History Fanfic / BoysUndSenshado

4th Aug '14 8:20:03 PM Valiona
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* BetaCouple: Hoshino and Tsubasa. They officially become a couple in Chapter 12, at the same point at which [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend Akio is denying his relationship with Miho]].

* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Shark Team isn't especially close with each other, with only Akio and Masaru being close to each other, as well as the other two boys, but all of them find Heishi annoying.
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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Shark Team isn't especially close with each other, with only Akio and Masaru being close to each other, as well as the other two boys, Gunjin and Keiibin, but all of them find Heishi annoying.

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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Shark Team isn't RougeAnglesOfSatin: It's fairly common in this fic, especially close with each other, with only Akio using "then" instead of "than," and Masaru being close to each other, as well as the a few other two boys, but all of them find Heishi annoying.cases, such as saying that Mako has a "board" expression.

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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Shark Team isn't especially close ** Similarly, Tsubasa points out that Miho must be keeping Akio busy, but Akio points out that [[spoiler:because of Miho's aforementioned injury]], she has needed a lot of help. He then gets Tsubasa back by pointing out his relationship with each other, with only Akio and Masaru being close to each other, as well as the other two boys, but all of them find Heishi annoying.Kazuko, which Tsubasa can't deny.

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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Shark Team isn't especially close with each other, with only Akio and Masaru being close to each other, as well as the other two boys, SuddenNameChange: Yakuin Takuma's nickname is "Yakuma" in Chapter 2, but all of them find Heishi annoying.it's "Yakota" in Chapter 7.
26th Jul '14 4:22:33 PM Valiona
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* HufflepuffHouse: The model team gets barely any presence in the story, despite also being a new arrival.

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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Akio can be fairly harsh sometimes, whether with those who don't deserve it (such as Maho) or those who do (such as Shiho, but he ultimately means well.

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* ThoseTwoGuys: Gunjin Hayate and Keibiin Kenji, the other two OriginalCharacter members of Akio's crew.
6th Jul '14 4:38:51 PM Valiona
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* FlatCharacter: Some of the original members of the cast come off as this. For example, the model club are defined by their love of historical models, while Hideyoshi is little more than a clone of Shiho.

* IgnorantOfTheirOwnIgnorance: According to WordOfGod, Akio not only doesn't understand Maho's complicated family situation and desire to support Miho as best as she can given the circumstances, but he doesn't know that he doesn't understand.

** Akio gives a brief one to Maho in Chapter 7, possibly unaware that all of Maho's efforts have been to allow Miho to live freely.
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** Akio gives a brief one to Maho in Chapter 7, possibly unaware that all of Maho's efforts have been to allow Miho to live freely.
20th Jun '14 9:29:30 AM Valiona
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* FacePalm: Maho does this as well-placed shots by St. Gloriana's tanks remove the Maus' treads.

* GeneralFailure: Momo is just as ineffective of a leader as in canon, [[spoiler:which leads to severe problems when she's forced to step in for Miho while she's injured. It gets bad enough that Erwin has to relieve Momo of command]].
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* GeneralFailure: Momo is just as ineffective of a leader as in canon, [[spoiler:which leads to severe problems when she's forced to step in for Miho while she's injured. It gets bad enough that Erwin has to relieve Momo of command]].command mid-battle, and Miho makes it official afterward]].

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* GeneralFailure: Momo is just GracefulLoser: Kay, as ineffective of a leader as in per canon, [[spoiler:which leads to severe problems when she's forced to step in for Miho while she's injured. It gets bad enough that Erwin has to relieve Momo of command]].as well as [[spoiler:Dalian's commander, Akane Zainichi]].

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* GeneralFailure: Momo is just as ineffective of a leader as in canon, [[spoiler:which leads ShowerOfAngst: Ayumi goes to severe problems when she's forced to step in take one after the match with Dalian, upset over her unrequited love for Miho while she's injured. It gets bad enough that Erwin has to relieve Momo of command]].Yoshi and her team doing poorly.

