History Fanfic / LightAndDarkTheAdventuresOfDarkYagami

21st Apr '17 11:42:09 AM Javertshark13
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* ImplausibleDeniability: Soichiro claims that he is a FakeDefector and on L's side, immediately after firing several shots at him with a revolver (which L is described as having to dodge). He also made Dark much more of a threat than he would have been otherwise by smuggling him into the United States, so this claim is pretty dubious.
26th Feb '17 8:50:49 PM gewunomox
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** A {{retcon}} in a later chapter reveals that Near used a Blind Note to stop Light seeing a naked woman and tricked Light into killing TaylorSwift. The author [[LampshadeHanging specifically states]] that he introduced these concepts to make Near deserving of this kicking. And calls us "doushy" for it.

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** A {{retcon}} in a later chapter reveals that Near used a Blind Note to stop Light seeing a naked woman and tricked Light into killing TaylorSwift.Music/TaylorSwift. The author [[LampshadeHanging specifically states]] that he introduced these concepts to make Near deserving of this kicking. And calls us "doushy" for it.
4th Jan '17 8:00:21 PM Javertshark13
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--> Blud: "THAT'S WHERE YOUR WRONG MY SHINY HAIRED APPRENTICE. YOU SEE I ONLY PRETENDED TO BE YOUR SHINIGAMI BUT IN FACT I WAS L'S ALL ALONG. I GAVE HIM A LIFE NOTE AND ALL I HAVE TO DO IS WRITE L'S NAME IN IT AND HE WILL COME BACK TO LIFE AS GOOD AS NEW AND YOUR PLANS WILL HAVE BIN FOILLED!"

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--> Blud: '''Blud''': "THAT'S WHERE YOUR WRONG MY SHINY HAIRED APPRENTICE. YOU SEE I ONLY PRETENDED TO BE YOUR SHINIGAMI BUT IN FACT I WAS L'S ALL ALONG. I GAVE HIM A LIFE NOTE AND ALL I HAVE TO DO IS WRITE L'S NAME IN IT AND HE WILL COME BACK TO LIFE AS GOOD AS NEW AND YOUR PLANS WILL HAVE BIN FOILLED!"
4th Jan '17 7:59:50 PM Javertshark13
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* WhamLine: From Chapter 42:

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* WhamLine: From Chapter 6:
--> Blud: "THAT'S WHERE YOUR WRONG MY SHINY HAIRED APPRENTICE. YOU SEE I ONLY PRETENDED TO BE YOUR SHINIGAMI BUT IN FACT I WAS L'S ALL ALONG. I GAVE HIM A LIFE NOTE AND ALL I HAVE TO DO IS WRITE L'S NAME IN IT AND HE WILL COME BACK TO LIFE AS GOOD AS NEW AND YOUR PLANS WILL HAVE BIN FOILLED!"
** From Chapter 14:
--> '''Dark''': (writing in the "Talk To Dead Dudes" Note) Are you l lol?
--> '''L''': yep.
** From Chapter
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4th Jan '17 7:56:11 PM Javertshark13
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* ForgotAboutHisPowers: Dark resorts to trying to snipe Near from the "Eyfal" Tower, despite being armed with both the Royal Death Note and the Everything Note.
30th Oct '16 6:40:53 AM Trialman
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On the 25th October 2015, the author returned with a Halloween special named [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11578431/1/ Darker Yagami - Dark Yagami gets Dark]].

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On the 25th October 2015, the author returned with a Halloween special named [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11578431/1/ Darker Yagami - Dark Yagami gets Dark]]. On the 30th October 2016, he made another Halloween special named [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12210984/1/Keijo-Note-Dark-Yagami-and-the-Haunted-Chest Keijo Note Dark Yagami and the Haunted Chest]].
29th Oct '16 9:57:58 AM nombretomado
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* TheNineties: "It was the ninetys in America. Everyone was watching ''Series/{{Friends}}'' and listening to {{Music/Nirvana}} and [[BackstreetBoys Backseat Boys]] on [[DecadeDissonance records]] and [[{{Grease}} driving motorbikes and wearing lever jackets everywhere and being all slick]] and watching flims like [[Film/{{Ghostbusters|1984}} Goastbusters]] and [[Film/TheLordOfTheRings Lord of the Rings]]! There was no thing as the internet yet so peeps had to download stuff from their TV instead."

