History Fanfic / BlackCrayons

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* ChekhovsSkill: Annabelle speaking Cybertronian. First, a cute way learn about the Twin's pranking plans. [[spoiler:Later, [[ChekhovsBoomerang a life saving skill]]]].

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* ChekhovsSkill: Annabelle speaking Cybertronian. First, a cute way to learn about the Twin's pranking plans. [[spoiler:Later, [[ChekhovsBoomerang a life saving skill]]]].
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* AttackItsWeakPoint: Cybertonians' armor can protect them from large blasts large-scale attacks, but small enough weapons can slip in between sections of their armor to get at the more delicate circuitry underneath. [[spoiler: Mikaela causes some serious damage to Laserbeak by stabbing him with a screwdriver, getting under the armor of one of his wings, and Annabelle causes similar damage- adjusting based on the relative size of both weapon and Cybertronian- when she hits Sentinel in the ankle with a crowbar.]]

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* AttackItsWeakPoint: Cybertonians' armor can protect them from large blasts large-scale attacks, but small enough weapons can slip in between sections of their armor to get at the more delicate circuitry underneath. [[spoiler: Mikaela causes some serious damage to Laserbeak by stabbing him with a screwdriver, getting under the armor of one of his wings, and Annabelle causes similar damage- adjusting based on the relative size of both weapon and Cybertronian- when she hits Sentinel in the ankle with a crowbar.piece of reinforcing bar.]]
21st Jun '17 4:55:32 PM MarcusSLazarus
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* AttackItsWeakPoint: Cybertonians' armor can protect them from large blasts large-scale attacks, but small enough weapons can slip in between sections of their armor to get at the more delicate circuitry underneath. [[spoiler: Mikaela causes some serious damage to Laserbeak by stabbing him with a screwdriver, getting under the armor of one of his wings.]]

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* AttackItsWeakPoint: Cybertonians' armor can protect them from large blasts large-scale attacks, but small enough weapons can slip in between sections of their armor to get at the more delicate circuitry underneath. [[spoiler: Mikaela causes some serious damage to Laserbeak by stabbing him with a screwdriver, getting under the armor of one of his wings.wings, and Annabelle causes similar damage- adjusting based on the relative size of both weapon and Cybertronian- when she hits Sentinel in the ankle with a crowbar.]]
17th Jun '17 4:30:21 PM hubakon1368
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* CerebusSyndrome: While most of the stories in the series have been fluffy, little tales intended to make you smile, [[DarkerAndEdgier things start becoming more serious around]] ''My First Decepticon'' and become positively dark at points in ''A Child's Innocence''.



* CurbStompBattle: In ''My First Decepticon'', Ironhide inflicts this on [[spoiler: Barricade]] [[PapaWolf for trying to harm Annabelle]].

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* CurbStompBattle: CurbStompBattle:
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In ''My First Decepticon'', Ironhide inflicts this on [[spoiler: Barricade]] [[PapaWolf for trying to harm Annabelle]].Annabelle]].
** [[spoiler:Ironhide himself is on the receiving end of this trope, courtesy of [[EvilAllAlong Sentinel Prime]]. At least in this version of events, [[SparedByTheAdaptation Ironhide gets to avoid his fate from]] ''DOTM''.]]



* DarkerAndEdgier: While most of the stories in the series have been fluffy, little tales intended to make you smile, things start becoming more serious around ''My First Decepticon'' and become positively dark at points in ''A Child's Innocence''.



* GameBreakingInjury: [[spoiler:Ironhide suffers a stab wound from Sentinel Prime. Later in Chicago, a Decepticon {{mook}} provokes the Autobot's injury and Ironhide would have been off-lined if Chromia had not saved him.]]



* InterruptedDeclarationOfLove: [[spoiler:After saving Ironhide from a couple of Decepticons, Chromia is about to tell the weapon specialist how important he is to her, but is distracted by the sight of the Decepticon fleet falling from the sky.]]



* KnightOfCerebus: The Decepticons; they appear in the much more serious and darker installments, ''My First Decepticon'' and ''A Child's Innocence''.

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* KnightOfCerebus: [[KnightOfCerebus Knights Of Cerebus]]: The Decepticons; they appear in the much more serious and darker installments, ''My First Decepticon'' and ''A Child's Innocence''.



