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* BigNo: Double-D, when [[spoiler: Marie tries to grab his genitals.]]
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Though it borders into DownerEnding territory: in short, Ed kills the Kankers, they realize that when it comes to friends in the Cul-De-Sac, they only have themselves, they get arrested, Eddy takes all the blame and gets the death penalty, but Double-D ends up getting convicted along with him and has his life ruined because of it; but on the other hand, Rolf and Nazz end up HappilyMarried, Johnny is much more stable, and Ed, who was acquitted, is seen slowly building a relationship with Sarah.]]
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Though it borders into DownerEnding territory: in short, Ed kills the Kankers, they realize that when it comes to friends in the Cul-De-Sac, they only have themselves, they get arrested, Eddy takes all the blame and gets the death penalty, but Double-D ends up getting convicted along with him and has his life ruined because of it; but on the other hand, Rolf and Nazz end up HappilyMarried, Johnny is much more stable, and Ed, who was acquitted, is seen slowly building a relationship with Sarah.]]
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* BigNo: Double-D, when [[spoiler: Marie [[spoiler:Marie tries to grab his genitals.]]
* BittersweetEnding:[[spoiler: Though [[spoiler:Though it borders into DownerEnding territory: in short, Ed kills the Kankers, they realize that when it comes to friends in the Cul-De-Sac, they only have themselves, they get arrested, Eddy takes all the blame and gets the death penalty, but Double-D ends up getting convicted along with him and has his life ruined because of it; but on the other hand, Rolf and Nazz end up HappilyMarried, Johnny is much more stable, and Ed, who was acquitted, is seen slowly building a relationship with Sarah.]]
* BittersweetEnding:
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* ChekhovsGun: Subverted with [[spoiler: Eddy's knife.]]
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* ChekhovsGun: Subverted with [[spoiler: Eddy's [[spoiler:Eddy's knife.]]
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* CrimeofSelfDefense: [[spoiler: Ed killed all the Kankers in self-defense. Sadly this gets him, Double D, and Eddy arrested. Eddy is sentenced to death. Double D is unable to get a college education because of said trial that he's involved in. Ed is the only one that doesn't face time in prison because the court found him far too mentally incompetent to understand what had happened when the self-defense kills took place.]]
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* CrimeofSelfDefense: [[spoiler: Ed CrimeOfSelfDefense: [[spoiler:Ed killed all the Kankers in self-defense. Sadly this gets him, Double D, and Eddy arrested. Eddy is sentenced to death. Double D is unable to get a college education because of said trial that he's involved in. Ed is the only one that doesn't face time in prison because the court found him far too mentally incompetent to understand what had happened when the self-defense kills took place.]]
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Averted with [[spoiler: Eddy and the Kankers. He is greatly traumatized by the event, feels he betrayed his friends, and hates himself for his inability to escape the Kankers, who more or less turn Eddy into an addict. And unlike the show, none of this is played for comedy]].
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Averted with [[spoiler: Eddy [[spoiler:Eddy and the Kankers. He is greatly traumatized by the event, feels he betrayed his friends, and hates himself for his inability to escape the Kankers, who more or less turn Eddy into an addict. And unlike the show, none of this is played for comedy]].
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* FailureIsTheOnlyOption: [[spoiler: All of The Eds' attempts at connecting with the other kids end in failure, death and emotional trauma.]]
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* FailureIsTheOnlyOption: [[spoiler: All [[spoiler:All of The Eds' attempts at connecting with the other kids end in failure, death and emotional trauma.]]
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* HadToComeToPrisonToBeACrook: [[spoiler: Somewhat subverted: while Eddy does take all of the blame, the court still ruled that Double-D was involved in the deaths of the Kanker sisters; the best they get him charged on is fourth degree murder, which lands Double-D in jail for only eighteen months. Coming out of jail, he's not exactly a criminal but a shell of his former self; Double-D will never become successful since no college or career is willing to accept him for being involved in that trial. Even Ed states that Double-D's pretty scarred from the incident. However, there's a chance with good behavior, he'll be out in half...]]
* HappilyMarried: [[spoiler: [[FunnyForeigner Rolf]] and [[GirlNextDoor Nazz]] in the end.]]
* HappilyMarried: [[spoiler: [[FunnyForeigner Rolf]] and [[GirlNextDoor Nazz]] in the end.]]
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* HadToComeToPrisonToBeACrook: [[spoiler: Somewhat [[spoiler:Somewhat subverted: while Eddy does take all of the blame, the court still ruled that Double-D was involved in the deaths of the Kanker sisters; the best they get him charged on is fourth degree murder, which lands Double-D in jail for only eighteen months. Coming out of jail, he's not exactly a criminal but a shell of his former self; Double-D will never become successful since no college or career is willing to accept him for being involved in that trial. Even Ed states that Double-D's pretty scarred from the incident. However, there's a chance with good behavior, he'll be out in half...]]
* HappilyMarried:[[spoiler: [[FunnyForeigner [[spoiler:[[FunnyForeigner Rolf]] and [[GirlNextDoor Nazz]] in the end.]]
* HappilyMarried:
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* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler: Eddy, after he realizes how badly he has betrayed his friends by having sex with the Kankers.]]
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Eddy takes the heat for everything at the end, getting sentenced to death via lethal injection.]]
* HopeSpot
* HumansAreBastards
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Eddy takes the heat for everything at the end, getting sentenced to death via lethal injection.]]
