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* TheSociopath: Laserbeak takes great joy in killing humans.
* SecretKeeper: Not including those connected to the government or [=NEST=], those who know the truth about the Cybertronians include Sam, Mikaela, Annabelle, their families, [[AndZoidberg and Leo]] ([[TheGhost though he hasn't appeared in the series]]).



* SecretKeeper: Not including those connected to the government or [=NEST=], those who know the truth about the Cybertronians include Sam, Mikaela, Annabelle, their families, [[AndZoidberg and Leo]] ([[TheGhost though he hasn't appeared in the series]]).
* SequelEscalation: ''A Child's Innocence'' compared to the preceding entries which were SliceOfLife stories that were overall [[LighterAndSofter light in tone compared to the films]]. This entry involves [[spoiler:kidnapping, {{Character Death}}s, large scale destruction, countless innocent people being killed, and an all out brawl between two factions of giant alien robots.]]



** In the same story, Mikaela compares Sam to [[Film/DieHard John McClane]].

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** In the same story, Mikaela compares Sam to [[Film/DieHard John McClane]].McClane]] [[spoiler:when he arrives at Dylan's penthouse and holds the businessman at gunpoint, demanding to know where Mikaela is.]]


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* TheSociopath: Laserbeak takes great joy in killing humans.
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** Dutch is proven right in ''Not According to Plan''; there are a couple of new characters [[spoiler:who have witnessed the Decepticons tear apart Chicago]]): a group of teenagers (Tommy, Mike, Emily, and Katie) who plan to destroy any sympathy for the Autobots in response to what happened in [[spoiler:Chicago]] and a group of children (Danny, Luke, Izabella, Peter and Gwen) whom Annabelle befriends while her family assisting in repairing [[spoiler:Chicago]]. Unlike the teenagers, Tommy in particular believes all Cybertronians to all be complete monsters, the children believe Annabelle when she tells them that there are good and evil Cybertronians. The children befriend Wheelie when Annabelle shows them that he isn't dangerous. Izabella especially as she recognizes Ironhide as one of the good guys despite his size and weapons and acknowledges the Autobots' heroics for stopping the Decepticons.
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* BrokenMasquerade: [[spoiler:''A Child's Innocence'' breaks the masquerade of the Transformers when the Decepticons broadcast a (false) message worldwide that if the Autobots leave Earth, they will leave the planet unharmed. It's broken even further when the Decepticons lay wast to Chicago and the Autobots arrive to stop them.]]

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* BrokenMasquerade: [[spoiler:''A Child's Innocence'' breaks the masquerade of the Transformers when the Decepticons broadcast a (false) message worldwide that if the Autobots leave Earth, they will leave the planet unharmed. It's broken even further when the Decepticons lay wast waste to Chicago and the Autobots arrive to stop them.]]



* OhCrap: In ''A Child's Innocence'', [[spoiler: Barricade]] has this reaction when he assigned with guarding Annabelle because he is afraid of what [[PapaWolf Ironhide]] (not to mention the other Autobots who care about her) will do to him if he finds out.

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* OhCrap: OhCrap:
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In ''A Child's Innocence'', [[spoiler: Barricade]] has this reaction when he assigned with guarding Annabelle because he is afraid of what [[PapaWolf Ironhide]] (not to mention the other Autobots who care about her) will do to him if he finds out. out.
** In ''Not According to Plan'', [[MassOhCrap Tommy, Mike and Emily have this reaction]] when confronted with [[ActionGirl Chromia]] and [[TheBigGuy Ironhide]] [[TranquilFury who are not happy to find out that the teenagers]] [[MamaBear have kidnapped Annabelle]] [[PapaWolf and several other children.]]


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* ScrewThisImOutOfHere:
** [[spoiler:In ''A Child's Innocence'', Starscream decides to get the hell out of dodge after Sam [[EyeScream impales him in the eye]] and [[AnArmAndALeg nearly blows off his arm with an explosive]].]]
** In ''Not According to Plan'', [[TeensAreMonsters Tommy]] tries to run for it when he is noticed by Chromia and Ironhide, Chromia keeps him from escaping.
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Mikaela gives one to Emily for kidnapping Wheelie.
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* BrokenMasquerade: [[spoiler:''A Child's Innocence'' breaks the masquerade of the Transformers when the Decepticons broadcast a (false) message worldwide that if the Autobots leave Earth, they will leave the planet unharmed. It's broken even further when the Decepticons lay wast to Chicago and the Autobots arrive to stop them.]]



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** [[Film/TransformersTheLastKnight Izabella]] appears in ''Not According to Plan'' [[spoiler:when her losing her parents to the Decepitcons when they laid waste to Chicago was still recent.]]




