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* BilingualBonus: The title translates to "a great disaster" in Latin.
* BlobMonster: Zoisite first shapeshifts into this in chapter 3 and uses the form to strike at his victims.
* BlobMonster: Zoisite first shapeshifts into this in chapter 3 and uses the form to strike at his victims.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9958540/1/Magna-Clades Magna Clades]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' fanfic written by Creator/{{Voltalia}} concerning the OriginalCharacters Zoisite and Onyx going around, killing people, and the Crystal Gems having to stop them.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9958540/1/Magna-Clades Magna Clades]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' fanfic written by Creator/{{Voltalia}} concerning the OriginalCharacters {{Original Character}}s Zoisite and Onyx going around, killing people, and the Crystal Gems having to stop them.
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* BloodierAndGorierBloodierAndGorier: At least compared to the source material, the fanfic showcases a lot of gruesome and bloody deaths at the hands of the villains.
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* AnyoneCanDie: Well, anyone who's ''human'' can die as Zoisite and Onyx are kind enough to demonstrate. For example, Mayor Dewey.
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* AnyoneCanDie: Well, anyone who's ''human'' can die as Zoisite and Onyx are kind enough to demonstrate. For example, Mayor Dewey.
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* AnyoneCanDie: Well, anyone who's ''human'' can die as Zoisite and Onyx are kind enough to demonstrate.
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* AnyoneCanDie: Well, anyone who's ''human'' can die as Zoisite and Onyx are kind enough to demonstrate. For example, Mayor Dewey.
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* [[spoiler: AccidentalMurder]]: Steven unintentionally pushes Zirconia right into Zoisite, [[spoiler: killing them]].
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* [[spoiler: AccidentalMurder]]: AccidentalMurder: Steven unintentionally pushes Zirconia right into Zoisite, [[spoiler: killing them]].
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• ''Fanfic/HereIAm''\\
• ''Fanfic/{{Symbiote}}''\\
• ''[[Fanfic/YoungAndBeautiful Young and Beautiful]]''\\
• ''[[Fanfic/DiamondsAreForever Diamonds are Forever]]''\\
• ''Fanfic/ReadyToRoll''\\
• ''[[Fanfic/TimeOfTheSeason Time of the Season]]''\\
• ''[[Fanfic/SaySomethingLove Say Something, Love]]''\\
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This is the very first story to be written in the ''Gemstone Saga'' and the first serious ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' fanfic Creator/{{Voltalia}} ever wrote. First making its debut the day after Christmas in 2013, it is currently one of the most popular stories, if not ''the'' most popular, she's ever written in her four-year fanfiction career. It pretty much established the universe and characters as they would be represented in future fanfics; for example, Beach City is explicitly said to be in California and the Gems originated from a dimension known as Mineralis.
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This is the very first story to be written in the ''Gemstone Saga'' and the first serious ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' fanfic Creator/{{Voltalia}} ever wrote. First making its debut the day after Christmas in 2013, it is currently one of the most popular stories, if not ''the'' most popular, she's ever written in during her four-year fanfiction fanfic career. It pretty much established the universe and characters as they would be represented in future fanfics; for example, Beach City is explicitly said to be in California and the Gems originated from a dimension known as Mineralis.
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* ''[[Fanfic/SaySomethingLove Say Something, Love]]''\\
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This is the very first story to be written in the ''Gemstone Saga'' and the first serious ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' fanfic Creator/{{Voltalia}} ever wrote. First making its debut the day after Christmas in 2013, it is currently one of the most popular stories, if not ''the'' most popular, she's ever written in her four-year fanfiction career.
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• ''Fanfic/{{Starchild}}''\\
* ''Fanfic/HereIAm''\\
* ''Fanfic/{{Symbiote}}''\\
* ''Fanfic/YoungAndBeautiful''\\
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* InMemoriam: Chapter 9 onwards is dedicated to Creator/JewWario, who [[AuthorExistenceFailure committed suicide]] while it was being written, via author's note.
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* [[spoiler: AccidentalMurder]]: Steven unintentionally pushes Zirconia right into Zoisite, [[spoiler: killing them]].
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Chapter 2 when Pearl finds Steven [[spoiler:watching porn]].
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