History Fanfic / SecretWar

23rd Jul '16 8:07:24 PM Benjayman
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* EntitledBastard: [[spoiler: Serghar Kaltos]] ''REALLY'' seems to believe wholeheartedly that Attelus Kaltos ''has'' to work for him on the mere fact that he's Attelus' [[spoiler: father.]] And is genuinely sickened he has to resort to blackmail and threats to force Attelus to, in his words, "co-operate."
23rd Jul '16 7:49:28 PM Benjayman
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* TheSociopath: It's obvious now that [[spoiler: Serghar Kaltos]] is completely and utterly irredeemably this. [[spoiler: That Etuarq had told the truth about him in his [[BreakThemByTalking speech.]]

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* TheSociopath: It's obvious now that [[spoiler: Serghar Kaltos]] is completely and utterly irredeemably this. this and [[spoiler: That Etuarq had told the truth about him in his [[BreakThemByTalking speech.]]]]]]
23rd Jul '16 7:11:54 PM Benjayman
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* ArchnemesisDad: Serghar Kaltos.


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* CurbStompBattle: Attelus gets on the wrong end of two [[spoiler: in Secret War at the hands of the Mimic. In Upon Blood Sands his father, Serghar Kaltos.]]
17th Jul '16 2:30:43 PM Discar
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** He is also a OutsideContextVillain, for Attelus, and the reader, anyway.

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** He is also a OutsideContextVillain, an OutsideContextProblem, for Attelus, and the reader, anyway.
18th Jun '16 12:44:59 AM Benjayman
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--> "Because Elandria," I sighed, "I don't want you to die, it's because I know what you have been through."\\

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--> '''Attelus:''' "Because Elandria," Elandria. I sighed, "I don't want you to die, it's because I know what you have been through."\\



-->[[spoiler: '''Attelus-''' "This is it!" I bellowed as I drew back my sword. "This is for all the people you've killed! This is for Callague and Jarvus and Olinthre!"]]

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-->[[spoiler: '''Attelus-''' '''Attelus:''' "This is it!" I bellowed as I drew back my sword. "This is for all the people you've killed! This is for Callague and Jarvus and Olinthre!"]]



-->[[spoiler: '''Attelus-''' "This is for all the innocents you've slaughtered and sacrificed! This is for Taryst! This is for Castella! And most of all, this is for Elandria!"]]

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-->[[spoiler: '''Attelus-''' '''Attelus:''' "This is for all the innocents you've slaughtered and sacrificed! This is for Taryst! This is for Castella! And most of all, this is for Elandria!"]]



--> '''Attelus-''' I'm not a good person. So tell me what means more, Marcel? Someone who's inherently good, doing good? Or someone who's inherently evil doing good, despite their ingrained nature?

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--> '''Attelus-''' '''Attelus:''' I'm not a good person. So tell me what means more, Marcel? Someone who's inherently good, doing good? Or someone who's inherently evil doing good, despite their ingrained nature?



-->[[VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins '''Attelus-''' "Shame about the face."]]

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-->[[VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins '''Attelus-''' '''Attelus:''' "Shame about the face."]]



-->[[spoiler: '''Attelus-''' I don't know if you had thought I had forgotten about Taryst's little psyker cadre or you had forgotten, but this, this I had actually seen coming this I knew was coming, yes.]]

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-->[[spoiler: '''Attelus-''' '''Attelus:''' I don't know if you had thought I had forgotten about Taryst's little psyker cadre or you had forgotten, but this, this I had actually seen coming this I knew was coming, yes.]]



* CloudCuckooLander; Castella Lethe is knee deep in this trope.

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* CloudCuckooLander; CloudCuckooLander: Castella Lethe is knee deep in this trope.



* CrowningMomentofHeartwarming [[spoiler: when Attelus finally manages to confess his affection for Elandria.]]

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* CrowningMomentofHeartwarming CrowningMomentofHeartwarming: [[spoiler: when Attelus finally manages to confess his affection for Elandria.]]



* FateWorseThanDeath; apparently if you betray Glaitis your fate won't be pretty.

