History Fanfic / MuvLuvComet

16th Mar '16 1:59:55 PM Willbyr
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The United States Space Force focuses on [[DropPod Drop Podding]] [=TSF=]s from space into enemy lines and [[UsefulNotes/WildWeasel hunting down]] Laser-class BETA to allow their allies an easier time to fight the BETA. Enter [[LightNovel/MuvLuvAlternativeTotalEclipse Yuuya Bridges]]. Having been selected to join the USSF after trouble with his old unit, Yuuya goes from rookie to veteran after his first mission in Europe. Assigned to the newly formed Comet Squadron of the 114th Orbital Regiment, Yuuya and his fellow pilots continue fighting BETA around the world. Meanwhile, other forces are secretly ensuring the US will stay active in their fight in the BETA and stop those who threaten it, no matter what.

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The United States Space Force focuses on [[DropPod Drop Podding]] {{Drop Pod}}ding [=TSF=]s from space into enemy lines and [[UsefulNotes/WildWeasel hunting down]] Laser-class BETA to allow their allies an easier time to fight the BETA. Enter [[LightNovel/MuvLuvAlternativeTotalEclipse Yuuya Bridges]]. Having been selected to join the USSF after trouble with his old unit, Yuuya goes from rookie to veteran after his first mission in Europe. Assigned to the newly formed Comet Squadron of the 114th Orbital Regiment, Yuuya and his fellow pilots continue fighting BETA around the world. Meanwhile, other forces are secretly ensuring the US will stay active in their fight in the BETA and stop those who threaten it, no matter what.



* AnyoneCanDie: As expected of a MuvLuv story; in Yuuya's first combat mission, he and his wingman end up being the only survivors of their squadron.

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* AnyoneCanDie: As expected of a MuvLuv Franchise/MuvLuv story; in Yuuya's first combat mission, he and his wingman end up being the only survivors of their squadron.
23rd Feb '16 3:38:34 AM MrTerrorist
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Sadly, the story is now a DeadFic as the last update was December 2013.
19th May '14 3:40:17 PM AnoBakaDesu
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12th Jan '14 6:33:57 PM WildGoose
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* TheStationsOfCanon: Toyed with in Chapter 8. For the most part, it follows canon, though there are some twists here and there - for instance, Ibrahim and Yuuya have both heard of each other, and are mutual admirers.

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* TheStationsOfCanon: TheStationsOfTheCanon: Toyed with in Chapter 8. For the most part, it follows canon, though there are some twists here and there - for instance, Ibrahim and Yuuya have both heard of each other, and are mutual admirers. [[spoiler: The initial dogfight with Argos has some small changes - as an example, Yuuya hangs on to the Active Eagle, forcing Tarisa to use the Strike, which changes some of the dogfight events, though it still ends with Yuuya baiting Tarisa into a position where Stella can snipe her.]]
17th Dec '13 5:47:16 PM WildGoose
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* TheStationsOfCanon: Toyed with in Chapter 8. For the most part, it follows canon, though there are some twists here and there - for instance, Ibrahim and Yuuya have both heard of each other, and are mutual admirers.
17th Dec '13 5:20:01 PM WildGoose
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* As in canon, [[FriendlySnipe Stella]] saves Yuuya's bacon just before Tarisa cooks his goose.

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* As in canon, [[FriendlySnipe [[FriendlySniper Stella]] saves Yuuya's bacon just before Tarisa cooks his goose.
17th Dec '13 5:19:22 PM WildGoose
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* As in canon, [[FriendlySnipe Stella]] saves Yuuya's bacon just before Tarisa cooks his goose.



* RammingAlwaysWorks: Yuuya does this twice in dogfights, first against Kuze in Chapter 1, and again to Tarisa in Chapter 8. The second time around, it isn't quite as effective as the first.



* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Max Grey stays behind to detonate the [=C7MD=] charges, killing the BETA and himself.]]

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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Max Grey stays behind to detonate the [=C7MD=] charges, killing the Maryland Hive BETA and himself.]]
27th Oct '13 9:24:13 PM WildGoose
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* AwesomeButImpractical: The general Space Force's opinion of the Black Widow II. While it is an awesome, it lacks combat endurance and the logistics issues make it unappealing as a replacement for the Strike Eagle, especially since costs mean that the Space Force can't afford to do a one for one replacement.

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* AwesomeButImpractical: The general Space Force's opinion of the Black Widow II. While it is an awesome, awesome [=TSF=], it lacks combat endurance and the logistics issues make it unappealing as a replacement for the Strike Eagle, especially since costs mean that the Space Force can't afford to do a one for one one-for-one replacement.



* DwindlingParty: The Space Force and Force Recon Marines who infiltrate the [[spoiler: Maryland Hive]].



** [[spoiler: The UN plans to drop a nuke on the Maryland Hive before the BETA deploy Laser-class. They're eventually talked out of it by the US, which mounts a Hive assault, though the Comets note that if the assault fails, the ''US'' will probably nuke the hive.]]

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** [[spoiler: The UN plans to drop a nuke on the Maryland Hive before the BETA deploy Laser-class. They're eventually talked out of it by the US, which mounts a Hive assault, though the Comets note that if the assault fails, the ''US'' ''United States'' will probably nuke the hive.]]



* RankUp: Yuuya starts as a 2nd Lt., before being promoted to 1st Lt. in the prologue. [[spoiler: Later, after the Battle of Maryland and Operation Crucible, he's promoted to Captain.]]

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* RankUp: Yuuya starts as a 2nd Lt., before being promoted to 1st Lt. in the prologue. [[spoiler: Later, after the Battle of Maryland and Operation Crucible, he's promoted to Captain.]]]] And then it's inverted when he hits Alaska, as he's a 2nd Lt in the UN Army (though his USSF commission remains active and he'll still draw his American pay).


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** In the {{Fictional Document}}s that preface Chapter 7, a Space Forces pilot paraphrases [[Film/TopGun a movie about Naval Aviators]]: "We shouldn't write checks our bodies can't cash."
16th Sep '13 9:42:08 AM WildGoose
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* [[ReassignedToAntarcticaToAntartica Reassigned to Alaska]]: Inverted; this time around, Yuuya is being explicitly requested for by the XFJ Plan. Unlike in Total Eclipse, where the assignment was treated as a punishment, it's instead explicitly portrayed as a necessary evil. It helps that they're asking for a decorated war hero instead of a cocky punk.

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* [[ReassignedToAntarcticaToAntartica [[ReassignedToAntarctica Reassigned to Alaska]]: Inverted; this time around, Yuuya is being explicitly requested for by the XFJ Plan. Unlike in Total Eclipse, where the assignment was treated as a punishment, it's instead explicitly portrayed as a necessary evil. It helps that they're asking for a decorated war hero instead of a cocky punk.
16th Sep '13 9:40:21 AM WildGoose
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* [[ReassignmentToAntartica reassignment to Alaska]]: Inverted; this time around, Yuuya is being explicitly requested for by the XFJ Plan. Unlike in Total Eclipse, where the assignment was treated as a punishment, it's instead explicitly portrayed as a necessary evil. It helps that they're asking for a decorated war hero instead of a cocky punk.

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* [[ReassignmentToAntartica reassignment [[ReassignedToAntarcticaToAntartica Reassigned to Alaska]]: Inverted; this time around, Yuuya is being explicitly requested for by the XFJ Plan. Unlike in Total Eclipse, where the assignment was treated as a punishment, it's instead explicitly portrayed as a necessary evil. It helps that they're asking for a decorated war hero instead of a cocky punk.
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