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* TheNineties: "It was the ninetys in America. Everyone was watching ''Series/{{Friends}}'' and listening to {{Music/Nirvana}} and [[BackstreetBoys Backseat Boys]] on [[DecadeDissonance records]] and [[{{Grease}} [[Film/{{Grease}} driving motorbikes and wearing lever jackets everywhere and being all slick]] and watching flims like [[Film/{{Ghostbusters|1984}} Goastbusters]] and [[Film/TheLordOfTheRings Lord of the Rings]]! There was no thing as the internet yet so peeps had to download stuff from their TV instead."
18th Oct '16 5:27:04 PM nombretomado
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* TheNineties: "It was the ninetys in America. Everyone was watching {{Friends}} and lissening to {{Music/Nirvana}} and [[BackstreetBoys Backseat Boys]] on [[DecadeDissonance records]] and [[{{Grease}} driving motorbikes and wearing lever jackets everywhere and being all slick]] and watching flims like [[Film/{{Ghostbusters|1984}} Goastbusters]] and [[Film/TheLordOfTheRings Lord of the Rings]]! There was no thing as the internet yet so peeps had to download stuff from their TV instead."

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* TheNineties: "It was the ninetys in America. Everyone was watching {{Friends}} ''Series/{{Friends}}'' and lissening listening to {{Music/Nirvana}} and [[BackstreetBoys Backseat Boys]] on [[DecadeDissonance records]] and [[{{Grease}} driving motorbikes and wearing lever jackets everywhere and being all slick]] and watching flims like [[Film/{{Ghostbusters|1984}} Goastbusters]] and [[Film/TheLordOfTheRings Lord of the Rings]]! There was no thing as the internet yet so peeps had to download stuff from their TV instead."
23rd Sep '16 10:39:15 PM hamza678
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** First off, Wales (or, rather, [[RougeAnfglesOfSatin]]) is ''not'' a town in England as the author would have you believe.

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** First off, Wales (or, rather, [[RougeAnfglesOfSatin]]) [[RougeAnglesOfSatin "whales"]]) is ''not'' a town in England as the author would have you believe.
16th Aug '16 12:08:31 PM Caliburn_Absolute
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* ArbitrarySkepticism: Surprisingly, lampshaded and averted.

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* ArbitrarySkepticism: ArbitrarySkepticism
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Surprisingly, lampshaded and averted.



* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: In his evil base, Light has "computers and lasers and a nuclear and an xbox 360".

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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: ArsonMurderAndJaywalking
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In his evil base, Light has "computers and lasers and a nuclear and an xbox 360".



* ArtisticLicenseBiology: There is no way that Watari can be brought back to life from BULLET WOUNDS thanks to CPR (alone, that's all the "explanation" given) at least a month after being shot and killed. The human body does not work like that.

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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: ArtisticLicenseBiology
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There is no way that Watari can be brought back to life from BULLET WOUNDS thanks to CPR (alone, that's all the "explanation" given) at least a month after being shot and killed. The human body does not work like that.



* ArtisticLicenseGeography: "''We sent him to a top secret orphanage in Whales (its a town in England)''"

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* ArtisticLicenseGeography: "''We sent him to a top secret orphanage in Whales (its ArtisticLicenseGeography
** First off, Wales (or, rather, [[RougeAnfglesOfSatin]]) is ''not''
a town in England)''"England as the author would have you believe.