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* FateWorseThanDeath; FateWorseThanDeath: apparently if you betray Glaitis your fate won't be pretty.



** He was also TooDumbtoLive; also as lampshaded by Attelus

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** He was also TooDumbtoLive; TooDumbtoLive, also as lampshaded by Attelus



-->Attelus: "Do. You. Have. Any idea the crap. I have been through to find you!"

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-->Attelus: -->'''Attelus:''' "Do. You. Have. Any idea the crap. I have been through to find you!"



---> '''Attelus-''' [[WebVideo/BumReviews Pretentious, I can almost smell the pretentiousness in the air]].

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---> '''Attelus-''' '''Attelus:''' [[WebVideo/BumReviews Pretentious, I can almost smell the pretentiousness in the air]].



---> '''Attelus-''' No it means what it means “some semblance,” I’ll think of something, I’ m…Adaptable.
---> '''Elandria-''' [[VideoGame/UnchartedDrakesFortune Adaptable? Is that what you are calling it now?]]

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---> '''Attelus-''' '''Attelus:''' No it means what it means “some semblance,” I’ll think of something, I’ m…Adaptable.
---> '''Elandria-''' '''Elandria:''' [[VideoGame/UnchartedDrakesFortune Adaptable? Is that what you are calling it now?]]



--->'''Attelus-''' “well that's anti climactic, who the hell are you anyway?”

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--->'''Attelus-''' --->'''Attelus:''' “well that's anti climactic, who the hell are you anyway?”



--->'''Attelus-''' “I must know.”

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--->'''Attelus-''' --->'''Attelus:''' “I must know.”



--->'''Attelus-''' “Hmm, okay.”

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--->'''Attelus-''' --->'''Attelus:''' “Hmm, okay.”



--> "Tathe was his name and he actually had a son working inside the regiment as a commissar, apparently his father forced him into the scholar progneium when he was young. Delan Tathe was his name he was an arrogant little punk, but very skilled with a blade, you kind of remind me of him actually."

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--> '''Olinthre:''' "Tathe was his name and he actually had a son working inside the regiment as a commissar, apparently his father forced him into the scholar progneium when he was young. Delan Tathe was his name he was an arrogant little punk, but very skilled with a blade, you kind of remind me of him actually."



---> Darrance: She[[spoiler: was the best of us.]]

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---> Darrance: '''Darrance:''' She[[spoiler: was the best of us.]]



--> '''Arlathan-''' "I am [[spoiler: detective Arlathan Xathrian Karkin]] of the Omnartus Magistratum and I'm on your side! I'm on your side!"

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--> '''Arlathan-''' '''Arlathan:''' "I am [[spoiler: detective Arlathan Xathrian Karkin]] of the Omnartus Magistratum and I'm on your side! I'm on your side!"
11th Jun '16 8:56:21 PM Benjayman
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-->[[spoiler: "This is it!" I bellowed as I drew back my sword. "This is for all the people you've killed! This is for Callague and Jarvus and Olinthre!"]]
-->[[spoiler:The lightning continued to consume me, to crackle and weave around the shield, but there was no resistance. I ran without hindrance and in the last few metres I lunged into the air.]]
-->[[spoiler:"This is for all the innocents you've slaughtered and sacrificed! This is for Taryst! This is for Castella! And most of all, this is for Elandria!"]]

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-->[[spoiler: '''Attelus-''' "This is it!" I bellowed as I drew back my sword. "This is for all the people you've killed! This is for Callague and Jarvus and Olinthre!"]]
-->[[spoiler:The -->[[spoiler: The lightning continued to consume me, to crackle and weave around the shield, but there was no resistance. I ran without hindrance and in the last few metres I lunged into the air.]]
-->[[spoiler:"This -->[[spoiler: '''Attelus-''' "This is for all the innocents you've slaughtered and sacrificed! This is for Taryst! This is for Castella! And most of all, this is for Elandria!"]]



--> I'm not a good person. So tell me what means more, Marcel? Someone who's inherently good, doing good? Or someone who's inherently evil doing good, despite their ingrained nature?

