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Fixing a sinkhole
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Alternatively, this story is what happens when you take a human noble lady, a [[LovableRogue female city elf]], a male [[PhantomThief dwarven]] [[LovableRogue commoner]], a [[TheStoic Dalish]] [[ArcherArchetype young man]] and a [[BadassLongcoat male elven mage]] and, along with the resident HeroicBastard Alistair and the rest of the canon companions, place them under the command of a dwarven prince who, depending on how one looks at him, can qualify as a WisePrince (GuileHero). His first act was fundamentally changing the events of the Dwarven Noble origin story, although [[WhamEpisode not in a way that anyone would expect]].
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Alternatively, this story is what happens when you take a human noble lady, a [[LovableRogue female city elf]], elf, a male [[PhantomThief dwarven]] [[LovableRogue commoner]], dwarven commoner, a [[TheStoic Dalish]] [[ArcherArchetype Dalish young man]] man and a [[BadassLongcoat male elven mage]] mage and, along with the resident HeroicBastard Alistair and the rest of the canon companions, place them under the command of a dwarven prince who, depending on how one looks at him, can qualify as a WisePrince (GuileHero). His first act was fundamentally changing the events of the Dwarven Noble origin story, although [[WhamEpisode not in a way that anyone would expect]].
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Removing as there must be a pact for it to count as Sworn Brothers (renamed from Blood Brothers).
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* BloodBrothers: Not really a pact, but Raonar and Faren are pretty much this. The former also has a similar bond with Sten.
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Hurting Hero is a disambiguation
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* HurtingHero: In some measure, everyone in the main cast.
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* LyingInTheDirtTogether: This is ''exactly'' how the dwarven noble and the dwarven commoner bond in the very first chapter.
