History Fanfic / SecretWar

6th Feb '17 10:44:14 PM Ferot_Dreadnaught
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* ExpositionIntuition: Attelus' genre savviness tends to come off allot like this but it is mostly subverted in that he isn't always right.

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* ExpositionIntuition: Attelus' genre savviness tends to come off allot like this but it is mostly subverted in that he isn't always right.



* GenreSavvy: almost everyone but medicae Feuilt is by far the most genre savvy.
** Glaitis, perhaps even more so than Feuilt.



* HonourBeforeReason: as stated in the above GenreSavvy.



* RoaringRampageofRevenge: Averted (so far) [[spoiler: Attelus intended to do this to Glaitis to get revenge on Elandria's death, but Karmen Kons has convinced him not to. She knows they need Glaitis alive still and she is GenreSavvy enough to know that it's exactly what Glaitis wants.]]
* SecretTestOfCharacter: Attelus being an apprentice Assassin is always being tested but usually he is GenreSavvy enough to know it [[spoiler: but his BadDreams and MindRape during his recovery are now revealed to follow this trope.]]

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* RoaringRampageofRevenge: Averted (so far) [[spoiler: Attelus intended to do this to Glaitis to get revenge on Elandria's death, but Karmen Kons has convinced him not to. She knows they need Glaitis alive still and she is GenreSavvy enough to know knows that it's exactly what Glaitis wants.]]
* SecretTestOfCharacter: Attelus being an apprentice Assassin is always being tested but usually he is GenreSavvy savvy enough to know it [[spoiler: but his BadDreams and MindRape during his recovery are now revealed to follow this trope.]]
5th Nov '16 6:44:08 PM dlchen145
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* {{Badass}}: almost every character shows some badassery in one way or another but the one of the most outright has to be Glaitis [[spoiler: who single handily takes on both Wesley and Brutis Bones, kills Wesley, the Mimic, a whole bunch of Hammers. Then injures both Arlathan and Torris badly before Garrakson has to perform a HeroicSacrifice to finally, permanently take her down. Despite seeing all of this Attelus is still convinced he'd take her down if they had fought one on one.]]
** Attelus manages to kill [[spoiler: three! Count that THREE, Space Marines! Sure, he's now [[BadassAbnormal enhanced]], [[CombatPragmatist cheats]] and catches them off guard each time, but frigging hell.]]
4th Nov '16 3:29:20 AM Benjayman
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* {{Badass}}: almost every character shows some badassery in one way or another but the one of the most outright has to be Glaitis [[spoiler: who single handily takes on both Wesley and Brutis Bones, kills Wesley, the Mimic, a whole bunch of Hammers. Then injures both Arlathan and Torris badly before Garrakson has to perform a HeroicSacrifice to finally, permanently take her down. Despite seeing all of this Attelus is still convinced he'd take her down if they had fought one on one.]]
** Attelus manages to kill [[spoiler: three! Count that THREE, Space Marines! Sure, he's now [[BadassAbnormal enhanced]], [[CombatPragmatist cheats]] and catches them off guard each time, but frigging hell.]]
23rd Oct '16 7:53:16 PM dlchen145
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* {{Badass}}: almost every character shows some badassery in one way or another but the one of the most outright has to be Glaitis [[spoiler: who single handily takes on both Wesley and Brutis Bones, kills Wesley, the Mimic, a whole bunch of Hammers. Then injures both Arlathan and Torris badly before Garrakson has to perform a HeroicSacrifice to finally, permanently take her down. Despite seeing all of this Attelus is still convinced he'd take her down if they had fought one on one.]]
** Attelus manages to kill [[spoiler: three! Count that THREE, Space Marines! Sure, he's now [[BadassAbnormal enhanced]], [[CombatPragmatist cheats]] and catches them off guard each time, but frigging hell.]]
23rd Jul '16 8:07:24 PM Benjayman
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* EntitledBastard: [[spoiler: Serghar Kaltos]] ''REALLY'' seems to believe wholeheartedly that Attelus Kaltos ''has'' to work for him on the mere fact that he's Attelus' [[spoiler: father.]] And is genuinely sickened he has to resort to blackmail and threats to force Attelus to, in his words, "co-operate."
23rd Jul '16 7:49:28 PM Benjayman
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* TheSociopath: It's obvious now that [[spoiler: Serghar Kaltos]] is completely and utterly irredeemably this. [[spoiler: That Etuarq had told the truth about him in his [[BreakThemByTalking speech.]]

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* TheSociopath: It's obvious now that [[spoiler: Serghar Kaltos]] is completely and utterly irredeemably this. this and [[spoiler: That Etuarq had told the truth about him in his [[BreakThemByTalking speech.]]]]]]
23rd Jul '16 7:11:54 PM Benjayman
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* ArchnemesisDad: Serghar Kaltos.


