History Fanfic / TokyoMewMewNoHopeLeft

23rd Feb '16 3:02:56 PM AnonFangeekGirl
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* ElegantGothicLolita::attenpted

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* ElegantGothicLolita::attenptedElegantGothicLolita: Attempted.
18th Feb '16 4:58:04 PM MEWtiful
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Chapter 16 suddenly changed in tone and maturity. Exhibit A: contrast this description of Sakura's clothing with the ones listed under ElegantGothicLolita.

-->I couldn't really get down right now, could I? I fidgeted with lace on the edge of my sleeve. Cluny, contrasting rather nicely with the thick cotton. Bell sleeves, not exaggerated, or tacky. My pannier was well hidden, and my skirt fell just below the knees. The high neck itched slightly. I straightened my bow. It was odd. I'd wondered if, upon seeing something like this, silly and superficial things wouldn't matter anymore. I sighed.
-->"I must be getting shallow," I whispered to myself. "Spending too much time thinking about clothes, I'm turning into a regular priss."


If this had kept up, "No Hope Left" may have been rescued from the badfic pile. But the very next chapter opens with "(Lol srry about the suckish writing an spelling on the last chaptr XD I was tired.)", and immediately launches back into the author's usual pre-chapter-16 writing style.

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Chapter 16 suddenly changed in tone and maturity. Exhibit A: contrast this description of Sakura's clothing with the ones listed under ElegantGothicLolita.

-->I couldn't really get down right now, could I? I fidgeted with lace on the edge of my sleeve. Cluny, contrasting rather nicely with the thick cotton. Bell sleeves, not exaggerated, or tacky. My pannier was well hidden, and my skirt fell just below the knees. The high neck itched slightly. I straightened my bow. It was odd. I'd wondered if, upon seeing something like this, silly and superficial things wouldn't matter anymore. I sighed.
-->"I must be getting shallow," I whispered to myself. "Spending too much time thinking about clothes, I'm turning into a regular priss."


If this had kept up, "No Hope Left" may have been rescued from the badfic pile. But the very next chapter opens with "(Lol srry about the suckish writing an spelling on the last chaptr XD I was tired.)", and immediately launches back into the author's usual pre-chapter-16 writing style.



** ripping a boy's head off because he looked at her cleavage. I wish I was lying.

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** ripping a boy's head off because he looked at her cleavage. I wish I was lying.



* ElegantGothicLolita: subverted with poor research. What makes lolita fashion "Lolita" is that it is young-looking and classy...meaning not worn like this:

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* ElegantGothicLolita: subverted with poor research. What makes lolita fashion "Lolita" is that it is young-looking and classy...meaning not worn like this: ElegantGothicLolita::attenpted
23rd Sep '15 3:52:55 PM nombretomado
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* NorseMythology: All throughout chapter 21, such as:
-->And all the while, the ice cow licked and licked.
-->I WILL MAKE A NEW EARTH FROM YOUR FLESH, AND A SKY FROM THE DOME OF YOU DEFEATED SKULL!
-->Haruko's golden boar, wrought by the hands of the residents of [=DarkalfHeim=], ...
23rd Feb '15 10:16:23 PM PaulA
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** [[ThePrincessBride Sakura says]] "[[MyNameIsInigoMontoya My name is Sakura Momomya.]] YouKilledMyFather. PrepareToDie."

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** [[ThePrincessBride [[Film/ThePrincessBride Sakura says]] "[[MyNameIsInigoMontoya My name is Sakura Momomya.]] YouKilledMyFather. PrepareToDie."
11th Feb '14 12:25:19 AM nicktoonhero
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* AccidentalInnuendo: "And then, KISSHU CAME!"
* AcceptableTargets: Preps and hackers.



* DieForOurShip: Every pairing has been changed to Sakura + INSERT NAME HERE.



* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Sakura and Minto, are described as this in chapter fourteen. However considering the way Sakura, the 'tomboy' of the two, dresses and generally acts, it doesn't really work.
* WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs

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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Sakura and Minto, are described as this in chapter fourteen. However considering the way Sakura, the 'tomboy' of the two, dresses and generally acts, it doesn't really work. \n* WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs
9th Nov '12 9:40:17 AM Celestial07
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* AbusiveParents: Sakura's to her, apparently. They [[ParentalFavoritism favour Minto]]. A lot.