* CarFu: In ''A Child's Innocence'', [[spoiler: Mikaela pulls this off fairly well against a Decepticon]].
* CerebusSyndrome: While most of the stories in the series have been fluffy, little tales intended to make you smile, [[DarkerAndEdgier things start becoming more serious around]] ''My First Decepticon'' and become positively dark at points in ''A Child's Innocence''.
* CheerfulChild: Annabelle
* ChekhovsSkill: Annabelle speaking Cybertronian. First, a cute way to learn about the Twin's pranking plans. [[spoiler:Later, [[ChekhovsBoomerang a life saving skill]]]].
* ChronicHeroSyndrome: In ''A Child's Innocence'':
** [[spoiler: Sam and Mikaela choose to help the Autobots like they have done in the past when Sam gets Jerry Wang's files about the Moon Landing Conspiracy.]]
** [[spoiler: Annabelle goes into Chicago while the Decepticons and Autobots are fighting because she feels the need to do something and that villains should be punished for what they are doing.]]
* ChildrenAreInnocent: Dutch discusses this in Chapter 12 of ''A Child's Innocence''.
-->'''Dutch:''' Most people think 'innocence' means that a child is too ignorant of the world to understand. That they cannot see the world for what it is. I would like to think that they are less blinded by the distrust and suspicions adults gain from experience. An innocent child is not one who cannot see what is right in front of them; they are often the only ones who can see the truth of things.
* CombatMedic: Ratchet, for the Autobots.
* CombatStilettos: AvertedTrope. Mikaela wears tennis shoes to the dinner party with Dylan Gould [[Film/TransformersRevengeOfTheFallen to avoid a situation where she has to run in heels]]. [[spoiler: She made the right call.]]
* CompositeCharacter:
** Carly Spencer's role in ''Film/TransformersDarkOfTheMoon'' is given to Mikaela Banes in ''A Child's Innocence''. Being Sam Witwicky's LoveInterest, being employed by Dylan Gould, [[spoiler: [[IHaveYourWife getting kidnapped by Dylan Gould]] to be used as leverage against Sam]], et cetera. [[spoiler: Annabelle Lennox is the one who convinces Megatron to turn against Sentinel Prime, although in her case, she does it unintentionally.]]
** In ''Film/TransformersDarkOfTheMoon'', Laserbeak goes to the house of one of the Decepticon's human collaborators and disguises himself as a smaller, pink version of Bumblebee and asks a little girl, "Is your daddy home?" . In ''A Child's Innocence'', the house that Laserbeak goes to where he disguises himself is the Lennox home and asks Annabelle the same question.



* CarFu: In ''A Child's Innocence'', [[spoiler: Mikaela pulls this off fairly well against a Decepticon]].
* CerebusSyndrome: While most of the stories in the series have been fluffy, little tales intended to make you smile, [[DarkerAndEdgier things start becoming more serious around]] ''My First Decepticon'' and become positively dark at points in ''A Child's Innocence''.
* CheerfulChild: Annabelle
* ChekhovsSkill: Annabelle speaking Cybertronian. First, a cute way to learn about the Twin's pranking plans. [[spoiler:Later, [[ChekhovsBoomerang a life saving skill]]]].
* ChronicHeroSyndrome: In ''A Child's Innocence'':
** [[spoiler: Sam and Mikaela choose to help the Autobots like they have done in the past when Sam gets Jerry Wang's files about the Moon Landing Conspiracy.]]
** [[spoiler: Annabelle goes into Chicago while the Decepticons and Autobots are fighting because she feels the need to do something and that villains should be punished for what they are doing.]]
* ChildrenAreInnocent: Dutch discusses this in Chapter 12 of ''A Child's Innocence''.
-->'''Dutch:''' Most people think 'innocence' means that a child is too ignorant of the world to understand. That they cannot see the world for what it is. I would like to think that they are less blinded by the distrust and suspicions adults gain from experience. An innocent child is not one who cannot see what is right in front of them; they are often the only ones who can see the truth of things.
* CombatMedic: Ratchet, for the Autobots.
* CombatStilettos: AvertedTrope. Mikaela wears tennis shoes to the dinner party with Dylan Gould [[Film/TransformersRevengeOfTheFallen to avoid a situation where she has to run in heels]]. [[spoiler: She made the right call.]]
* CompositeCharacter:
** Carly Spencer's role in ''Film/TransformersDarkOfTheMoon'' is given to Mikaela Banes in ''A Child's Innocence''. Being Sam Witwicky's LoveInterest, being employed by Dylan Gould, [[spoiler: [[IHaveYourWife getting kidnapped by Dylan Gould]] to be used as leverage against Sam]], et cetera. [[spoiler: Annabelle Lennox is the one who convinces Megatron to turn against Sentinel Prime, although in her case, she does it unintentionally.]]
** In ''Film/TransformersDarkOfTheMoon'', Laserbeak goes to the house of one of the Decepticon's human collaborators and disguises himself as a smaller, pink version of Bumblebee and asks a little girl, "Is your daddy home?" . In ''A Child's Innocence'', the house that Laserbeak goes to where he disguises himself is the Lennox home and asks Annabelle the same question.



