History Fanfic / TwilightSparklesAwesomeAdventure

6th Nov '16 11:16:38 PM Gravidef
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* ComplainingAboutShowsYouDontWatch: In-universe, the author gripes about certain episodes of the original show, despite not finishing them; he simply assumes they're bad because they feature Fluttershy.


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** There's also the fact that [[spoiler: Celesia isn't even Twillight's mother, which was built up as one of the main reasons they were fighting.]]


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** Doctor Wwhhoves repeatedly says "I don't want to go," which were [[spoiler: the Tenth Doctor's FamousLastWords]].
6th Nov '16 11:04:25 PM Gravidef
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* AntiClimaxBoss: The Tyrant is repeatedly built up as a major threat, appearing at the beginning of each chapter to march toward Ponyville--only to die extremely quickly in an explosion.



* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Right before Twillight goes to defeat Celesia, a door opens and she's suddenly faced with every villain from the show, including those who haven't shown up in the story at all, such as Discord and the Smooze. She kills them in a single sentence, and they're never mentioned again.



** There's also King Gilda screaming "NEIN!" [[BrokenRecord over and over and over again]] after Rainbow Dash escapes.



* RomanticPlotTumor: Rarity, Pinkie Pie, and Applejack all become lesbians and declare their love for each other, which has no bearing on the story whatsoever. It gets even weirder when [[spoiler: the Slenderman]] briefly shows up and becomes Dash's new lover, only to die and her to completely get over [[spoiler: him]] in a few seconds.
6th Nov '16 10:42:31 PM Gravidef
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* AntiClimaxBoss: The Tyrant is repeatedly built up as a major threat, appearing at the beginning of each chapter to march toward Ponyville--only to die extremely quickly in an explosion.



* BiTheWay: Rainbow Dash, despite being frequently named as a lesbian, has a brief fling with [[spoiler: the Slenderman]].



* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Right before Twillight goes to defeat Celesia, a door opens and she's suddenly faced with every villain from the show, including those who haven't shown up in the story at all, such as Discord and the Smooze. She kills them in a single sentence, and they're never mentioned again.



** Pinkie Pie also retains this ability, commenting on chapter titles and eventually outright declaring that the group is stuck in a horrible fanfic.



--> And finally thereís Fluttershy, who nobody likes. [[WriterOnBoard Especially not the author of this story!]] Sheís a coward, cries very often, has a silly voice, always apologizes for everything, has an ugly haircut, is afraid of everything, donít understand sarcasm, donít do anything useful, says too much, is a pegasus but canít fly, [[{{Fanfic/Pattycakes}} turned Rainbow Dash into a baby]], became an evil demon-monster-alien-thingy, drugged Dash so that she could have sex with her, [[Fanfic/SilentPonyvilleChronicles dragged Dash and Pinkie into a deadly nightmares that almost killed all of them]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking and has a silly name]]. God I hate Fluttershy! Why couldnít they use Firefly instead or that earth pony that looks like her but is better?

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--> And finally thereís Fluttershy, who nobody likes. [[WriterOnBoard Especially not the author of this story!]] Sheís a coward, cries very often, has a silly voice, always apologizes for everything, has an ugly haircut, is afraid of everything, donít understand sarcasm, donít do anything useful, says too much, is a pegasus but canít fly, [[{{Fanfic/Pattycakes}} turned Rainbow Dash into a baby]], baby, became an evil demon-monster-alien-thingy, drugged Dash so that she could have sex with her, [[Fanfic/SilentPonyvilleChronicles dragged Dash and Pinkie into a deadly nightmares that almost killed all of them]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking and has a silly name]]. God I hate Fluttershy! Why couldnít they use Firefly instead or that earth pony that looks like her but is better?


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* GenderBender: Both Trixie and Gilda are somehow male despite maintaining their female names.


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** When the author rattles off the LongList of ponies in the New Awesome Lulamoon Empire, he mentions ponies who shouldn't be there (such as Rainbow Dash, who's still imprisoned at this point in the story), contradicts himself (he claims he can't remember Sweetie Belle's name, then uses it), and generally makes absolutely no sense.
** The fact that Lulamoon (which is canonically Trixie's last name) seems to be Princess Luna while Luna herself is Nightmare Moon--despite the two being the ''same character.''


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* RomanticPlotTumor: Rarity, Pinkie Pie, and Applejack all become lesbians and declare their love for each other, which has no bearing on the story whatsoever. It gets even weirder when [[spoiler: the Slenderman]] briefly shows up and becomes Dash's new lover, only to die and her to completely get over [[spoiler: him]] in a few seconds.


