History Fanfic / Syngenesophobia

12th Oct '17 9:29:50 AM KrspaceT
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12th Oct '17 9:29:34 AM KrspaceT
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* {{Deconstruction}}: The story could initially be seen as a deconstruction of the show's usual gags. Lincoln is known for being a total ButtMonkey who is often the [[TheChewToy victim of his sisters' antics]], and although its starting to become rather rare, some episodes also have the sisters [[JerkassRealization realize their mistakes and make it up to Lincoln]]. This isn't really the case here. Lincoln gets beaten up by his sisters, as per usual, but this time, Lincoln [[RealityEnsues actually gets so badly injured from the beating that he has to be hospitalized, and the sisters are NOT forgiven for their misdeed whatsoever]].

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* {{Deconstruction}}: The story could initially be seen as a deconstruction of the show's usual gags. Lincoln is known for being a total ButtMonkey who is often the [[TheChewToy victim of his sisters' antics]], and although its starting to become rather rare, with some episodes also have the sisters [[JerkassRealization realize their mistakes and make it up to Lincoln]]. This isn't really the case here. Lincoln gets beaten up by his sisters, as per usual, but this time, Lincoln [[RealityEnsues actually gets so badly injured from the beating that he has to be hospitalized, and the sisters are NOT forgiven for their misdeed whatsoever]].
10th Oct '17 9:16:05 AM rufusluciusivan
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** Lola is well-aware that pretty much everyone around her thinks she's a total bitch and that she's let her ego go to her head and while she's deeply saddened that she can't seem to make friends, she also believes she's too far gone to stop.

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** Lola is well-aware that pretty much everyone around her thinks she's a total bitch brat and that she's let her ego go to her head and while she's deeply saddened that she can't seem to make friends, she also believes she's too far gone to stop.
10th Oct '17 7:29:32 AM ladyofthelibrary
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** Lola is well-aware that pretty much everyone around her thinks she's a total bitch and that she's let her ego go to her head and while she's deeply saddened that she can't seem to make friends, she also believes she's too far gone to stop.
9th Oct '17 5:39:15 AM ladyofthelibrary
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** The girls discussed about if Lincoln would refuse to forgive them, they should learn to accept it. In practice however, while he rejected their apology out of fear than anger, it's shown that talking about it is easier than action

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** The girls discussed about if Lincoln would refuse to forgive them, they should learn to accept it. In practice however, while he rejected their apology out of fear than anger, it's shown that talking about it is easier than action action.
** The world of pageants was ''not'' kind to Lola and the stress of trying to keep ahead of all the AlphaBitch competitors warped her personality.
9th Oct '17 2:05:23 AM rufusluciusivan
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* AudienceSurrogate: Dr. Lopez is [[MetaGuy the second type]], since she has an external point of view on the whole affair. She [[WhatTheHellHero calls the characters out for certain things]] and voices several opinions and questions that are shared by the audience. For instance, she points out the flaws of the Sister Fight Protocol and calls Luan out for her reckless April Fools pranks.
9th Oct '17 1:55:01 AM rufusluciusivan
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** For Lola, it is explained that her pageantry turned her into the manipulative brat she is in the show, since pretty much all contestants in those pageants are like that and the only way to succeed in the business is to become one as well. She also let her victories, as well as the cash and the prizes she earned, go to her head, explaining her SpoiledBrat tendencies. And she knows how her reputation prevents her from having friends or getting close to her siblings.
9th Oct '17 1:46:20 AM rufusluciusivan
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* AscendedExtra: In the show, Dr. Lopez is TheGhost, as Clyde only talks to her by phone. In this fanfic, not only does she appear in person, but she's also one of the main characters.
8th Oct '17 11:58:23 PM BoukenDutch
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* ADayInTheLimelight: The sessions with Dr. Lopez allow to hear in great details the thoughts of some characters about the whole situation, as well as the events that happened during the show in general. We hear Lynn Sr.'s and Rita's thoughts in Chapter 11, Lori's in Chapter 12, Lisa's in Chapter 13, Leni's in Chapter 14, Luan's in Chapter 15, Luna's in Chapter 16, and Lynn's in Chapter 19.

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* ADayInTheLimelight: The sessions with Dr. Lopez allow to hear in great details the thoughts of some characters about the whole situation, as well as the events that happened during the show in general. We hear Lynn Sr.'s and Rita's thoughts in Chapter 11, Lori's in Chapter 12, Lisa's in Chapter 13, Leni's in Chapter 14, Luan's in Chapter 15, Luna's in Chapter 16, and Lynn's in Chapter 19.19, Lola & Lana both in Chapter 20, and finally Lucy will get one in Chapter 21.
19th Sep '17 2:52:05 PM mangamanic
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** Their is also implications by both Lynn Sr and Jr that they wish Lincoln shared their interests so they could bond with him more easily.
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