History Fanfic / WhiteDevilOfTheMoon

15th Jun '17 12:57:05 PM ChaoticNovelist
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* UndyingLoyalty: Lots of Nanoha's friends have this for here but special mention goes to Vita. Fate theorizes two possible outcomes for when the TSAB hears about the situation on Earth: 1.) Hayate is granted premission to take her knights to Earth and 2.) Hayate is not granted premission and Vita takes time off for a vacation on Earth.

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* UndyingLoyalty: Lots of Nanoha's friends have this for here her but special mention goes to Vita. Fate theorizes two possible outcomes for when the TSAB hears about the situation on Earth: 1.) Hayate is granted premission to take her knights to Earth and 2.) Hayate is not granted premission and Vita takes time off for a vacation on Earth.



** If Beryl wasn't so determined to kill Nanoha, it's ''highly'' likely that Nanoha and Fate would still be suspicious of the Sailor Senshi. To make this more damning of her, she already had an overwhelming advantage at that point: (She would have simply won by attrition and lack of moral from the senshi, Nanoha would have left the planet after that wedding, and the TSAB would have never known about this war until she already won and that is '''if''' they discovered the Dark Kingdom [[RememberedTooLate at a point where it is too late to stop her]]) [[NiceJobFixingItVillain Way to go, Beryl...]] [[spoiler:She [[VillainousBSOD regretted this bitterly]] when Miyuki pointed both this and the fact that she had no interest in Endymion at all out to her.]]

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** If Beryl wasn't so determined to kill Nanoha, it's ''highly'' likely that Nanoha and Fate would still be suspicious of the Sailor Senshi. To make this more damning of her, she already had an overwhelming advantage at that point: (She would have simply won by attrition and lack of moral morale from the senshi, Nanoha would have left the planet after that wedding, and the TSAB would have never known about this war until she already won and that is '''if''' they discovered the Dark Kingdom [[RememberedTooLate at a point where it is too late to stop her]]) [[NiceJobFixingItVillain Way to go, Beryl...]] [[spoiler:She [[VillainousBSOD regretted this bitterly]] when Miyuki pointed both this and the fact that she had no interest in Endymion at all out to her.]]
6th Apr '17 1:23:18 PM BcUltra1990
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** If Beryl wasn't so determined to kill Nanoha, it's ''highly'' likely that Nanoha and Fate would still be suspicious of the Sailor Senshi. [[NiceJobFixingItVillain Way to go, Beryl...]] [[spoiler:She [[VillainousBSOD regretted this bitterly]] when Miyuki pointed both this and the fact that she had no interest in Endymion at all out to her.]]

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** If Beryl wasn't so determined to kill Nanoha, it's ''highly'' likely that Nanoha and Fate would still be suspicious of the Sailor Senshi. To make this more damning of her, she already had an overwhelming advantage at that point: (She would have simply won by attrition and lack of moral from the senshi, Nanoha would have left the planet after that wedding, and the TSAB would have never known about this war until she already won and that is '''if''' they discovered the Dark Kingdom [[RememberedTooLate at a point where it is too late to stop her]]) [[NiceJobFixingItVillain Way to go, Beryl...]] [[spoiler:She [[VillainousBSOD regretted this bitterly]] when Miyuki pointed both this and the fact that she had no interest in Endymion at all out to her.]]
7th Feb '17 4:43:33 PM Bissek
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-->Ice wasn't a very visually impressive weapon. It didn't have the obviously destructive power of [[KillItWithFire]] or [[ShockAndAwe lightning]]. But that didn't make it harmless. Regular patterns of freezing and thawing could eventually tear apart even the finest construction. A broken piece of ice could cut like a knife. And the destruction caused by a hailstorm could be just as devastating as a wildfire in its own way, damaging buildings and vehicles, ruining crops in some cases even knocking down trees. If the stones were large enough or coming down heavily enough, they could even kill.

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-->Ice wasn't a very visually impressive weapon. It didn't have the obviously destructive power of [[KillItWithFire]] [[KillItWithFire fire]] or [[ShockAndAwe lightning]]. But that didn't make it harmless. Regular patterns of freezing and thawing could eventually tear apart even the finest construction. A broken piece of ice could cut like a knife. And the destruction caused by a hailstorm could be just as devastating as a wildfire in its own way, damaging buildings and vehicles, ruining crops in some cases even knocking down trees. If the stones were large enough or coming down heavily enough, they could even kill.
19th Dec '16 10:51:49 PM Gamermaster
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* KillItWithIce: Mercury does this very thoroughly when she faces [[spoiler:Zoicite. First she locks him inside a large razor-edged fractal ice sculpture, then while he's trying to get out, she drops a car-sized hailstone on his head.]]