* ArtisticLicenseHistory: When Dark goes back in time by 4 days to kill Near again, he takes him to his "[[RougeAnglesOfSatin wherehouse]] / Whorehouse" and reveals that he had it built when [[YouFailHistoryForever Watari was Queen]] (which hasn't happened yet) 6 MILLION YEARS AGO. [[ArtisticLicensePaleontology Before we can evern confirm humans even existed, let alone could build stuff]].

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* ArtisticLicenseHistory: ArtisticLicenseHistory
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When Dark goes back in time by 4 days to kill Near again, he takes him to his "[[RougeAnglesOfSatin wherehouse]] / Whorehouse" and reveals that he had it built when [[YouFailHistoryForever Watari was Queen]] (which hasn't happened yet) 6 MILLION YEARS AGO. [[ArtisticLicensePaleontology Before we can evern confirm humans even existed, let alone could build stuff]].



* ArtisticLicenseNuclearPhysics: The amount of things wrong with this sentence is... stunning.

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* ArtisticLicenseNuclearPhysics: ArtisticLicenseNuclearPhysics
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The amount of things wrong with this sentence is... stunning.



** What's Soichiro's car made of if this can happen?

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** What's Only exemplified by this sentence shortly afterward. One has to wonder if either the bomb was incredibly underpowered or Soichiro's car is made of if this can happen?some sort of indestructible material.



* BadassMustache: Soichiro's PornStache, which he "[[DastardlyWhiplash twisted like an evil guy]]".
** Not to mention Soichiro regrowing his mustache in the span of a chapter because he's so manly.
* {{BFG}}: Matsuda's 'police gun'. On its highest setting it fires '''whole [[AbnormalAmmo police]] [[CrazyAwesome cars]]!'''

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* BadassMustache: Soichiro's PornStache, which he "[[DastardlyWhiplash twisted like an evil guy]]".
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guy]]". Not to mention Soichiro regrowing his mustache how he regrows it in the span of a chapter because he's so manly.
* {{BFG}}: {{BFG}}
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Matsuda's 'police gun'. On its highest setting it fires '''whole [[AbnormalAmmo police]] [[CrazyAwesome cars]]!'''



* BiggusDickus: When he becomes a Shinigami the size of a bus, he gets a "man thingy" as big as a bus and '''twice as wide'''. Doesn't seem to affect his sex life, though.

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* BiggusDickus: BiggusDickus
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When he becomes a Shinigami the size of a bus, he gets a "man thingy" as big as a bus and '''twice as wide'''. Doesn't seem to affect his sex life, though.



* BoardingSchoolOfHorrors: Whammy House seems to be this in the epilogues. Watari stuffs Dark and Night into a '''box''' labelled "BORING STUFF DO NOT X-RAY" to take them on a plane.

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* BoardingSchoolOfHorrors: BoardingSchoolOfHorrors
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Whammy House seems to be this in the epilogues. Watari stuffs Dark and Night into a '''box''' labelled "BORING STUFF DO NOT X-RAY" to take them on a plane.



* ButtMonkey: Near. It's [[InvokedTrope invoked]] once, too.
** Light seems to have become one of these as well.

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* ButtMonkey: ButtMonkey
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Near. It's even [[InvokedTrope invoked]] once, too.
at one point.
** Light seems to have become slowly becomes one of these as well.



* ClusterFBomb: Soichiro.

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* ClusterFBomb: Soichiro.ClusterFBomb
** Soichiro does this more than once.



** And again in Chapter 25.



* ContinuitySnarl: An impressive feat considering that this story is only 36 pages long and written by a single person. Nobody (including the author himself) has an idea of what's going on any more - and it just keeps on getting funnier.

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* ContinuitySnarl: ContinuitySnarl
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An impressive feat considering that this story is only 36 pages long and written by a single person. Nobody (including the author himself) has an idea of what's going on any more by the end of it - and it the story just keeps on getting funnier.funnier because of this.



* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: "''"Why yes dear boy" answered dark coshing him over the head with a cosh.''"
** Or how about the "paint that the janitor used to paint things with".

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* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment
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"''"Why yes dear boy" answered dark coshing him over the head with a cosh.''"
** Or how about the "paint that the janitor used to paint things with".with"?



* DontExplainTheJoke: Many times, like when Sayu comes out of the closet to blackmail Misa into having sex with her, or Chapter 16's title "Good night Night ITS A PUN."
** Everytime Near is mentioned, something or someone is "near" him. The author feels the need to point this out explicitly.

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* DontExplainTheJoke: DontExplainTheJoke
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Many times, like when Sayu comes out of the closet to blackmail Misa into having sex with her, or Chapter 16's title "Good night Night ITS A PUN."
** Everytime Every time Near is mentioned, something or someone is "near" him. The author feels the need to point this out explicitly.



* DroppedABridgeOnHim: Light, Dark, Blud, though they get better.
** And the "Creepy Dude" who gets killed by a random asteroid in chapter 29. Though knowing how this story [[DeathIsCheap works]], he might make a [[UnexplainedRecovery reapperance.]]

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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: DroppedABridgeOnHim
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Light, Dark, Blud, though they get better.
** And the "Creepy Dude" who gets killed by a random asteroid in chapter 29. Though knowing with how this story [[DeathIsCheap works]], he might make a [[UnexplainedRecovery reapperance.]]came back not too long after... [[GenderBender As Creepy ''Chick'']]



* [[SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale Fanfic Writers Have No Sense Of Scale]]: If Blud is "like twice the size of Ryuk" he must have a hard time fitting himself into Light's bedroom.

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* [[SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale Fanfic Writers Have No Sense Of Scale]]: Scale]]
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If Blud is "like twice the size of Ryuk" he must have a hard time fitting himself into Light's bedroom.



* GunsAkimbo: Apparently used with Dark, but it's said that he "[[RougeAnglesOfSatin jumps out of a kimbo with guns]]"
** Watari with sniper rifles in Chapter 9.

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* GunsAkimbo: GunsAkimbo
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Apparently used with Dark, but it's said that he "[[RougeAnglesOfSatin jumps out of a kimbo with guns]]"
** Watari does this with sniper rifles in Chapter 9.



* ImprobableAimingSkills: Dark kills 1,000,000 stormtroopers with 100,000 bullets. That means every time he shoots, he kills on average ten people. Except he misses one... but then punches him so hard in face it kills 100 more.

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* ImprobableAimingSkills: ImprobableAimingSkills
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Dark kills 1,000,000 stormtroopers with 100,000 bullets. That means every time he shoots, he kills on average ten people. Except he misses one... but then punches him so hard in face it kills 100 more.



* ImprobablyCoolCar: The watarimobile.

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* ImprobablyCoolCar: The watarimobile.Watarimobile.



* IncestIsRelative: Somewhere down the line, the author seems to have forgotten that Sayu is Dark's sister.

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* IncestIsRelative: IncestIsRelative
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Somewhere down the line, the author seems to have forgotten that Sayu is Dark's sister.



* KickTheSonOfABitch: Attempted with Dark attacking Near... except [[InformedAttribute despite what we're told]], Near never does anything deserving of his kicking.

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* KickTheSonOfABitch: KickTheSonOfABitch
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Attempted with Dark attacking Near... except [[InformedAttribute despite what we're told]], Near never does anything deserving of his kicking.



* KilledOffForReal: The Anti-Life Note kills people and prevents the Life Note from bringing them back.
** It's used on Near, but [[UnexplainedRecovery he's fine in the next chapter]].
* KillEmAll: by the end the world has been destroyed, every person aside from Dark and Samanther are dead. Yet somehow or another the author claims there can be new adventures.

