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* NiceHat: Shou's fedoras, as in canon. However, in this case, it's explicitly said he wears one due to his mentor wearing one.
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* {{Trigger}}: Being reminded of Narumi's death is this for Shou.
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* PragmaticAdaptation: Several Dopants are changed or removed simply because Cloudsdale is a completely different environment than Futo was.
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* AdaptedOut: Several of the canon Dopants, some due to wanting to avoid just being 'Kamen Rider double with ponies), but others (such as Magma and Anomalocaris) being simply due the change of setting to a floating city several hundred feet in the air.
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* AdaptedOut: Several of the canon Dopants, some due to wanting to avoid just being 'Kamen "''Kamen Rider double Double'' with ponies), ponies"), but others (such as Magma and Anomalocaris) being simply due the change of setting to a floating city several hundred feet in the air.
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** Case 5 (& 6, when it gets written): Hail and Industry.
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** Case 5 (& 6, when it gets written): & 6: Hail and Industry.Industry [[spoiler:(the latter escaping to fight another day)]].
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* {{Trigger}}: Being reminded of Narumi's death is this for Shou.
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* MundaneUtility: In Case 5, Rainbowshine points out there's no reason she ''shouldn't'' exploit Philip's access to the Gaia Memory to get information on mundane crimes that don't involve Dopants, and does so to bust a smuggling ring.
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* MightyGlacier: Industry, who while slow, is incredibly strong and durable. Can become a LightningBruiser by reving up his engine a bit.
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* NoSell: The Industry Dopant has such thick armor that Double needs to be in a Metal form for the Dopant to actually feel their attacks.
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* WrongContextMagic: Due to the Double Driver, Shou and Philip can use Gaia Memories to ''change'' Cutie Marks, something that is very usual.
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* WrongContextMagic: Due to the Double Driver, Shou and Philip can use Gaia Memories to ''change'' Cutie Marks, something that is normally takes very usual.powerful magic.
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* FeelNoPain: While using the Metal Memory to change his Cutie Mark, Shou gets this ability. He does note, however, this means he tends to take quite a bit more of a beating in that state due to this.
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* WrongContextMagic: Due to the Double Driver, Shou and Philip can use Gaia Memories to ''change'' Cutie Marks, something that is very usual.
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* DefeatEqualsFriendship: A part of Shou's character is trying to ''invoke'' this. He's shown visiting several defeated Dopants in prison attempting to reform and befriend them and encourages the same from Akiko. [[spoiler:Both seem to be making progress.]]
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''All things have a memory, and the planet is no different. The Gaia Memory contains knowledge of everything that has ever existed in the land of Equestria. If knowledge is power, then the power of the Gaia Memory is a great and terrible indeed.''
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''All things have a memory, and the planet is no different. The Gaia Memory contains knowledge of everything that has ever existed in the land of Equestria. If knowledge is power, then the power of the Gaia Memory is a great and terrible indeed.''
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* ChekhovsGun: Early on, Chain Links receives a new Gaia Memory. It isn't until Case 5 that he actually uses it, revealing it to be Industry.
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* {{Leitmotif}}: WordOfGod has stated that [[http://youtu.be/w8GZZQR96wk Grindery]] from ''VideoGame/LunarTheSilverStar'' is Industry's.
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** Case 5 & 6: Gina and her daughter Hope, being targeted by the Hail Dopant and his superior Chain Links/Industry.
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** Case 1&2: Avalanche and Pteranodon.
** Case 3&4: Icarus/Wing Dopant.
** Case 5(& 6, when it gets written): Hail and Industry.
** Case 3&4: Icarus/Wing Dopant.
** Case 5(& 6, when it gets written): Hail and Industry.
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** Case 1&2: 1 & 2: Avalanche and Pteranodon.
