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* OriginalCharacter: Loads of them. Some are one-off [[ParodySue Parody Sues]], but the fic deliberately makes a point of using only OriginalCharacters to tell the story, although the author believe original characters should only be used when necessary. [[invoked]]
** [[spoiler: Well, until Chapter 21 anyway.]]
* OurMermaidsAreDifferent: They're bloodthirsty serial killers.
* PapaWolf: Don't threaten Mar in front of Mr. Suesse. It's a very bad idea.
* ParentalSubstitute: A flashback indicates that [[spoiler:Denise was one to Madelyn]].

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* OriginalCharacter: Loads of them. Some are one-off [[ParodySue Parody Sues]], [[invoked]]{{Parody Sue}}s, but the fic deliberately makes a point of using only OriginalCharacters {{Original Character}}s to tell the story, although the author believe original characters should only be used when necessary. [[invoked]]
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[[spoiler: Well, until Chapter 21 anyway.]]
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* %%* PapaWolf: Don't threaten Mar in front of Mr. Suesse. It's a very bad idea.
* %%* ParentalSubstitute: A flashback indicates that [[spoiler:Denise was one to Madelyn]].
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* NotSoHarmlessVillain: From [[spoiler:Madelyn’s]] perspective, at least. [[WrongGenreSavvy They believed]] that the only concern in the search for One Piece was beating the [[HeroOfAnotherStory other pirates]] in the running- the [[InspectorJavert Marine forces]] were road hazards at best. Thus, [[spoiler:she had no qualms [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor manipulating a wish]] to send Luffy to Marineford with no backup. She knew that, since this is [[MagneticHero Luffy]] we’re talking about, he’d have scores of powerful allies coming to rescue him, and so thought the whole ordeal would just amount to a slight delay in the Straw Hat’s voyage, and [[CurbStompBattle a humiliating defeat]] for the Marines. She is [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone absolutely horrified]] when the Marines not only manage to execute Luffy just as planned, but several of his crew mates [[DwindlingParty are killed in the rescue mission]].]]
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Five Man Band is undergoing a wick-cleaning project, so zero-context examples, as well as roles with little to no context, will be deleted.


* FiveManBand:
** TheHero: The Disinfector
** TheLancer: Gurnarde
** TheSmartGuy: Mr. Suesse
** TheBigGuy: Walker
** TheChick: Mar
*** TeamPet: The ''Thousand Sunny'', sentient ghost ship who also doubles as their main mode of transport.

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* AdultFear: Toward the end, [[spoiler:it is revealed that the tragic events that occurred for the last 20 years in the One Piece world can be undone, but if Madelyn never ate her Devil Fruit, she would never have made the mistake of causing Luffy's execution, fled to the "real world," changed her name to Blake, met Garreth and had Marie. Not only are Garreth and Madelyn/Blake aware that they'll never see each other or their daughter again, but Marie realizes that she'll be erased from existence entirely, and feels as though her existence was a mistake]].



* RetGone: [[spoiler:Mar realizes she will suffer this fate if Garreth wishes that Blake/Madelyn had never eaten the Devil Fruit, resulting in her never going to the real world, marrying him or having Mar]].

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* RetGone: [[spoiler:Mar realizes she will suffer this fate if Garreth wishes Toward the end, [[spoiler:it is revealed that Blake/Madelyn had the tragic events that occurred for the last 20 years in the One Piece world can be undone, but if Madelyn never eaten the ate her Devil Fruit, resulting in her she would never going have made the mistake of causing Luffy's execution, fled to the real world, marrying him "real world," changed her name to Blake, met Garreth and had Marie. Not only are Garreth and Madelyn/Blake aware that they'll never see each other or having Mar]].their daughter again, but Marie realizes that she'll be erased from existence entirely, and feels as though her existence was a mistake]].
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* MarySue: The entire story revolves around the idea that one of these messed up the One Piece world. [[invoked]]
* MeaningfulName: The author ''loves'' these.
** [[MarySue Marie D. Suesse]] [[invoked]]
** [[GaryStu Garreth Stuart Suesse]] [[invoked]]
** [[GodModeSue Lance D. Imba]] [[invoked]]
** [[BlackHoleSue Blake Hoseau]] [[invoked]]



* MarySueHunter: The Disinfector is introduced as one.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Mar's reaction after she distracts the extremely powerful Admiral Imba [[spoiler: from killing the Disinfector]]
* DiscontinuityNod: A variety pops up in the final chapter [[spoiler:as various characters make references to what happened in the fic after the world goes back to normal, such as some drunken marines discussing what Smoker's child would look like]]

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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Mar's reaction after she distracts the extremely powerful Admiral Imba [[spoiler: from killing the Disinfector]]
Disinfector]].
* DiscontinuityNod: A variety pops up in the final chapter [[spoiler:as various characters make references to what happened in the fic after the world goes back to normal, such as some drunken marines discussing what Smoker's child would look like]]like]].



