History Fanfic / TwilightSparklesAwesomeAdventure

23rd Nov '15 10:55:45 PM jormis29
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** ADMIRAL Awesome first appears in "That prison from [[SplinterCell Spliner Cell 3]]

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** ADMIRAL Awesome first appears in "That prison from [[SplinterCell [[VideoGame/SplinterCellChaosTheory Spliner Cell 3]]
1st Apr '14 5:10:52 PM bobJohnson
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The story is designed as a parody of various forms of bad fanfiction, and to assist in that goal most of the story is filled with [[LemonyNarrator Lemony Narration]]. Because of this, "the author" as referred to on this page does not refer to Yonasomun, but rather to the fictional persona of his which narrates the story. Said persona has a great hate for Fluttershy, and writes in a style which could be described as "BeigeProse [[XMeetsY meets]] CaptainObvious".

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The story is designed as a parody of various forms of bad fanfiction, and to assist in that goal most of the story is filled with [[LemonyNarrator Lemony Narration]]. Because of this, "the author" as referred to on this page does not refer to Yonasomun, but rather to the fictional persona of his which narrates the story. Said persona has a great hate for Fluttershy, and writes in a style which could be described as "BeigeProse [[XMeetsY meets]] CaptainObvious".
CaptainObvious"[[note]]"[[{{Portmanteau}} Captain Beige]]" if you will...[[/note]].
20th Aug '13 3:26:17 PM MarkLungo
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* RougeAnglesofSatin: Taken UpToEleven from the last story.

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* RougeAnglesofSatin: RougeAnglesOfSatin: Taken UpToEleven from the last story.
20th Aug '13 3:26:03 PM MarkLungo
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* ShoutOut: The entire opening is one to StarWars.

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* ShoutOut: The entire opening is one to StarWars.''Franchise/StarWars''.



* Sting: Combined with {{Egregious}} use of the {{Beat}} on the part of Princess Mama Mia Morte Cadenca during TheReveal of [[spoiler: Doctor Whookes as her second commander.]]

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* Sting: Combined with {{Egregious}} use of the {{Beat}} on the part of Princess Mama Mia Morte Cadenca during TheReveal of [[spoiler: Doctor Whookes as her second commander.]]]]
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14th Jun '13 12:48:28 PM tracer
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* TheBigBoard: In the sequel, Princess-Queen Lulamoon has a war room in Ponyland Castle, with a "bg screen" in it.
13th Jun '13 7:18:13 PM tracer
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** When Rainbow Dash, the "lesbian" pony, is in the [[RougeAnglesOfSatin Evarfre]] forest, she gets grabbed by a "gay snake" who squeezes her so hard that it ''threatens to turn her gay.'' Apparently being gay means you stop being a lesbian.
13th Jun '13 2:51:58 PM tracer
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*** It should be noted that, on the real show, Trixie was female.
1st Jun '13 10:07:48 PM ChaoticNovelist
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* RougeAnglesofSatin: Taken UpToEleven from the last story. Which is [[BeyondTheImpossible impressive]].

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* RougeAnglesofSatin: Taken UpToEleven from the last story. Which is [[BeyondTheImpossible impressive]].
30th May '13 3:15:52 PM Dionysus
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* Sting: Combined with Egregious use of the Beat on the part of Princess Mama Mia Morte Cadenca during TheReveal of [[spoiler: Doctor Whookes as her second commander.]]

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* Sting: Combined with Egregious {{Egregious}} use of the Beat {{Beat}} on the part of Princess Mama Mia Morte Cadenca during TheReveal of [[spoiler: Doctor Whookes as her second commander.]]]]
30th May '13 3:09:58 PM Dionysus
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* AntiHero: Admiral Awesome is this at first, before he devolves into a NominalHero.

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* AntiHero: Admiral ADMIRAL Awesome is this at first, before he devolves into a NominalHero.



* BatDeduction: Admiral Awesome figures out the details of what's going on the moment he arrives in Equestria.

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* BatDeduction: Admiral ADMIRAL Awesome figures out the details of what's going on the moment he arrives in Equestria.



* BreakingTheFourthWall: Admiral Awesome starts out his naming plan for the New Awesome Lulamoon Empire by saying he read the name New Lulamoon Republic in a fanfic.
* BringMyBrownPants: Happens to Celesia when she hears Admiral Awesome Yonasomun Armageddon's name.

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* BreakingTheFourthWall: Admiral ADMIRAL Awesome starts out his naming plan for the New Awesome Lulamoon Empire by saying he read the name New Lulamoon Republic in a fanfic.
* BringMyBrownPants: Happens to Celesia when she hears Admiral ADMIRAL Awesome Yonasomun Armageddon's name.



** [[spoiler: Becomes a NinjaProp when Admiral Awesome pretends to be dying in a fashion so similar to previous, meaningless appearances of CaptainObvious that it can easily fool the readers too.]]
** [[spoiler: Enemy Boss Leader]] reveals that the way to kill Admiral Awesome is to shoot him in the head. [[spoiler: Subverted when it turn out not to actually work though.]]

