History Fanfic / BlackCrayons

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* MechanicalLifeforms: The Cybertonians.
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*** [[spoiler:Barricade recognizing Annabelle is a reference to their first encounter in ''My First Decepticon''.]]



* DamselOutOfDistress: In ''A Child's Innocence'', when Mikaela is kidnapped by [[spoiler: Dylan Gould]], she actually puts in an effort to try to escape. [[spoiler: When Bumblebee, Sam, and Wheelie come to rescue her, she helps them kill Laserbeak.]]

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* DamselOutOfDistress: In Two examples in ''A Child's Innocence'', when Innocence'':
** Annabelle Lennox is kidnapped by the Decepticons [[spoiler:and she manages to escape her captors by first appealing to Starscream's ego and convince him to let another Decepticon watch her. Starscream then gives the task of watching Annabelle to Barricade and then the child convinces Barricade to let the Autobots get her back so that he can avoid the wrath of the Autobots (especially Ironhide).]]
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Mikaela is kidnapped by [[spoiler: Dylan Gould]], she actually puts in an effort to try to escape. [[spoiler: When Bumblebee, Sam, and Wheelie come to rescue her, she helps them kill Laserbeak.]]
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* RealLifeWritesThePlot: In ''Summer Vacation'', Ironhide forcing Skids and Mudflap to not speak in their annoying accents and avoid swearing while Annabelle was visiting NEST Headquarters was due to the fact that the author did not want to raise the age rating of the story.
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* BossInMookClothing: [[spoiler: Arcee, Mirage, and Sideswipe fight a nameless Decepticon {{Mook}} in Chicago. Unlike the other mooks the trio have faced, this one proves to be a challenge to the three Autobots by himself and comes close to off-lining them before Sideswipe finally manages to bring him down [[HalfTheManHeUsedToBe by cutting him in half]].]]
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** In ''A Child's Innocence'', [[spoiler: Soundwave and Bumblebee's fight is extended and Bumblebee only managed to gain the upper hand when Soundwave stumbled across an explosive that Mikaela had left in a failed attempt to send the bomb at the Decepticon. Soundwave also managed to keep the Autobot from redirecting his ArmCannon directly into his chest. Lastly, Soundwave survives the fight and retreats.]]



** Carly Spencer is also only mentioned near the beginning of the story [[CompositeCharacter due to her role being given to Mikaela Banes]].

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** Carly Spencer is also only mentioned near the beginning of the story [[CompositeCharacter due to her role in the story being given to Mikaela Banes]].


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** Annabelle tries to fend off Laserbeak with a tree branch, but is not quite successful. [[spoiler: Later, she jams a piece of reinforcing bar into Sentinel Prime's leg. Even though she's knocked out for her efforts, this does stall Sentinel in his fight with Optimus and Megatron.]]
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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: NEST and the other Autobots are as annoyed with Skids and Mudflap's accents and personalities as everyone who saw ''Film/TransformersRevengeOfTheFallen''.



* MythologyGag: The Universal Greeting: [[TransformersTheMovie Bah wheep grana wheep ninny bahn]]

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* MythologyGag: The Universal Greeting: [[TransformersTheMovie Bah wheep grana wheep ninny bahn]]bahn]].
** Ironhide and Chromia ([[ShipTease seem to be interested in each other]]) which is a reference to ''WesternAnimation/TheTransformers''.
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* DemotedToExtra: Two examples in the ''DOTM'' rewrite:
** Judy and Ron Witwicky are only mentioned near the beginning of the story.
** Carly Spencer is also only mentioned near the beginning of the story [[CompositeCharacter due to her role being given to Mikaela Banes]].
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* AMillionIsAStatistic: [[spoiler: Practically the only reason why the Decepticons would everyone in Chicago despite their plans to use the human race as a slave work force to rebuild Cybertron. When there are billions of humans, a few thousand or even a few million missing would not matter.]]

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* AMillionIsAStatistic: [[spoiler: Practically the only reason why the Decepticons would kill everyone in Chicago despite their plans to use the human race as a slave work force to rebuild Cybertron. When there are billions of humans, a few thousand or even a few million missing gone would not matter.]]
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* AttackItsWeakPoint: Cybertonians' armor can protect them from large blasts large-scale attacks, but small enough weapons can slip in between sections of their armor to get at the more delicate circuitry underneath. [[spoiler: Mikaela causes some serious damage to Laserbeak by stabbing him with a screwdriver, getting under the armor of one of his wings.]]



* DamselOutOfDistress: In ''A Child's Innocence'', when Mikaela is kidnapped by [[spoiler: Dylan Gould]], she actually puts in an effort to try to escape.

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* DamselOutOfDistress: In ''A Child's Innocence'', when Mikaela is kidnapped by [[spoiler: Dylan Gould]], she actually puts in an effort to try to escape. [[spoiler: When Bumblebee, Sam, and Wheelie come to rescue her, she helps them kill Laserbeak.]]



* ImprovisedWeapon: [[spoiler: Sam uses one of the grappling hook climbing gloves given to him by Wheeljack to [[EyeScream stab Starscream in the eye]].]]

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* ImprovisedWeapon: ImprovisedWeapon:
** [[spoiler: Mikaela stabs Laserbeak's wing with a screwdriver [[AttackItsWeakPoint which gets into the more delicate circuitry]] of the avian Decepticon.]]
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[[spoiler: Sam uses one of the grappling hook climbing gloves given to him by Wheeljack to [[EyeScream stab Starscream in the eye]].]]



** Bumblebee just like how he was in ''Film/{{Transformers}}'' and ''Film/TransformersRevengeOfTheFallen''. This continues into ''A Child's Innocence'' (which rewrites ''Film/TransformersDarkOfTheMoon'' [[spoiler: where he encourages Sam to propose to Mikaela and is disappointed when Sam seems to not want to go through with it.]]

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** Bumblebee just like how he was in ''Film/{{Transformers}}'' and ''Film/TransformersRevengeOfTheFallen''. This continues into ''A Child's Innocence'' (which rewrites ''Film/TransformersDarkOfTheMoon'' ''Film/TransformersDarkOfTheMoon'') [[spoiler: where he encourages Sam to propose to Mikaela and is disappointed when Sam seems to not want to go through with it.]]
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