* {{Papa Wolf}}: Not only does Annabelle have [[BadassNormal Will]] [[HumansAreWarriors Lennox]], but she also has [[TriggerHappy Ironhide]]. Not to mention most of the Autobots have become rather fond of her... Just take these lines of dialogue in ''A Child's Innocence'' after the Decepticons kidnap her as proof.

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* {{Papa Wolf}}: PapaWolf: Not only does Annabelle have [[BadassNormal Will]] [[HumansAreWarriors Lennox]], but she also has [[TriggerHappy Ironhide]]. Not to mention most of the Autobots have become rather fond of her... Just take these lines of dialogue in ''A Child's Innocence'' after the Decepticons kidnap her as proof.



* RealityEnsues: In ''My First Decepticon'', Annabelle seems perfectly fine after her encounter with [[spoiler: Barricade]]. ''Nightmares'' however shows that said encounter did in fact take a psychological toll on her.

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* RealityEnsues: RealityEnsues:
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In ''My First Decepticon'', Annabelle seems perfectly fine after her encounter with [[spoiler: Barricade]]. ''Nightmares'' however shows that said encounter did in fact take a psychological toll on her.her.
** In ''A Child's Innocence'', [[spoiler:Ironhide is almost killed by Sentinel Prime and although Ratchet manages to help him recover a bit, he warns Ironhide that he should not be considering doing anything strenuous. Not too long after Ironhide has to help his fellow Autobots fight Decepticons in Chicago, one of the Decepticons [[GameBreakingInjury aggravates the weapon specialist's injury from where he was stabbed, and giant alien robot or not, this nearly gets Ironhide killed]].]]
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-->''Annabelle:''' My name is Annabelle. And you're a big mean bully. [[SmugSnake You just act tough when you scare people]]. [[TheBully Like Carl does]]. But if someone isn't scared, you don't know what to do. You have to stand up to bullies or else they always will pick on you. ''(smiles)'' And bullies get in trouble. 'Cause good guys stop them.\\

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-->''Annabelle:''' -->'''Annabelle:''' My name is Annabelle. And you're a big mean bully. [[SmugSnake You just act tough when you scare people]]. [[TheBully Like Carl does]]. But if someone isn't scared, you don't know what to do. You have to stand up to bullies or else they always will pick on you. ''(smiles)'' And bullies get in trouble. 'Cause good guys stop them.\\
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--> '''Simmons:''' Charlotte, you might think you're an intimidating woman, but Sarah Lennox could leave Megatron whimpering in fear.

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--> '''Simmons:''' -->'''Simmons:''' Charlotte, you might think you're an intimidating woman, but Sarah Lennox could leave Megatron whimpering in fear.



* AscendedExtra: Sarah Lennox and Annabelle Lennox

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* AscendedExtra: AscendedExtra:
** [[AdvertisedExtra Compared to the movies]], the Cybertonians get more attention and focus.
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Sarah Lennox her daughter and Annabelle LennoxLennox are given more focus and characterization.



* BadassFamily: The Lennox family. [[PapaWolf William Lennox]] who has served in the military and has gone into battle with the [[TransformingMecha Cybertonians]]. [[MamaBear Sarah Lennox]] who intimidates governments officials and the Autobots themselves through sheer personality alone. Their daughter [[LittleMissBadass Annabelle Lennox]] who stands up to bullies [[spoiler:and a couple of Decepticons]] ([[ItRunsInTheFamily is it really any surprise where she gets it from?]]). Then there's [[HonoraryUncle honorary family member Ironhide]] who is the [[TheBigGuy weapons specialist of the Autobots]].



* BigBad: Megatron, Leader of the Decepticons.



* BigGood: Optimus Prime, Leader of the Autobots.



* BullyingADragon: [[spoiler: [[SixthRangerTraitor Sentinel Prime]] attempts to assert dominance over [[BigBad Megatron]] telling the Decepticon that he is working ''with'' him, not ''for'' him. Even if he is a Prime, Sentinel should probably know better than to antagonize the Leader of the Decepticons. Mikaela who is observing the two of them notes that Megatron looked ready to kill Sentinel right then and there.]]