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** [[spoiler: Becomes a NinjaProp when Admiral ADMIRAL Awesome pretends to be dying in a fashion so similar to previous, meaningless appearances of CaptainObvious that it can easily fool the readers too.]]
** [[spoiler: Enemy Boss Leader]] reveals that the way to kill Admiral ADMIRAL Awesome is to shoot him in the head. [[spoiler: Subverted when it turn out not to actually work though.]]



* DeusExMachina: Admiral Awesome's appearance in Chapter 3.

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* DeusExMachina: Admiral ADMIRAL Awesome's appearance in Chapter 3.



* ExtraEyes: The logical conclusion that can be drawn from [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Commander Killemall]] being described as having [[RedEyesTakeWarning red eyes]] and black eyes in the same sentence.

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* ExtraEyes: The logical conclusion that can be drawn from [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Commander Killemall]] being described as having [[RedEyesTakeWarning red eyes]] and [[BlackEyesOfEvil black eyes eyes]] in the same sentence.



* FourthWallObserver: Pinkie Pie. She spends a lot of time complaining about the quality of the writing and making [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial Suspiciously Specific Denials]] about Admiral Awesome's status as an AuthorAvatar MarySue.

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* FourthWallObserver: Pinkie Pie. She spends a lot of time complaining about the quality of the writing and making [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial Suspiciously Specific Denials]] about Admiral ADMIRAL Awesome's status as an AuthorAvatar MarySue.



* FullNameBasis: Somewhat invoked. ADMIRAL Awesome Yonasomun Armageddon is either referred to by his full name, or at bare minimum, as ADMIRAL Awesome.



* LongList: The list of ponies below Admiral Awesome just before he founds the New Awesome Lulamoon Empire

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* LongList: The list of ponies below Admiral ADMIRAL Awesome just before he founds the New Awesome Lulamoon Empire



* MamaBear: Fluttershy demonstrates this when Admiral Awesome tries to send the Cutie Mark Crusaders to explore the Evarfre Forest, further reinforcing her state as "only in-character character".

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* MamaBear: Fluttershy demonstrates this when Admiral ADMIRAL Awesome tries to send the Cutie Mark Crusaders to explore the Evarfre Forest, further reinforcing her state as "only in-character character".



* NonSpecificallyForeign: One of Admiral Awesome's enemies is identified as speaking in "a funny foreign accent".

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* NonSpecificallyForeign: One of Admiral ADMIRAL Awesome's enemies is identified as speaking in "a funny foreign accent".



* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Mare]]: Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie, in two very different ways. Fluttershy is the only character whose personality isn't completely warped and who doesn't worship the metaphorical ground Admiral Awesome treads on, as well as being the one most likely to come up with good plans (which are then ignored because the author doesn't like her). Pinkie Pie, meanwhile, is a FourthWallObserver in the story and therefore is the only one who realizes that the whole thing is just a terribly-written fanfic.

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* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Mare]]: Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie, in two very different ways. Fluttershy is the only character whose personality isn't completely warped and who doesn't worship the metaphorical ground Admiral ADMIRAL Awesome treads on, as well as being the one most likely to come up with good plans (which are then ignored because the author doesn't like her). Pinkie Pie, meanwhile, is a FourthWallObserver in the story and therefore is the only one who realizes that the whole thing is just a terribly-written fanfic.



--> '''Admiral Awesome:''' No you are a main character. Itís better to send in a unimportant background pony.

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--> '''Admiral '''ADMIRAL Awesome:''' No you are a main character. Itís better to send in a unimportant background pony.



** The LongList of ponies Admiral Awesome makes a speech to includes [[Fanfic/PastSins Nyx]] and [[Fanfic/FalloutEquestria Littlepip]].

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** The LongList of ponies Admiral ADMIRAL Awesome makes a speech to includes [[Fanfic/PastSins Nyx]] and [[Fanfic/FalloutEquestria Littlepip]].



* TalkAboutTheWeather: This is Admiral Awesome's reaction to finding the President of Amarican in his tent.

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* TalkAboutTheWeather: This is Admiral ADMIRAL Awesome's reaction to finding the President of Amarican in his tent.



* TitleDrop: [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] in Chapter 3 when Admiral Awesome makes his first appearance as a DeusExMachina.

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* TitleDrop: [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] in Chapter 3 when Admiral ADMIRAL Awesome makes his first appearance as a DeusExMachina.



* FullNameBasis: Princess Mama Mia Morte Cadenca is typically referred to as such. Except when RougeAnglesOfSatin is involved.



* RougeAnglesofSatin: Obviously, considering the previous story.

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* RougeAnglesofSatin: Obviously, considering Taken UpToEleven from the previous story.last story. Which is [[BeyondTheImpossible impressive]].



* Sting: Combined with Egregious use of the Beat on the part of Princess Mama Mia Morte Cadenca during TheReveal of [[spoiler: Doctor Whookes as her second commander.]]

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* Sting: Combined with Egregious use of the Beat on the part of Princess Mama Mia Morte Cadenca during TheReveal of [[spoiler: Doctor Whookes as her second commander.]]]]
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