History Fanfic / InnerDemons

30th Jun '15 9:10:37 AM nombretomado
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** When Lezard brings up reincarnation and its implied EternalRecurrence, the phrase "[[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined All this has has happened before, and all this may happen again]]" comes up.

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** When Lezard brings up reincarnation and its implied EternalRecurrence, the phrase "[[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined "[[Series/BattlestarGalactica2003 All this has has happened before, and all this may happen again]]" comes up.
27th Nov '14 8:01:05 PM Scorntex
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* AnyoneCanDie: So far, [[spoiler:Ponyville, Shining Armor and possibly Celestia have all died.]]


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* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler:Luna. Apparently it's out of a desire for power.]]


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* IncestIsRelative: Twilight still has feelings for Shining Armor, and doesn't bother hiding it.
6th Aug '14 6:54:06 PM Scorntex
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* SenselessSacrifice: [[spoiler:In the end, Rarity willingly gives up her body and soul for Vale...who goes on to become the genocidal BigBad of ''Inner Demons II''.]]

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* SenselessSacrifice: [[spoiler:In the end, Rarity willingly gives up her body and soul for Vale... who goes on to become the genocidal BigBad of ''Inner Demons II''.]]



* ChekhovsMIA: Apple Bloom is currently "missing".

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* ChekhovsMIA: ChekhovMIA: Apple Bloom is currently "missing".



* GoodOlWays: Red Gala, a.k.a [[spoiler:Granny Smith reborn]], finds the way Sweet Apple Acres is being run by Applejack and Flim and Flam as disgusting.

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* GoodOlWays: GoodOldWays: Red Gala, a.k.a [[spoiler:Granny Smith reborn]], finds the way Sweet Apple Acres is being run by Applejack and Flim and Flam as disgusting.
6th Aug '14 5:56:11 PM SomeNewGuy
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* BigBad: From the looks it, Black Sun, leader of the Sons of Midnight.

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* BigBad: From the looks it, Black Sun, leader of the Sons of Midnight. [[spoiler:Vale is also a contender, given how she has explicitly stated her willingness to burn Equestria to the ground, killing millions, if it meant killing [[DarkMessiah Twilight]].]]
6th Aug '14 5:04:45 PM Scorntex
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* NotWhatISignedOnFor: Tracy didn't realise what the Sons of Midnight were after. It's only when [[spoiler:they prepare to sacrifice everyone in Ponyville that he realises they might not be on the same page.]]


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** Chapter 10: The Sons of Midnight [[spoiler:turn all of Ponyville into a sacrifice to free Katastroph, killing everyone left in it.]]
6th Aug '14 4:42:39 PM Scorntex
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: All the Sons of Midnight have the Power of the Queen, meaning they can do this to ponies.



* ComeWithMeIfYouWantToLive: Said by Octavia to Diamond Tiara in chapter 8.



* GoodOlWays: Red Gala, a.k.a [[spoiler:Granny Smith reborn]], finds the way Sweet Apple Acres is being run by Applejack and Flim and Flam as disgusting.



* [[EvilCannotComprehendGood Jerks Cannot Comprehend Good]]: Vale doesn't get why ponies don't want her to kill a pony.



* PsychosomaticSuperpowerOutage: Pinkie Pie's Laughter-based powers stop working during a fight in chapter 9.



* TookALevelInJerkass: By the time the story starts, [[spoiler:Fluttershy has taken several, edging into AbusiveParent territory in the process.]]

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* TookALevelInJerkass: By the time the story starts, [[spoiler:Fluttershy has taken several, edging into AbusiveParent territory becoming neglectful towards her daughter Daisy in the process.]]]]
* VillainousIncest: [[spoiler:Red Gala, formerly known as Granny Smith, forces herself on Big Macintosh.]]
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 9, where Pinkie Pie's Element stops working properly, and then goes dead.



** "That pony... That's [[spoiler:Granny Smith]].




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* WouldHurtAChild: Red Gala injures Daisy. This sets Fluttershy's MamaBear instincts off.
6th Aug '14 4:29:24 PM Scorntex
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* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler:Morgana made a deal with the King of Tartarus, then turned on him and stole some of his power.]]