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* KilledOffForReal: The Anti-Life Note kills people and prevents the Life Note from bringing them back.
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back. It's used on Near, but [[UnexplainedRecovery he's fine in the next chapter]].
* KillEmAll: by By the end the world has been destroyed, every person aside from Dark and Samanther are dead. Yet somehow or another the author claims there can be new adventures.



* LudicrousGibs: What remains of Matt after his car explodes.

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* LudicrousGibs: LudicrousGibs
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What remains of Matt after his car explodes.



* MindScrew: Dark can jump out of the basement window and fall 20 feet onto a lit barbecue... and live. Because he has an erection...

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* MindScrew: MindScrew
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Dark can jump out of the basement window and fall 20 feet onto a lit barbecue... and live. Because he has an erection...



* MoreDakka: Blud's seventeen crossbows stuck together with blood and "[[RougeAnglesOfSatin duck tape]]".

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* MoreDakka: MoreDakka
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Blud's seventeen crossbows stuck together with blood and "[[RougeAnglesOfSatin duck tape]]".



* MyNaymeIs: When Dark becomes a shinigami, he renames himself Du'arq. Except it usually gets spelled Da'urq. Or D'uark. Or D'rq. Or Du'Raq.
** Sa~Y'u, anyone?

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* MyNaymeIs: MyNaymeIs
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When Dark becomes a shinigami, Shinigami, he renames himself Du'arq. Except it usually gets spelled Da'urq. Or D'uark. Or D'rq. Or Du'Raq.
** Sa~Y'u, anyone?Then Sayu becomes a Shinigami herself and is renamed Sa~Y'u.



* NoIndoorVoice: Watari, Blud, Sorchiro

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* NoIndoorVoice: Watari, Blud, Sorchiroand Soichiro



* PlotHole: Dark's Royal Death Note kills anyone's who name is written in it, even if you don't know their face or name. So... what ''do'' you write in it? To be fair, he could kill L just by writting "L" in it. Whether this was the Royal Death Note's exception or yet another unintentional ([[ParodyFic or not]]) is left for you to decide.

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* PlotHole: Dark's Royal Death Note kills anyone's who name is written in it, even if you don't know their face or name. So... what ''do'' you write in it? To be fair, he could kill L just by writting writing "L" in it. Whether this was the Royal Death Note's exception or yet another unintentional ([[ParodyFic or not]]) is left for you to decide.



* RatedMForManly Soichiro. WordOfGod states that he's so manly that he can grow facial hair at an extremely fast rate.
** He's also so manly that when he yells into a cellphone, [[CrazyAwesome the satellite explodes, raining flaming debris on Seattle and Moscow, and STILL make the call go through]].

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* RatedMForManly RatedMForManly: Soichiro. WordOfGod states that he's so manly that he can grow facial hair at an extremely fast rate.
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rate. He's also so manly that when he yells into a cellphone, [[CrazyAwesome the satellite explodes, raining flaming debris on Seattle and Moscow, and STILL make the call go through]].



* ResetButton: After Sayu launches nuclear missiles at Du'Arq, the changes he made, like making Watari Queen of England, are undone.
** The Reeset Note from the start of Chapter 35 also qualifies.

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* ResetButton: ResetButton
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After Sayu launches nuclear missiles at Du'Arq, the changes he made, like making Watari Queen of England, are undone.
** The Reeset Reset Note from the start of Chapter 35 also qualifies.



* RougeAnglesOfSatin: Most of the story, but several lines stand out:

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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: RougeAnglesOfSatin
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Most of the story, but several lines stand out:



