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* MythologyGag: For ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fans, the very inclusion of the ''Valkyrie'', which was, according to [[TheWikiRule Sarna.net]], one of the Unseen at the time this story was written.

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* MythologyGag: For ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fans, the very inclusion of the ''Valkyrie'', which was, according to [[TheWikiRule Sarna.net]], net, one of the Unseen at the time this story was written.

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No potholing or slashing tropes, YMMV


* HotScientist / HospitalHottie: Dr. Langley, chief medical officer of the ''Silvertongue''.

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* HotScientist / HospitalHottie: Dr. Langley, chief medical officer of the ''Silvertongue''.



* ObviousJudas: [[spoiler:Ackermann's vitriolic rant about conquering and enslaving the ponies pretty much cements his villainy.]]
* [[PimpedOutCar Pimped Out 'Mech]]: Ramirez claims to have pimped out his ''Valkyrie'' with a mini-fridge. He's joking, of course.

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* ObviousJudas: [[spoiler:Ackermann's vitriolic rant about conquering and enslaving the ponies pretty much cements his villainy.]]
* [[PimpedOutCar Pimped Out 'Mech]]:
PimpedOutCar: Ramirez claims to have pimped out his ''Valkyrie'' with a mini-fridge. He's joking, of course.



* TakeMeToYourLeader / IComeInPeace: Said by Ramirez upon first contact. Liz Virat [[LampshadeHanging calls him out on using the oldest clichés ever]].

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* TakeMeToYourLeader / IComeInPeace: TakeMeToYourLeader: Said by Ramirez upon first contact. Liz Virat [[LampshadeHanging calls him out on using the oldest clichés ever]].
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To normal a thing to get angry about.


* BerserkButton: Twilight almost had one of hers pushed with Ramirez's initial skepticism of magic's existence, as magic is very SeriousBusiness to her. [[spoiler: Another was [[UnstoppableRage smashed down]] to the point that she almost ''kills [[TheMole Ackermann]]'' for kidnapping Fluttershy!]]

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* BerserkButton: Twilight almost had one of hers pushed with Ramirez's initial skepticism of magic's existence, as magic is very SeriousBusiness to her. [[spoiler: Another was [[UnstoppableRage smashed down]] to the point that she almost ''kills [[TheMole Ackermann]]'' for kidnapping Fluttershy!]]
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** In Chapter 2, while discussing what aliens could possibly look like, Spike and Rainbow Dash describe [[{{Franchise/Alien}} a Xenomorph]] and [[StarWars a Wookie]], respectively.

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** In Chapter 2, while discussing what aliens could possibly look like, Spike and Rainbow Dash describe [[{{Franchise/Alien}} a Xenomorph]] and [[StarWars [[Franchise/StarWars a Wookie]], respectively.
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* TakeMeToYourLeader / IComeInPeace: Said by Ramirez upon first contact. Liz Virat [[LampshadeHanging calls him out on using the oldest clichés ever]].

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* TakeMeToYourLeader / IComeInPeace: Said by Ramirez upon first contact. Liz Virat [[LampshadeHanging calls him out on using the oldest clichés ever]].
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Capitalization was fixed from FanFic.The Thessalonica Legacy to Fanfic.The Thessalonica Legacy. Null edit to update page. Page may need a mojibake cleanup after the fact


Meanwhile, in the peaceful realm of Equestria, Ponyville’s resident bookworm , Twilight Sparkle, has stumbled upon hints of a secret buried for centuries. A secret that may lay bare long-forgotten aspects of Pony history and culture.

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Meanwhile, in the peaceful realm of Equestria, Ponyville’s Ponyville's resident bookworm , Twilight Sparkle, has stumbled upon hints of a secret buried for centuries. A secret that may lay bare long-forgotten aspects of Pony history and culture.



--> '''Fluttershy''': Oh! Oh dear. Um… I'd say ''that'' still works the same way.

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--> '''Fluttershy''': Oh! Oh dear. Um… Um... I'd say ''that'' still works the same way.



* TakeMeToYourLeader / IComeInPeace: Said by Ramirez upon first contact. Liz Virat [[LampshadeHanging calls him out on using the oldest clichés ever]].

