History Fanfic / TheSecondTry

25th Sep '16 11:37:39 PM Gamermaster
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Shinji and Asuka are at a lake with Asuka swimming in it. Trying to get Shinji to swim (he admits he can't) she pretends to drown, making him panic and jump in to save her. She takes a look at his face and realizes that she scared him shitless and, for a brief instant, made him think he was going to watch her die and be the last human alive in a post-Third Impact world.

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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: MyGodWhatHaveIDone:
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Shinji and Asuka are at a lake with Asuka swimming in it. Trying to get Shinji to swim (he admits he can't) she pretends to drown, making him panic and jump in to save her. She takes a look at his face and realizes that she scared him shitless and, for a brief instant, made him think he was going to watch her die and be the last human alive in a post-Third Impact world.world.
** Asuka has this reaction when [[spoiler: she ends up damaging Aki's doll and scaring her away due to a pediophobia induced panic attack.]]
21st Sep '16 9:43:57 AM Ereiam
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* CoolUncle: [[spoiler:Rei.]] Her niece [[spoiler:Aki]] adores her and loves spending time with her. In turn, [[spoiler:Rei]] protects her and looks after her.

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* CoolUncle: CoolAunt: [[spoiler:Rei.]] Her niece [[spoiler:Aki]] adores her and loves spending time with her. In turn, [[spoiler:Rei]] protects her and looks after her.
21st Sep '16 7:23:53 AM Ereiam
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--->'''[[spoiler:Kaworu]]:''' As you wish... ''Mrs. Ikari''.

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--->'''[[spoiler:Kaworu]]:''' As "As you wish... ''Mrs. Ikari''."
21st Sep '16 7:23:14 AM Ereiam
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** In chapter 6, one scene opens on Asuka moaning in delight and begging Shinji not to stop, even for changing positions ([[spoiler: Shinji is massaging her feet which are sore from her pregnancy]]).

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** In chapter 6, one scene opens on Asuka moaning in delight and begging Shinji not to stop, even for changing positions ([[spoiler: Shinji ([[spoiler:Shinji is massaging her feet which are sore from her pregnancy]]).



[[spoiler:'''Aki''':''"Mama?"'']]

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[[spoiler:'''Aki''':''"Mama?"'']][[spoiler:'''Aki''': ''"Mama?"'']]
21st Sep '16 7:22:37 AM Ereiam
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--->'''Toji''':''"I... I... I managed to get a better medical treatment for my sister."''\\
'''Hikari''':''"But- That's great! What did you do for that?"''\\
'''Toji''':''"Nothing much. Just sold my soul..."''

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--->'''Toji''':''"I...--->'''Toji''':"I... I... I managed to get a better medical treatment for my sister."''\\
'''Hikari''':''"But-
"\\
'''Hikari''':"But-
That's great! What did you do for that?"''\\
'''Toji''':''"Nothing
that?"\\
'''Toji''':"Nothing
much. Just ''Just sold my soul..."''''"



--->'''[[spoiler:Kaworu]]:''' As you wish... Mrs. Ikari.

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--->'''[[spoiler:Kaworu]]:''' As you wish... Mrs. Ikari.''Mrs. Ikari''.



--->'''Asuka''':''"What is it you wanted me to see?"''\\

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--->'''Asuka''':''"What --->'''Asuka''':"What is it you wanted me to see?"''\\see?"\\
21st Sep '16 6:59:56 AM Ereiam
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Well, [[CaptainObvious yeah]]. AfterTheEnd, Shinji and Asuka had to fend for themselves in an empty world and [[LivingEmotionalCrutch lean on each other to heal their deep-rooted emotional wounds]]. It took them a great deal of effort, but they eventually managed to build themselves a nice and functional household (both in terms of [[CosyCatastrophe living conditions]] and [[HappilyMarried emotional bonds]]) [[spoiler: and even to [[GoodParents successfully raise a daughter]]]], allowing them to live happy together at last. Then they were unexpectedly brought back six years in the past before all went FromBadToWorse[[spoiler:, having to cope with the additional trauma of losing their daughter in the process]], had to pretend to the world that everything was normal about them (which forbade them any public display of affection [[spoiler: or mourning]]) while subtly working to prevent TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt. They sometimes stumble and suffer many a heartache along the way, but the final result is that [[spoiler:everybody lives.]]

