History Fanfic / TheSecondTry

25th Jun '16 10:48:21 AM Gamermaster
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* ImTakingHerHomeWithMe: Rei Ayanami of all people ends up doing this after finding an adorable four year-old girl lost in the middle of Tokyo-3, though to her credit she had the sense to contact the authorities and try to find the child's parents first. It's just as well she did take the girl home, though, as she was Shinji and Asuka's KidFromTheFuture.

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* ImTakingHerHomeWithMe: Rei Ayanami of all people ends up doing this after finding an adorable four year-old girl lost in the middle of Tokyo-3, though to her credit she had the sense to contact the authorities and try to find the child's parents first. It's [[spoiler:It's just as well she did take the girl home, though, as she was Shinji and Asuka's KidFromTheFuture.]]
21st Jun '16 9:55:17 AM Tron80
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* LovingAShadow: After maturing a bit, Asuka admits to Shinji and herself that she didn't really love Kaji. She had a "delusional crush" on him because he represented the adult world that she wanted to be a part of. In a scene, while she sleeps with Shinji, Asuka wonders about the difference between being in love and thinking you're in love.
-->''But what if there weren't other people? Who could judge if you were in love or if you'd just experience a crush on someone; if you just ''think'' you are in love?''
21st Jun '16 4:16:10 AM Tron80
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* HenpeckedHusband:
** Shinji is quite passive and Asuka very domineering. Most of the time, Asuka makes plans and handles everything necessary while Shinji follows her lead or makes whatever she commands. At one point after returning to the past, Touji thinks his best friend looks like a henpecked husband, not knowing how right he is.
--->Man, how can a guy be that henpecked?
** As seen in the sequel, Gendo's reply to anything what his wife said was: "Yes, Yui", "Of course, Yui", "Whatever you say, Yui".
18th Jun '16 8:30:45 PM Gamermaster
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** In order to keep the {{Masquerade}}, Asuka is forced to declare that Shinji isn't her boyfriend, even though they're married.

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** In order to keep the {{Masquerade}}, Asuka is forced to declare that Shinji isn't her boyfriend, even though [[spoiler: they're married.married]].
17th Jun '16 6:43:26 PM Gamermaster
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* MakingLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces: In chapter 12 [[spoiler:Shinji and Asuka had sex in the base's locker room right before the FinalBattle.]]

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* MakingLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces: MakingLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces:
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In chapter 12 [[spoiler:Shinji and the Chapter 4 Omake, Asuka had sex and Shinji [[spoiler: have their honeymoon]] on the beach overlooking the LCL sea (which depending on your definition, may count as exhibitionism).
-->'''Asuka:''' Well, that's the good thing of being all alone
in the base's locker room world: You can do it wherever you want, without the risk of being seen by anyone!
** [[spoiler: There's also a case of MustNotDieAVirgin
right before the FinalBattle.final battle, where Asuka and Shinji have sex in [=NERV's=] changing room.]]
11th Jun '16 11:48:06 AM Tron80
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* RetailTherapy: Invoked when Asuka angrily explains Rei that the point of going shopping and buying clothes isn't sufficiency but making yourself feel better.
-->'''Misato:''' Ah, hello Rei. What brings you here?\\
'''Rei:''' I am in need of new socks.\\
'''Asuka:''' Figures. The devil will probably visit the Arctic to spend a holiday in the warmth before you'd buy yourself some new outfit.\\
'''Rei:''' The clothes that were supplied by the school are sufficient for me.\\
'''Asuka:''' Sufficient, sufficient. This is not a matter of sufficiency. You should do it to feel more comfortable, to show the world that you have another life than school and duty. And most importantly to make you feel better!
8th Jun '16 8:38:37 PM Gamermaster
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** Downplayed later on when [[spoiler:Asuka]] suggests to [[spoiler: Aki]] that she name her doll after her maternal grandmother, but it gets corrupted from [[spoiler: Kyoko]] to [[spoiler: Kiko]] due to her mishearing the suggestion.



* LongingLook: Played tragically. They can't let anyone knows they are together, so in public they can't support at each other physically -not matter how depressed or glum one of them is-, and they have to resort to throw stealth, longing glances at each other.

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* LongingLook: Played tragically. They Asuka and Shinji can't let anyone knows they are together, so in public they can't support at each other physically -not matter how depressed or glum one of them is-, and they have to resort to throw stealth, longing glances at each other.
5th Jun '16 6:37:06 PM UltraSonic007
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Go to ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'' to read a different take on one of the main plot points of this story. Go to ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Manga/ReTake'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'' or ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'' if you are interested in reading more PeggySue Evangelion fics. Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion 303}}'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'' and ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'', ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' and ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionGenocide'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Go to ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'' and ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' if you are interested in crossovers.

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Go to ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'' to read a different take on one of the main plot points of this story. Go to ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Manga/ReTake'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'' or ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'' if you are interested in reading more PeggySue Evangelion fics. Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion 303}}'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'' and ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'' ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'', ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'', or ''Fanfic/MobileFighterEvangelion'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'', ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' and ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionGenocide'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Go to ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'' and ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' if you are interested in crossovers.
31st May '16 10:23:14 PM Gamermaster
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-->"Smile when you're happy, cry when you're sad...and do both when you're happier than you've ever been."

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-->"Smile when you're happy, cry when you're sad...[[spoiler: and do both when you're happier than you've ever been."]]"



->''Smile when you're happy. Cry when you're sad,[...] [[TearsOfJoy And do both when you're happier than you've ever been]].''

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->''Smile when you're happy. Cry when you're sad,[...] [[TearsOfJoy [[spoiler:[[TearsOfJoy And do both when you're happier than you've ever been]].'']]''
31st May '16 10:04:01 PM Gamermaster
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* FaceYourFears: Asuka finally gets over her pediophobia in chapter 8 after [[spoiler: she ends up scaring Aki when she has a panic attack.]]

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* FaceYourFears: Asuka finally gets over confronts her pediophobia in chapter 8 after [[spoiler: she ends up scaring Aki when she has a panic attack.]]]]
-->"It's about time that I bury my demons. [[spoiler: Especially if they're starting to hurt my daughter as well...]]"
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