* EvilParentsWantGoodKids: [[spoiler:Marie's mother wanted to make sure that she turns out better than she did]]
* TheFaceless: The Disinfector is never seen without his hazard suit, [[spoiler: until Chapter 21 where he is [[TheReveal revealed]] to be Trafalgar Law]]
* FiveManBand

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* EvilParentsWantGoodKids: [[spoiler:Marie's mother wanted to make sure that she turns out better than she did]]
did]].
* TheFaceless: The Disinfector is never seen without his hazard suit, [[spoiler: until Chapter 21 where he is [[TheReveal revealed]] to be Trafalgar Law]]
Law]].
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* MeaningfulName: The author ''loves'' these

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* MeaningfulName: The author ''loves'' thesethese.



* NarratorAllAlong: Although it is never explicitly stated, the identity of the LemonyNarrator can be deduced from in the final line of the final chapter. [[spoiler: It's The Disinfector]]

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* NarratorAllAlong: Although it is never explicitly stated, the identity of the LemonyNarrator can be deduced from in the final line of the final chapter. [[spoiler: It's The Disinfector]]Disinfector]].



** [[spoiler: Well, until Chapter 21 anyway]]

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** [[spoiler: Well, until Chapter 21 anyway]]anyway.]]



** Mar derisively calls a marine captain who has bone-based devil fruit powers "[[Manga/{{Naruto}} Kimimaro]]"

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** Mar derisively calls a marine captain who has bone-based devil fruit powers "[[Manga/{{Naruto}} Kimimaro]]"Kimimaro]]."



* SpeakIllOfTheDead: Marie discovers three graves; though one is mostly untouched, the middle has been destroyed to the point no sign of who it stands for remains, and the last's epitath is partly destroyed, along with [[spoiler:one of its blades stolen]].

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* SpeakIllOfTheDead: Marie discovers three graves; though one is mostly untouched, the middle has been destroyed to the point no sign of who it stands for remains, and the last's epitath epitaph is partly destroyed, along with [[spoiler:one of its blades stolen]].



-->'''[[spoiler:Trafalgar Law]]''': "''Mistakes''? The world doesn't exist as a testing ground for your mistakes so you could learn how to be a halfway-decent human being, Madelyn! [[spoiler:Straw-Hat Luffy! Bepo! Jean Bart! Penguin... (lists the rest of the Straw Hat and Heart Pirates]]...they weren't 'mistakes'! Those were real lives, Madelyn. They were people! And because of your actions: ''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis They. Are. All. Dead!]]''"

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-->'''[[spoiler:Trafalgar Law]]''': "''Mistakes''? The world doesn't exist as a testing ground for your mistakes so you could learn how to be a halfway-decent human being, Madelyn! [[spoiler:Straw-Hat Luffy! Bepo! Jean Bart! Penguin... (lists the rest of the Straw Hat and Heart Pirates]]...Pirates)]]...they weren't 'mistakes'! Those were real lives, Madelyn. They were people! And because of your actions: ''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis They. Are. All. Dead!]]''"



** [[spoiler:And then, combined with her mother's power, enables her to even change the pastc as a result of rewriting the rules of her mother's powers]].

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** [[spoiler:And then, combined with her mother's power, enables her to even change the pastc past as a result of rewriting the rules of her mother's powers]].
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* AbusiveParents: Mentioned as one of the most overused MarySue cliches intended to inspire sympathy, and Slashfang and Hana are said to have them. Mar's parents, however, [[ParentsAsPeople while far from perfect, are not abusive]].

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* AbusiveParents: Mentioned as one of the most overused MarySue cliches intended to inspire sympathy, and Slashfang and Hana are said to have them. Mar's parents, however, [[ParentsAsPeople while far from perfect, are not abusive]].
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** Mar derisively calls a marine captain who has bone-based devil fruit powers "[[{{Naruto}} Kimimaro]]"

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** Mar derisively calls a marine captain who has bone-based devil fruit powers "[[{{Naruto}} "[[Manga/{{Naruto}} Kimimaro]]"
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The story follows the character's adventures after falling into the OnePiece world. It also derails the format of the typical SelfInsert story right at the beginning by bringing Mar's parents along for the ride and having her end up alone on the Straw-Hats' deserted ship.

