History Fanfic / PartiallyKissedHero

23rd Mar '16 8:28:18 PM Willbyr
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** This seems to be a theme for PL. His earlier fic {{Chunin Exam Day}} had essentially the exact same things used for wooing women, just flip 'really shiny things' with 'really great massages, hand-made clothes, and really good food'.

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** This seems to be a theme for PL. His earlier fic {{Chunin Exam Day}} ''FanFic/ChuninExamDay'' had essentially the exact same things used for wooing women, just flip 'really shiny things' with 'really great massages, hand-made clothes, and really good food'.
22nd Mar '16 3:44:39 PM UgunsGrekaFans
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** Mastergandalf of Das Sporking is trying their hand on it now [[http://das-sporking.livejournal.com/1261613.html Partially Kissed Hero.]]
15th Mar '16 12:48:10 PM FF32
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** This is kind of awkward, too, because from an exterior to the story standpoint Luna is by far the most merciless and vicious character in the story; more so than any of the [[DesignatedVillian designated villains]] or Harry himself.

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** This is kind of awkward, too, because from an exterior to the story standpoint Luna is by far the most merciless and vicious character in the story; more so than any of the [[DesignatedVillian [[DesignatedVillain designated villains]] or Harry himself.
22nd Sep '15 5:59:29 PM Night
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* HowUnscientific: Chapter 72. Trelawney pushes the space programs of Earth to colonize the moon, Mars, and other worlds in the solar system with dryad trees to make them effectively invulnerable (as as long as their trees are safe, they can't die) with Orion-type Nuclear pulse propulsion ships that can get out to Pluto and back within a year.

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* HowUnscientific: Chapter 72. Trelawney pushes the space programs of Earth to colonize the moon, Moon, Mars, and other worlds in the solar system with dryad trees to make them effectively invulnerable (as as long as their trees are safe, they can't die) with Orion-type Nuclear pulse propulsion ships that can get out to Pluto and back within a year.



* InformedAbility: Dumbledore, who is supposed to be a greater threat to Harry than Voldemort, the most powerful and dangerous and informed wizard on the planet, is fooled into believing a "Colonel Sanders" among other Muggle advertisement icons are actually dark wizards working to undermine his power. Although YMMV as it is stated he stopped paying any attention to the muggle world in his youth as he felt they had nothing to teach him, and with even the cannon magical world showing a impressive gap in knowledge about muggles...

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* InformedAbility: Dumbledore, who is supposed to be a greater threat to Harry than Voldemort, the most powerful and dangerous and informed wizard on the planet, is fooled into believing a "Colonel Sanders" among other Muggle advertisement icons are actually dark wizards working to undermine his power. Although YMMV as it He is stated he stopped paying any attention to the muggle world in his youth as he felt they had nothing to teach him, and with be incredibly intelligent, but even the cannon magical world showing a impressive gap in knowledge about muggles...normal behavior acts like a moron.



* LovePotion: Used by Luna as part of a potion turn a hundred witches into Harrys immortal dryad sex slaves, [[SingleTargetSexuality only hot for him thanks to the fact his hair is dropped into the potion,]], called '' Bride's Delight.'' although as the dryads can drop out of service any time they wish sex slave may be over stating this.

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* LovePotion: Used by Luna as part of a potion turn a hundred witches into Harrys immortal dryad sex slaves, [[SingleTargetSexuality only hot for him thanks to the fact his hair is dropped into the potion,]], called '' Bride's Delight.'' although as Combined with the dryads can drop out of service any time Unctuous Unction which means they wish sex slave may be over stating this.all believe Harry is the source of all goodness, light, and truth, and even if there was a technical way out they wouldn't ever take it.


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** This is kind of awkward, too, because from an exterior to the story standpoint Luna is by far the most merciless and vicious character in the story; more so than any of the [[DesignatedVillian designated villains]] or Harry himself.


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** Or the mind rape. Or the effective slavery. Or the initiating the end of human civilization.
23rd Jul '15 6:10:20 AM Night
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*** It has also been suggested that the same sequence incorporates shots at the ''actual'' HarryPotter books, due to some of the complaints being similar to those in the author's notes. The irony of '''that''' is something well beyond merely lost on the author.
14th Jul '15 7:00:19 PM TheGreatSkrond
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** Ron has his failings pointed out in front of the entire Divination class.

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** [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Ron has his failings pointed out in front of the entire Divination class.]]
18th Dec '14 1:24:03 PM MagBas
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* LovePotion: Used by Luna as part of a potion turn a hundred witches into Harrys immortal dryad sex slaves, [[SingleTargetSexuality only hot for him thanks to the fact his hair is dropped into the potion,]], called ''[[UnfortunateImplications Bride's Delight.]]'' although as the dryads can drop out of service any time they wish sex slave may be over stating this.

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* LovePotion: Used by Luna as part of a potion turn a hundred witches into Harrys immortal dryad sex slaves, [[SingleTargetSexuality only hot for him thanks to the fact his hair is dropped into the potion,]], called ''[[UnfortunateImplications '' Bride's Delight.]]'' '' although as the dryads can drop out of service any time they wish sex slave may be over stating this.
9th Sep '14 9:14:58 PM cliffc999
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** It also has some surprisingly competent and thought-provoking worldbuilding -- intermixed with the hilariously WTF worldbuilding, admitted.
28th Jul '14 12:56:49 PM Pannic
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** At one point the narration exposits on how there are a number of "Boy Who Lived" books in-universe, which are clearly a dig at Mary Sue Harry Potter fics. The irony appears to be lost on the author.
9th Jun '14 7:12:37 PM Pannic
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* RonTheDeathEater: Well, you have Dumbledore and Snape presented as cartoonishly evil. The TropeNamer himself is presented as a crude waste of space who's "proud of his own ignorance."
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