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* AssholeVictim: Zigzagged with the bullies. It's made repeatedly clear that they are horrible but their fate is still treated as disproportionate to their crimes and they are also shown as capable of genuine remorse and mercy when confronted with their crimes.
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* AssholeVictim: Zigzagged with the bullies. It's made repeatedly clear that they are horrible horrible, but their fate is still treated as disproportionate to their crimes and they are also shown as capable of genuine remorse and mercy when confronted with their crimes.
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* TheBadGuyWins: [[spoiler: While their message gets ignored and their victims treated sympathetically, the five still succeed in their plan to torture and permanently maim their bullies before taking their own lives.]]
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* TheBadGuyWins: [[spoiler: While [[spoiler:While their message gets ignored and their victims treated sympathetically, the five still succeed in their plan to torture and permanently maim their bullies before taking their own lives.]]
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* BearTrap: Dane lines the boundary of his property with bear traps. Tommy is released and told that if he can make his through the woods to highway, he is free to go and fetch help. He steps in one of the traps and breaks his leg.
* TheBeautifulElite: Heather, Bridget, and Kelly, at least until [[spoiler:acid permanently destroys Heather and Bridget's beauty and leaves them horribly disfigured for life.]]
* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Averted with [[spoiler:the aforementioned three, and done consciously by Dane to make them as disgusting on the outside as he believes they are on the inside.]]
* TheBeautifulElite: Heather, Bridget, and Kelly, at least until [[spoiler:acid permanently destroys Heather and Bridget's beauty and leaves them horribly disfigured for life.]]
* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Averted with [[spoiler:the aforementioned three, and done consciously by Dane to make them as disgusting on the outside as he believes they are on the inside.]]
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* BearTrap: Dane lines the boundary of his property with bear traps. Tommy is released and told that if he can make his way through the woods to the highway, he is free to go and fetch help. He steps in one of the traps and breaks his leg.
* TheBeautifulElite: Heather, Bridget, and Kelly, at least until [[spoiler:acid permanently destroys Heather and Bridget's beauty and leaves them horribly disfigured forlife.]]
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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Averted with [[spoiler:the aforementioned three, and done consciously by Dane to make them as disgusting on the outside as he believes they are on theinside.]]inside]].
* TheBeautifulElite: Heather, Bridget, and Kelly, at least until [[spoiler:acid permanently destroys Heather and Bridget's beauty and leaves them horribly disfigured for
* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Averted with [[spoiler:the aforementioned three, and done consciously by Dane to make them as disgusting on the outside as he believes they are on the
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** Played straight, however, with [[spoiler:Ravi, the TokenMinority among the outcasts. He is the first one of them to die, having been killed by Dane for freeing Kurtis.]]
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** Played straight, however, with [[spoiler:Ravi, the TokenMinority among the outcasts. He is the first one of them to die, having been killed by Dane for freeing Kurtis.]]Kurtis]].
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** While not "death," most of the tortures inflicted by the outcasts have some relevance to their victims. See BreakTheHaughty for examples.
* DeathByRacism: Again, not actually "death," but the bulk of the jocks' interaction with the Indian kid Ravi consists of extremely racist remarks.
* DeathByRacism: Again, not actually "death," but the bulk of the jocks' interaction with the Indian kid Ravi consists of extremely racist remarks.
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** While not "death," "death", most of the tortures inflicted by the outcasts have some relevance to their victims. See BreakTheHaughty for examples.
* DeathByRacism: Again, not actually"death," "death", but the bulk of the jocks' interaction with the Indian kid Ravi consists of extremely racist remarks.
* DeathByRacism: Again, not actually
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: [[JerkassHasAPoint Riggs]] calls the outcasts out for their actions telling them that they're going to jail for their actions after Dane tells them that he hopes that he and the other bullies learned their lesson. Not long after, [[NiceGuy Kurtis]] calls Dane out that Riggs may be a jerk, but he doesn't deserve to lose his tongue for saying that he'll report him and the other outcasts to the police.
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: [[JerkassHasAPoint Riggs]] calls the outcasts out for their actions actions, telling them that they're going to jail for their actions after Dane tells them that he hopes that he and the other bullies learned their lesson. Not long after, [[NiceGuy Kurtis]] calls Dane out that Riggs may be a jerk, but he doesn't deserve to lose his tongue for saying that he'll report him and the other outcasts to the police.
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-->'''Bradley''': Go to Hell!
-->'''Dane''': I'm already there.
-->'''Dane''': I'm already there.
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** Emily and the outcasts themselves fall into this, as the entire reason they have their TortureCellar set up was because none of their tormentors showed any mercy to them, but they themselves refuse to show mercy to anyone. Dane goes so far as to [[spoiler: kill Ravi when he does show mercy to Kurtis]].
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** Emily and the outcasts themselves fall into this, as the entire reason they have their TortureCellar set up was because none of their tormentors showed any mercy to them, but they themselves refuse to show mercy to anyone. Dane goes so far as to [[spoiler: kill [[spoiler:kill Ravi when he does show mercy to Kurtis]].
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Ravi is bullied due to being of Indian descent with the bullies making numerous racial remarks to him.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Ravi is bullied due to being of Indian descent descent, with the bullies making numerous racial remarks to him.
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''The Final'' is a 2010 horror film directed by Joey Stewart and written and produced by Jason Kabolati. The film was part of the Creator/AfterDarkHorrorfest film festival.
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''The Final'' is a 2010 horror TeenHorror film directed by Joey Stewart and written and produced by Jason Kabolati. The film was part of the Creator/AfterDarkHorrorfest film festival.
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* MalevolentMaskedMen: The outcasts all their masks until the end and they ''really'' live up to the malevolent part.
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* MalevolentMaskedMen: The outcasts all their wear masks until the end and they ''really'' live up to the malevolent part.