--> '''Annabelle:''' My name is Annabelle. And you're a big mean bully. [[SmugSnake You just act tough when you scare people]]. [[TheBully Like Carl does]]. But if someone isn't scared, you don't know what to do. You have to stand up to bullies or else they always will pick on you. ''(smiles)'' And bullies get in trouble. 'Cause good guys stop them.\\

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--> '''Annabelle:''' -->''Annabelle:''' My name is Annabelle. And you're a big mean bully. [[SmugSnake You just act tough when you scare people]]. [[TheBully Like Carl does]]. But if someone isn't scared, you don't know what to do. You have to stand up to bullies or else they always will pick on you. ''(smiles)'' And bullies get in trouble. 'Cause good guys stop them.\\



--> '''Mearing:''' You are not a soldier. You are a messenger. You've always been a messenger.\\

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--> '''Mearing:''' -->'''Mearing:''' You are not a soldier. You are a messenger. You've always been a messenger.\\



--> '''[[spoiler: Sentinel Prime:]]''' [[spoiler:(to Megatron) Traitor.]]\\

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--> '''[[spoiler: -->'''[[spoiler: Sentinel Prime:]]''' [[spoiler:(to Megatron) Traitor.]]\\



** Ironhide and Chromia [[ShipTease seem to be interested in each other]] which is a reference to ''WesternAnimation/TheTransformers''.

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** Ironhide and Chromia Chromia's [[ShipTease seem to be interested interest in each other]] which is a reference to ''WesternAnimation/TheTransformers''.[[WesternAnimation/TheTransformers the original cartoon series]].


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* TookALevelInKindness: In ''Summer Vacation'', Simmons acts very obnoxious to Sarah and Annabelle because they are civilians in a government facility. In ''A Child's Innocence'', he has softened up quite a bit [[spoiler:and even comforts Annabelle when the Autobots are seeemingly killed in the Xanthium explosion]].


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* WeWillMeetAgain: [[spoiler:In ''A Child's Innocence'', after being defeated in Chicago and having his plans involving using the space bridge to bring Cybertron to replace Earth foiled, [[BigBad Megatron]] makes it clear that while the Autobots have won the battle, they have not won the war.]]
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* IllKillYou: [[spoiler:Sam promises this to Dylan [[SadisticChoice for forcing him to betray the Autobots or risk Mikaela's life]]. He makes through with his promise when the two meet again in Chicago.]]


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** [[spoiler:[[CorruptCorporateExecutive Dylan]] [[TheQuisling Gould]] betrays the entire human race to the Decepticons and coerces Sam Witwicky into spying on his friends, the Autobots by [[IHaveYourWife kidnapping his girlfriend, Mikaela Banes]]. Dylan later tries to turn on the pillars that will lead to Cybertron destroying and replacing Earth. Sam kills him by sending him into the pillar, [[ShockAndAwe electrocuting the businessman to death]].]]
** [[spoiler:[[FallenHero Sentinel Prime]] betrays the Autobots to work with Megatron in order to rebuild Cybertron. He later tries to assert power over Megatron. This all leads to Sentinel being caught in [[MeleeATrois a fight between Megatron and Optimus Prime]]. And later, Optimus executes the traitor with Megatron's gun.]]


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* WeHardlyKnewYe:
** [[spoiler:Not much development or attention is given to Jolt and Flareup before Sentinel Prime off-lines them.]]
** [[spoiler:There's not much change to Shockwave's role in ''DOTM'' before Optimus Prime off-lines him.]]
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* OnlySaneMan: [[spoiler:Barricade is one of the only Decepticons who recognizes the [[PapaWolf consequences]] of attempting to harm Annabelle Lennox.]]
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** [[spoiler: Starscream nearly has his entire arm blown off courtesy of Sam placing an explosive on the former's shoulder joint.]]

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** [[spoiler: Starscream nearly has his entire arm blown off courtesy of Sam placing an explosive on the former's Decepticon's shoulder joint.]]



* CombatMedic: Ratchet

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* CombatMedic: RatchetRatchet, for the Autobots.



* TheCutie: Annabelle Lennox. She endears herself to both other characters and the audience. She is good friends with [[TheBigGuy Ironhide]] and continuously makes crayon drawings of him in both vehicle form and robot form.



** [[spoiler: Dylan Gould could also be considered one to Annabelle Lennox. Both of their fathers worked with Cybertonians: Richard Gould with the Decepticons and William Lennox with the Autobots. Both Dylan and Annabelle also grew up with the knowledge of the Cybertonians, however Dylan was influenced by the villainous Decepticons whilst Annabelle was influenced by the heroic Autobots. This is best exemplified in Chicago where Dylan stops at nothing to ensure the Decepticons' victory while Annabelle stops at nothing to keep the Decepticons from winning.]]
* ExactWords: [[spoiler: Sam [[InvokedTrope invokes]] this trope during his conversation with Optimus Prime when the Autobots are being forced to leave Earth to clue him in on the fact that the Decepticons are listening in on them by telling him that "no other ''human''" will know whatever Optimus tells him. Optimus understands and does not tell Sam that the Autobots have no intention of leaving Earth.]]