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* KillItWithIce: Mercury does this very thoroughly when she faces [[spoiler:Zoicite. First she locks him inside a large razor-edged fractal ice sculpture, then while he's trying to get out, she drops a car-sized hailstone on his head.]]]] The narration devotes an entire paragraph describing ''exactly'' how deadly ice can be.
-->Ice wasn't a very visually impressive weapon. It didn't have the obviously destructive power of [[KillItWithFire]] or [[ShockAndAwe lightning]]. But that didn't make it harmless. Regular patterns of freezing and thawing could eventually tear apart even the finest construction. A broken piece of ice could cut like a knife. And the destruction caused by a hailstorm could be just as devastating as a wildfire in its own way, damaging buildings and vehicles, ruining crops in some cases even knocking down trees. If the stones were large enough or coming down heavily enough, they could even kill.



** Goes to OhCrap levels when Shamal gets a scan of Hotaru's Linker Core. [[ApocalypseMaiden Given who she is]], this is not surprising.

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** Goes to OhCrap levels when Shamal gets a scan of Hotaru's Linker Core.Core and realizes that she's ''SSS-Rank''. [[ApocalypseMaiden Given who she is]], this is not surprising.
18th Oct '16 7:36:23 PM infernape612
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* AndTheAdventureContinues: Nanoha, Fate, Arf, Hayate, and the Wolkenritter in the ending.


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** Minako [[spoiler:auditions and is accepted into a musical academy, where she begins studying to become a singer]].
** Ami [[spoiler:goes to Mid-Childa to study magic and pays for her tuition with a tour of duty in the TSAB in a non-combat role]].
** Makoto [[spoiler:gets a summer job at the Midori-ya to learn how to become a baker and eventually moves to Uminari to continue the job full-time]].
** Rei [[spoiler:returns to her life as a shrine maiden]].
** Mamoru [[spoiler:sulks about losing Nanoha's heart for a while before eventually resuming his relationship with Rei]].
** Hotaru [[spoiler:is adopted by the Takamachis, and both Japanese hospitals and the TSAB begin trying to recruit her, which could lead to a nasty fight over who gets to keep her in the end]].
** Artemis [[spoiler:accepts Nanoha's dissolution of the Moon Kingdom and retires to the life of a common house pet]].
** Luna [[spoiler:continues to scheme on how to get Nanoha to claim her rightful place as Queen Serenity]].
** Alicia [[spoiler:is adopted by the Harlaowns, and is rather befuddled when Fate adopts a child before she herself is out of grade school]].
** Yuuno [[spoiler:spends the next several years documenting everything he has learned about the Moon Kingdom]].
** Nanoha, Fate, Arf, Hayate, and the Wolkenritter return to their lives at the TSAB.
3rd Oct '16 5:46:55 PM Bissek
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** Nanoha to Queen Serenity because of the recincarnation thing.

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** Nanoha to Queen Serenity because of the recincarnation reincarnation thing.
11th Aug '16 5:56:36 PM ChaoticNovelist
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*BeyondTheImpossible: Conventional wisdom states that linker cores can't be healed by magic. Once someone has strained or damaged theirs then all they can do to heal it is stop using magic for an extended period of time. [[spoiler: Hotaru's magical ability is so great that she can ignore this supposed impossibility and drastically shorten Nanoha's recovery time. Shamal then learns that Hotaru has Triple S potential as a mage.]]



* [[spoiler: IChooseToStay: Ami, in a roundabout way. Of the four senshi she alone chooses to go to Mid-Childa to study magic, though by all hints her role would be more like Yuuno's than Nanoha's.]]

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* [[spoiler: IChooseToStay: [[spoiler: Ami, in a roundabout way. Of the four senshi she alone chooses to go to Mid-Childa to study magic, though by all hints her role would be more like Yuuno's than Nanoha's.]]



* PlotHole: In canon Sailor Moon it took a year at the very most (assuming anime canon, in the manga it took much less than that) for Beryl to accumulate enough power to awaken Metallia even when Sailor Moon was foiling her plans left and right. The author never stops to explain why, without Sailor Moon around, Metallia wasn't awakened before the story even started.
** [[FridgeBrilliance Because Beryl's goal is two-fold: get Endemyion for her own and annihilate Serenity. Thus, she subconsciously foils her own plans because she has no idea who Serenity is and doesn't want her goal to be half-done.]]

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* PlotHole: It's a downplayed case due to the ForWantOfANail. In canon Sailor Moon it took a year at the very most (assuming anime canon, in the manga it took much less than that) for Beryl to accumulate enough power to awaken Metallia even when Sailor Moon was foiling her plans left and right. The author never stops to explain why, without Sailor Moon around, Metallia wasn't awakened before the story even started.
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reason for this is that [[FridgeBrilliance Because Beryl's goal is two-fold: get Endemyion for her own and annihilate Serenity. Thus, she subconsciously foils her own plans because she has no idea who Serenity is and doesn't want her goal to be half-done.]]