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* TakeMeToYourLeader / IComeInPeace: Said by Ramirez upon first contact. Liz Virat [[LampshadeHanging calls him out on using the oldest clichés ever]].



--> '''Celestia''': [[spoiler:So, does Joseph Cameron no longer sit on the throne of the Terran Hegemony?”]]

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--> '''Celestia''': [[spoiler:So, does Joseph Cameron no longer sit on the throne of the Terran Hegemony?”]]Hegemony?"]]
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* MedievalStasis: Equestria ''had'' this, but it ended rather abruptly five hundred years in the past. Twilight's discovery of this kickstarts the Mane Six's end of the story. [[spoiler: To a degree, it's still in effect- with the exception of a few rare innovators and inventors, like Twilight or the Flim Flam Brothers, ponies still haven't advanced beyond what they copied off of the ''Thessalonia''. Similar to the [[Franchise/{{Halo}} Covenant,]] they got more advanced technology from a higher tech species, but haven't gone beyond or tried to improve it, merely copying what was there.]]

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* MedievalStasis: Equestria ''had'' this, but it ended rather abruptly five hundred years in the past. Twilight's discovery of this kickstarts the Mane Six's end of the story. [[spoiler: To a degree, it's still in effect- with the exception of a few rare innovators and inventors, like Twilight or the Flim Flam Brothers, ponies still haven't advanced beyond what they copied off of the ''Thessalonia''. Similar to the [[Franchise/{{Halo}} Covenant,]] they got more advanced technology from a higher tech species, but haven't gone beyond or tried to improve it, merely copying what was there. Unlike the Covenant, though, the Ponies copy the foreign tech ''exactly,'' to the point that they add in things even though it doesn't make sense for them- hammers, for example, are still designed to be used by something with arms and hands, whereas a non-unicorn would need to use their mouth and neck to use it (risking injury) and a unicorn wouldn't even need the handle.]]
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* MythologyGag: For ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fans, the very inclusion of the ''Valkyrie'', which is, according to [[TheWikiRule Sarna.net]], one of the Unseen.

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* MythologyGag: For ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fans, the very inclusion of the ''Valkyrie'', which is, was, according to [[TheWikiRule Sarna.net]], one of the Unseen.Unseen at the time this story was written.
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* MedievalStasis: Equestria ''had'' this, but it ended rather abruptly five hundred years in the past. Twilight's discovery of this kickstarts the Mane Six's end of the story. [[spoiler: To a degree, it's still in effect- with the exception of a few rare innovators and inventors, like Twilight or the Flim Flam Brothers, ponies still haven't advanced beyond what they copied off of the ''Thessalonia''. Similar to the [[Franchise/Halo Covenant,]] they got more advanced technology from a higher tech species, but haven't gone beyond or tried to improve it, merely copying what was there.]]

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* MedievalStasis: Equestria ''had'' this, but it ended rather abruptly five hundred years in the past. Twilight's discovery of this kickstarts the Mane Six's end of the story. [[spoiler: To a degree, it's still in effect- with the exception of a few rare innovators and inventors, like Twilight or the Flim Flam Brothers, ponies still haven't advanced beyond what they copied off of the ''Thessalonia''. Similar to the [[Franchise/Halo [[Franchise/{{Halo}} Covenant,]] they got more advanced technology from a higher tech species, but haven't gone beyond or tried to improve it, merely copying what was there.]]
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* [[spoiler:ObviousJudas:]] [[spoiler:Ackermann's vitriolic rant about conquering and enslaving the ponies pretty much cements his villainy.]]

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* [[spoiler:ObviousJudas:]] ObviousJudas: [[spoiler:Ackermann's vitriolic rant about conquering and enslaving the ponies pretty much cements his villainy.]]



* PornStash: Pinkie Pie finds one under a mattress within ''minutes'' of being brought aboard the DropShip. [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Fluttershy notes]], [[LuminescentBlush with much embarrassment]], that the reproductive biology is similar.

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* PornStash: Pinkie Pie finds one under a mattress within ''minutes'' of being brought aboard the DropShip. [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Fluttershy notes]], notes, [[LuminescentBlush with much embarrassment]], that the reproductive biology is similar.
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* HigherTechSpecies: Humans. Not only do they have HumongousMecha and faster-than-light starships while the ponies have, at best, mid-to-late 20th century tech, [[spoiler: it was their technology that gave Equestria a technological revolution... twice.]]