** Twilight is pretty shocked to learn that, yeah, Diamond Tiara does actually want to ''hurt'' her mother.

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** Twilight is pretty shocked to learn that, yeah, Diamond Tiara does actually want to ''hurt'' her mother. mother after all she's done.
* AntiChrist: Diamond Tiara is the Appraiser of the End, the being who will lead Katastrophus out of Tartarus and bring about the end of the world. She's much rather be an AntiAntiChrist.
* BigBad: From the looks it, Black Sun, leader of the Sons of Midnight.
* {{Bishonen}}: Tracy, as the narration explicitly points out.


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* LaughingMad: Diamond Tiara, [[spoiler:once she accepts her role as the Appraiser and kills her mother.]]


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* RageBreakingPoint: Pearl Necklace insulting Apple Bloom finally causes Diamond Tiara to yell at her.


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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: Tracy wants revenge on everyone responsible for the death of his sister, [[spoiler:Trixie.]]
6th Aug '14 4:16:07 PM Scorntex
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* AntagonisticOffspring: Twilight Sparkle (or more accurately, Midnight) and her father Katastrophus, King of Tartarus.
** Twilight is pretty shocked to learn that, yeah, Diamond Tiara does actually want to ''hurt'' her mother.
* ChekhovsMIA: Apple Bloom is currently "missing".



* DarkerAndEdgier: Not that the original Inner Demons was a romp in the park, but this story is pretty damn dark already.



* IdiotBall: Somehow Twilight Sparkle cannot tell that leaving Diamond Tiara with her mother, whom she's openly expressed her hatred for, is a Bad Idea.



** Prince Blueblood. And yet Princess Celestia and Princess Luna actually think it's a good idea to leave Canterlot in his hooves.
* LetMeTellYouAStory: Twilight tells Fluttershy a tale about two goddesses. Fluttershy catches on pretty quickly that it's about Midnight and Vale.



* [[ThatManIsDead That Mare Is Dead]]: Vale is very insistent that [[spoiler:Rarity is gone.]] But every now and then...

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* [[ThatManIsDead That Mare Is Dead]]: Vale is very insistent that [[spoiler:Rarity is gone.]] But every now and then... Twilight uses this to anger her.
* ThatThingIsNotMyChild: Pearl Necklace keeps calling Diamond Tiara a "devil-child".
6th Aug '14 3:59:58 PM Scorntex
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* AbusiveParent: Pearl Necklace, Diamond Tiara's mother, is an insane, needy, emotionally and verbally abusive pony, and the reason Diamond Tiara used to be who she was. Eventually Diamond Tiara reaches her breaking point.

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* AbusiveParent: Pearl Necklace, Diamond Tiara's mother, is an insane, needy, selfish, lazy, emotionally and verbally abusive pony, and the reason Diamond Tiara used to be who she was. Eventually Diamond Tiara reaches her breaking point.


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* {{Foreshadowing}}: While wondering what sort of being Diamond Tiara could be, Silver Spoon checks a book which mentions among other things ''Succubi''.


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* ItIsDehumanizing: Vale refers to Diamond Tiara this way.
* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Pearl Necklace. She makes a scene at her husband's funeral when Diamond Tiara's friends try to comfort her, then demands to leave before the ceremony's even over.
* MoodWhiplash: Chapter 6 goes from a frank discussion of Pearl Necklace's mental state to Sweetie Belle wondering if Silver Spoon is in fact a robot (or, as the narration puts it: "a very sexy android")
* MyBelovedSmother: Pearl Necklace, again, is determined to control every aspect of Diamond Tiara's life.


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* PsychoactivePowers: Diamond Tiara's magic responds to her emotions. The worse she feels, the more damage they do.
6th Aug '14 3:45:51 PM Scorntex
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* {{Cult}}: The Sons of Midnight, who are an ObviouslyEvil bunch of ponies who wander around in black cloaks.


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* KnightTemplar: Vale, Vale, ''Vale''. She is incapable of believing Twilight Sparkle is anything more than a monstrous demon, and admits that if Twilight gets in her way, she'll do her level best to kill her.


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* {{Reincarnation}}: Octavia is Morgana reborn.
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Just seeing Vale again is enough for Twilight Sparkle's eyes to turn red.


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* [[ThatManIsDead That Mare Is Dead]]: Vale is very insistent that [[spoiler:Rarity is gone.]] But every now and then...


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* WhamLine: "What she's trying to say is that Mister Rich had a heart attack!"
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