History Fanfic / InThisWorldAndTheNext

20th Aug '15 10:21:45 AM szaleniec1000
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-->It's tempting to say this author is bad at characterisation, but that's not quite true. He's very good at characterisation, but terrible at making it match his intentions. I have a good picture in my head of Lord Potter the self-righteous arrogant bastard, Hermione the submissive damsel, and now McGonagall as a Wormtail figure abandoning her friends when someone more apparently powerful comes along, but that's obviously not what the author intended.
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-->It's tempting to say this author is bad at characterisation, but that's not quite true. He's very good at characterisation, but terrible at making it match his intentions. I have a good picture in my head of Lord Potter the [[JerkAss self-righteous arrogant bastard, bastard]], Hermione the [[{{Chickification}} submissive damsel, damsel]], and now McGonagall [=McGonagall=] as [[DirtyCoward a Wormtail figure abandoning her friends when someone more apparently powerful comes along, along]], but that's obviously not what the author intended.
30th Jul '15 8:10:04 PM AnonFangeekGirl
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* FacingTheBulletsOneLiner: Hermione insults Ron one last time before saying to the dementor, "C'mon big guy, I've been kissed by Ron Weasley so this should actually seem pleasant!" This is the first indication we get of [[{{Chickification}} Hermione's]] canonical {{badass}}ery.
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* FacingTheBulletsOneLiner: Hermione insults Ron one last time before saying to the dementor, "C'mon big guy, I've been kissed by Ron Weasley so this should actually seem pleasant!" This is the first (and only) indication we get of [[{{Chickification}} Hermione's]] canonical {{badass}}ery.
29th Jul '15 4:30:16 PM chelonianmobile
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* InformedAttribute: In the words of [[http://szaleniec1000.livejournal.com szaleniec1000]]: -->It's tempting to say this author is bad at characterisation, but that's not quite true. He's very good at characterisation, but terrible at making it match his intentions. I have a good picture in my head of Lord Potter the self-righteous arrogant bastard, Hermione the submissive damsel, and now McGonagall as a Wormtail figure abandoning her friends when someone more apparently powerful comes along, but that's obviously not what the author intended.
13th Jun '15 10:04:59 AM AnonFangeekGirl
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* CardCarryingVillain: Ron doesn't seem to have any real motivation for his behaviour in this fic.
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* CardCarryingVillain: Ron doesn't seem Ron's characterization has become a medley of all the unpleasant traits the author could dump on, with no regard to have any real motivation for his behaviour in this fic.how they mesh together (see InformedFlaw)

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* CardCarryingVillain: GenericDoomsdayVillain: Ron doesn't seem to have any real motivation for his behaviour behavior in this fic.
25th Jan '15 9:19:10 AM Honorable_Baldy
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He's back.
As of July 13th, [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1451358/robst Robst]] has deleted his profile and replaced the picture with Porky Pig saying "That's all folks". His stories are still available.
24th Jan '15 7:46:27 PM szaleniec1000
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* {{Qurac}}: Egypt is depicted this way, complete with locals who want to buy Molly for camels.
18th Dec '14 2:39:22 PM Jake
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* GenderBender: The consequence of Ron's GroinAttack.
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* GenderBender: The consequence of Ron's GroinAttack. UnfortunateImplications does not even ''begin'' to cover this.
15th Nov '14 10:54:28 AM szaleniec1000
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* ExactWords: Dumbledore asks Harry if he could "have a quick word" and Harry says "velocity", an uncredited [[ShoutOut reference]] to a similar outburst by Scottish football manager [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gordon_Strachan Gordon Strachan]] when he was faced with that question from a reporter.
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* ExactWords: Dumbledore asks Harry if he could "have a quick word" and Harry says "velocity", an uncredited [[ShoutOut reference]] to a similar outburst by Scottish football manager (and legendary DeadpanSnarker) [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gordon_Strachan Gordon Strachan]] when he was faced with that question from a reporter.
15th Nov '14 10:51:01 AM szaleniec1000
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* ExactWords: Dumbledore asks Harry if he could "have a quick word" and Harry says "velocity".
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* ExactWords: Dumbledore asks Harry if he could "have a quick word" and Harry says "velocity"."velocity", an uncredited [[ShoutOut reference]] to a similar outburst by Scottish football manager [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gordon_Strachan Gordon Strachan]] when he was faced with that question from a reporter.
13th Nov '14 10:31:05 AM chuckg
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* MoralDissonance: Not only is pureblood supremacy presented as being as evil as it is in canon, characters who aren't pureblood supremacists in the books are in the fic for no reason but to show us [[PoliticallyIncorrectVillain how evil they are]]. However, Harry loves nothing more than exercising his privileges as "Lord Potter" and demanding that everyone address him as such. So claiming you're better than other people because of the circumstances of your birth is bad, [[BrokenAesop except when it isn't]].
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* MoralDissonance: Not only is pureblood supremacy presented as being as evil as it is in canon, characters who aren't pureblood supremacists in the books are in the fic for no reason but to show us [[PoliticallyIncorrectVillain how evil they are]]. However, Harry loves nothing more than exercising his privileges as "Lord Potter" and demanding that everyone address him as such. So claiming you're better than other people because of the circumstances of your birth is bad, [[BrokenAesop except when it isn't]]. Admittedly, using aristocratic precedence to get yourself preferential treatment socially is still a far cry from using it to violate civil rights and get away with murder, so Harry can at least still claim ''some'' moral high ground.
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