAscension'', [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Equestria's]] sociopolitical standing, and [[TheArchmage Twilight Sparkle]] in particular, can't seem to catch a break. One of the first things Twilight learns after her ascension is that the country is slowly breaking apart due to outlying subjects being maltreated by their nobles and believing [[GodEmperor Princess Celestia]] cannot secure them from threats such as those seen in canon. Then there's a coup attempt during which [[spoiler:the Elements of Harmony are stolen]], and then- after Twilight begins to take a more active hand in dealing with international matters- two successive routine reconnaissance missions [[spoiler:pull Equestria into a war with Zebrica and retroactively invalidate the entire government of the griffon lands (to which the above malcontents were defecting)]].
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