History Fanfic / TheTSABActurusWar

13th Dec '15 4:23:52 PM nombretomado
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** DRA fighter squadrons [[XWingSeries Wraith]] and [[AceCombat Mobius]], as well as [[AceCombat AWACS Eagle Eye]].

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** DRA fighter squadrons [[XWingSeries [[ComicBook/XWingSeries Wraith]] and [[AceCombat Mobius]], as well as [[AceCombat AWACS Eagle Eye]].
21st Jun '15 11:18:28 AM StFan
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* TakeThat: Averted with [[Fanfic/TiberiumWars Pvt. Marona]] and [[Film/RebuildOfEvangelion 2LT Mari Shikinami]], who the author has stated were coincidences and no malice aforethought went into making them redshirts.

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* TakeThat: Averted with [[Fanfic/TiberiumWars Pvt. Marona]] and [[Film/RebuildOfEvangelion [[Anime/RebuildOfEvangelion 2LT Mari Shikinami]], who the author has stated were coincidences and no malice aforethought went into making them redshirts.
2nd Oct '14 8:44:51 AM GentlemensDame883
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* LifeImitatesArt: InUniverse. At the end of chapter 19, [[spoiler:Admiral Lokan shoots the DRA's president and organises a coup to call for his country to lay down their arms, which Field Marshall Parker recognises as eerily similar to an Earth book he read - namely ''Literature/RedStormRising''.]]
2nd Oct '14 8:41:37 AM GentlemensDame883
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* {{BFG}}: The guns of [[spoiler: the DRA's artificial mages.]]

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* {{BFG}}: The guns of [[spoiler: the DRA's artificial mages.]]mages]] are 20mm.
1st Oct '14 8:11:35 AM Willbyr
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* RazorFloss: At one point, a [[{{Hellsing}} Walter Dornez]] {{Expy}} stonewalls a DRA advance until the Assault Troopers arrive.

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* RazorFloss: At one point, a [[{{Hellsing}} [[Manga/{{Hellsing}} Walter Dornez]] {{Expy}} stonewalls a DRA advance until the Assault Troopers arrive.



** The DRA ships [[AceCombat Razgriz]], [[TheDivineComedy Inferno, Dante, Virgil]], [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure Za Warudo]], [[{{Metallica}} Master of Puppets]], [[TheWickerMan Wicker Man]] and [[RockyIII Eye of the Tiger]].

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** The DRA ships [[AceCombat Razgriz]], [[TheDivineComedy Inferno, Dante, Virgil]], [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure Za Warudo]], [[{{Metallica}} [[Music/{{Metallica}} Master of Puppets]], [[TheWickerMan Wicker Man]] and [[RockyIII [[Film/RockyIII Eye of the Tiger]].



** The [[BloodKnight battle-crazed]] tank commander [[{{Hellsing}} "Major" Max.]]

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** The [[BloodKnight battle-crazed]] tank commander [[{{Hellsing}} [[Manga/{{Hellsing}} "Major" Max.]]
1st Oct '14 8:04:43 AM Willbyr
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'''''[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=162743 The TSAB - Acturus War]]''''' by rider of war a.k.a lord admiral belisarius ([[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5802489/1/The_TSAB_bActurus_b_War also available on FanFiction.net]]) is a ''LyricalNanoha'' fanfic.

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'''''[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=162743 The TSAB - Acturus War]]''''' by rider of war a.k.a lord admiral belisarius ([[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5802489/1/The_TSAB_bActurus_b_War also available on FanFiction.net]]) is a ''LyricalNanoha'' ''Franchise/LyricalNanoha'' fanfic.


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2nd Oct '13 7:44:23 AM GentlemensDame883
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* FightsLikeANormal[=/=]KineticWeaponsAreJustBetter: While the DRA does have mages and magic weapons, it also uses magic as an adjunct to projectile weapons eg. maintaining weapons and auto-loading tank rounds. Furthermore, the vast majority of its weapons are mass-based, such as standard rifles, tank guns, artillery pieces and starship coilguns.



* KineticWeaponsAreJustBetter: While the DRA does have mages and magic weapons, it also uses magic as an adjunct to projectile weapons eg. maintaining weapons and auto-loading tank rounds. Furthermore, the vast majority of its weapons are mass-based, such as standard rifles, tank guns, artillery pieces and starship coilguns.
12th Apr '13 10:05:44 AM kay4today
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* AMillionIsAStatistic: Example of the "Not Good" side of TropesAreTools. Early on the author tries to avert this by pinning names to individual ships and redshirts, but [[HumansAreBastards the average reader's response seems to range from finding it redundant and distracting to outright finding it a turnoff.]]

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* AMillionIsAStatistic: Example of the "Not Good" side of TropesAreTools. Early on the author tries to avert this by pinning names to individual ships and redshirts, but [[HumansAreBastards the average reader's response seems to range from finding it redundant and distracting to outright finding it a turnoff.]]
12th Dec '12 11:12:08 AM nombretomado
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** [[{{Bioshock}} "Would you kindly...?"]]

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** [[{{Bioshock}} [[VideoGame/BioShock1 "Would you kindly...?"]]
3rd Jun '12 4:52:53 AM FELH2
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** The DRA ships [[AceCombat Razgriz]], [[TheDivineComedy Inferno, Dante, Virgil]], [[JoJosBizarreAdventure Za Warudo]], [[{{Metallica}} Master of Puppets]], [[TheWickerMan Wicker Man]] and [[RockyIII Eye of the Tiger]].

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** The DRA ships [[AceCombat Razgriz]], [[TheDivineComedy Inferno, Dante, Virgil]], [[JoJosBizarreAdventure [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure Za Warudo]], [[{{Metallica}} Master of Puppets]], [[TheWickerMan Wicker Man]] and [[RockyIII Eye of the Tiger]].
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