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The story follows the character's adventures after falling into the OnePiece ''One Piece'' world. It also derails the format of the typical SelfInsert story right at the beginning by bringing Mar's parents along for the ride and having her end up alone on the Straw-Hats' deserted ship.



* AdultFear: Toward the end, [[spoiler:it is revealed that the tragic events that occurred for the last 20 years in the OnePiece world can be undone, but if Madelyn never ate her Devil Fruit, she would never have made the mistake of causing Luffy's execution, fled to the "real world," changed her name to Blake, met Garreth and had Marie. Not only are Garreth and Madelyn/Blake aware that they'll never see each other or their daughter again, but Marie realizes that she'll be erased from existence entirely, and feels as though her existence was a mistake]].

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* AdultFear: Toward the end, [[spoiler:it is revealed that the tragic events that occurred for the last 20 years in the OnePiece One Piece world can be undone, but if Madelyn never ate her Devil Fruit, she would never have made the mistake of causing Luffy's execution, fled to the "real world," changed her name to Blake, met Garreth and had Marie. Not only are Garreth and Madelyn/Blake aware that they'll never see each other or their daughter again, but Marie realizes that she'll be erased from existence entirely, and feels as though her existence was a mistake]].



* MarySue: The entire story revolves around the idea that one of these messed up the OnePiece world. [[invoked]]

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* MarySue: The entire story revolves around the idea that one of these messed up the OnePiece One Piece world. [[invoked]]



* WhenYouComingHomeDad: Mr. Suesse was guilty of this before they all got thrown into the OnePiece world.

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* WhenYouComingHomeDad: Mr. Suesse was guilty of this before they all got thrown into the OnePiece One Piece world.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6328454/1/Marie_D_Suesse_And_The_Mystery_New_Pirate_Age Marie D. Suesse And The Mystery New Pirate Age!]]'' is a ''OnePiece'' fanfic DeconstructionFic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/388836/Phalanx Phalanx]] that was completed on 19th December 2012.

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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6328454/1/Marie_D_Suesse_And_The_Mystery_New_Pirate_Age Marie D. Suesse And The and the Mystery New Pirate Age!]]'' is a ''OnePiece'' ''Manga/OnePiece'' fanfic DeconstructionFic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/388836/Phalanx Phalanx]] that was completed on 19th December 2012.
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** Let's not forget she's also has the world's highest bounty of 666 million and goes by the title of "The Pirate Queen".

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** Let's not forget she's also has the world's highest bounty of 666 million million[[note]] this was written before the manga progressed to show higher bounties[[/note]] and goes by the title of "The Pirate Queen".
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* ButHeSoundsHandsome: The narrator of the story is implied to be [[spoiler: Trafalgar Law, in his Disinfector persona.]] On a reread, some lines become pretty damn funny with this knowledge.
--> [[spoiler: I shouldn't have to explain why Mar might feel somewhat star-struck with the idea of Law present. Mar is a sixteen-year old girl, and it's ''freaking Trafalgar Law'', c'mon.]]
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* [[spoiler: BittersweetEnding: The world is put right, thanks to the Suesse's wishes, but Mar is [[RetGone wished]] out of existence as a consequence.]]

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* [[spoiler: BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: The world is put right, thanks to the Suesse's wishes, but Mar is [[RetGone wished]] out of existence as a consequence.]]



* [[spoiler: DwindlingParty: The fate of the Straw-Hats and their rescue attempts. The same happens to Mar's crew on their raid on St. Magnus's mansion.]]

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* [[spoiler: DwindlingParty: The [[spoiler:The fate of the Straw-Hats and their rescue attempts. The same happens to Mar's crew on their raid on St. Magnus's mansion.]]



* [[spoiler:LukeIAmYourFather]]: Chapters 30 and 31 reveal that [[spoiler:Madelyn is actually Mar's mother]].

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* [[spoiler:LukeIAmYourFather]]: LukeIAmYourFather: Chapters 30 and 31 reveal that [[spoiler:Madelyn is actually Mar's mother]].



* MeaningfulName[=/=]PunnyName: The author ''loves'' these

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* MeaningfulName[=/=]PunnyName: MeaningfulName: The author ''loves'' these



* [[spoiler:RetGone]]: [[spoiler:Mar realizes she will suffer this fate if Garreth wishes that Blake/Madelyn had never eaten the Devil Fruit, resulting in her never going to the real world, marrying him or having Mar]].