* NarrativeProfanityFilter: After getting attacked by Annabelle and the other children, Tommy lets out what is described by Izabella as "words that Izabella's parents would have never allowed under their roof".

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* NarrativeProfanityFilter: NarrativeProfanityFilter:
** Sam overhears the Wreckers converse with their human personnel and [[CoverInnocentEyesAndEars immediately slaps his hands over Annabelle's ears]].
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After getting attacked by Annabelle and the other children, Tommy lets out what is described by Izabella as "words that Izabella's parents would have never allowed under their roof".
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* CallBack: A few in ''A Child's Innocence'':
** Events from the installments in the series are referenced. To name a few:

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* CallBack: ContinuityNod:
** In ''Summer Vacation'', Sam calls Wheelie "Junior" referencing the time Annabelle thought Wheelie was a baby Cybertronian in ''Party Time''.
** ''Nightmares'' has Annabelle being haunted by her encounter with [[spoiler:Barricade]].
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A few in ''A Child's Innocence'':
** Events from the installments in the series are referenced. To name a few:
Innocence'':



*** Megatron is his introductory scene has him think about the time he was killed by Sam as well as him losing The Fallen and the Harvester.



** Mikaela brings up events from ''Film/{{Transformers}}'' and ''Film/TransformersRevengeOfTheFallen'' in her angry thoughts when Mearing says that Sam is just a "messenger".
-->It took all of her self-control, earned through endless practice dealing with rude customers, not to react to that insult to her boyfriend. She'd like to see this paper-pushing woman run through explosions to protect the Cube, face down Megatron, or risk his life to save Optimus. In fact, she'd love to see Mearing double-team a Decepticon with Bumblebee using a tow truck or run over that creepy metal girl who was hitting on her guy in his dorm room.
** [[Film/{{Transformers}} Once again Mikaela]] [[Film/TransformersRevengeOfTheFallen hotwires a car.]]
** [[Film/TransformersRevengeOfTheFallen Skids and Mudflap climbing on a larger Decepticon.]]
** Mikaela paraphrases Sam's line from the first movie [[spoiler: after she accepts Sam's proposal.]]
-->'''Mikaela:''' I love this car.

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** *** Mikaela brings up events from ''Film/{{Transformers}}'' and ''Film/TransformersRevengeOfTheFallen'' in her angry thoughts when Mearing says that Sam is just a "messenger".
-->It took all of her self-control, earned
"messenger". Specifically, Sam running through endless practice dealing Mission City with rude customers, not to react to that insult to her boyfriend. She'd like to see this paper-pushing woman run through explosions to protect the Cube, face down [=AllSpark=], using the Cube to kill Megatron, or risk and risking his life to save Optimus. In fact, she'd love to see Mearing double-team a Decepticon with Bumblebee using Mikaela also thinks about the time hot-wired a tow truck or run to assist Bumblebee after the Autobot scout lost his legs in Mission City and running over that creepy metal girl who was hitting on her guy in his dorm room.
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Alice the Pretender.
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[[Film/{{Transformers}} Once again Mikaela]] [[Film/TransformersRevengeOfTheFallen hotwires a car.]]
** *** [[Film/TransformersRevengeOfTheFallen Skids and Mudflap climbing on a larger Decepticon.]]
** *** Mikaela paraphrases Sam's line from the first movie [[spoiler: after she accepts Sam's proposal.]]
-->'''Mikaela:''' --->'''Mikaela:''' I love this car.



* DarkerAndEdgier: ''A Child's Innocence'' compared to ''Dark of the Moon'', [[spoiler:when characters die, there is much more attention to detail given to the deaths. When our heroes are in Chicago, more time is spent on making it clear how gruesome the carnage is with countless innocent people being killed by the Decepticons, simply ForTheEvulz. There is also the AdultFear that comes with Annabelle being kidnapped by the Decepticons out of her own house and her entering a war zone.]]



'''Tommy:''' Look at what they've already taken from us. Look at these children orphaned by those aliens.\\

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'''Tommy:''' (pointing the camera towards the children) Look at what they've already taken from us. Look at these children orphaned by those aliens.\\



* NotEnoughToBury:
** [[spoiler:Jolt, after suffering the effects of Sentinel's rust gun.]]
** [[spoiler:A number of the people in Chicago after the Decepticons lay waste to everything.]]



