History Fanfic / CloudedSky

17th Oct '16 8:25:23 AM dlchen145
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* ActionGirl: Accemenla, Tobias' Tarsix (an original Pokémon species native to Waytar) and the only female Pokémon on his team, can be quite the [[{{Badass}} badass]] in a fight.

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* ActionGirl: Accemenla, Tobias' Tarsix (an original Pokémon species native to Waytar) and the only female Pokémon on his team, can be quite the [[{{Badass}} badass]] badass in a fight.
14th Feb '15 10:27:52 PM Phosphorus
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--> [[spoiler:Accemenla:]] "I am the one who turned him in."

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--> [[spoiler:Accemenla:]] [[spoiler:Accemenla]]: "I am the one who turned him in."
14th Feb '15 10:27:37 PM Phosphorus
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--> [[Accemenla:]] "I am the one who turned him in."

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--> [[Accemenla:]] [[spoiler:Accemenla:]] "I am the one who turned him in."
14th Feb '15 10:27:18 PM Phosphorus
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** From Chapter 6

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** From Chapter 66:



** From Chapter 29

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** From Chapter 2929:


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** From Chapter 37:
--> [[Accemenla:]] "I am the one who turned him in."
29th Oct '13 8:16:34 AM Zeromaru
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* AbortedArc: Clouded Sky was originally intended to be the second in a series of four fanfics, but the author decided not to make the third and fourth, leading to certain plot elements being set up without ever recieving any payoff, such as [[spoiler:Raikou's warnings]], the inexplicable rise in the Skarmory population, or the final chapter SequelHook featuring [[spoiler:the ghosts of Waytar slaughtering and possessing the dark temple residents and stating their intention to escape to the outside world]]. The meaning of these elements and the author's original plans are all explained in the epilogue.

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* AbortedArc: Clouded Sky was originally intended to be the second in a series of four fanfics, but the author decided not to make the third and fourth, leading to certain plot elements being set up without ever recieving any payoff, such as [[spoiler:Raikou's warnings]], the inexplicable rise in the Skarmory population, or the final chapter SequelHook featuring [[spoiler:the ghosts of Waytar slaughtering and possessing the dark temple residents and stating their intention to escape to the outside world]]. The meaning of these elements and the author's original plans are all explained in a postface after the epilogue.



* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler: the Lugia robot in chapter 29]].

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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:The Lugia robot in chapter 29]].
28th Oct '13 8:07:41 PM Zeromaru
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 15 is a big one, as that's when we learn that [[spoiler:everything we had been told about Waytar and the outside world was a lie and that outside of Waytar's Shield lies the Pokémon world that we know.]]

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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 15 is a big one, as that's when we learn that [[spoiler:everything we had been told about Waytar and the outside world was a lie and that outside of Waytar's Shield lies the Pokémon world that we know.]]know]].
28th Oct '13 8:06:29 PM Zeromaru
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 15 is a big one, as that's when we learn that [[spoiler:everything we had been told about Waytar and the outside world was a lie and that outside of Waytar's Shield lies the Pokémon world that we know.]]
* WhamLine
** From Chapter 6
-->"At last they spoke, again in unison. ''He is guilty.''"
** From Chapter 29
-->"[[spoiler:Jenny]] ... she had red hair and, as Tobias saw now, staring directly into her face, green eyes. Why hadn't he noticed before?"
28th Oct '13 7:10:46 PM Zeromaru
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: [[spoiler:All of the residents of the Dark Temple are killed and possessed by ghosts]] off-screen in the epilogue, so that [[spoiler:the ghosts can have bodies that they can use to escape to the outside world, now that [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Tobias has destroyed Waytar's Shield]]]].
28th Oct '13 7:06:07 PM Zeromaru
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* ClearMyName: Subverted. After [[spoiler:Tobias is framed for crimes he didn't commit and forced to become a fugitive from the law]], he never makes any real effort to try to clear his name, and by the end of the story, [[spoiler:is still believed by the public to be a thief and Pokémon abuser.]]

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* ClearMyName: Subverted. After [[spoiler:Tobias is framed for crimes he didn't commit and forced to become a fugitive from the law]], he never makes any real effort to try to clear his name, and by instead choosing to settle into life as a fugitive. By the end of the story, [[spoiler:is [[spoiler:he is still believed by the public to be a thief and Pokémon abuser.]]
28th Oct '13 6:59:50 PM Zeromaru
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* ClearMyName: Subverted. After [[spoiler:Tobias is framed for crimes he didn't commit and forced to become a fugitive from the law]], he never makes any real effort to try to clear his name, and by the end of the story, [[spoiler:is still believed by the public to be a thief and Pokémon abuser.]]
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