History Fanfic / MyLittleUnicorn

18th Mar '17 3:54:37 PM N.Harmonik
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** Behold the [[http://www.projectafterforums.com/index.php?showtopic=5693 MST of]] [[WebAnimation/DeathBattle Death Battle: Twilight VS Lightning Dawn]]!
14th Mar '17 11:43:41 AM N.Harmonik
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** In Ace Ray's debut chapter, Twilight told Spike it wouldn't be right to force the ex-Wonderbolt to think like others in order to cure his "attitude problem". Guess what happens in Ace Ray's second appearance (in the original version).

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** In Ace Ray's debut chapter, Twilight told Spike it wouldn't be right to force the ex-Wonderbolt to think like others in order to cure his "attitude problem". Guess what happens in Ace Ray's second appearance (in the original version).version)?



* AnIcePerson:
** Some of Dementia's attacks invoke this.
** Frosteye from ''My Brave Pony: Star Fleet Magic III''.
14th Mar '17 11:41:43 AM N.Harmonik
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* GenericDoomsdayVillain:
** Titan. He has great power and wants to destroy Unicornicopia so he can spread chaos and destruction over reality, [[ForTheEvulz just because]]. His dialogue is dripping in [[LargeHam clichés]] and there is nothing unique about his appearance at all. Being StupidEvil and going with the first Saturday morning cartoon plot his minions come up with doesn't help matters.
** Queen Chrysalis [[spoiler:and Fratello]] in ''My Brave Pony: Star Fleet Magic II''.
** King Sombra in ''My Brave Pony: Star Fleet Magic III''.
** The Dark King in ''My Brave Pony: Star Fleet Magic IV''.
14th Mar '17 7:24:50 AM BossKey
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* GeneticEngineeringIsTheNewNuke: When you use a combination of DNA manipulation and magic to create a {{Proud Warrior|RaceGuy}} MasterRace, indeed it is.


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* OurHomunculiAreDifferent: The Space Ponies originated with Grand Ruler artificially creating a pony-like form and then magically granting it life. They also fill the typical role of being completely loyal to their master. [[NotSoDifferent Titan's minions have a similar origin]], meaning that they qualify as well.
13th Mar '17 10:30:41 AM N.Harmonik
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%%* PoliceState: The narration states that it's benevolent.

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%%* * PoliceState: The narration states that it's benevolent.
9th Mar '17 10:09:33 AM MagBas
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* HangingJudge: According to [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/589093/my-brave-pony-starfleet-magic-qa#comment/3806165 this comment]], Starfleet sometimes doesn't have trials if they have "[[OrgyOfEvidence more than enough proof]]". This is demonstrated in ''VI'' when they immediately arrest and imprison the Spectros without bothering to hear them out. [[DesignatedHero Starfleet is supposed to be the heroes here.]]

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* HangingJudge: According to [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/589093/my-brave-pony-starfleet-magic-qa#comment/3806165 this comment]], Starfleet sometimes doesn't have trials if they have "[[OrgyOfEvidence more than enough proof]]". This is demonstrated in ''VI'' when they immediately arrest and imprison the Spectros without bothering to hear them out. [[DesignatedHero Starfleet is supposed to be the heroes here.]]



* HellholePrison: As shown in the sixth "season", prisoners are tortured and not given food if they don't keep quiet. [[DesignatedHero These prisons are run by the supposed "heroes".]] [[https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/589093/my-brave-pony-starfleet-magic-qa#comment/4232328 According to Mykan, Starfleet prisons are like this because this is what real world prisons are like and MLP needs reality.]]

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* HellholePrison: As shown in the sixth "season", prisoners are tortured and not given food if they don't keep quiet. [[DesignatedHero These prisons are run by the supposed "heroes".]] [[https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/589093/my-brave-pony-starfleet-magic-qa#comment/4232328 According to Mykan, Starfleet prisons are like this because this is what real world prisons are like and MLP needs reality.]]



* PoliceState: [[InformedAttribute The narration states that it's benevolent]]. [[DesignatedHero Their actions say otherwise]].

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* PoliceState: [[InformedAttribute %%* PoliceState: The narration states that it's benevolent]]. [[DesignatedHero Their actions say otherwise]].benevolent.
9th Mar '17 7:31:12 AM hubakon1368
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* PoliceState: The narration states that it's benevolent.

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* PoliceState: [[InformedAttribute The narration states that it's benevolent.benevolent]]. [[DesignatedHero Their actions say otherwise]].
10th Feb '17 10:53:01 AM BossKey
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** Surprisingly, thus far [[AvertedTrope there is no overarching]] BigBad in ''VI''.

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** Surprisingly, thus far [[AvertedTrope there is no overarching]] BigBad in ''VI''.



* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: By the bucket load. [[spoiler:Discord, Titan and Nightmare Moon get blown up. The deaths of Titan`s henchponies get handwaved with the excuse that they were just artificial beings. Worst example is probably in ''My Brave Pony: Star Fleet Magic II'', where Cadance's brother [[BigBad Fratello]] gets killed by her and then blown up, because [[MoralEventHorizon the author wanted to make her suffer]].]]

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* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: By the bucket load. [[spoiler:Discord, Titan and Nightmare Moon get blown up. The deaths of Titan`s henchponies get handwaved with the excuse that they were just artificial beings. Worst example is probably in ''My Brave Pony: Star Fleet Magic II'', where Cadance's brother [[BigBad Fratello]] gets killed by her and then blown up, because [[MoralEventHorizon the author wanted to make her suffer]].suffer.]]
10th Feb '17 5:44:46 AM N.Harmonik
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* CantTakeCriticism: Every time someone tries to question or register a complaint with Starfleet, they are usually looked down upon as crazy, degenerate or wrong.
7th Feb '17 10:20:37 AM MagBas
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* CommonMarySueTraits: This applies to everyone, but Lightning takes the cake. Let's have a [[LongList checklist]] shall we.
** Is always on the SpotlightStealingSquad
** Being the chosen one, even when the Elements of Harmony are introduced.
** Similarly he's already overpowered and wields a DeusExMachina
** [[SpecialSnowflakeSyndrome Has an excessive]] [[{{Asspull}} out of place]] DarkAndTroubledPast
** Being mouthpieces for the Author's beliefs, regardless on how callous, unfavorable and misplaced it is
** An unoriginal AuthorAvatar is inserted in the story with no effect on the plot, who just stands around while the characters do their thing - Mykan Stevens
** The AuthorAvatar is married to a canon character, whom was molded into an idealized version, with all the canon traits gone. - Celesto
** Smearing [[CharacterDerailment canon characters]] whom the author despises with his villainous or "heroic" OCs.
** Everyone has a [[FlatCharacter nonexistent or otherwise bland personality,]] that never grows.
** All mouthpieces has zero effort in being persuasive about their beliefs
** Nobody (with a few exceptions) calls them out on their flawed nature, and are always right.
** [[LongList Etc..]]
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