History Fanfic / DarkSecrets

15th Jan '17 11:32:27 AM WaterBlap
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* SadlyMythtaken: Voldemort invokes the [[UsefulNotes/ClassicalMythology Greek god Hades]] to bring Ron back from the dead, despite the complete non-appearance of gods Greek or otherwise in ''Literature/HarryPotter''.

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* SadlyMythtaken: Voldemort invokes the [[UsefulNotes/ClassicalMythology [[Myth/ClassicalMythology Greek god Hades]] to bring Ron back from the dead, despite the complete non-appearance of gods Greek or otherwise in ''Literature/HarryPotter''.
10th Jan '17 3:44:41 PM szaleniec1000
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* ChekhovsClassroom: Subverted: The healing potion Jaiden makes in Snape's Potions class could have been useful at many points in the story, but is never mentioned again.


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* SoftGlass: Zig-zagged in the shower scene, as Ron is able to punch right through the glass with no apparent harm but Jaiden cuts herself on the fragments.
9th Aug '16 6:38:57 AM szaleniec1000
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* GratuitousRape: The [=AdultFanFiction=] version adds a second, considerably more graphic rape sequence to the scene in which Ron first breaks into Jaiden's quarters.
9th Aug '16 6:25:35 AM szaleniec1000
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* ShowDontTell: Frequently averted - one chapter closes with the line "[[ThatMakesMeFeelAngry They had begun to fall in love with each other.]]"
8th Aug '16 5:59:48 AM szaleniec1000
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* ArbitrarySkepticism: In the sequel, Jaiden is convinced that nobody will believe that she's seeing evil!Ron's ghost, despite the existence of ghosts being a known fact in the Potterverse.
6th Aug '16 12:51:57 PM szaleniec1000
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* FailedASpotCheck: [[RonTheDeathEater Ron is a Death Eater]], complete with the Dark Mark on his arm, but somehow none of the boys he shares a dormitory with, including Harry, notice.
4th Aug '16 3:42:25 PM szaleniec1000
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* DarkSecret: [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Naturally]]: Ron's is that he's [[RonTheDeathEater a Death Eater]].
4th Aug '16 2:41:36 PM szaleniec1000
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* CluelessAesop: The fic tries to tackle weighty issues like rape, abuse and suicide, but the writing is nowhere near up to it.
4th Aug '16 4:05:46 AM szaleniec1000
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* FollowTheLeader: Draco's characterisation owes a lot to ''Fanfic/TheDracoTrilogy''.


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* ObviousBeta: The fic is clearly unedited, and some parts give the impression of being more outline than story.
3rd Aug '16 5:03:38 PM szaleniec1000
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** And at times, Malfoy is just as possessive as Ron.

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** And at times, Malfoy is just as possessive as Ron.Ron, and their first kiss happens after he gropes her in the bathroom.
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