*** For what it's worth, many reviewers have noted that Nanoha wouldn't be quite as good a match for him as Usagi is, but take that as you well.



* SelfMadeOrphan: Technically, [[spoiler:Fate. Although Precia [[KarmicDeath had it coming]].]]

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* SelfMadeOrphan: Technically, [[spoiler:Fate. Although [[spoiler:Fate after she kills her mother but Precia [[KarmicDeath had it coming]].coming]] for abusing both of her daughters.]]
3rd May '16 4:11:49 PM Bissek
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** Luna takes one look at Fate's barrier jacket -- black color scheme, metal gauntlets, ominous-looking cape, etc etc -- and immediately decides that Fate is evil. This would be ([[JustifiedTrope True]] in ''Anime/SailorMoon'' but it's [[DarkIsNotEvil False]] in LyricalNanoha.

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** Luna takes one look at Fate's barrier jacket -- black color scheme, metal gauntlets, ominous-looking cape, etc etc -- and immediately decides that Fate is evil. This would be ([[JustifiedTrope [[JustifiedTrope True]] in ''Anime/SailorMoon'' but it's [[DarkIsNotEvil False]] in LyricalNanoha.
3rd May '16 4:05:39 PM Bissek
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-->[[spoiler: All I ever wanted was for her to smile at me the way she always smiled at you. Just once. Was that really too much to ask?]]

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-->[[spoiler: All I ever wanted was for her to smile at me the way she always smiled at you.you [Alicia]. Just once. Was that really too much to ask?]]
11th Feb '16 8:23:33 PM SithkingZero
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** Applies some of this to Princess Serenity's actions: ditching bodyguards put her life in danger, leaving the country for the better weather could cause an international incident, and the PrinceCharming on Earth might not have been so charming underneath. In short, there were many possible RealLife consequences to Princess Serenity's romantic encounter with Endymion. Nanoha points out that while the dangers from these actions never materialized, said actions were incredibly irresponsible and reflected very poorly on her sense of responsibility, which was especially important given the role Serenity was inheriting.
** The senshi's plan of being all reincarnated and fighting the forces of evil is all well and good unless one of them moves, thus removing a fairly vital piece of the defensive plan of the planet. Nanoha's absence lead to a year-and-a-half long stalemate in the war against the Dark Kingdom, and since the Senshi had no plans on what to do if the princess was never found, the Dark Kingdom looks like it might have won by simple attrition.

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** Applies some of this to Princess Serenity's actions: ditching bodyguards put her life in danger, leaving the country for the better weather could cause an international incident, and the PrinceCharming on Earth might not have been so charming underneath. In short, there were many possible RealLife consequences to Princess Serenity's romantic encounter with Endymion. Nanoha points out that while the dangers from these actions never materialized, said actions were incredibly irresponsible and reflected very poorly on her sense of responsibility, duty, which was especially important given the role Serenity was inheriting.
** The senshi's plan of being all reincarnated and fighting the forces of evil is all well and good good- unless one of them moves, thus removing a fairly vital piece of the defensive plan of the planet. Nanoha's absence lead to a year-and-a-half long stalemate in the war against the Dark Kingdom, and since the Senshi had no plans on what to do if the princess was never found, the Dark Kingdom looks like it might have won by simple attrition.



** Nanoha tears the "I was too busy to keep an eye on her" excuse that Serenity uses to shreds, pointing out that ''her'' parents were bakers, and even though they were absent for large portions of her childhood due to medical reasons, they ''still'' managed to instill a strong sense of right and wrong, not to mention basic manners, decency, and a strong will.



* DrivenToSuicide: Like in canon, Princess Serenity kills herself after Prince Endymion is killed. Unlike canon, when Nanoha finds out, she's piping mad because her selfish actions might have cost many other lives.

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* DrivenToSuicide: Like in canon, Princess Serenity kills herself after Prince Endymion is killed. Unlike canon, when Nanoha finds out, she's piping mad because her selfish actions might have cost many other lives.lives, not to mention rendering all the sacrifices her friends made to allow her to escape utterly ''worthless.''



** [[spoiler: Serenity's bodyguards, at the Fall of the Moon Kingdom, gave their lives so that Queen Serenity and Princess Serenity could get away. Unfortunately, Princess Serenity chose to kill herself after seeing all her friends and loved ones perish, rendering those sacrifices meaningless and forcing the Queen to cast the resurrection spell.]]



* NiceJobFixingItVillain: If Beryl hadn't decided to attack the Moon Princess, the TSAB would have remained ignorant of the problem and Nanoha would have simply gone to the wedding and left again afterwards.

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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: If Beryl hadn't decided to attack the Moon Princess, the TSAB would have remained ignorant of the problem and Nanoha would have simply gone to the wedding and left again afterwards. With the way the war against the Senshi was going (a war of attrition that the Senshi were slowly losing), they probably would have won if they hadn't attacked.
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