History Fanfic / MobileFighterEvangelion

14th Sep '16 11:00:51 PM mlsmithca
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->''"It's all about the journey. And seeing if even the extra advantages given by 'SuperRobot Pills' can counter the '[[Creator/StudioGainax Gainax]] Syndrome' inherent in [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Evangelion]] as a whole. Plus, as you've gathered with all the tidbits tossed around [[spoiler: (a fourth MAGI consisting of a partially-pulverized Naoko Akagi, a Project Nephilim that apparently bred Angelically-enhanced humans for military clients, Rei having been in military service when she was chronologically less than seven years old, ZA GUNDAMS, ZA ANIMALS, AOBA'S A GIRL, Ibuki Twins, etc.)]], this world is a bit... different, from canon."''

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->''"It's all about the journey. And seeing if even the extra advantages given by 'SuperRobot Pills' can counter the '[[Creator/StudioGainax Gainax]] Syndrome' inherent in [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Evangelion]] as a whole. Plus, as you've gathered with all the tidbits tossed around [[spoiler: (a fourth MAGI consisting of a partially-pulverized Naoko Akagi, a Project Nephilim that apparently bred Angelically-enhanced humans for military clients, Rei having been in military service when she was chronologically less than seven years old, ZA GUNDAMS, ZA ANIMALS, AOBA'S A GIRL, Ibuki Twins, etc.)]], [...], this world is a bit... different, from canon."''
12th Sep '16 11:56:16 PM Renewal
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* DarkestHour: [[spoiler: Chapter 26--Shinji is trapped within Leliel, Asuka has suffered MindRape from Arael, Mana is out of commission after eliminating Arael in return, Pen-Pen is dead after ensuring the destruction of Armisael, and Toji and Unit-03 have been absorbed by Bardiel. Only Rei and Mayumi are left to face off against the unholy abomination Bardiel has constructed from Israfel's bodies and the ''three'' captured Evas, Units 03, 04, and 05.]]
26th Aug '16 11:26:37 AM UltraSonic007
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* DisneyAcidSequence: Any of Rei Ayanami's flashback sequences during Episode 23, or as close as one can get in literary form.
26th Aug '16 11:19:30 AM UltraSonic007
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** Mana Kirishima is as well. Probably exemplified best when she powered through [[spoiler:Arael's MindRape attack]] through sheer Overdrive-enhanced willpower.
26th Aug '16 11:16:13 AM UltraSonic007
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Also take note: despite the [[Anime/MobileFighterGGundam title]], and despite the use of actual Gundam units, there are no crossover elements plot-wise to any Franchise/{{Gundam}} franchise. However, aside from various [[ShoutOut/MobileFighterEvangelion shout-outs]] to other franchises, there are also some significant cameos from TeamFortress2 and Manga/BlackLagoon.

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Also take note: despite the [[Anime/MobileFighterGGundam title]], and despite the use of actual Gundam units, there are no crossover elements plot-wise to any Franchise/{{Gundam}} franchise. However, aside from various [[ShoutOut/MobileFighterEvangelion shout-outs]] to other franchises, there are also some significant cameos and references from TeamFortress2 and Manga/BlackLagoon.


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* DeathByAdaptation: Believe it or not, [[spoiler:Pen-Pen]].


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* DyingMomentOfAwesome: [[spoiler:Pen-Pen]], against Armisael, via a one-two combo of HeroicSacrifice and TakingYouWithMe.


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** [[spoiler:Shiori Aoba]], the GenderFlip version [[spoiler:Shigeru Aoba]], has certain similarites to one [[Manga/BlackLagoon Two-Hands Revy]]...
15th Aug '16 10:41:32 PM UltraSonic007
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* SuperRobot: The Jet Alone in this continuity truly belongs to this class now. Its debut in Episode 8 alone satisfies at least five items on the checklist, never mind the fact that the robots that make up Jet Alone are [[Anime/MobileFighterGGundam Shining and Burning Gundam]].

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* SuperRobot: The Jet Alone in this continuity truly belongs to this class now. Its debut in Episode 8 alone satisfies at least five items on the checklist, never mind the fact that the robots that make up the Jet Alone are the [[Anime/MobileFighterGGundam Shining and Burning Gundam]].Rising Gundams]].
15th Aug '16 1:46:39 AM Eyeshield
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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: By Word of God, the design of Pieter Langley, Asuka and Mari's father, is based off of Creator/LiamNeeson. [[spoiler: Later chapters show he acts like [[Film/{{Taken}} certain roles with him as well]].

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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: By Word of God, the design of Pieter Langley, Asuka and Mari's father, is based off of Creator/LiamNeeson. [[spoiler: Later chapters show he acts like [[Film/{{Taken}} certain roles with him as well]].]]
15th Aug '16 1:45:55 AM Eyeshield
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* CloudCuckooLander: Subverted with Gendo. He may act crazy, but everything he says or does has a purpose. It's just that what he does to achieve those purposes is insane.