** Case3&4: 3 & 4: Icarus/Wing Dopant.
** Case5(& 5 (& 6, when it gets written): Hail and Industry.
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** Case 1&2: Gilded Cage, who's apartments are being targeted. [[spoiler:Subverted in that he's actually the second Dopant and committing insurance fraud, making the real victim Firebrand.]]
** Case 3&4: Several competitors lined up for the Best Young Fliers competition being targeted by Icarus.
** Case 3&4: Several competitors lined up for the Best Young Fliers competition being targeted by Icarus.
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** Case 1&2: 1 & 2: Gilded Cage, who's apartments are being targeted. [[spoiler:Subverted in that he's actually the second Dopant and committing insurance fraud, making the real victim Firebrand.]]
** Case3&4: 3 & 4: Several competitors lined up for the Best Young Fliers competition being targeted by Icarus.
** Case
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** Case 3&4: Several competitors lined up for the Best Young Fliers competition being targeted by Icarus.
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** Case 3&4: Several competitors lined up for the Best Young Fliers competition being targeted by Icarus. Icarus.
* VerbalTic: Akiko never uses contractions involving the word 'is'. WordOfGod is there is a reason for this.
* VerbalTic: Akiko never uses contractions involving the word 'is'. WordOfGod is there is a reason for this.
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* TheCameo: Rainbow Dash has a brief appearance in Case 4 [[spoiler:receiving a letter asking for advice on the Icarus case and helping him solve it.]]
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* ChildhoodFriends: Shou is one with Rainbow Dash, Gilda, Fluttershy, and Kosuke, as in the main story.
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* NightmareFuelStationAttendant: Ghost Story, Shou's folklorist, is this, having a horror book store and generally loving getting a person to jump. However, she still comforts Akiko when she gets ''too'' scared.
* OhCrap: Shou and Rainbowshine have this reaction when they realize [[spoiler:Slipstream is Icarus/Wing Dopant and Akiko is AloneWithThePsycho.]]
* OhCrap: Shou and Rainbowshine have this reaction when they realize [[spoiler:Slipstream is Icarus/Wing Dopant and Akiko is AloneWithThePsycho.]]
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* HandicappedBadass: While not crippled, Shou is a weak flier, thus why he uses [=HardBoilder=] to get around. This does not stop him from kicking flank.
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* HandicappedBadass: While not crippled, Shou is a was born with weak flier, wings, thus why he uses [=HardBoilder=] to get around. around as even a simple flight from Cloudsdale to the Wonderbolt Academy tires him out severely. This does not stop him from kicking flank.flank.
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Called Cases, each shares the same style as the original series, having a "<story arc>/<episode>" style and the first part containing a letter that has to do with the arc.
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Called Cases, each shares the same style as the original series, having a "<story arc>/<episode>" style and the first part containing a letter that has to do with the arc.
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* EvilIsNotAToy: Messing with Dopant Gaia Memories never ends well. Even if they got it for purely innocent reasons, the corruption can twist their motivations into something far more dangerous.
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* ThisIsYourBrainOnEvil: While Gaia Memories corrupted their users in the original story, the effects are shown more heavily here. As corruption worsens, the Gaia Memory users normally suffer SanitySlippage, even if they got the Memory for completely innocent reasons.
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* EvilIsNotAToy: Messing with Dopant Gaia Memories never ends well. Even if they got it for purely innocent reasons, the corruption can twist their motivations into something far more dangerous.
* GreenEyedMonster: Icarus/Wing Dopant's motivation. [[spoiler:Turns out to be due to the Wing Memory inducing MotiveDecay.]]
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** Case 3&4: Icarus.
* MoralityKitchenSink: Discussed by Shou, who points out while there is [[BlackAndWhiteMorality black and white in the world]], there are also shades of grey.
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** Case 3&4: Icarus.
Icarus/Wing Dopant.
* MoralityKitchenSink: Discussed by Shou, who points out while there is [[BlackAndWhiteMorality black and white in the world]], there are also shades of grey.