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** [[spoiler: Dylan [[spoiler:Dylan Gould could also be considered one to Annabelle Lennox. Both of their fathers worked with Cybertonians: Richard Gould with the Decepticons and William Lennox with the Autobots. Both Dylan and Annabelle also grew up with the knowledge of the Cybertonians, however Dylan was influenced by the villainous Decepticons whilst Annabelle was influenced by the heroic Autobots. This is best exemplified in Chicago where Dylan stops at nothing to ensure the Decepticons' victory while Annabelle stops at nothing to keep the Decepticons from winning.]]
* ExactWords: [[spoiler: Sam [[spoiler:Sam [[InvokedTrope invokes]] this trope during his conversation with Optimus Prime when the Autobots are being forced to leave Earth to clue him in on the fact that the Decepticons are listening in on them by telling him that "no other ''human''" will know whatever Optimus tells him. Optimus understands and does not tell Sam that the Autobots have no intention of leaving Earth.]]



* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler: Annabelle listens to Starscream and Barricade converse in Cybertonian about the "Autobot traitor" and hears that the traitor's name is "...Prime". Since she knows what Optimus Prime's name sounds like in Cybertonian, the traitor cannot be him. There's also only one other Prime: Sentinel, who turns out to be the traitor.]]

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler: Annabelle [[spoiler:Annabelle listens to Starscream and Barricade converse in Cybertonian about the "Autobot traitor" and hears that the traitor's name is "...Prime". Since she knows what Optimus Prime's name sounds like in Cybertonian, the traitor cannot be him. There's also only one other Prime: Sentinel, who turns out to be the traitor.]]



* PosthumousCharacter: [[spoiler: Richard Gould is already deceased when he is mentioned in ''A Child's Innocence''. [[SmallRoleBigImpact Although it is because of him that Dylan grew up into collaborating with the Decepticons]].]]
* PragmaticVillainy: [[spoiler: Barricade decides that it would be safer for him if he let Annabelle go so that he would avoid suffering the wrath of the Autobots who care about her (mainly Ironhide).]]

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* PosthumousCharacter: [[spoiler: Richard [[spoiler:Richard Gould is already deceased when he is mentioned in ''A Child's Innocence''. [[SmallRoleBigImpact Although it is because of him that Dylan grew up into collaborating with the Decepticons]].]]
* PragmaticVillainy: [[spoiler: Barricade [[spoiler:Barricade decides that it would be safer for him if he let Annabelle go so that he would avoid suffering the wrath of the Autobots who care about her (mainly Ironhide).]]



* TheRichHaveWhiteStuff: Dylan Gould's house is white as is described by Sam Witwicky as a cross between the Sydney Oprea House and Disney World's Epcot.

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* TheRichHaveWhiteStuff: Dylan Gould's house is white as and is described by Sam Witwicky as a cross between the Sydney Oprea House and Disney World's Epcot.



** Dylan tells Sam that the reason he gave a letter of recommendation to Accuretta Systems to help Sam get a job there was because he supports his and Mikaela's relationship. [[spoiler: It's actually part of his plan to get [[TheMole a spy who is close to the Autobots in the form of Sam]].]]

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** Dylan tells Sam that the reason he gave a letter of recommendation to Accuretta Systems to help Sam get a job there was because he supports his and Mikaela's relationship. [[spoiler: It's [[spoiler:It's actually part of his plan to get [[TheMole a spy who is close to the Autobots in the form of Sam]].]]



* TreacherousAdvisor: [[spoiler: Sentinel Prime]]

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* TreacherousAdvisor: [[spoiler: Sentinel [[spoiler:Sentinel Prime]]
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** Ironhide and Chromia ([[ShipTease seem to be interested in each other]]) which is a reference to ''WesternAnimation/TheTransformers''.

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** Ironhide and Chromia ([[ShipTease [[ShipTease seem to be interested in each other]]) other]] which is a reference to ''WesternAnimation/TheTransformers''.


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* TheRichHaveWhiteStuff: Dylan Gould's house is white as is described by Sam Witwicky as a cross between the Sydney Oprea House and Disney World's Epcot.
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