History Fanfic / DarkSecrets

20th Nov '15 1:29:17 AM Llygodenfawr
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19th Nov '15 11:01:18 PM Llygodenfawr
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Welcome to ''Dark Secrets'' by Jaiden [[AuthorAvatar (ahem)]] Lee Malfoy. The story can be found [[http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600009171 here]] and a forum thread sporking it [[http://www.whygodwhy.org/new-releases-f1/in-which-draco-rescues-mary-sue-from-ron-the-death-eater-nws-t594.htm here]] (both links {{NSFW}}). The sequel ''Betrayed Revenge'', featuring less {{wangst}} but just as much CanonDefilement and evil!Ron coming back from the dead, is [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3244398/1/ here]] and sporked [[http://www.whygodwhy.org/new-releases-f1/betrayed-revenge-aka-dark-secrets-ii-attack-of-the-canon-rape-t703.htm here.]]
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Welcome to ''Dark Secrets'' by Jaiden [[AuthorAvatar (ahem)]] Lee Malfoy. The story can be found [[http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600009171 [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2750046/1/Dark-Secrets here]] and a forum thread sporking it [[http://www.whygodwhy.org/new-releases-f1/in-which-draco-rescues-mary-sue-from-ron-the-death-eater-nws-t594.htm here]] (both links {{NSFW}}). The sequel ''Betrayed Revenge'', featuring less {{wangst}} but just as much CanonDefilement and evil!Ron coming back from the dead, is [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3244398/1/ here]] and sporked [[http://www.whygodwhy.org/new-releases-f1/betrayed-revenge-aka-dark-secrets-ii-attack-of-the-canon-rape-t703.htm here.]]
14th Oct '15 2:04:52 PM randomtroper89
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“ Slowing down? ” Draco mocked.\\ “ Not on your life, ” Ron growled, lunging again, this time his aim was true, catching him in the side.\\ “ That won’t happen again, ” Draco said, grabbing his side.\\ “ Next time you’ll be dead, ” Ron said, punching him in the nose.\\ “ You son-of-a-bit— ” Draco started. As his nose began to bleed.\\ “ Language Malfoy, ”\\ “ Whatever, ” Draco said, grabbing the hand with the knife in it,\\
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“ Slowing down? ” “Slowing down?” Draco mocked.\\ “ Not “Not on your life, ” life,” Ron growled, lunging again, this time his aim was true, catching him in the side.\\ “ That “That won’t happen again, ” again,” Draco said, grabbing his side.\\ “ Next “Next time you’ll be dead, ” dead,” Ron said, punching him in the nose.\\ “ You son-of-a-bit— ” “You son-of-a-bit—” Draco started. As his nose began to bleed.\\ “ Language Malfoy, ”\\ “ Whatever, ” “Language Malfoy,”\\ “Whatever,” Draco said, grabbing the hand with the knife in it,\\

--> " Are you sure? " He asked, making sure [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment this]] [[HowDoIUsedTense is what she wanted.]]
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--> " Are "Are you sure? " sure?" He asked, making sure [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment this]] [[HowDoIUsedTense is what she wanted.]]
14th Oct '15 2:00:13 PM randomtroper89
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* SadlyMythtaken: Voldemort invokes the [[UsefulNotes/ClassicMythology Greek god Hades]] to bring Ron back from the dead, despite the complete non-appearance of gods Greek or otherwise in ''Literature/HarryPotter''.
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* SadlyMythtaken: Voldemort invokes the [[UsefulNotes/ClassicMythology [[UsefulNotes/ClassicalMythology Greek god Hades]] to bring Ron back from the dead, despite the complete non-appearance of gods Greek or otherwise in ''Literature/HarryPotter''.

