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7th Mar '16 12:28:53 AM Eddy1215
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* DramaticIrony: Upon hearing about the accident, Rainbow Dash instantly assumes that Derpy messed something up and hurt Twilight, while the viewers know that Derpy has actually lost her sight. This makes Rainbow's glares, mental threats, smugness at what she believes Derpy is ashamed when she sees her eyes closed and calling her a coward look even crueler to the viewers.
29th Feb '16 3:57:50 AM Eddy1215
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom : The librarian mocking Twilight's intelligence, and not believing her when she says she wants to help an adult mare with an eye condition that's usually only seen in little foals, makes her so angry that she decides to continue researching entirely by her own, not even thinking about asking for any medical expert's help, thinking they'll react just like the librarian.

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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom : UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: The librarian mocking Twilight's intelligence, and not believing her when she says she wants to help an adult mare with an eye condition that's usually only seen in little foals, makes her so angry that she decides to continue researching entirely by her own, not even thinking about asking for any medical expert's help, thinking they'll react just like the librarian.
4th Mar '15 6:41:51 PM JoseRamiro
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* {{Jerkass}}: Crafty Crate, along with two unnamed Cloudsdale mailponies. Rainbow Dash crosses her [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold usual line]] a few times, bluntly telling Derpy that she finds the idea of sitting at her place all day painful enough, but she [[HeelRealisation gets better]].

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* {{Jerkass}}: Crafty Crate, along with two unnamed Cloudsdale mailponies. Rainbow Dash crosses her [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold usual line]] a few times, bluntly telling Derpy that she finds the idea of sitting at her place all day painful enough, but she [[HeelRealisation gets better]]. Similarly, the librarian in charge of Canterlot's medical library is an arrogant jerk to Twilight Sparkle when she does her research to help Derpy.


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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom : The librarian mocking Twilight's intelligence, and not believing her when she says she wants to help an adult mare with an eye condition that's usually only seen in little foals, makes her so angry that she decides to continue researching entirely by her own, not even thinking about asking for any medical expert's help, thinking they'll react just like the librarian.
23rd Sep '14 10:15:47 AM acg452
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* UnkemptBeauty: In chapter 6, Derpy sees Twilight immediately after the latter has just showered. Twilight thinks her mane is a mess. Derpy doesn't mind ''at all''.
2nd Aug '14 5:02:25 PM ThePope
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* TrademarkFavouriteFood: Hilariously subverted: Derpy hasn't been able to look at a muffin without wanting to throw up since the [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E4ApplebuckSeason Baked Bads incident]].

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* TrademarkFavouriteFood: TrademarkFavoriteFood: Hilariously subverted: Derpy hasn't been able to look at a muffin without wanting to throw up since the [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E4ApplebuckSeason Baked Bads incident]].
10th Feb '14 7:41:35 PM vergess
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4th Jul '13 9:42:34 PM Ospero
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As of a recent revision, the story now has two side chapters, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/112521/destination-known Destination Known]]''.

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As of a recent revision, the story now has two side chapters, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/112521/destination-known Destination Known]]''.
Known]]'', which contain the more mature stuff formerly found in the main story.
25th Jun '13 7:25:10 AM ClatoLawa
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* ContinuityNod: Derpy's canon appearances in "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E15FeelingPInkieKeen Feeling Pinkie Keen]]" and "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E14TheLastRoundup The Last Roundup]]" are mentioned. Derpy still feels guilty over both, though Twilight assures her she doesn't hold a grudge.

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* ContinuityNod: Derpy's canon appearances in "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E15FeelingPInkieKeen Feeling Pinkie Keen]]" and "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E14TheLastRoundup The Last Roundup]]" are mentioned. mentioned frequently. Derpy still feels guilty over both, though Twilight assures her she doesn't hold a grudge.grudge.
** Plenty of other episodes - particularly various Mane characters most embarassing moments - get referenced as well.
25th Jun '13 7:22:03 AM ClatoLawa
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** Thankfully, in the revised version, [[LaserGuidedKarma he does not get away with it]]: Post reports his discrimination to the Mayor of Cloudsdale, and Crafty ends up under investigation and on probation.
25th Jun '13 7:04:02 AM ClatoLawa
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As of a recent revision, the story now has two side chapters, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/112521/destination-known Destination Known]]''.