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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Well, [[CaptainObvious yeah]]. AfterTheEnd, Shinji and Asuka had to fend for themselves in an empty world and [[LivingEmotionalCrutch lean on each other to heal their deep-rooted emotional wounds]]. It took them a great deal of effort, but they eventually managed to build themselves a nice and functional household (both in terms of [[CosyCatastrophe living conditions]] and [[HappilyMarried emotional bonds]]) [[spoiler: and even to [[GoodParents successfully raise a daughter]]]], allowing them to live happy together at last. Then they were unexpectedly brought back six years in the past before all went FromBadToWorse[[spoiler:, having to cope with the additional trauma of losing their daughter in the process]], had to pretend to the world that everything was normal about them (which forbade them any public display of affection [[spoiler: or mourning]]) while subtly working to prevent TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt. They sometimes stumble and suffer many a heartache along the way, but in the final result is that [[spoiler:everybody lives.]]end, they get rewarded beyond their wildest hopes (see EverybodyLives below).
21st Sep '16 6:52:24 AM Ereiam
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** Once after accusing Asuka of lying about her love for him [[spoiler: to break her out of the hunger strike she started after discovering her pregnancy]]. Given how hurtful those words were for the both of them, he felt he totally deserved it.

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** Once after accusing Asuka of lying about her love for him [[spoiler: [[CruelToBeKind to break her out of the hunger strike she started started]] after discovering her pregnancy]]. Given how hurtful those words were for the both of them, he felt he totally deserved it.
21st Sep '16 6:38:07 AM Ereiam
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** In the first chapter, Asuka goes into Shinji's hospital room after the battle against Leliel. She slaps him for worrying her and then gives him a “welcome back” kiss.

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** In the first chapter, Asuka goes into Shinji's hospital room after the battle against Leliel. She slaps him for worrying her and then gives him a “welcome “welcome back” kiss.



** Once after accusing Asuka of lying about her love for him [[spoiler: to break her out of the hunger strike she started after discovering her pregnancy]]. Given how those words were hurtful for both of them, he felt he totally deserved it.

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** Once after accusing Asuka of lying about her love for him [[spoiler: to break her out of the hunger strike she started after discovering her pregnancy]]. Given how hurtful those words were hurtful for the both of them, he felt he totally deserved it.



* MasculineGirlFeminineBoy: Shinji and Asuka are married. She’s bold and straightforward, and he quiet and non-confrontational. During the AfterTheEnd section of the story, Asuka took care of physical chores (such like farming) as Shinji was tasked with the household chores and learning whatever knowledge that they needed (such like medical care). Asuka usually drove the two of them, made plans and handled everything while he calmed her down when she was angry or reassured her when she was depressed. This can also be seen in how [[spoiler:they act as parents towards Aki]], with Asuka being more stern and Shinji more accommodating. She also loves fighting while he loathes it.

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* MasculineGirlFeminineBoy: Shinji and Asuka are married. She’s She’s bold and straightforward, and he quiet and non-confrontational. During the AfterTheEnd section of the story, Asuka took care of physical chores (such like farming) as Shinji was tasked with the household chores and learning whatever knowledge that they needed (such like medical care). Asuka usually drove the two of them, made plans and handled everything while he calmed her down when she was angry or reassured her when she was depressed. This can also be seen in how [[spoiler:they act as parents towards Aki]], with Asuka being more stern and Shinji more accommodating. She also loves fighting while he loathes it.
21st Sep '16 6:34:19 AM Ereiam
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* ArcWords: Gendo said this to Shinji: "Do not ask questions you don't really want to hear the answer to". Later on, Shinji threw that line back in his father’s face.

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* ArcWords: ArcWords:
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Gendo said this to Shinji: "Do not ask questions you don't really want to hear the answer to". Later on, Shinji threw that line back in his father’s face.face.
** "Smile when you're happy, cry when you're sad." [[spoiler:Originally a piece of advice given by Asuka to her daughter so she wouldn't make the mistake of suppressing her true feelings like she used to do, Asuka remembers this line when Rei asks her a question about her feelings regarding Shinji's absence following his absorption inside Unit-01, lamenting that she's unable to follow her own advice. Later on, when she reunites with Aki, she appends it with: "[[TearsOfJoy And do both when you're happier than you've ever been]]."]]
21st Sep '16 5:55:13 AM Ereiam
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* TakingTheHeat: When Gendo has Ritsuko and Rei brought before him following the destruction of the Dummy System, Rei unexpectedly claims that Ritsuko set it up on her request. Ritsuko gets demoted from head of Project E as a result, but is allowed to walk away free instead of being detained, with the added satisfaction to see that Rei is no longer as loyal to Gendo as he expected.
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