History Fanfic / InnerDemons

12th Dec '16 3:48:55 PM MrKingXemnas
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* FusionDance: [[spoiler: Apple Bloom (in her Master of Harmony form) and Twilight fuse into a white alicorn to finish off the TrueFinalBoss.]]
12th Dec '16 3:40:18 PM MrKingXemnas
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* WrongGenreSavvy: [[spoiler: Scootaloo]] believes that she is [[spoiler: the prophesied Master of Harmony who will defeat Queen!Twilight and save the world.]] She's wrong.
11th Dec '16 11:46:09 AM nombretomado
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* CompellingVoice: One of the abilities that Queen!Twilight learns following her FaceHeelTurn is a very [[CodeGeass Geass-like]] spell that allows her to brainwash whoever she uses it on [[spoiler: including Princess Luna]].

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One of the abilities that Queen!Twilight learns following her FaceHeelTurn is a very [[CodeGeass [[Franchise/CodeGeass Geass-like]] spell that allows her to brainwash whoever she uses it on [[spoiler: including Princess Luna]].



* ShoutOut: As mentioned above, Queen!Twilight's [[CompellingVoice mind control spell]] is very similar to a [[CodeGeass Geass]]. In fact, her statement when shutting down Cadence's magic -- "Never use magic again!" -- is very similar to Lelouch's "Never speak again!" moment with Mao. Lezard even refers to this ability as "the Power of the Queen", and his explanation of how it works sounds very similar to the mechanics of Lelouch's Geass.

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* ShoutOut: As mentioned above, ShoutOut:
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Queen!Twilight's [[CompellingVoice mind control spell]] is very similar to a [[CodeGeass [[Franchise/CodeGeass Geass]]. In fact, her statement when shutting down Cadence's magic -- "Never use magic again!" -- is very similar to Lelouch's "Never speak again!" moment with Mao. Lezard even refers to this ability as "the Power of the Queen", and his explanation of how it works sounds very similar to the mechanics of Lelouch's Geass.



*** When Apple Bloom meets with [[spoiler: Trixie in the afterlife]], it plays out similar to a scene between Harry and [[spoiler: Dumbledore]] in ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows The Deathly Hallows]]''.

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*** ** When Apple Bloom meets with [[spoiler: Trixie in the afterlife]], it plays out similar to a scene between Harry and [[spoiler: Dumbledore]] in ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows The Deathly Hallows]]''.
19th Jul '16 9:50:45 AM Ferot_Dreadnaught
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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Despite believing herself to have already killed the other Element bearers, the first thing Queen!Twilight does after taking the throne and establishing her power base is to dispatch one of her lieutenants and a large number of {{Mooks}} to Ponyville to check to see if they survived.
30th Jun '15 9:10:37 AM nombretomado
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** When Lezard brings up reincarnation and its implied EternalRecurrence, the phrase "[[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined All this has has happened before, and all this may happen again]]" comes up.

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** When Lezard brings up reincarnation and its implied EternalRecurrence, the phrase "[[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined "[[Series/BattlestarGalactica2003 All this has has happened before, and all this may happen again]]" comes up.
27th Nov '14 8:01:05 PM Scorntex
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* AnyoneCanDie: So far, [[spoiler:Ponyville, Shining Armor and possibly Celestia have all died.]]


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* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler:Luna. Apparently it's out of a desire for power.]]


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* IncestIsRelative: Twilight still has feelings for Shining Armor, and doesn't bother hiding it.
6th Aug '14 6:54:06 PM Scorntex
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* SenselessSacrifice: [[spoiler:In the end, Rarity willingly gives up her body and soul for Vale...who goes on to become the genocidal BigBad of ''Inner Demons II''.]]

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* SenselessSacrifice: [[spoiler:In the end, Rarity willingly gives up her body and soul for Vale... who goes on to become the genocidal BigBad of ''Inner Demons II''.]]



* ChekhovsMIA: Apple Bloom is currently "missing".

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* ChekhovsMIA: ChekhovMIA: Apple Bloom is currently "missing".



* GoodOlWays: Red Gala, a.k.a [[spoiler:Granny Smith reborn]], finds the way Sweet Apple Acres is being run by Applejack and Flim and Flam as disgusting.

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* GoodOlWays: GoodOldWays: Red Gala, a.k.a [[spoiler:Granny Smith reborn]], finds the way Sweet Apple Acres is being run by Applejack and Flim and Flam as disgusting.
6th Aug '14 5:56:11 PM SomeNewGuy
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* BigBad: From the looks it, Black Sun, leader of the Sons of Midnight.

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* BigBad: From the looks it, Black Sun, leader of the Sons of Midnight. [[spoiler:Vale is also a contender, given how she has explicitly stated her willingness to burn Equestria to the ground, killing millions, if it meant killing [[DarkMessiah Twilight]].]]
6th Aug '14 5:04:45 PM Scorntex
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* NotWhatISignedOnFor: Tracy didn't realise what the Sons of Midnight were after. It's only when [[spoiler:they prepare to sacrifice everyone in Ponyville that he realises they might not be on the same page.]]


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** Chapter 10: The Sons of Midnight [[spoiler:turn all of Ponyville into a sacrifice to free Katastroph, killing everyone left in it.]]
6th Aug '14 4:42:39 PM Scorntex
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: All the Sons of Midnight have the Power of the Queen, meaning they can do this to ponies.



* ComeWithMeIfYouWantToLive: Said by Octavia to Diamond Tiara in chapter 8.



* GoodOlWays: Red Gala, a.k.a [[spoiler:Granny Smith reborn]], finds the way Sweet Apple Acres is being run by Applejack and Flim and Flam as disgusting.



* [[EvilCannotComprehendGood Jerks Cannot Comprehend Good]]: Vale doesn't get why ponies don't want her to kill a pony.



* PsychosomaticSuperpowerOutage: Pinkie Pie's Laughter-based powers stop working during a fight in chapter 9.



* TookALevelInJerkass: By the time the story starts, [[spoiler:Fluttershy has taken several, edging into AbusiveParent territory in the process.]]

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* TookALevelInJerkass: By the time the story starts, [[spoiler:Fluttershy has taken several, edging into AbusiveParent territory becoming neglectful towards her daughter Daisy in the process.]]]]
* VillainousIncest: [[spoiler:Red Gala, formerly known as Granny Smith, forces herself on Big Macintosh.]]
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 9, where Pinkie Pie's Element stops working properly, and then goes dead.



** "That pony... That's [[spoiler:Granny Smith]].




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* WouldHurtAChild: Red Gala injures Daisy. This sets Fluttershy's MamaBear instincts off.
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