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* GeneralFailure: Momo ** One member of Rabbit Team underestimates Continuance, although Maho points out that even for Kuromorimine, victory is just as ineffective of a leader as in canon, [[spoiler:which leads to severe problems not guaranteed when she's forced to step in for Miho while she's injured. It gets bad enough that Erwin has to relieve Momo of command]].facing Continuance on their home territory.
1st Jun '14 1:38:48 PM Valiona
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* OutOfFocus: Many of the characters besides Akio and Miho fade into the background, particularly the rest of Anglerfish Team.

* WordOfGod: ** The author's notes go into details about the setting. For example, they describe how the tanks are using "simunition" instead of actual rounds. ** The forums also provide information about the story, such as canonically confirming the Akio/Miho and [[OriginalCharacter Tsubasa]]/Hoshino[[note]]Leopon Team/The Auto Club's gunner[[/note]] pairings.
19th Mar '14 6:51:44 PM Valiona
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* WhamLine **Chapter 6: As Anzio's Semovente fires, the narration describes what the "simunition" rounds do before describing what was hit. -->"In this case, it struck [[spoiler:an eighty kilo girl straight in the chest]]." **Chapter 7: Shiho delivers a surprising announcement. -->'''Shiho''': Miho Nishizumi, you are [[spoiler:[[IHaveNoSon no daughter]] of mine]].
2nd Feb '14 10:32:31 PM Valiona
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* NotSoStoic: Maho after [[spoiler:Miho gets injured; she even ''cries'' when she sees Miho in the hospital]].

* SpoilerTitle: While it's not a terribly obvious example, the title of Chapter 6, "[[spoiler:Accident Against Anzio]]", makes it clear that [[WhamEpisode the battle against Anzio will be no ordinary match]].

** The team's overall performance is reduced as a result of [[spoiler:Miho being injured and replaced with Momo]].
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** The team's overall performance is reduced as a result of [[spoiler:Miho being injured and replaced with the decidedly less competent Momo]].
30th Jan '14 9:35:04 AM Valiona
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Anchovy doesn't think much of Miho and is desperate to win against her to prove that her school's "not a joke", but she's [[spoiler:horrified when Miho accidentally gets shot]].
28th Jan '14 5:28:30 PM Valiona
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** Hideyoshi chidingly tells Miho that [[spoiler:six bruised ribs]] shouldn't be enough to stop one of Shiho's children from commanding a tank[[note]]This comes off as even worse if you know that Miho not only doesn't like her family's style, but [[spoiler:has been disowned]][[/note]], and that as Miho and her team turned sensha-do into a mockery of what it was, she enjoys coaching one of their opponents.
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** Hideyoshi chidingly tells Miho that [[spoiler:six bruised ribs]] shouldn't be enough to stop one of Shiho's children from commanding a tank[[note]]This comes off as even worse if you know assume that Hideyoshi knows that Miho not only doesn't like her family's style, but [[spoiler:has been disowned]][[/note]], and that as Miho and her team turned sensha-do into a mockery of what it was, she enjoys coaching one of their opponents.

* NoYou: Akio's response to Miho being called a disgrace is to say "The only one here thatís a disgrace here is you, Nishizumi."
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* NoYou: Akio's response to Miho being called a disgrace is to say to Shiho, "The only one here thatís a disgrace here is you, Nishizumi."
28th Jan '14 5:17:20 PM Valiona
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* ImplausibleDeniability: An injured Miho claims she can manage with everyday tasks by herself. It merely takes Akio lightly poking her in the ribs to show that she can't.
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* ImplausibleDeniability: An injured Miho [[spoiler:Miho]] claims she can manage with everyday tasks by herself. It merely takes Akio lightly poking her in the ribs to show that she can't.can't. * InSeriesNickname: The History Team calls Momo "[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Friedrich_Paulus Paulus]]" when she can't hear them, [[spoiler:especially when things are going badly while she's leading them against Dalian]].

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* ImplausibleDeniability: An WorfHadTheFlu: Several factors pop up to hinder Oarai against Dalian, despite Dalian being a relative newcomer. ** A LoveTriangle within Rabbit Team reduces Ayumi and Yoshi's performance. ** Duck Team struggles to adjust to the tank they've been loaned, which is in many ways different from the Type 89. ** The team's overall performance is reduced as a result of [[spoiler:Miho being injured Miho claims she can manage and replaced with everyday tasks by herself. It merely takes Akio lightly poking her in the ribs to show that she can't.Momo]].
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