History Fanfic / CloudedSky

14th Feb '15 10:27:52 PM Phosphorus
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--> [[spoiler:Accemenla:]] "I am the one who turned him in."

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--> [[spoiler:Accemenla:]] [[spoiler:Accemenla]]: "I am the one who turned him in."
14th Feb '15 10:27:37 PM Phosphorus
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--> [[Accemenla:]] "I am the one who turned him in."

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--> [[Accemenla:]] [[spoiler:Accemenla:]] "I am the one who turned him in."
14th Feb '15 10:27:18 PM Phosphorus
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** From Chapter 6

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** From Chapter 66:



** From Chapter 29

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** From Chapter 2929:


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** From Chapter 37:
--> [[Accemenla:]] "I am the one who turned him in."
29th Oct '13 8:16:34 AM Zeromaru
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* AbortedArc: Clouded Sky was originally intended to be the second in a series of four fanfics, but the author decided not to make the third and fourth, leading to certain plot elements being set up without ever recieving any payoff, such as [[spoiler:Raikou's warnings]], the inexplicable rise in the Skarmory population, or the final chapter SequelHook featuring [[spoiler:the ghosts of Waytar slaughtering and possessing the dark temple residents and stating their intention to escape to the outside world]]. The meaning of these elements and the author's original plans are all explained in the epilogue.

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* AbortedArc: Clouded Sky was originally intended to be the second in a series of four fanfics, but the author decided not to make the third and fourth, leading to certain plot elements being set up without ever recieving any payoff, such as [[spoiler:Raikou's warnings]], the inexplicable rise in the Skarmory population, or the final chapter SequelHook featuring [[spoiler:the ghosts of Waytar slaughtering and possessing the dark temple residents and stating their intention to escape to the outside world]]. The meaning of these elements and the author's original plans are all explained in a postface after the epilogue.



* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler: the Lugia robot in chapter 29]].

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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:The Lugia robot in chapter 29]].
28th Oct '13 8:07:41 PM Zeromaru
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 15 is a big one, as that's when we learn that [[spoiler:everything we had been told about Waytar and the outside world was a lie and that outside of Waytar's Shield lies the Pokémon world that we know.]]

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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 15 is a big one, as that's when we learn that [[spoiler:everything we had been told about Waytar and the outside world was a lie and that outside of Waytar's Shield lies the Pokémon world that we know.]]know]].
28th Oct '13 8:06:29 PM Zeromaru
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 15 is a big one, as that's when we learn that [[spoiler:everything we had been told about Waytar and the outside world was a lie and that outside of Waytar's Shield lies the Pokémon world that we know.]]
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** From Chapter 6
-->"At last they spoke, again in unison. ''He is guilty.''"
** From Chapter 29
-->"[[spoiler:Jenny]] ... she had red hair and, as Tobias saw now, staring directly into her face, green eyes. Why hadn't he noticed before?"
28th Oct '13 7:10:46 PM Zeromaru
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: [[spoiler:All of the residents of the Dark Temple are killed and possessed by ghosts]] off-screen in the epilogue, so that [[spoiler:the ghosts can have bodies that they can use to escape to the outside world, now that [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Tobias has destroyed Waytar's Shield]]]].
28th Oct '13 7:06:07 PM Zeromaru
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* ClearMyName: Subverted. After [[spoiler:Tobias is framed for crimes he didn't commit and forced to become a fugitive from the law]], he never makes any real effort to try to clear his name, and by the end of the story, [[spoiler:is still believed by the public to be a thief and Pokémon abuser.]]

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* ClearMyName: Subverted. After [[spoiler:Tobias is framed for crimes he didn't commit and forced to become a fugitive from the law]], he never makes any real effort to try to clear his name, and by instead choosing to settle into life as a fugitive. By the end of the story, [[spoiler:is [[spoiler:he is still believed by the public to be a thief and Pokémon abuser.]]
28th Oct '13 6:59:50 PM Zeromaru
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* ClearMyName: Subverted. After [[spoiler:Tobias is framed for crimes he didn't commit and forced to become a fugitive from the law]], he never makes any real effort to try to clear his name, and by the end of the story, [[spoiler:is still believed by the public to be a thief and Pokémon abuser.]]
28th Oct '13 6:34:48 PM Zeromaru
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* ToBeAMaster: Played with. Tobias' stated goal throughout the story is to become a Master Guide, but the main plot begins to deviate from that very quickly and he is constantly being distracted from his journey by events beyond his control. By the end of the story, when everything is said and done, [[spoiler:Tobias has only actually managed to overcome the challenge of ''one'' of Waytar's fourteen temples.]]

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* ToBeAMaster: Played with. Tobias' stated goal throughout the story is to challenge the fourteen temples in Waytar and become a Master Guide, but the main plot begins to deviate from that very quickly and he is constantly being distracted from his journey by events beyond his control. By the end of the story, when everything is said and done, [[spoiler:Tobias [[spoiler:he has only actually managed to overcome successfully complete the challenge of ''one'' of Waytar's fourteen temples.]]
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