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* CurbStompBattle: Attelus gets on the wrong end of two [[spoiler: in Secret War at the hands of the Mimic. In Upon Blood Sands his father, Serghar Kaltos.]]
17th Jul '16 2:30:43 PM Discar
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** He is also a OutsideContextVillain, for Attelus, and the reader, anyway.

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** He is also a OutsideContextVillain, an OutsideContextProblem, for Attelus, and the reader, anyway.
18th Jun '16 12:44:59 AM Benjayman
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--> "Because Elandria," I sighed, "I don't want you to die, it's because I know what you have been through."\\

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--> '''Attelus:''' "Because Elandria," Elandria. I sighed, "I don't want you to die, it's because I know what you have been through."\\



-->[[spoiler: '''Attelus-''' "This is it!" I bellowed as I drew back my sword. "This is for all the people you've killed! This is for Callague and Jarvus and Olinthre!"]]

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-->[[spoiler: '''Attelus-''' '''Attelus:''' "This is it!" I bellowed as I drew back my sword. "This is for all the people you've killed! This is for Callague and Jarvus and Olinthre!"]]



-->[[spoiler: '''Attelus-''' "This is for all the innocents you've slaughtered and sacrificed! This is for Taryst! This is for Castella! And most of all, this is for Elandria!"]]

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-->[[spoiler: '''Attelus-''' '''Attelus:''' "This is for all the innocents you've slaughtered and sacrificed! This is for Taryst! This is for Castella! And most of all, this is for Elandria!"]]



--> '''Attelus-''' I'm not a good person. So tell me what means more, Marcel? Someone who's inherently good, doing good? Or someone who's inherently evil doing good, despite their ingrained nature?

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--> '''Attelus-''' '''Attelus:''' I'm not a good person. So tell me what means more, Marcel? Someone who's inherently good, doing good? Or someone who's inherently evil doing good, despite their ingrained nature?



-->[[VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins '''Attelus-''' "Shame about the face."]]

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-->[[VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins '''Attelus-''' '''Attelus:''' "Shame about the face."]]



-->[[spoiler: '''Attelus-''' I don't know if you had thought I had forgotten about Taryst's little psyker cadre or you had forgotten, but this, this I had actually seen coming this I knew was coming, yes.]]

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-->[[spoiler: '''Attelus-''' '''Attelus:''' I don't know if you had thought I had forgotten about Taryst's little psyker cadre or you had forgotten, but this, this I had actually seen coming this I knew was coming, yes.]]



* CloudCuckooLander; Castella Lethe is knee deep in this trope.

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* CloudCuckooLander; CloudCuckooLander: Castella Lethe is knee deep in this trope.



* CrowningMomentofHeartwarming [[spoiler: when Attelus finally manages to confess his affection for Elandria.]]

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* CrowningMomentofHeartwarming CrowningMomentofHeartwarming: [[spoiler: when Attelus finally manages to confess his affection for Elandria.]]



* FateWorseThanDeath; apparently if you betray Glaitis your fate won't be pretty.

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* FateWorseThanDeath; FateWorseThanDeath: apparently if you betray Glaitis your fate won't be pretty.



** He was also TooDumbtoLive; also as lampshaded by Attelus

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** He was also TooDumbtoLive; TooDumbtoLive, also as lampshaded by Attelus



-->Attelus: "Do. You. Have. Any idea the crap. I have been through to find you!"

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-->Attelus: -->'''Attelus:''' "Do. You. Have. Any idea the crap. I have been through to find you!"



---> '''Attelus-''' [[WebVideo/BumReviews Pretentious, I can almost smell the pretentiousness in the air]].

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---> '''Attelus-''' '''Attelus:''' [[WebVideo/BumReviews Pretentious, I can almost smell the pretentiousness in the air]].



---> '''Attelus-''' No it means what it means “some semblance,” I’ll think of something, I’ m…Adaptable.
---> '''Elandria-''' [[VideoGame/UnchartedDrakesFortune Adaptable? Is that what you are calling it now?]]

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---> '''Attelus-''' '''Attelus:''' No it means what it means “some semblance,” I’ll think of something, I’ m…Adaptable.
---> '''Elandria-''' '''Elandria:''' [[VideoGame/UnchartedDrakesFortune Adaptable? Is that what you are calling it now?]]



--->'''Attelus-''' “well that's anti climactic, who the hell are you anyway?”

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--->'''Attelus-''' --->'''Attelus:''' “well that's anti climactic, who the hell are you anyway?”



--->'''Attelus-''' “I must know.”

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--->'''Attelus-''' --->'''Attelus:''' “I must know.”



--->'''Attelus-''' “Hmm, okay.”

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--->'''Attelus-''' --->'''Attelus:''' “Hmm, okay.”