* MoralityKitchenSink: Discussed by Shou, who points out while there is [[BlackAndWhiteMorality black and white in the world]], there are also shades of grey.
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* RedHerring: Due to the detective theme, there are naturally examples of this.
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* RedHerring: Due to the detective theme, there are naturally examples of this. this.
** [[spoiler: Firebrand in particular is one.]] Everyone reading who had also seen Double immediately thought that she was the second Dopant. [[spoiler: Wrong. It was Gilded Cage.]]
** [[spoiler: Firebrand in particular is one.]] Everyone reading who had also seen Double immediately thought that she was the second Dopant. [[spoiler: Wrong. It was Gilded Cage.]]
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* BigBad: Ryubee Sonozaki, as in canon, but WordOfGod is the story will use the Sonozakis similar to how Phoenix and Medusa were utilized in the main fic.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Rainbowshine comes off as this.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Rainbowshine comes off as this. this.
* DrillSergeantNasty: Due to Case 3 taking place at the Wonderbolt Academy, Spitfire is in this mindset.
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Ryubee Sonozaki's consists of him scaring the Tartarus out of Chain Link, a street boss, with the implication he had [[Fanfic/RainbowFactory a certain song Chain Link has a childhood fear of playing]] just for the sake of psychological manipulation. [[FauxAffablyEvil All the while acting like a polite, friendly grandfather figure.]]
* DrillSergeantNasty: Due to Case 3 taking place at the Wonderbolt Academy, Spitfire is in this mindset.
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Ryubee Sonozaki's consists of him scaring the Tartarus out of Chain Link, a street boss, with the implication he had [[Fanfic/RainbowFactory a certain song Chain Link has a childhood fear of playing]] just for the sake of psychological manipulation. [[FauxAffablyEvil All the while acting like a polite, friendly grandfather figure.]]
** Case 3&4: Icarus.
* MoralityKitchenSink: Discussed by Shou, who points out while there is [[BlackAndWhiteMorality black and white in the world]], there are also shades of grey.
* NaiveNewcomer: Akiko, who is new not only to the Dopant cases, but Cloudsdale in general.
* NiceHat: Shou's fedoras, as in canon. However, in this case, it's explicitly said he wears one due to his mentor wearing one.
* RedHerring: Due to the detective theme, there are naturally examples of this.
* MoralityKitchenSink: Discussed by Shou, who points out while there is [[BlackAndWhiteMorality black and white in the world]], there are also shades of grey.
* NaiveNewcomer: Akiko, who is new not only to the Dopant cases, but Cloudsdale in general.
* NiceHat: Shou's fedoras, as in canon. However, in this case, it's explicitly said he wears one due to his mentor wearing one.
* RedHerring: Due to the detective theme, there are naturally examples of this.
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 3 has Philip doing a search after Shoutarou mentioned a story about an old detective pony Akiko's father told him of [[TheAce who was number one at everything in all of Equestria]] and searched it for his friend's murderer, [[CallingCard leaving defeated criminals with cards for the gHGuard]] [[TheLongList that detailed their crimes.]] [[Series/KaiketsuZubat Now, what could that be a reference to?]]
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 3 has Philip doing a search after Shoutarou mentioned a story about an old detective pony Akiko's father told him of [[TheAce who was number one at everything in all of Equestria]] and searched it for his friend's murderer, [[CallingCard leaving defeated criminals with cards for the gHGuard]] Guard]] [[TheLongList that detailed their crimes.]] [[Series/KaiketsuZubat Now, what could that be a reference to?]]to?]]
** In the same chapter, Fanfic/RainbowFactory is established as a pegasus myth that inspired an audio drama.
** In the same chapter, Fanfic/RainbowFactory is established as a pegasus myth that inspired an audio drama.
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 3 has Philip doing a search after Shoutarou mentioned a story about an old detective pony Akiko's father told him of [[TheAce who was number one at everything in all of Equestria]] and searched it for his friend's murderer, leaving defeated criminals with cards for the gHGuard [[TheLongList that detailed their crimes.]] [[Series/KaiketsuZubat Now, what could that be a reference to?]]
