History Fanfic / BoysUndSenshado

15th Jun '16 8:49:12 PM Valiona
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* TheFriendsThatDontHang: Anglerfish Team, in contrast to canon. Miho doesn't spend all that much time with them out of tankery matches, and when they're in port after the match with Saunders, [[OutOfCharacterMoment none of them invite her to come with them]].

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* TheFriendsThatDontHang: TheFriendsWhoNeverHang: Anglerfish Team, in contrast to canon. Miho doesn't spend all that much time with them out of tankery matches, and when they're in port after the match with Saunders, [[OutOfCharacterMoment none of them invite her to come with them]].



* GoodParents: Rebecca Sakai, Akio's mother.

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* GoodParents: Rebecca Sakai, Akio's mother. She's supportive of her son even though she's half the world away, and stands in stark contrast to Shiho on that regad.



* IceQueen: Shiho and her protege, [[OriginalCharacter Katsuko Hideyoshi]].

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* IceQueen: Shiho and her protege, [[OriginalCharacter Katsuko Hideyoshi]].Hideyoshi]], who's said to be even more like Shiho than Maho is. Both are cold, ruthlessly devoted to the Nishizumi style, and determined to repair the damage they believe including boys has done to tankery


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** Momo never takes umbrage at being called "Momo-chan," even by Miho, whom Momo could reasonably expect to call her by her title or "[[LastNameBasis Kawashima]]-[[SenpaiKohai senpai]]."


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* ShippingTorpedo: After meeting Akio and realizing that he's the grandson of Saburo Sakai, Shiho's political adversary, Maho wonders if her mother will force her to drive a wedge between them, but refuses to do so. It's unclear how accurate Maho's prediction is [[spoiler:or whether it's still possible now that Shiho has disowned Miho]].
3rd Jun '16 6:12:56 PM Valiona
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* CoolOldGuy: [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sabur%C5%8D_Sakai Saburo Sakai]], Akio’s grandfather

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* {{Chickification}}: Miho's more timid and emotionally vulnerable than she was in canon, and the author believes that she needs Akio to build up her self-esteem and realize that her mother's treatment of her is wrong.
* CoolOldGuy: [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sabur%C5%8D_Sakai Saburo Sakai]], Akio’s grandfathergrandfather, who's quite supportive of his grandson, and enthusiastically supports Oarai.



* ExternalRetcon: The author said that sensha-do uses simunition,
* EyepatchOfPower: Saburo

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* ExternalRetcon: The author said that sensha-do uses simunition,
simunition, since he believes it's unsafe enough even without live rounds.
* EyepatchOfPower: SaburoSaburo wears an eyepatch over the eye he lost in World War II.



* TheFriendsThatDontHang: Anglerfish Team, in contrast to canon. Miho doesn't spend all that much time with them out of tankery matches, and when they're in port after the match with Saunders, [[OutOfCharacterMoment none of them invite her to come with them]].



* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Akio can be fairly harsh sometimes, whether with those who don't deserve it (such as Maho) or those who do (such as Shiho, but he ultimately means well.

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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Akio can be fairly harsh sometimes, whether with those who don't deserve it (such as Maho) or those who do (such as Shiho, Shiho), but he ultimately means well.


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* OutOfCharacterMoment: No one in Anglerfish Team invites Miho to go with them while they're in port in Chapter 4- not even Yukari, who's practically obsessed with Miho.
4th Aug '14 8:20:03 PM Valiona
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* BetaCouple: Hoshino and Tsubasa. They officially become a couple in Chapter 12, at the same point at which [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend Akio is denying his relationship with Miho]].



* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Shark Team isn't especially close with each other, with only Akio and Masaru being close to each other, as well as the other two boys, but all of them find Heishi annoying.

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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Shark Team isn't especially close with each other, with only Akio and Masaru being close to each other, as well as the other two boys, Gunjin and Keiibin, but all of them find Heishi annoying.


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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: It's fairly common in this fic, especially using "then" instead of "than," and a few other cases, such as saying that Mako has a "board" expression.


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** Similarly, Tsubasa points out that Miho must be keeping Akio busy, but Akio points out that [[spoiler:because of Miho's aforementioned injury]], she has needed a lot of help. He then gets Tsubasa back by pointing out his relationship with Kazuko, which Tsubasa can't deny.