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* AerithAndBob: Ichigo's new friend, Lindsay, compared with... Most other people.


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* ArtifactTitle: What ''does'' 'No hope left' ''mean'', anyway?
* AuthorAppeal: Ryou being a vampire.


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* KaleidoScopeEyes: That, or the author keeps forgetting what colour her character's eyes are.
--> "I saw a small, thin girl with large magenta eyes, pale skin, a medium-sized chest, and mid-leg length black hair with ao and pinku streaks."
--> "I live in a big house in Tokyo and I have long hair and green eyes, and I wear fishnet pantyhose and I have an older twin sister named Minto."
** Both from ''Chapter One''.
* KarmaHoudini: Sakura killing people goes completely unnoticed and unmentioned.


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* OutOfCharacter: Everyone. Mint gets special mention for just ''how'' OOC she is.


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* RetCon: Ryou's backstory is completely different. Apparently, he's a ''[[OurVampiresAreDifferent vampire]]''.


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** [[ThePrincessBride Sakura says]] "[[MyNameIsInigoMontoya My name is Sakura Momomya.]] YouKilledMyFather. PrepareToDie."
4th Sep '12 10:21:25 AM mlsmithca
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The First Chapter can be found here: http://xxxkawaiibloodygothx.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2x7e5i


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The First Chapter can be found here: http://xxxkawaiibloodygothx.[[http://xxxkawaiibloodygothx.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2x7e5i

com/gallery/#/d2x7e5i here.]]

4th Sep '12 10:21:02 AM mlsmithca
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Chapter 16 suddenly changed in tone and maturity. Exhibit A: contrast this description of Sakura's clothing with the ones listed under DidNotDoTheResearch.

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Chapter 16 suddenly changed in tone and maturity. Exhibit A: contrast this description of Sakura's clothing with the ones listed under DidNotDoTheResearch.
ElegantGothicLolita.



* ElegantGothicLolita: subverted with a good case of DidNotDoTheResearch. What makes lolita fashion "Lolita" is that it is young-looking and classy...meaning not worn like this:

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* ElegantGothicLolita: subverted with a good case of DidNotDoTheResearch.poor research. What makes lolita fashion "Lolita" is that it is young-looking and classy...meaning not worn like this:
28th Oct '11 12:59:12 PM tracer
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-->Haruko's golden boar, wrought by the hands of the residents of DarkalfHeim, ...

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-->Haruko's golden boar, wrought by the hands of the residents of DarkalfHeim, ...[=DarkalfHeim=], ...
28th Oct '11 12:58:45 PM tracer
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* SadistTeacher: Mr. Davidson. Probably more.



* ShoutOut: At the end of Chapter 7, many popular "Gothic" songs are referenced. Also, [[Film/ThePrincessBride Inigo]] broke up with Aoyama. That probably wasn't intentional, though.
** In chapter ten, Kisshu screams "[[MyImmortal BECAUSE I LOVE HER]]"
** In chapter 20,
-->""Leave SAKURA ALONE!" Ichigo yelled angry. "YOUR LUCKY SHE EVEN CAME FOR TO FIGHT YOU, BASTE!""


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* NorseMythology: All throughout chapter 21, such as:
-->And all the while, the ice cow licked and licked.
-->I WILL MAKE A NEW EARTH FROM YOUR FLESH, AND A SKY FROM THE DOME OF YOU DEFEATED SKULL!
-->Haruko's golden boar, wrought by the hands of the residents of DarkalfHeim, ...


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* SadistTeacher: Mr. Davidson. Probably more.
* ShoutOut: At the end of Chapter 7, many popular "Gothic" songs are referenced. Also, [[Film/ThePrincessBride Inigo]] broke up with Aoyama. That probably wasn't intentional, though.
** In chapter ten, Kisshu screams "[[MyImmortal BECAUSE I LOVE HER]]"
** In chapter 20,
-->""Leave SAKURA ALONE!" Ichigo yelled angry. "YOUR LUCKY SHE EVEN CAME FOR TO FIGHT YOU, BASTE!""
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