--> ''"[=BLud=] said he will make me king of the shinigami if we win this fight so now we have to DOUBLE FIGHT" He shouted at every one because he was the leader and this is the part of the movie where [[DarkestHour everyon's all like "WE'RE GONNA LOSE"]] and dark is like "[[DoNotGoGentle NO WAY M-THERF-CKERS]]" and [[MisfitMobilizationMoment everyone cheered]]''
* RuleOfCool: Referenced at least. "I KNOW NOAMI WAS NOT ENLGISH BUT IT MAKESS THE STORY COOLER THIS WAY!"
** You can't read a passage like this one and tell me this isn't the coolest thing ever:
->Things got more awesome and they were fighting on the roof and there was lighting all around and winds blew everyones hair aaround and also blew away the [[ModestyBedSheet sheet night was using to not be naked.]] An thunder smash the roof of the building and bits of tile flew every where and it was very scary. Like if youve ever jumped in front of a bus and the bus was being driven by satan and there was a dead frog on the front and fire instead of a windscreen - thats how scary it was.
*** This entire fic is basically fueled by this trope.

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--> ''"[=BLud=] said he will make me king of the shinigami Shinigami if we win this fight so now we have to DOUBLE FIGHT" He shouted at every one because he was the leader and this is the part of the movie where [[DarkestHour everyon's all like "WE'RE GONNA LOSE"]] and dark is like "[[DoNotGoGentle NO WAY M-THERF-CKERS]]" and [[MisfitMobilizationMoment everyone cheered]]''
* RuleOfCool: RuleOfCool
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Referenced at least.one point. "I KNOW NOAMI WAS NOT ENLGISH BUT IT MAKESS THE STORY COOLER THIS WAY!"
** You can't read a passage like this one and tell me this say it isn't the coolest thing ever:
->Things
ridiculously awesome:
-->Things
got more awesome and they were fighting on the roof and there was lighting all around and winds blew everyones hair aaround and also blew away the [[ModestyBedSheet sheet night was using to not be naked.]] An thunder smash the roof of the building and bits of tile flew every where and it was very scary. Like if youve ever jumped in front of a bus and the bus was being driven by satan and there was a dead frog on the front and fire instead of a windscreen - thats how scary it was.
*** ** This entire fic is basically fueled by this trope.



* ShapedLikeItself: the favourite snack of Dark's shinigami Blud: "blood bananas made of blood". Also, "The nuclear bom went off like a bom".

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* ShapedLikeItself: the The favourite snack of Dark's shinigami Blud: Shinigami Blud? "blood bananas made of blood". Also, "The nuclear bom went off like a bom".



* TrollFic: And it just gets more and more obvious with each new chapter.

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* TrollFic: TrollFic
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And it just gets more and more obvious with each new chapter.



* UnexplainedRecovery: Blud comes back from being killed by Dark without explaining how he did so.

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* UnexplainedRecovery: UnexplainedRecovery
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Blud comes back from being killed by Dark without explaining how he did so.






* WholePlotReference: To Literature/AChristmasCarol. It's [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] once.
** Including, of all things, a ShoutOut to ''Film/TheMuppetChristmasCarol''.

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* WholePlotReference: WholePlotReference
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To Literature/AChristmasCarol. It's [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] once.
** Including, of all things,
once, and there's even a ShoutOut to ''Film/TheMuppetChristmasCarol''.



* YouKeepUsingThatWord: The frequent use of "muttered" as a synonym for "shouted", "yelled", etc.

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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: YouKeepUsingThatWord
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The frequent use of "muttered" as a synonym for "shouted", "yelled", etc.



* YouKillItYouBoughtIt: That's how you become the shinigami king.

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* YouKillItYouBoughtIt: YouKillItYouBoughtIt
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That's how you become the shinigami Shinigami king.



* ZombieApocalypse: "THE BURNED RADIACTIV WASTELAND FULL OF ZOMBIES THAT WAS ONCE AMERICA"
** A Shoutout to ''VideoGame/{{Fallout}}'', perhaps?

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* ZombieApocalypse: "THE Possibly a ShoutOut to VideoGame/{{Fallout}}.
-->THE
BURNED RADIACTIV WASTELAND FULL OF ZOMBIES THAT WAS ONCE AMERICA"
** A Shoutout to ''VideoGame/{{Fallout}}'', perhaps?
AMERICA
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