History Fanfic / MuvLuvComet

19th May '14 3:40:17 PM AnoBakaDesu
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12th Jan '14 6:33:57 PM WildGoose
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* TheStationsOfCanon: Toyed with in Chapter 8. For the most part, it follows canon, though there are some twists here and there - for instance, Ibrahim and Yuuya have both heard of each other, and are mutual admirers.
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* TheStationsOfCanon: TheStationsOfTheCanon: Toyed with in Chapter 8. For the most part, it follows canon, though there are some twists here and there - for instance, Ibrahim and Yuuya have both heard of each other, and are mutual admirers. [[spoiler: The initial dogfight with Argos has some small changes - as an example, Yuuya hangs on to the Active Eagle, forcing Tarisa to use the Strike, which changes some of the dogfight events, though it still ends with Yuuya baiting Tarisa into a position where Stella can snipe her.]]
17th Dec '13 5:47:16 PM WildGoose
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* TheStationsOfCanon: Toyed with in Chapter 8. For the most part, it follows canon, though there are some twists here and there - for instance, Ibrahim and Yuuya have both heard of each other, and are mutual admirers.
17th Dec '13 5:20:01 PM WildGoose
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* As in canon, [[FriendlySnipe Stella]] saves Yuuya's bacon just before Tarisa cooks his goose.
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* As in canon, [[FriendlySnipe [[FriendlySniper Stella]] saves Yuuya's bacon just before Tarisa cooks his goose.
17th Dec '13 5:19:22 PM WildGoose
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* As in canon, [[FriendlySnipe Stella]] saves Yuuya's bacon just before Tarisa cooks his goose.

* RammingAlwaysWorks: Yuuya does this twice in dogfights, first against Kuze in Chapter 1, and again to Tarisa in Chapter 8. The second time around, it isn't quite as effective as the first.

* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Max Grey stays behind to detonate the [=C7MD=] charges, killing the BETA and himself.]]
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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Max Grey stays behind to detonate the [=C7MD=] charges, killing the Maryland Hive BETA and himself.]]
27th Oct '13 9:24:13 PM WildGoose
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* AwesomeButImpractical: The general Space Force's opinion of the Black Widow II. While it is an awesome, it lacks combat endurance and the logistics issues make it unappealing as a replacement for the Strike Eagle, especially since costs mean that the Space Force can't afford to do a one for one replacement.
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* AwesomeButImpractical: The general Space Force's opinion of the Black Widow II. While it is an awesome, awesome [=TSF=], it lacks combat endurance and the logistics issues make it unappealing as a replacement for the Strike Eagle, especially since costs mean that the Space Force can't afford to do a one for one one-for-one replacement.

* AwesomeButImpractical: DwindlingParty: The general Space Force's opinion of the Black Widow II. While it is an awesome, it lacks combat endurance and the logistics issues make it unappealing as a replacement for the Strike Eagle, especially since costs mean that the Space Force can't afford to do a one for one replacement.and Force Recon Marines who infiltrate the [[spoiler: Maryland Hive]].

** [[spoiler: The UN plans to drop a nuke on the Maryland Hive before the BETA deploy Laser-class. They're eventually talked out of it by the US, which mounts a Hive assault, though the Comets note that if the assault fails, the ''US'' will probably nuke the hive.]]
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** [[spoiler: The UN plans to drop a nuke on the Maryland Hive before the BETA deploy Laser-class. They're eventually talked out of it by the US, which mounts a Hive assault, though the Comets note that if the assault fails, the ''US'' ''United States'' will probably nuke the hive.]]

* RankUp: Yuuya starts as a 2nd Lt., before being promoted to 1st Lt. in the prologue. [[spoiler: Later, after the Battle of Maryland and Operation Crucible, he's promoted to Captain.]]
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* RankUp: Yuuya starts as a 2nd Lt., before being promoted to 1st Lt. in the prologue. [[spoiler: Later, after the Battle of Maryland and Operation Crucible, he's promoted to Captain.]]]] And then it's inverted when he hits Alaska, as he's a 2nd Lt in the UN Army (though his USSF commission remains active and he'll still draw his American pay).

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* RankUp: Yuuya starts as a 2nd Lt., before being promoted to 1st Lt. in ** In the prologue. [[spoiler: Later, after the Battle of Maryland and Operation Crucible, he's promoted to Captain.]]{{Fictional Document}}s that preface Chapter 7, a Space Forces pilot paraphrases [[Film/TopGun a movie about Naval Aviators]]: "We shouldn't write checks our bodies can't cash."
16th Sep '13 9:42:08 AM WildGoose
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* [[ReassignedToAntarcticaToAntartica Reassigned to Alaska]]: Inverted; this time around, Yuuya is being explicitly requested for by the XFJ Plan. Unlike in Total Eclipse, where the assignment was treated as a punishment, it's instead explicitly portrayed as a necessary evil. It helps that they're asking for a decorated war hero instead of a cocky punk.
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* [[ReassignedToAntarcticaToAntartica [[ReassignedToAntarctica Reassigned to Alaska]]: Inverted; this time around, Yuuya is being explicitly requested for by the XFJ Plan. Unlike in Total Eclipse, where the assignment was treated as a punishment, it's instead explicitly portrayed as a necessary evil. It helps that they're asking for a decorated war hero instead of a cocky punk.
16th Sep '13 9:40:21 AM WildGoose
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* [[ReassignmentToAntartica reassignment to Alaska]]: Inverted; this time around, Yuuya is being explicitly requested for by the XFJ Plan. Unlike in Total Eclipse, where the assignment was treated as a punishment, it's instead explicitly portrayed as a necessary evil. It helps that they're asking for a decorated war hero instead of a cocky punk.
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* [[ReassignmentToAntartica reassignment [[ReassignedToAntarcticaToAntartica Reassigned to Alaska]]: Inverted; this time around, Yuuya is being explicitly requested for by the XFJ Plan. Unlike in Total Eclipse, where the assignment was treated as a punishment, it's instead explicitly portrayed as a necessary evil. It helps that they're asking for a decorated war hero instead of a cocky punk.
10th Sep '13 10:58:27 AM MrTerrorist
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* AdaptationNameChange: In canon, "Eishi" is a term for the [=TSF=] pilots. Here, non-Japanese pilots are called "Surface Pilot" or "[[InSeriesNickname Surfie]]". [[WordOfGod The Author]] explains because [=TSF=] is an American invention, it would be weird for non-Japaneses to use a Japanese word.
9th Aug '13 12:39:17 PM Viira
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** A lot of characters from Franchise/MassEffect appear. [[VideoGame/MassEffect1 David Anderson]] is the Secretary of Defense, while [[VideoGame/MassEffect2 Jack Harper]] is Director of the CIA. Also, Commander [[MarkMeer Mark]] Shepard testified before Congress on the idiocy of the Army and Pentagon's plans, and was Yuuya's instructor in the Space Force. Like his original counterpart [[spoiler: Jack Harper, aka The Illusive Man, is head of the secretive Cerberus organization.]]
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** A lot of characters from Franchise/MassEffect appear. [[VideoGame/MassEffect1 David Anderson]] is the Secretary of Defense, while [[VideoGame/MassEffect2 Jack Harper]] is Director of the CIA. Also, Commander [[MarkMeer [[Creator/MarkMeer Mark]] Shepard testified before Congress on the idiocy of the Army and Pentagon's plans, and was Yuuya's instructor in the Space Force. Like his original counterpart [[spoiler: Jack Harper, aka The Illusive Man, is head of the secretive Cerberus organization.]]
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