** Misato in general, with plans for any, every and all situations, including all mechs being hijacked or Tokyo-3 being filled with saboteurs.



* GoMadFromTheRevelation: Ritsuko's split personality is a result of finding out the angels kept on observing humanity before the Impacts, and never being able to find an answer.



* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: By Word of God, the design of Pieter Langley, Asuka and Mari's father, is based off of Creator/LiamNeeson.

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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: By Word of God, the design of Pieter Langley, Asuka and Mari's father, is based off of Creator/LiamNeeson. [[spoiler: Later chapters show he acts like [[Film/{{Taken}} certain roles with him as well]].



* {{Reconstruction}}: The original Evangelion showed the consequences of kids being [[FallingIntoTheCockpit forced to fight]] and [[PoorCommunicationKills not being informed]] about anything. The fic shows what happens if you prepare them for what they have to do.



* SuperRobot: The Jet Alone in this continuity truly belongs to this class now. Its debut in Episode 8 alone satisfies at least five items on the checklist.

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* SuperRobot: The Jet Alone in this continuity truly belongs to this class now. Its debut in Episode 8 alone satisfies at least five items on the checklist.checklist, never mind the fact that the robots that make up Jet Alone are [[Anime/MobileFighterGGundam Shining and Burning Gundam]].
10th Aug '16 12:15:31 AM Eyeshield
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** [[TeamPet Pen-Pen]] is described as Special. Of course, [[MemeticBadass we already knew that]], but it's nice to see it acknowledged. Case in point: Pen-Pen is a Gundam pilot.

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** [[TeamPet Pen-Pen]] is described as Special. Of course, [[MemeticBadass we already knew that]], but it's nice to see it acknowledged. Case in point: Pen-Pen is a Gundam pilot.pilot, or rather, he controls every Gundam in Tokyo-3.



* ICallItVera: Misato's HuskyRusskie teammate Mr. Kasparov calls the Evangelion-scale minigun 'Olga'.

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* ICallItVera: Misato's HuskyRusskie teammate Mr. Kasparov calls his precious minigun 'Sasha' ([[VideoGame/TeamFortress2 It should be obvious why]] and the Evangelion-scale minigun model 'Olga'.



* SeparateSceneStorytelling: In Episode 19, as the Pilots face off against Samael in the present, there are lines of dialogue where Asuka seems to be conversing with someone about her past, which occur via flashback (playing with the PensieveFlashback trope in the process). By the end of the episode, we see the source of Asuka's dialogue: [[spoiler:footage of Asuka's last therapy session before leaving Germany, being watched by none other than Gendo Ikari.]]

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* SeparateSceneStorytelling: In Episode 19, as the Pilots face off against Samael in the present, there are lines of dialogue where Asuka seems to be conversing with someone about her past, which occur via flashback (playing with the PensieveFlashback trope in the process). By the end of the episode, we see the source of Asuka's dialogue: [[spoiler:footage of Asuka's last therapy session before leaving Germany, being watched by none other than Gendo Ikari.]]Ikari]]. This continues with "The case of Misato Katsuragi" and "The case of Rei Ayanami". The former plays it as straight up separate scenes, while the latter has [[spoiler: Rei hallucinating flashbacks due to her emotions over her past actions conflicting with her admiration of Gendo]].



* SmugSuper: Mana believes herself and all other Nephilim superior to humans, constantly looks down on them and suffers from crippling LackOfEmpathy. [[spoiler: When she causes Genji Sawamura to commit suicide for not giving a crap about killing his son, while ALSO not giving a crap about THAT, Gendo gives her a brutal BreakingSpeech showing exactly how hollow her nephilim superiority is.]]



* {{Tsundere}}: Annette seems to be this where [[KissingCousins her cousin Shinji]] is concerned. The story DOES mention that she's not romantically involved, and that she is a rare Platonic Tsundere.

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* {{Tsundere}}: Annette seems to be this where [[KissingCousins her cousin Shinji]] is concerned. The story DOES mention that she's not romantically involved, and that she is a rare Platonic Tsundere. Ironically, Asuka herself, being the deconstruction of the trope that she was, was not.
7th Aug '16 7:33:08 AM UltraSonic007
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Also take note: despite the [[Anime/MobileFighterGGundam title]], and despite the use of actual Gundam units, there are no crossover elements plot-wise to any Franchise/{{Gundam}} franchise. However, aside from various [[ShoutOut/MobileFighterEvangelion shout-outs]] to other franchises, there are also some significant cameos from the TeamFortress2 and Manga/BlackLagoon.

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Also take note: despite the [[Anime/MobileFighterGGundam title]], and despite the use of actual Gundam units, there are no crossover elements plot-wise to any Franchise/{{Gundam}} franchise. However, aside from various [[ShoutOut/MobileFighterEvangelion shout-outs]] to other franchises, there are also some significant cameos from the TeamFortress2 and Manga/BlackLagoon.
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