* TransplantedCharacterFic: The author only occasionally remembers that there's ''magic'' in the {{Potterverse}}, having Draco mend Jaiden's injured foot with {{Muggle}} first aid when healing potions were mentioned two chapters ago, Ron attacking her several times without using so much as a single curse, and the central conflict resolved with a KnifeFight.
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* TransplantedCharacterFic: The TransplantedCharacterFic: **The author only occasionally remembers that there's ''magic'' magic in the {{Potterverse}}, having Draco mend Jaiden's injured foot with {{Muggle}} first aid when healing potions were mentioned two chapters ago, Ron attacking her several times without using so much as a single curse, and the central conflict resolved with a KnifeFight.
14th Oct '15 1:58:49 PM randomtroper89
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-->He was cut short as Ron growled and threw himself at Draco; Jaiden watched as the two boys fought, the sight was horrible. The wind blew just then, making her shiver, her back throbbed even more. Her shirt and pants were soaked in blood.\\ Draco threw a punch catching Ron in the jaw. Getting angrier by the second Ron swung the knife barely missing him.\\ “ Slowing down? ” Draco mocked.\\ “ Not on your life, ” Ron growled, lunging again, this time his aim was true, catching him in the side.\\ “ That won’t happen again, ” Draco said, grabbing his side.\\ “ Next time you’ll be dead, ” Ron said, punching him in the nose.\\ “ You son-of-a-bit— ” Draco started. As his nose began to bleed.\\ “ Language Malfoy, ”\\ “ Whatever, ” Draco said, grabbing the hand with the knife in it,\\ The two fought for a moment until Draco got the knife away from Ron. Backing up Draco panted for air, just as Ron was about to come. Draco threw it at him…\\ A shocked look fell on Ron’s face, bringing his hand up he felt for the knife and found it in his neck. The next second he fell backwards… Dead.

* TooDumbToLive: Ron's master plan when his [[RonTheDeathEater dark secret]] is discovered is to... antagonize and alienate the one person who he's relying on not to make that secret public.
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* TooDumbToLive: TooDumbToLive: ** Ron's master plan when his [[RonTheDeathEater dark secret]] is discovered is to... antagonize and alienate the one person who he's relying on not to make that secret public.

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* TooDumbToLive: Ron's master plan when his [[RonTheDeathEater dark secret]] is discovered is to... antagonize and alienate ThrowingYourSwordAlwaysWorks: Draco kills Ron in a knife fight by throwing the one person who he's relying on not to make that secret public.knife at Ron.
30th Nov '14 4:12:28 PM szaleniec1000
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* FreudianSlip: The {{bowdlerise}}d version removes the sex scene, replacing it with a summary in which a typo declares Jaiden and Draco to have "a night of ''not'', steamy, intoxicating passion".
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* FreudianSlip: The {{bowdlerise}}d version removes the sex scene, replacing it with a summary in which a typo declares Jaiden and Draco to have "a night of ''not'', ''[[FetishRetardant not]]'', steamy, intoxicating passion".
30th Nov '14 4:11:58 PM szaleniec1000
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* FreudianSlip: The {{bowdlerise}}d version removes the sex scene, replacing it with a summary in which a typo declares Jaiden and Draco to have "a night of ''not'', steamy, intoxicating passion".
9th Oct '14 1:38:00 PM LongLiveHumour
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* MeaningfulEcho: Ron menaces ([[NightmareRetardant or tries]] [[{{Narm}} to menace]]) Jaiden with the line [[LordOfTheRings "my precious"]]. Draco echoes the line next chapter pre-IKEAErotica, which is presumably supposed to be really sweet, but manages to top the first occurrence for {{Narm}}.
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* MeaningfulEcho: Ron menaces ([[NightmareRetardant or tries]] [[{{Narm}} to menace]]) Jaiden with the line [[LordOfTheRings [[Film/LordOfTheRings "my precious"]]. Draco echoes the line next chapter pre-IKEAErotica, which is presumably supposed to be really sweet, but manages to top the first occurrence for {{Narm}}.
23rd Apr '14 4:26:26 AM SciFiMs
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* CleverCrows: Ron uses a pet raven to spy on Draco and Jaiden, although where he got it from or how it talks to him (of course) isn't explained by the author.

* CreepyCrows: Ron uses a pet raven to spy on Draco and Jaiden, although where he got it from or how it talks to him (of course) isn't explained by the author.

* RavensAndCrows: Ron uses a pet raven to spy on Draco and Jaiden, although where he got it from or how it talks to him (of course) isn't explained by the author.
4th Oct '13 1:01:32 AM szaleniec1000
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** After being beaten, Jaiden decides to conceal her injuries with magic rather than telling a professor.
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** After being beaten, Jaiden decides to conceal her injuries with magic [[AdultsAreUseless rather than telling a professor. professor]].
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