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* SemanticSuperpower: A bizarre (and hilarious) case. At the end of the story, Admiral Awesome Yonasomun Armageddon returns to Earth and tries to kill the President, only to discover that he's somehow lost all of his abilities. Why? Because the president and his guards have decided he doesn't deserve any of his titles, which is enough to remove all of the powers associated with them.


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** During the author's angry remarks about Fluttershy, he mentions her evil deeds, such as turning Rainbow Dash into a baby or drugging her to have sex, in several other fanfics.


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** Bizarrely averted when ADMIRAL Awesome returns to Earth at the end of the story. The explosion that opened the portal to Equestria, which was completely ignored, is revealed to have devastated the whole planet.
16th Oct '16 7:45:35 AM dlchen145
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** They prove their {{Badass}} nature by [[spoiler: being the only characters who ADMIRAL Awesome can't beat in a fight]].

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** They prove their {{Badass}} badass nature by [[spoiler: being the only characters who ADMIRAL Awesome can't beat in a fight]].
22nd Sep '16 10:31:05 PM StongRadd
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The story is designed as a parody of various forms of bad fanfiction, and to assist in that goal most of the story is filled with [[LemonyNarrator Lemony Narration]]. Because of this, "the author" as referred to on this page does not refer to Yonasomun, but rather to the fictional persona of his which narrates the story. Said persona has a great hate for Fluttershy, and writes in a style which could be described as "BeigeProse [[XMeetsY meets]] CaptainObvious"[[note]]"[[{{Portmanteau}} Captain Beige]]" if you will...[[/note]].

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The story is designed as a parody of various forms of bad fanfiction, and to assist in that goal most of the story is filled with [[LemonyNarrator Lemony Narration]]. Because of this, "the author" as referred to on this page does not refer to Yonasomun, but rather to the fictional persona of his which narrates the story. Said persona has a great hate for Fluttershy, and writes in a style which could be described as "BeigeProse [[XMeetsY meets]] CaptainObvious"[[note]]"[[{{Portmanteau}} Captain Beige]]" Beige Obvious Prose]]" if you will...[[/note]].
12th Aug '16 3:49:27 AM mkmlp
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* EliteMooks: After the regular guards are proven ineffective (ie: The heroes slaughtered them.) The Elite ''Elite'' Guards are called in, which are comprised of alicorns in ScaryImpracticalArmour.
23rd Nov '15 10:55:45 PM jormis29
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** ADMIRAL Awesome first appears in "That prison from [[SplinterCell Spliner Cell 3]]

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** ADMIRAL Awesome first appears in "That prison from [[SplinterCell [[VideoGame/SplinterCellChaosTheory Spliner Cell 3]]
1st Apr '14 5:10:52 PM bobJohnson
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The story is designed as a parody of various forms of bad fanfiction, and to assist in that goal most of the story is filled with [[LemonyNarrator Lemony Narration]]. Because of this, "the author" as referred to on this page does not refer to Yonasomun, but rather to the fictional persona of his which narrates the story. Said persona has a great hate for Fluttershy, and writes in a style which could be described as "BeigeProse [[XMeetsY meets]] CaptainObvious".

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The story is designed as a parody of various forms of bad fanfiction, and to assist in that goal most of the story is filled with [[LemonyNarrator Lemony Narration]]. Because of this, "the author" as referred to on this page does not refer to Yonasomun, but rather to the fictional persona of his which narrates the story. Said persona has a great hate for Fluttershy, and writes in a style which could be described as "BeigeProse [[XMeetsY meets]] CaptainObvious".
CaptainObvious"[[note]]"[[{{Portmanteau}} Captain Beige]]" if you will...[[/note]].
20th Aug '13 3:26:17 PM MarkLungo
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* RougeAnglesofSatin: Taken UpToEleven from the last story.

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* RougeAnglesofSatin: RougeAnglesOfSatin: Taken UpToEleven from the last story.
20th Aug '13 3:26:03 PM MarkLungo
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* ShoutOut: The entire opening is one to StarWars.

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* ShoutOut: The entire opening is one to StarWars.''Franchise/StarWars''.



* Sting: Combined with {{Egregious}} use of the {{Beat}} on the part of Princess Mama Mia Morte Cadenca during TheReveal of [[spoiler: Doctor Whookes as her second commander.]]

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* Sting: Combined with {{Egregious}} use of the {{Beat}} on the part of Princess Mama Mia Morte Cadenca during TheReveal of [[spoiler: Doctor Whookes as her second commander.]]]]
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