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--> '''Attelus-''' I'm not a good person. So tell me what means more, Marcel? Someone who's inherently good, doing good? Or someone who's inherently evil doing good, despite their ingrained nature?



-->[[VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins "Shame about the face."]]

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-->[[VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins '''Attelus-''' "Shame about the face."]]



-->[[spoiler: I don't know if you had thought I had forgotten about Taryst's little psyker cadre or you had forgotten, but this, this I had actually seen coming this I knew was coming, yes.]]

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-->[[spoiler: '''Attelus-''' I don't know if you had thought I had forgotten about Taryst's little psyker cadre or you had forgotten, but this, this I had actually seen coming this I knew was coming, yes.]]



* ChekhovsGunman: a few; medicae Feiult, Major Olinthre and perhaps colonel Barhurst.

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* ChekhovsGunman: a few; few: medicae Feiult, Major Olinthre and perhaps colonel Barhurst.



---> Attelus: [[WebVideo/BumReviews Pretentious, I can almost smell the pretentiousness in the air]].

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---> Attelus: '''Attelus-''' [[WebVideo/BumReviews Pretentious, I can almost smell the pretentiousness in the air]].



--->Attelus: No it means what it means “some semblance,” I’ll think of something, I’ m…Adaptable.
--->Elandria: [[VideoGame/UnchartedDrakesFortune Adaptable? Is that what you are calling it now?]]

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--->Attelus: ---> '''Attelus-''' No it means what it means “some semblance,” I’ll think of something, I’ m…Adaptable.
--->Elandria: ---> '''Elandria-''' [[VideoGame/UnchartedDrakesFortune Adaptable? Is that what you are calling it now?]]



--->'''Attelus:''' “well that's anti climactic, who the hell are you anyway?”

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--->'''Attelus:''' --->'''Attelus-''' “well that's anti climactic, who the hell are you anyway?”



--->'''Attelus:''' “I must know.”

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--->'''Attelus:''' --->'''Attelus-''' “I must know.”



--->'''Attelus:''' “Hmm, okay.”

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--->'''Attelus:''' --->'''Attelus-''' “Hmm, okay.”



--> "I am [[spoiler: detective Arlathan Xathrian Karkin]] of the Omnartus Magistratum and I'm on your side! I'm on your side!"

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--> '''Arlathan-''' "I am [[spoiler: detective Arlathan Xathrian Karkin]] of the Omnartus Magistratum and I'm on your side! I'm on your side!"
11th Jun '16 4:25:40 AM Benjayman
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* KillAndReplace: [[spoiler: [[ShapeShifting The Mimic]] does this to Taryst, allowing [[ManipulativeBitch Glaitis]] to control his organisation through proxy.]]
10th Jun '16 3:38:43 AM Benjayman
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* TokenReligiousTeammate: Castella Lethe for Glaitis' group, while she's very much CloudCuckooLander. She's also the TokenGoodTeamMate, being one of the most unambiguously nice people on the team. This is even [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by Darranace during her[[spoiler: impromptu funeral.]]
---> Darrance: She[[spoiler: was the best of us.]]
9th Jun '16 7:23:25 AM Benjayman
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* VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler: Glaitis has an epic one which ends in the deaths of the Mimic, Wesley, Garrakson and herself.]]


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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: [[spoiler: poor Attelus dances to [[ManBehindTheMan Etuarq's]] tune very, very well.]]
* VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler: Glaitis has an epic one which ends in the deaths of the Mimic, Wesley, Garrakson and herself.]]
29th May '16 10:21:02 PM Benjayman
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Attelus gives one to [[KnightInSourArmor Marcel Torris]] in Upon Blood Sands. It also a [[ShoutOut reference]] to [[VideoGame/TheElderScrollsVSkyrim Paarthunax's.]]

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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Attelus gives one to [[KnightInSourArmor Marcel Torris]] in Upon Blood Sands. It It's also a [[ShoutOut reference]] to [[VideoGame/TheElderScrollsVSkyrim Paarthunax's.]]
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