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 3 has Philip doing a search after Shoutarou mentioned a story about an old detective pony Akiko's father told him of [[TheAce who was number one at everything in all of Equestria]] and searched it for his friend's murderer, [[CallingCard leaving defeated criminals with cards for the gHGuard gHGuard]] [[TheLongList that detailed their crimes.]] [[Series/KaiketsuZubat Now, what could that be a reference to?]]
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 3 has Philip doing a search after Shoutarou mentioned a story about an old detective pony Akiko's father told him of [[TheAce who was number one at everything in all of Equestria]] and searched it for his friend's murderer, leaving defeated criminals with cards for the gHGuard [[TheLongList that detailed their crimes.]] [[Series/KaiketsuZubat Now, what could that be a reference to?]]
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* TheSummation: Shou gives one in true detective style when revealing how he figured out [[spoiler:Gilded Talon]] was the Pteranodon Dopant.
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* TheSummation: Shou gives one in true detective style when revealing how he figured out [[spoiler:Gilded Talon]] Cage]] was the Pteranodon Dopant.
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* SparedByTheAdapation: [[spoiler:While not the same Dopant, Frost/Avalanche Dopant survives instead of being killed by his abductor like Magma was.]]
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* SparedByTheAdapation: SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:While not the same Dopant, Frost/Avalanche Dopant survives instead of being killed by his abductor like Magma was.]]
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''http://www.fimfiction.net/story/183382/in-search-of-f In Search of F'' is a crossover fanfic between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''Series/KamenRiderDouble'' by Godzillawolf, and a SpinOff[=/=]{{Prequel}} to ''Fanfic/FriendshipIsShowtime'', taking place in the same AlternateUniverse several years prior to the return of Nightmare Moon.
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* LargeHam: Shou has his moments, such as specifically waiting in a chair with his back turned until the suspects are in the room before turning around purely for dramatic effect.
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* HandicappedBadass: While not crippled, Shou is a weak flier, thus why he uses [=HardBoilder=] to get around. This does not stop him from kicking flank.
* LargeHam: Shou has his moments, such as specifically waiting in a chair with his back turned until the suspects are in the room for the SummationGathering before turning around purely for dramatic effect.
* LargeHam: Shou has his moments, such as specifically waiting in a chair with his back turned until the suspects are in the room for the SummationGathering before turning around purely for dramatic effect.
* MonsterOfTheWeek: The Dopants, as in canon.
** Case 1&2: Avalanche and Pteranodon.
** Case 1&2: Avalanche and Pteranodon.
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* TheSummation: Shou gives one revealing how he figured out [[spoiler:Gilded Talon]] was the Pteranodon Dopant.
* SparedByAdapation: [[spoiler:While not the same Dopant, Frost/Avalanche Dopant survives instead of being killed by his abductor like Magma was.]]
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* TheSummation: Shou gives one in true detective style when revealing how he figured out [[spoiler:Gilded Talon]] was the Pteranodon Dopant.
*SparedByAdapation: SparedByTheAdapation: [[spoiler:While not the same Dopant, Frost/Avalanche Dopant survives instead of being killed by his abductor like Magma was.]]
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** Case 1&2: Gilded Cage, who's apartments are being targeted. [[spoiler:Subverted in that he's actually the second Dopant and committing insurance fraud, making the real victim Firebrand.]]
** Case 1&2: Gilded Cage, who's apartments are being targeted. [[spoiler:Subverted in that he's actually the second Dopant and committing insurance fraud, making the real victim Firebrand.]]
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I\'m making this page as a motivator to actually continue the story and this isn\'t technically The Verse yet.