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* SuddenNameChange: Yakuin Takuma's nickname is "Yakuma" in Chapter 2, but it's "Yakota" in Chapter 7.
26th Jul '14 4:22:33 PM Valiona
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* HufflepuffHouse: The model team gets barely any presence in the story, despite also being a new arrival.


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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Akio can be fairly harsh sometimes, whether with those who don't deserve it (such as Maho) or those who do (such as Shiho, but he ultimately means well.


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* ThoseTwoGuys: Gunjin Hayate and Keibiin Kenji, the other two OriginalCharacter members of Akio's crew.
6th Jul '14 4:38:51 PM Valiona
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* FlatCharacter: Some of the original members of the cast come off as this. For example, the model club are defined by their love of historical models, while Hideyoshi is little more than a clone of Shiho.



* IgnorantOfTheirOwnIgnorance: According to WordOfGod, Akio not only doesn't understand Maho's complicated family situation and desire to support Miho as best as she can given the circumstances, but he doesn't know that he doesn't understand.



** Akio gives a brief one to Maho in Chapter 7, possibly unaware that all of Maho's efforts have been to allow Miho to live freely.

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** Akio gives a brief one to Maho in Chapter 7, possibly unaware that all of Maho's efforts have been to allow Miho to live freely.
20th Jun '14 9:29:30 AM Valiona
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* FacePalm: Maho does this as well-placed shots by St. Gloriana's tanks remove the Maus' treads.



* GeneralFailure: Momo is just as ineffective of a leader as in canon, [[spoiler:which leads to severe problems when she's forced to step in for Miho while she's injured. It gets bad enough that Erwin has to relieve Momo of command]].

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* GeneralFailure: Momo is just as ineffective of a leader as in canon, [[spoiler:which leads to severe problems when she's forced to step in for Miho while she's injured. It gets bad enough that Erwin has to relieve Momo of command]].command mid-battle, and Miho makes it official afterward]].


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* GracefulLoser: Kay, as per canon, as well as [[spoiler:Dalian's commander, Akane Zainichi]].


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* ShowerOfAngst: Ayumi goes to take one after the match with Dalian, upset over her unrequited love for Yoshi and her team doing poorly.


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** One member of Rabbit Team underestimates Continuance, although Maho points out that even for Kuromorimine, victory is not guaranteed when facing Continuance on their home territory.
1st Jun '14 1:38:48 PM Valiona
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* OutOfFocus: Many of the characters besides Akio and Miho fade into the background, particularly the rest of Anglerfish Team.



* WordOfGod:
** The author's notes go into details about the setting. For example, they describe how the tanks are using "simunition" instead of actual rounds.
** The forums also provide information about the story, such as canonically confirming the Akio/Miho and [[OriginalCharacter Tsubasa]]/Hoshino[[note]]Leopon Team/The Auto Club's gunner[[/note]] pairings.
19th Mar '14 6:51:44 PM Valiona
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* WhamLine
**Chapter 6: As Anzio's Semovente fires, the narration describes what the "simunition" rounds do before describing what was hit.
-->"In this case, it struck [[spoiler:an eighty kilo girl straight in the chest]]."
**Chapter 7: Shiho delivers a surprising announcement.
-->'''Shiho''': Miho Nishizumi, you are [[spoiler:[[IHaveNoSon no daughter]] of mine]].
2nd Feb '14 10:32:31 PM Valiona
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* NotSoStoic: Maho after [[spoiler:Miho gets injured; she even ''cries'' when she sees Miho in the hospital]].



* SpoilerTitle: While it's not a terribly obvious example, the title of Chapter 6, "[[spoiler:Accident Against Anzio]]", makes it clear that [[WhamEpisode the battle against Anzio will be no ordinary match]].



** The team's overall performance is reduced as a result of [[spoiler:Miho being injured and replaced with Momo]].

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** The team's overall performance is reduced as a result of [[spoiler:Miho being injured and replaced with the decidedly less competent Momo]].
30th Jan '14 9:35:04 AM Valiona
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Anchovy doesn't think much of Miho and is desperate to win against her to prove that her school's "not a joke", but she's [[spoiler:horrified when Miho accidentally gets shot]].
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