History Fanfic / TheMiserySenshiNeoZeroDoubleBlitzkriegDebacle

7th Jan '18 7:05:51 PM Scifimaster92
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* OutOfCharacter: ''Nobody'' is in character. One of the worst recipients of this is Daria, who is stripped of her acerbic wit and high principles and replaced with an unfunny sociopath who thinks it's hilarious to freeze and shatter a human criminal while stopping a bank robbery. But let's not forget Beavis and Butthead, who go from being unmotivated losers to vicious violent would-be rapists that stop at nothing to kidnap and force themselves on Quinn Morgendorffer.
** The Sailor Senshi themselves are largely reduced to a hive mind. While the show itself could be accused of this when the cast got too large, the characters still had rather distinct personalities for the story to throw into the trash. In particular, Minako would not blatantly insult Ami for being too smart. Furthermore, the Sailor Starlights lone appearence in the story is already so far out of canon that it even disregards that because they live on another planet and never expected to see the main characters again, Seiya would probably be just a ''bit'' upset that Usagi was bleeding out on the ground in front of her considering she was ''in love with her''. However, the only one of these characters to even speak any dialog is ''Yaten'', and the others may as well not be in the scene since they contribute nothing to the fight or to Star Healer "healing Usagi". Rei is constantly seen speaking extremely formally and invoking various Japanese gods, something she never does in any incarnation (also, the gods are wrong for Shinto.)
31st Mar '17 4:12:47 PM MarkLungo
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* BornAgainImmortality: The Solar Warrior has been reborn for several millennia as hundreds of different historically important people. Of many different nationalities and ethnicities - his list of past lives includes the first emperor of Japan, KingArthur, Irish revolutionary Film/MichaelCollins, and [[UsefulNotes/TheApartheidEra Apartheid Era]] martyr [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stephen_Biko Stephen Biko]] of UsefulNotes/SouthAfrica. His current identity is a Japanese office worker.

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* BornAgainImmortality: The Solar Warrior has been reborn for several millennia as hundreds of different historically important people. Of people of many different nationalities and ethnicities - his ethnicities. His list of past lives includes the first emperor of Japan, KingArthur, Myth/KingArthur, Irish revolutionary Film/MichaelCollins, and [[UsefulNotes/SouthAfrica South African]] [[UsefulNotes/TheApartheidEra Apartheid Era]] martyr [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stephen_Biko Stephen Biko]] of UsefulNotes/SouthAfrica.Biko]]. His current identity is a Japanese office worker.
31st Mar '17 4:09:49 PM MarkLungo
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* AsLongAsItSoundsForeign: The non-American, non-canonical cast members have very awkward names. "Amazana Yoriko" is the chief offender, as even the author admits he simply took a non-Japanese word and tried to make it "sound" Japanese. Dr. Helmut Vander Helffen is supposed to be of German nobility and a German-born Nazi, but he possesses a name that is a strange mash of a German given name and a badly constructed Dutch surname, suggesting he took a similar approach to this character as well.

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* AsLongAsItSoundsForeign: The non-American, non-canonical cast members have very awkward names. "Amazana Yoriko" is the chief offender, as even the author admits he simply took a non-Japanese word and tried to make it "sound" Japanese. Dr. Helmut Vander Helffen is supposed to be of German nobility and a German-born Nazi, but he possesses a name that is a strange mash of a German given name and a badly constructed Dutch surname, suggesting he Guerin took a similar approach to this character as well.



* AuthorAppeal: A ''lot'' of references (and outright scene lifts) from other movies and anime that Guerin was a fan of.

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* AuthorAppeal: A ''lot'' of references (and outright scene lifts) from other movies and anime that Guerin was a fan of.likes.
31st Mar '17 4:01:22 PM Rebochan
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* AsLongAsItSoundsForeign: The non-American, non-canonical cast members have very awkward names. "Amazana Yoriko" is the chief offender, as even the author admits he simply took a non-Japanese word and tried to make it "sound" Japanese.