--> "Tathe was his name and he actually had a son working inside the regiment as a commissar, apparently his father forced him into the scholar progneium when he was young. Delan Tathe was his name he was an arrogant little punk, but very skilled with a blade, you kind of remind me of him actually."

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--> '''Olinthre:''' "Tathe was his name and he actually had a son working inside the regiment as a commissar, apparently his father forced him into the scholar progneium when he was young. Delan Tathe was his name he was an arrogant little punk, but very skilled with a blade, you kind of remind me of him actually."



---> Darrance: She[[spoiler: was the best of us.]]

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---> Darrance: '''Darrance:''' She[[spoiler: was the best of us.]]



--> '''Arlathan-''' "I am [[spoiler: detective Arlathan Xathrian Karkin]] of the Omnartus Magistratum and I'm on your side! I'm on your side!"

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--> '''Arlathan-''' '''Arlathan:''' "I am [[spoiler: detective Arlathan Xathrian Karkin]] of the Omnartus Magistratum and I'm on your side! I'm on your side!"
11th Jun '16 8:56:21 PM Benjayman
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-->[[spoiler: "This is it!" I bellowed as I drew back my sword. "This is for all the people you've killed! This is for Callague and Jarvus and Olinthre!"]]
-->[[spoiler:The lightning continued to consume me, to crackle and weave around the shield, but there was no resistance. I ran without hindrance and in the last few metres I lunged into the air.]]
-->[[spoiler:"This is for all the innocents you've slaughtered and sacrificed! This is for Taryst! This is for Castella! And most of all, this is for Elandria!"]]

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-->[[spoiler: '''Attelus-''' "This is it!" I bellowed as I drew back my sword. "This is for all the people you've killed! This is for Callague and Jarvus and Olinthre!"]]
-->[[spoiler:The -->[[spoiler: The lightning continued to consume me, to crackle and weave around the shield, but there was no resistance. I ran without hindrance and in the last few metres I lunged into the air.]]
-->[[spoiler:"This -->[[spoiler: '''Attelus-''' "This is for all the innocents you've slaughtered and sacrificed! This is for Taryst! This is for Castella! And most of all, this is for Elandria!"]]



--> I'm not a good person. So tell me what means more, Marcel? Someone who's inherently good, doing good? Or someone who's inherently evil doing good, despite their ingrained nature?

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--> '''Attelus-''' I'm not a good person. So tell me what means more, Marcel? Someone who's inherently good, doing good? Or someone who's inherently evil doing good, despite their ingrained nature?



-->[[VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins "Shame about the face."]]

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-->[[VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins '''Attelus-''' "Shame about the face."]]



-->[[spoiler: I don't know if you had thought I had forgotten about Taryst's little psyker cadre or you had forgotten, but this, this I had actually seen coming this I knew was coming, yes.]]

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-->[[spoiler: '''Attelus-''' I don't know if you had thought I had forgotten about Taryst's little psyker cadre or you had forgotten, but this, this I had actually seen coming this I knew was coming, yes.]]



* ChekhovsGunman: a few; medicae Feiult, Major Olinthre and perhaps colonel Barhurst.

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* ChekhovsGunman: a few; few: medicae Feiult, Major Olinthre and perhaps colonel Barhurst.



---> Attelus: [[WebVideo/BumReviews Pretentious, I can almost smell the pretentiousness in the air]].

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---> Attelus: '''Attelus-''' [[WebVideo/BumReviews Pretentious, I can almost smell the pretentiousness in the air]].



--->Attelus: No it means what it means “some semblance,” I’ll think of something, I’ m…Adaptable.
--->Elandria: [[VideoGame/UnchartedDrakesFortune Adaptable? Is that what you are calling it now?]]

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--->Attelus: ---> '''Attelus-''' No it means what it means “some semblance,” I’ll think of something, I’ m…Adaptable.
--->Elandria: ---> '''Elandria-''' [[VideoGame/UnchartedDrakesFortune Adaptable? Is that what you are calling it now?]]



--->'''Attelus:''' “well that's anti climactic, who the hell are you anyway?”

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--->'''Attelus:''' --->'''Attelus-''' “well that's anti climactic, who the hell are you anyway?”



--->'''Attelus:''' “I must know.”

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--->'''Attelus:''' --->'''Attelus-''' “I must know.”



--->'''Attelus:''' “Hmm, okay.”

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--->'''Attelus:''' --->'''Attelus-''' “Hmm, okay.”



--> "I am [[spoiler: detective Arlathan Xathrian Karkin]] of the Omnartus Magistratum and I'm on your side! I'm on your side!"

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--> '''Arlathan-''' "I am [[spoiler: detective Arlathan Xathrian Karkin]] of the Omnartus Magistratum and I'm on your side! I'm on your side!"
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