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* HumansAreWarriors: Compared to the ponies, yes. In addition to their massive war machines and instruments of death, Twilight gives a nice, big WhatTheHellHero speech when the humans are forced to kill several Diamond Dogs in self defense.
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* MedievalStasis: Equestria ''had'' this, but it ended rather abruptly five hundred years in the past. Twilight's discovery of this kickstarts the Mane Six's end of the story.

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* MedievalStasis: Equestria ''had'' this, but it ended rather abruptly five hundred years in the past. Twilight's discovery of this kickstarts the Mane Six's end of the story. [[spoiler: To a degree, it's still in effect- with the exception of a few rare innovators and inventors, like Twilight or the Flim Flam Brothers, ponies still haven't advanced beyond what they copied off of the ''Thessalonia''. Similar to the [[Franchise/Halo Covenant,]] they got more advanced technology from a higher tech species, but haven't gone beyond or tried to improve it, merely copying what was there.]]
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** This is also [[DeconstructedTrope deconstructed]] a bit, as the ponies didn't just copy the ''principles'' of the technology, but all the technology itself. This means that they have tons of stuff that they just copy, without adapting it to their own needs- this is actually why Twilight begins to suspect something is up, because there's lots of things that don't make sense in Equestria. Examples include handles on things which would make it harder for ponies to use (like hammers or doors) but work perfectly well with human physiology.
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A ''WesternAnimation/{{My Little Pony|FriendshipIsMagic}}''[=/=]''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' crossover fanfic by Dashukta (complete; 18 chapters long plus notes). Can be found at the following links:

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A ''WesternAnimation/{{My Little Pony|FriendshipIsMagic}}''[=/=]''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''[=/=]''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' crossover fanfic by Dashukta (complete; 18 chapters long plus notes). Can be found at the following links:
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* EarthAllAlong: [[spoiler:Turns out Equestria is on [[AnotherDimension an alternate universe version]] of it.]]
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A ''WesternAnimation/{{My Little Pony|FriendshipIsMagic}}''[=/=]''BattleTech'' crossover fanfic by Dashukta (complete; 18 chapters long plus notes). Can be found at the following links:

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A ''WesternAnimation/{{My Little Pony|FriendshipIsMagic}}''[=/=]''BattleTech'' Pony|FriendshipIsMagic}}''[=/=]''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' crossover fanfic by Dashukta (complete; 18 chapters long plus notes). Can be found at the following links:



* DropShip: Duh, it's ''BattleTech''. Of course there is one.

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* DropShip: Duh, it's ''BattleTech''.''TabletopGame/BattleTech''. Of course there is one.
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* DamselInDistress: [[spoiler:Fluttershy gets taken hostage by Ackermann near the end. She [[BadassDamsel tries to use the Stare on him]], but since he simply doesn't look her in the eye, it fails to work.]]

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* DamselInDistress: [[spoiler:Fluttershy gets taken hostage by Ackermann near the end. She [[BadassDamsel [[DamselOutOfDistress tries to use the Stare on him]], but since he simply doesn't look her in the eye, it fails to work.]]



* PornStash: Pinkie Pie finds one under a mattress within ''minutes'' of being brought aboard the DropShip. [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Fluttershy notes]], [[LuminescentBlush with much embarrassment]], that the reproductive biology is similar.

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* PornStash: Pinkie Pie finds one under a mattress within ''minutes'' of being brought aboard the DropShip. [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Fluttershy notes]], [[LuminescentBlush with much embarrassment]], that the reproductive biology is similar.



* TakeMeToYourLeader / IComeInPeace: Said by Ramirez upon first contact. Liz Virat [[LampshadeHanging calls him out on using the oldest clichés ever.]]

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* TakeMeToYourLeader / IComeInPeace: Said by Ramirez upon first contact. Liz Virat [[LampshadeHanging calls him out on using the oldest clichés ever.]]ever]].
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--> '''Celestia''': [[spoiler:So, does Joseph Cameron no longer sit on the throne of the Terran Hegemony?”]]

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