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''All things have a memory, and the planet is no different. The Gaia Memory contains knowledge of everything that has ever existed in the land of Equestria. If knowledge is power, then the power of the Gaia Memory is a great and terrible indeed.''
Cloudsdale is experiencing a crime wave like no other. Criminals armed with fragments of the planet's memory become rampaging monsters. A mysterious syndicate's corrupting influence threatens to consume the floating city. The city cries out. And a two-in-one detective must arise to dry its tears.
This is the story a young pegasus named Akiko has found herself in. Caught up in a conflict between her father's apprentice and superpowered criminals named Dopants, Akiko must find her place in this web.
''http://www.fimfiction.net/story/183382/in-search-of-f In Search of F'' is a crossover fanfic between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''Series/KamenRiderDouble'' by Godzillawolf, and a SpinOff[=/=]{{Prequel}} to ''Fanfic/FriendshipIsShowtime'', taking place in the same AlternateUniverse several years prior to the return of Nightmare Moon.
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!!!Tropes appearing in this story:
* AlternateUniverse: To both series.
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Shou, like in canon, is a goofball, but when he gets serious, he's a very competent detective.
* DeadpanSnarker: Rainbowshine comes off as this.
* LargeHam: Shou has his moments, such as specifically waiting in a chair with his back turned until the suspects are in the room before turning around purely for dramatic effect.
--> '''Akiko''': [[LampshadeHanging …Have you been sitting there the entire time?]]
--> '''Shou''': ...That's not the point.
* LetsGetDangerous: Shou has his moments.
* SharedUniverse: With ''Fanfic/FriendshipIsShowtime'', being written by a different author.
* TheSummation: Shou gives one revealing how he figured out [[spoiler:Gilded Talon]] was the Pteranodon Dopant.
* SparedByAdapation: [[spoiler:While not the same Dopant, Frost/Avalanche Dopant survives instead of being killed by his abductor like Magma was.]]
* ThousandYardStare: Shou has this reaction to Akiko's father being mentioned, implying he's still not recovered from watching him die.
* TheWatson: Akiko plays this role.
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Cloudsdale is experiencing a crime wave like no other. Criminals armed with fragments of the planet's memory become rampaging monsters. A mysterious syndicate's corrupting influence threatens to consume the floating city. The city cries out. And a two-in-one detective must arise to dry its tears.
This is the story a young pegasus named Akiko has found herself in. Caught up in a conflict between her father's apprentice and superpowered criminals named Dopants, Akiko must find her place in this web.
''http://www.fimfiction.net/story/183382/in-search-of-f In Search of F'' is a crossover fanfic between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''Series/KamenRiderDouble'' by Godzillawolf, and a SpinOff[=/=]{{Prequel}} to ''Fanfic/FriendshipIsShowtime'', taking place in the same AlternateUniverse several years prior to the return of Nightmare Moon.
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!!!Tropes appearing in this story:
* AlternateUniverse: To both series.
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Shou, like in canon, is a goofball, but when he gets serious, he's a very competent detective.
* DeadpanSnarker: Rainbowshine comes off as this.
* LargeHam: Shou has his moments, such as specifically waiting in a chair with his back turned until the suspects are in the room before turning around purely for dramatic effect.
--> '''Akiko''': [[LampshadeHanging …Have you been sitting there the entire time?]]
--> '''Shou''': ...That's not the point.
* LetsGetDangerous: Shou has his moments.
* SharedUniverse: With ''Fanfic/FriendshipIsShowtime'', being written by a different author.
* TheSummation: Shou gives one revealing how he figured out [[spoiler:Gilded Talon]] was the Pteranodon Dopant.
* SparedByAdapation: [[spoiler:While not the same Dopant, Frost/Avalanche Dopant survives instead of being killed by his abductor like Magma was.]]
* ThousandYardStare: Shou has this reaction to Akiko's father being mentioned, implying he's still not recovered from watching him die.
* TheWatson: Akiko plays this role.
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