* FinaglesLaw: The spell Twilight finds to fix Derpy's exotropia has to be cast several times before it becomes permanent, and any mistake could cause serious damage. In addition, the scroll she finds it on is very old, badly damaged and almost illegible without a lot of effort. So when she tries it on Derpy in Chapter 10, it ends up blinding her entirely. However, her vision has returned by the following morning, and Rarity manages to pinpoint Twilight's mistake - [[spoiler:though the spell continues to be enough of a risk for Celestia to ban her from using it]].

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* FinaglesLaw: The spell Twilight finds to fix Derpy's exotropia has to be cast several times before it becomes permanent, and any mistake could cause serious damage. In addition, the scroll she finds it on is very old, badly damaged and almost illegible without a lot of effort. So when she tries it on Derpy in Chapter 10, 13, it ends up blinding her entirely. However, her vision has returned by the following morning, and Rarity manages to pinpoint Twilight's mistake - [[spoiler:though the spell continues to be enough of a risk for Celestia to ban her from using it]].



* HarmfulToMinors: In Chapter 9 Rainbow Dash and Applejack sensibly attempt to keep Spike away from the library while Twilight and Derpy are alone together. He gets back just in time to see them making out, but it could have been worse, as the two had sex while he was out.
* HappyEndingMassage: Derpy gives one to Twilight in Chapter 16.
* HeelRealization: Rainbow Dash in Chapter 13, after realising how much she's contributed to Derpy's life of misery. She tearfully apologises in Chapter 14:

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* HarmfulToMinors: In Chapter 9 12 Rainbow Dash and Applejack sensibly attempt to keep Spike away from the library while Twilight and Derpy are alone together. He gets back just in time to see them making out, but it could have been worse, as the two had sex while he was out.
* HappyEndingMassage: Derpy gives one to Twilight in Chapter 16.
19. [[spoiler:The happy ending is in Chapter 19b]].
* HeelRealization: Rainbow Dash in Chapter 13, 16, after realising how much she's contributed to Derpy's life of misery. She tearfully apologises in Chapter 14:17:



* MoodWhiplash: In chapter 20 Derpy returns to the library after successfully befriending Fluttershy and Applejack to find Twilight BurningWithAnger. In the following chapter, [[spoiler: Derpy reads Princess Celestia's letter, which abruptly shifts from congratulating Twilight on her new relationship and expressing her interest in the mystery of Derpy's Cutie Mark to admonishing her for using such a dangerous spell and ordering her to hand over all her information on it.]]

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* MoodWhiplash: In chapter 20 23 Derpy returns to the library after successfully befriending Fluttershy and Applejack to find Twilight BurningWithAnger. In the following chapter, [[spoiler: Derpy reads Princess Celestia's letter, which abruptly shifts from congratulating Twilight on her new relationship and expressing her interest in the mystery of Derpy's Cutie Mark to admonishing her for using such a dangerous spell and ordering her to hand over all her information on it.]]



** And she seems to be on the right track, because [[spoiler:as discovered in Chapter 14, the bubbles on her Cutie Mark have started changing colour, matching the fur and mane colours of the Elements of Harmony - in order, Twilight, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Rarity Fluttershy and Applejack - as each of them come to accept her as she is. The seventh changes in Chapter 23, to Derpy's own colouring. This is a phenomenon that neither Twilight nor Celestia have ever seen or heard of before]].

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** And she seems to be on the right track, because [[spoiler:as discovered in Chapter 14, 17, the bubbles on her Cutie Mark have started changing colour, matching the fur and mane colours of the Elements of Harmony - in order, Twilight, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Rarity Fluttershy and Applejack - as each of them come to accept her as she is. The seventh changes in Chapter 23, 26, to Derpy's own colouring. This is a phenomenon that neither Twilight nor Celestia have ever seen or heard of before]].
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