* HopeSpot
* HumansAreBastards
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* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler: Eddy, [[spoiler:Eddy, after he realizes how badly he has betrayed his friends by having sex with the Kankers.]]
* HeroicSacrifice:[[spoiler: Eddy [[spoiler:Eddy takes the heat for everything at the end, getting sentenced to death via lethal injection.]]
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* OhCrap: When the Eds [[spoiler: wake up in the Kankers' trailer.]]
* OutlivingOnesOffspring: [[spoiler: The Kankers' mom outlives all of her daughters due to them being killed in self-defense.]]
* OutlivingOnesOffspring: [[spoiler: The Kankers' mom outlives all of her daughters due to them being killed in self-defense.]]
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* OhCrap: When the Eds [[spoiler: wake [[spoiler:wake up in the Kankers' trailer.]]
* OutlivingOnesOffspring:[[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The Kankers' mom outlives all of her daughters due to them being killed in self-defense.]]
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: [[spoiler: When Eddy discovers what the kids did to Ed and Double-D, he attacks Kevin and Jimmy, almost attacks Sarah, then goes to save the duo from the Kankers.]]
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: [[spoiler: When [[spoiler:When Eddy discovers what the kids did to Ed and Double-D, he attacks Kevin and Jimmy, almost attacks Sarah, then goes to save the duo from the Kankers.]]
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* WouldHitAGirl: [[spoiler: Double-D of all people, when Marie tries to grab his genitals.]]
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* WouldHitAGirl: [[spoiler: Double-D [[spoiler:Double-D of all people, when Marie tries to grab his genitals.]]
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WesternAnimation/EdEddNEddy DarkFic by Scary Spikender. Link [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12598784/1/Forfeit here.]]
Official Synopsis: ''"Four years later, and the Eds are still tortured and beaten on a daily basis. This time, however, they will finally try to find solutions to their problems, which grow worse by the day."''
Official Synopsis: ''"Four years later, and the Eds are still tortured and beaten on a daily basis. This time, however, they will finally try to find solutions to their problems, which grow worse by the day."''
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Official Synopsis: ''"Four
-->-'''Summary'''
An ''WesternAnimation/EdEddNEddy'' DarkFic by Scary Spikender. Link [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12598784/1/Forfeit here.]]
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Official Synopsis: ''"Four years later, and the Eds are still tortured and beaten on a daily basis. This time, however, they will finally try to find solutions to their problems, which grow worse by the day."'' Grudges, lust, simplemindedness, obsession, hatred-- they're all present, and they're certainly ''not'' handled in the lighthearted manner favored by a children's cartoon: Jonny really is disturbed; Sarah nurses a genuine ire toward her brother; Eddy is every bit as selfish and lustful as one would expect of a real-life counterpart. The Kankers are genuinely ''sociopathic;'' many of their scenes border on NightmareFuel. Most importantly, though, all these characters' flaws have very real, plot-relevant consequences.
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Official Synopsis: ''"Four years later, and the Eds are still tortured and beaten on a daily basis. This time, however, they will finally try to find solutions to their problems, which grow worse by the day."'' "''
Grudges, lust, simplemindedness, obsession,hatred-- they're hatred--they're all present, and they're certainly ''not'' handled in the lighthearted manner favored by a children's cartoon: Jonny really is disturbed; Sarah nurses a genuine ire toward her brother; Eddy is every bit as selfish and lustful as one would expect of a real-life counterpart. The Kankers are genuinely ''sociopathic;'' many of their scenes border on NightmareFuel. Most importantly, though, all these characters' flaws have very real, plot-relevant consequences.
Grudges, lust, simplemindedness, obsession,
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* BackForTheFinale: [[spoiler:Plank is absent from most of the fic after chapter 8, but returns for a cameo in the epilogue]].
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* HadToComeToPrisonToBeACrook: [[spoiler: Somewhat subverted: while Eddy does take all of the blame, the court still ruled that Double-D was involved in the deaths of the Kanker sisters; the best they get him charged on is fourth degree murder, which lands Double-D in jail for only eighteen months. Coming out of jail, he's not exactly a criminal but a shell of his former self; Double-D will never become successful since no college or career is willing to accept him for being involved in that trial. Even Ed states that Double-D's pretty scarred from the incident.]]
** [[spoiler: However, there's a chance with good behavior, he'll be out in half...]]
** [[spoiler: However, there's a chance with good behavior, he'll be out in half...]]
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* HadToComeToPrisonToBeACrook: [[spoiler: Somewhat subverted: while Eddy does take all of the blame, the court still ruled that Double-D was involved in the deaths of the Kanker sisters; the best they get him charged on is fourth degree murder, which lands Double-D in jail for only eighteen months. Coming out of jail, he's not exactly a criminal but a shell of his former self; Double-D will never become successful since no college or career is willing to accept him for being involved in that trial. Even Ed states that Double-D's pretty scarred from the incident.]]
** [[spoiler: However, there's a chance with good behavior, he'll be out in half...]]
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* ShooOutTheClowns: Plank disappears in chapter 8, kickstarting Jonny's desire for revenge against the Eds (he blames Eddy for his and Plank's falling out), and even before then we get a snippet of "personality" for Plank that shows him to be [[{{Jerkass}} kind of an asshole]]. He returns in the epilogue, but it's stated that Jonny couldn't bring himself to keep him, so he gave him to Ed as a memento.