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* AsLongAsItSoundsForeign: The non-American, non-canonical cast members have very awkward names. "Amazana Yoriko" is the chief offender, as even the author admits he simply took a non-Japanese word and tried to make it "sound" Japanese. Dr. Helmut Vander Helffen is supposed to be of German nobility and a German-born Nazi, but he possesses a name that is a strange mash of a German given name and a badly constructed Dutch surname, suggesting he took a similar approach to this character as well.



** The story's plentiful references to breasts are hard to imagine as anything but this since they never serve any other purpose.



* {{Homage}}: The story contains a number of sequences lifted completely and wholly out of other works, whether they make sense or not. For example, Usagi putting her clothes on while wearing nothing but her panties is extremely raunchy for the type of humor used on ''Anime/SailorMoon'', but not ''Anime/ProjectAKo'', where the scene is lifted from. The author clearly ''intends'' the scenes to be jokes or references as he points out each and every one of them in the appendix.

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* {{Homage}}: The story contains a number of sequences lifted completely and wholly out of other works, whether they make sense or not. For example, Usagi putting her clothes on while wearing nothing but her panties is extremely raunchy for the type of humor used on ''Anime/SailorMoon'', but not ''Anime/ProjectAKo'', where the scene is lifted from. The author clearly ''intends'' the scenes to be jokes or references as he points out each and every one of them in the appendix.appendix so you can marvel at how much 80s and 90s anime he's watched.



* HerrDoktor[=/=]MadScientist: Dr. Vander Helffen.

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* HerrDoktor[=/=]MadScientist: Dr. Helmut Vander Helffen.Helffen isn't just a mad scientist, he's HITLER'S mad scientist, sustaining himself on his secret immortality pills!
31st Mar '17 3:25:21 PM Rebochan
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* GratuitousNinja: NIRAA has spies... NINJA spies. There is absolutely no difference between a "ninja spy" and the other normal spies we see in the story, but son of a gun, one pops up just so the story can work ninjas into its big soup of random Japanese culture.
20th Nov '16 3:03:00 AM SeptimusHeap
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* InstantAwesomeJustAddNinja: NIRAA apparently only hires ninja spies.
25th Mar '15 2:09:29 PM MarkLungo
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* InfoDump: Dr. Vander Helffen and the Solar Warrior both give lengthy speeches where they reveal their [[OriginStory origin stories]].
25th Mar '15 2:05:06 PM MarkLungo
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* TeleportersAndTransporters: Sailor Moon uses her [[NewPowersAsThePlotDemands recently acquired]] "moon teleportation power" to transport herself and Daria from Tokyo to Lawndale.

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* TeleportersAndTransporters: Sailor Moon uses her [[NewPowersAsThePlotDemands recently acquired]] "moon teleportation power" to magically transport herself and Daria from Tokyo to Lawndale.
25th Mar '15 2:04:13 PM MarkLungo
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* BornAgainImmortality: The Solar Warrior has been reborn for several millenia as hundreds of different historically important people. Of many different nationalities and ethnicities - his list of past lives includes the first emperor of Japan, KingArthur, Irish revolutionary Film/MichaelCollins, and [[UsefulNotes/TheApartheidEra Apartheid Era]] martyr [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stephen_Biko Stephen Biko]] of UsefulNotes/SouthAfrica. His current identity is a Japanese office worker.

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* BornAgainImmortality: The Solar Warrior has been reborn for several millenia millennia as hundreds of different historically important people. Of many different nationalities and ethnicities - his list of past lives includes the first emperor of Japan, KingArthur, Irish revolutionary Film/MichaelCollins, and [[UsefulNotes/TheApartheidEra Apartheid Era]] martyr [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stephen_Biko Stephen Biko]] of UsefulNotes/SouthAfrica. His current identity is a Japanese office worker.



* TalkToTheFist: Yoriko shoots Sailor Moon out of the sky during a speech. In a scene played perfectly straight!

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* TalkToTheFist: Yoriko shoots Sailor Moon out of the sky during a speech. In speech--in a scene played perfectly straight!straight!
* TeleportersAndTransporters: Sailor Moon uses her [[NewPowersAsThePlotDemands recently acquired]] "moon teleportation power" to transport herself and Daria from Tokyo to Lawndale.
18th Nov '14 5:35:33 PM MarkLungo
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* WordSaladTitle: The title does describe the story, but in a rather obscure and confusing way.
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