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25th Apr '16 5:57:54 PM TheRoguePenguin
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[[index]]A ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' fan fiction from the perspective of a young assassin apprentice "Secret War" has drawn inspiration from many sources but the most prolific being the Literature/{{Ravenor}} series by Dan Abnett.

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[[index]]A A ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' fan fiction from the perspective of a young assassin apprentice "Secret War" has drawn inspiration from many sources but the most prolific being the Literature/{{Ravenor}} series by Dan Abnett.





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23rd Apr '16 1:02:02 AM Tron80
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* AnguishedDeclarationofLove: although the word "love" isn't used Attelus to Elandria:
--> "Because Elandria," I sighed, "I don't want you to die, it's because I know what you have been through."
--> I paused trying to swallow back the lump in my throat, "and I know that you never had any choice in the matter, no choice to be what you wanted to be, to do what you wanted to do. That-that any real choice in your life was stolen from you when you were so young a-and you didn't deserve that Elandria, no one does, I-I want you to live so you could one day have your own life to escape this crap, to, to."
-->My left hand clenched into a tight ball while the right gripped my sword's hilt all the harder, "and that maybe in your new life that I'd be able to be part of it, that I'd like be by your side to help you through I-I."

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* AnguishedDeclarationofLove: AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: although the word "love" isn't used Attelus to Elandria:
--> "Because Elandria," I sighed, "I don't want you to die, it's because I know what you have been through."
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I paused trying to swallow back the lump in my throat, "and I know that you never had any choice in the matter, no choice to be what you wanted to be, to do what you wanted to do. That-that any real choice in your life was stolen from you when you were so young a-and you didn't deserve that Elandria, no one does, I-I want you to live so you could one day have your own life to escape this crap, to, to."
-->My
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My
left hand clenched into a tight ball while the right gripped my sword's hilt all the harder, "and that maybe in your new life that I'd be able to be part of it, that I'd like be by your side to help you through I-I."



* AnyoneCanDie: y'know a story where anyone can die when [[spoiler: four out of five of the characters first introduced wind up dead, (the only one still alive is Attelus who's perspective it's FROM) so far of the main cast and [[MauveShirt MauveShirts]] killed off in order are, Taryst, Elandria, Olinthre, Feuilt, Castella, Wesley, The Mimic, Garrakson and Glaitis and that's excluding the deaths relevant to the plot that happened before the story started, Amanda Heartsa, Barhurst and Edracian]]

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* AnyoneCanDie: y'know You know a story where anyone can die when [[spoiler: four out of five of the characters first introduced wind up dead, (the only one still alive is Attelus who's perspective it's FROM) so far of the main cast and [[MauveShirt MauveShirts]] killed off in order are, Taryst, Elandria, Olinthre, Feuilt, Castella, Wesley, The Mimic, Garrakson and Glaitis and that's excluding the deaths relevant to the plot that happened before the story started, Amanda Heartsa, Barhurst and Edracian]]
10th Apr '16 11:10:34 PM Benjayman
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters


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10th Apr '16 11:07:54 PM Benjayman
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters
9th Apr '16 3:42:03 AM Benjayman
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-> "I will tell you everything soon, I swear I will, but I will say this. This is reality. This is the era we live in. There is only war, Adelana. There may not have been war on Omnartus, nor most worlds in the Calixis sector. But it is always somewhere. It has found you, I'm sorry to say. As it had found me. As it has found countless upon count of others. Trillions before us and trillions of more to come. I'm sorry, so, so sorry."

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-> "I will tell you everything soon, I swear I will, but I will say this. This is reality. This is the era we live in. There is only war, Adelana. There may not have been war on Omnartus, nor most worlds in the Calixis sector. But it is always somewhere. It has found you, I'm sorry to say. As it had found me. As it has found countless upon count of others. Trillions before us and trillions of more to come. I'm sorry, so, so sorry."
9th Apr '16 3:21:29 AM Benjayman
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The sequel has began and a work in progress and is here: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10954011/1/Secret-War-Upon-Blood-Sands here]]


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The sequel has began and a work in progress and is here: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10954011/1/Secret-War-Upon-Blood-Sands here]]

Secret War: Upon Blood Sands.]]



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* CombatPragmatist: Attelus cheats like all hell when he can. This has lessened as his BloodKnight tendencies began to shine through. [[spoiler: Karmen Kons takes this philosophy to it's logical extreme.
8th Apr '16 11:24:51 PM Benjayman
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-> "I will tell you everything soon, I swear I will, but I will say this. This is reality, this is the era we live in, there is only war, Adelana. There may not have been war on Omnartus, nor most worlds in the Calixis sector but it is always somewhere. It has found you, I'm sorry to say, as it had found me, as it has found countless upon of others. Trillions before us and more to come. I'm sorry, so, so sorry."

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-> "I will tell you everything soon, I swear I will, but I will say this. This is reality, this reality. This is the era we live in, there in. There is only war, Adelana. There may not have been war on Omnartus, nor most worlds in the Calixis sector but sector. But it is always somewhere. It has found you, I'm sorry to say, as say. As it had found me, as me. As it has found countless upon count of others. Trillions before us and trillions of more to come. I'm sorry, so, so sorry."
8th Apr '16 10:32:53 PM Benjayman
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[[caption-width-right:250:"My jaw set slightly at his mention of “faith.” Faith was an utterly idiotic concept that never, ever, fit within the realms of reality..." Attelus Kaltos.]]

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[[caption-width-right:250:"My jaw set slightly at his mention of “faith.” Faith was an utterly idiotic concept that never, ever, fit within the realms of reality..." [[quoteright:350:http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/garraksonelandriaattelustorris.jpg]]
[[caption-width-right:350:From left to right: Jeurat Garrakson, Elandria,
Attelus Kaltos.Kaltos and Marcel Torris. Being badasses.]]
-> "I will tell you everything soon, I swear I will, but I will say this. This is reality, this is the era we live in, there is only war, Adelana. There may not have been war on Omnartus, nor most worlds in the Calixis sector but it is always somewhere. It has found you, I'm sorry to say, as it had found me, as it has found countless upon of others. Trillions before us and more to come. I'm sorry, so, so sorry."
-->-- Attelus Kaltos



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8th Apr '16 10:20:18 PM Benjayman
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8th Apr '16 9:50:04 PM Benjayman
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* PowersDoTheFighting: The [[fight against Edracian in a nutshell.]]

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* PowersDoTheFighting: The [[fight fight against Edracian [[spoiler: Inquisitor Edracian]] in a nutshell.]]
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