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* [[spoiler:RetGone]]: RetGone: [[spoiler:Mar realizes she will suffer this fate if Garreth wishes that Blake/Madelyn had never eaten the Devil Fruit, resulting in her never going to the real world, marrying him or having Mar]].



* ShoutOut[=/=]TakeThat:

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* ShoutOut[=/=]TakeThat:ShoutOut:
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The story follows the character's adventures after falling into the OnePiece world. It also derails the format of the typical SelfInsert story right at the beginning by bringing Mar's parents along for the ride and having her end up alone on the Straw-Hat's deserted ship.

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The story follows the character's adventures after falling into the OnePiece world. It also derails the format of the typical SelfInsert story right at the beginning by bringing Mar's parents along for the ride and having her end up alone on the Straw-Hat's Straw-Hats' deserted ship.
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%%* RealityEnsues: At many points, particularly in how it is emphasized that it is very dangerous for Mar and her family to be thrust into the One Piece world with little in the way of powers to defend themselves.
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* RealityEnsues: At many points, particularly in how it is emphasized that it is very dangerous for Mar and her family to be thrust into the One Piece world with little in the way of powers to defend themselves.

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* %%* RealityEnsues: At many points, particularly in how it is emphasized that it is very dangerous for Mar and her family to be thrust into the One Piece world with little in the way of powers to defend themselves.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6328454/1/Marie_D_Suesse_And_The_Mystery_New_Pirate_Age Marie D. Suesse And The Mystery New Pirate Age!]]'' is a ''OnePiece'' fanfic DeconstructionFic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/388836/Phalanx Phalanx]] which was completed on 19th December 2012

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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6328454/1/Marie_D_Suesse_And_The_Mystery_New_Pirate_Age Marie D. Suesse And The Mystery New Pirate Age!]]'' is a ''OnePiece'' fanfic DeconstructionFic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/388836/Phalanx Phalanx]] which that was completed on 19th December 2012
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* AdultFear: Toward the end, [[spoiler:it is revealed that the tragic events that occurred for the last 20 years in the OnePiece world can be undone, but if Madelyn never ate her Devil Fruit, she would never have made the mistake of causing Luffy's execution, fled to the "real world," changed her name to Blake, met Garreth and had Marie. Not only are Garreth and Madelyn/Blake aware that they'll never see each other or their daughter again, but Marie realizes that she'll be erased from existence entirely, and feels as though her existence was a mistake]].
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** Admiral Imba is described as looking like the twin of a certain "[[WhiteHairedPrettyBoy pretty white-haired boy]]" from [[Manga/{{Bleach}} another manga series]].

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** Admiral Imba is described as looking like the twin of a certain "[[WhiteHairedPrettyBoy pretty white-haired boy]]" boy from [[Manga/{{Bleach}} another manga series]].
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** [[spoiler: Also used disturbingly in a flashback. Trafalgar Law, The Surgeon of Death, breaks down laughing at the irony his BadassNickname when he fails a critical operation and kills his patient. It also marks the beginning of his personality shift into The Disinfector.]]

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** [[spoiler: Also used disturbingly in a flashback. Trafalgar Law, The Surgeon of Death, breaks down laughing at the irony his BadassNickname RedBaron when he fails a critical operation and kills his patient. It also marks the beginning of his personality shift into The Disinfector.]]
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* NarratorAllAlong: Although it is never explicitly stated, the identity of the LemonyNarrator can be deduced from in the final line of the final chapter.

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* NarratorAllAlong: Although it is never explicitly stated, the identity of the LemonyNarrator can be deduced from in the final line of the final chapter. [[spoiler: It's The Disinfector]]
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* LittleNo: [[spoiler:Law says this when Mar's mother/Madelyn asks him to spare her husband and daughter]].

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* LittleNo: [[spoiler:Law says this when Mar's mother/Madelyn asks him to take his revenge on her and spare her husband and daughter]].daughter. He clarifies that her death isn't enough, and wants her to undo what she did]].



* ResetButtonEnding: The concept of which is painfully deconstructed.

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* ResetButtonEnding: The concept of which is painfully deconstructed. [[spoiler:Specifically, while many terrible things happened in the 20 years after Madelyn ate her Devil Fruit, so did Garreth meeting her and them having Mar together, both of which will also be undone]].



** [[spoiler:And then, combined with her mother's power, enables her to even change the past]].

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** [[spoiler:And then, combined with her mother's power, enables her to even change the past]].pastc as a result of rewriting the rules of her mother's powers]].

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