** In ''A Child's Innocence'', [[spoiler:Ironhide is almost killed by Sentinel Prime and although Ratchet manages to help him recover a bit, he warns Ironhide that he should not be considering doing anything strenuous. Not too long after Ironhide has to help his fellow Autobots fight Decepticons in Chicago, one of the Decepticons [[GameBreakingInjury aggravates the weapon specialist's injury from where he was stabbed, and giant alien robot or not, this nearly gets Ironhide killed]].]]

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** In ''A Child's Innocence'', Innocence'':
*** While Mikaela and Sam both want to help the Autobots, Mikaela has to go to her job because they need the income.
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[[spoiler:Ironhide is almost killed by Sentinel Prime and although Ratchet manages to help him recover a bit, he warns Ironhide that he should not be considering doing anything strenuous. Not too long after Ironhide has to help his fellow Autobots fight Decepticons in Chicago, one of the Decepticons [[GameBreakingInjury aggravates the weapon specialist's injury from where he was stabbed, and giant alien robot or not, this nearly gets Ironhide killed]].]]



* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech:
** Annabelle gives one to [[spoiler:Barricade, saying that him and the other Decepticons are just a bunch of bullies.]]
** Optimus Prime gives one to [[spoiler:Sentinel, for betraying everyone around him as well as himself.]]
** Sarah gives to Katie for conspiring with her friends to kidnap children (including Annabelle) and take them into Chicago, [[spoiler:even though its still recovering from the Decepticons' assault.]]



** Bumblebee just like how he was in ''Film/{{Transformers}}'' and ''Film/TransformersRevengeOfTheFallen''. This continues into ''A Child's Innocence'' (which rewrites ''Film/TransformersDarkOfTheMoon'') [[spoiler: where he encourages Sam to propose to Mikaela and is disappointed when Sam seems to not want to go through with it.]]

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** Bumblebee is this to Mikaela and Sam, just like how he was in ''Film/{{Transformers}}'' and ''Film/TransformersRevengeOfTheFallen''. This continues into ''A Child's Innocence'' (which rewrites ''Film/TransformersDarkOfTheMoon'') [[spoiler: where he encourages Sam to propose to Mikaela and is disappointed when Sam seems to not want to go through with it.]]



* SparedByTheAdaptation: So far in ''A Child's Innocence'', [[spoiler:Ironhide, Starscream, Wheeljack, Soundwave, Wheelie, and Megatron]] have survived their fates from ''Film/TransformersDarkOfTheMoon''.
* TheStarscream: Starscream, obviously. A few characters, especially Megatron, take note that he is planning to usurp control and become leader of the Decepticons.

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* SparedByTheAdaptation: So far in ''A Child's Innocence'', [[spoiler:Ironhide, Starscream, Wheeljack, Soundwave, Wheelie, and Megatron]] have survived their fates from ''Film/TransformersDarkOfTheMoon''.
* TheStarscream: Starscream, obviously. A few characters, especially Megatron, take note that he is planning to usurp control and become leader of the Decepticons. Megatron only keeps him around as long as Starscream proves to be useful and as the saying goes "Keep your friends close, keep your enemies closer."



* TeensAreMonsters: In ''Not According to Plan'', [[spoiler:a group of teenagers have kidnapped a number of children, including Annabelle and some of these children who are now orphans because of the Decepticons, in order to drum up sympathy for their plan to get all of the Cybertronians off Earth. Some hate all of the Cybertronians and want them either dead or gone and others are only interested in being famous.]]

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* TeensAreMonsters: In ''Not According to Plan'', [[spoiler:a group of teenagers have kidnapped a number of children, including Annabelle and some of these children who are now orphans because of the Decepticons, in order to drum up sympathy for their plan to get all of the Cybertronians off Earth. Some hate Tommy hates all of the Cybertronians and want them either dead or gone and others are Mike is only interested in being famous.]]
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** [[spoiler:Sentinel Prime's assault on NEST HQ: [[OneManArmy he takes on all of the Autobots]] (barring Chromia and Optimus Prime), either off-lines or incapacitates them, and makes off with the pillars.]]
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* ImmediateSequel: ''Not According to Plan'' beings right after the end of ''A Child's Innocence'' with Ironhide transporting the Lennox family from the hospital Annabelle was admitted in, [[spoiler:recovering from the injuries she sustained from trying to take on Sentinel Prime]], to their home before they make the decision to stay in Chicago to assist in repairing the city.
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