History Fanfic / AGreenSunIlluminatestheVoid

8th May '16 11:48:06 AM Discar
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%%* OutsideContextVillain: Sheffield has finally figured out that Louise is not a mage. Unfortunately for her, she thinks Louise is a [[HalfHumanHybrid Godblood]] Familiar, because she doesn't know Exalted exist.

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%%* OutsideContextVillain: OutsideContextProblem: Sheffield has finally figured out that Louise is not a mage. Unfortunately for her, she thinks Louise is a [[HalfHumanHybrid Godblood]] Familiar, because she doesn't know Exalted exist.
24th Apr '16 3:35:24 PM MEHFOOD
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** In chapter 9, one of the Griffon Knight only has a [[Film /{{Monty Python and the Holy Grail}} flesh wound]].

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** In chapter 9, one of the Griffon Knight only has a [[Film /{{Monty [[Monty Python and the Holy Grail}} Grail flesh wound]].
24th Apr '16 3:34:39 PM MEHFOOD
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** In chapter 9, one of the Griffon Knight only has a [[Film /{{Monty Python and the Holy Grail}} flesh wound]].
5th Mar '16 10:11:14 AM Tron80
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Louise and Montmorency are in the early stages of this, a friendship born of [[DefeatMeansFriendship putting each other in the hospital]].

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* VitriolicBestBuds: VitriolicBestBuds:
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Louise and Montmorency are in the early stages of this, a friendship born of [[DefeatMeansFriendship putting each other in the hospital]].
5th Jun '15 4:03:52 AM spacemonkey37
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** Earth dragons leave [[Literature/{{Dune}} wyrmsign]].
3rd Feb '15 7:31:48 PM ryanasaurus0077
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* OutsideContextVillain: Sheffield has finally figured out that Louise is not a mage. Unfortunately for her, she thinks Louise is a [[HalfHumanHybrid Godblood]] Familiar, because she doesn't know Exalted exist.

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* %%* OutsideContextVillain: Sheffield has finally figured out that Louise is not a mage. Unfortunately for her, she thinks Louise is a [[HalfHumanHybrid Godblood]] Familiar, because she doesn't know Exalted exist.



* WellDoneSonGuy: Louise may be empowered by the cosmic horse of the creators of linear time and all fixed reality. She still lives for her mother's approval.

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* WellDoneSonGuy: WellDoneDaughterGirl: Louise may be empowered by the cosmic horse of the creators of linear time and all fixed reality. She still lives for her mother's approval.
3rd Feb '15 5:11:39 AM NemuruMaeNi
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** PoisonousFriend: She genuinely has her host's well-being at heart, however, and most of her suggestions seem to be her attempting to advise Louise on a course of action that would make her happy. It just so happens she's saying this from the [[BlueAndOrangeMorality hyper-cynical and self-centered viewpoint of a demon]].
** And she's doing it less and less, as she realizes that there is no reason in Creation to go back to Malfeas, given that she's essentially playing backseat driver to someone who will be the most powerful being in the dimension inside of a decade.

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%% Natter and ExampleIndentation problems ** PoisonousFriend: She genuinely has her host's well-being at heart, however, and most of her suggestions seem to be her attempting to advise Louise on a course of action that would make her happy. It just so happens she's saying this from the [[BlueAndOrangeMorality hyper-cynical and self-centered viewpoint of a demon]].
%% Natter and ExampleIndentation problems ** And she's doing it less and less, as she realizes that there is no reason in Creation to go back to Malfeas, given that she's essentially playing backseat driver to someone who will be the most powerful being in the dimension inside of a decade.



* [[OutsideContextVillain Outside Context Protagonist]]: Sheffield has finally figured out that Louise is not a mage. Unfortunately for her, she thinks Louise is a [[HalfHumanHybrid Godblood]] Familiar, because she doesn't know Exalted exist.

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* [[OutsideContextVillain Outside Context Protagonist]]: OutsideContextVillain: Sheffield has finally figured out that Louise is not a mage. Unfortunately for her, she thinks Louise is a [[HalfHumanHybrid Godblood]] Familiar, because she doesn't know Exalted exist.



* [[WellDoneSonGuy "Well Done, Daughter" Girl]]: Louise may be empowered by the cosmic horse of the creators of linear time and all fixed reality. She still lives for her mother's approval.

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* [[WellDoneSonGuy "Well Done, Daughter" Girl]]: WellDoneSonGuy: Louise may be empowered by the cosmic horse of the creators of linear time and all fixed reality. She still lives for her mother's approval.
3rd Feb '15 5:04:45 AM NemuruMaeNi
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* DishingOutDirt: The exact list of Louise's Charms isn't spelled out in the fic itself, but she has one of Cecelyne's defensive Charms (namely Sand Through Fingers Defense), possessing the ability to burst into Cecelyne's signature sands. Also she has picked up Sandstrike Blast, which conjure the silver sands with the horse of..well [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin a sandblaster]]. At one point, she's mugged by hired thugs and employs this to accidentally shred one of their faces to bloody gibs.

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* DishingOutDirt: The exact list of Louise's Charms isn't spelled out in the fic itself, but she has one of Cecelyne's defensive Charms (namely Sand Through Fingers Defense), possessing the ability to burst into Cecelyne's signature sands. Also she has picked up Sandstrike Blast, which conjure the silver sands with the horse of..well [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin of a sandblaster]].sandblaster. At one point, she's mugged by hired thugs and employs this to accidentally shred one of their faces to bloody gibs.
15th Dec '14 1:20:01 PM fruitstripegum
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* MagicKnight: Incredibly common. Wardes and the Griffon Knights are explicitly mage-knights in-setting, and any mage who learns how to fight as well as cast counts as one. Louise is also ending up as an example of this trope; as a Slayer, she naturally picks up skill in use of weaponry inhumanly quickly.


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* MagicKnight: Incredibly common. Wardes and the Griffon Knights are explicitly mage-knights in-setting, and any mage who learns how to fight as well as cast counts as one. Louise is also ending up as an example of this trope; as a Slayer, she naturally picks up skill in use of weaponry inhumanly quickly.
27th Sep '14 4:37:11 AM DarkfurTheCat
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* DishingOutDirt: The exact list of Louise's Charms isn't spelled out in the fic itself, but she has one of Cecelyne's defensive Charms (namely Sand Through Fingers Defense), possessing the ability to burst into Cecelyne's signature sands. Also she has picked up Sandstrike Blast, which conjure the silver sands with the force of..well [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin a sandblaster]]. At one point, she's mugged by hired thugs and employs this to accidentally shred one of their faces to bloody gibs.

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* DishingOutDirt: The exact list of Louise's Charms isn't spelled out in the fic itself, but she has one of Cecelyne's defensive Charms (namely Sand Through Fingers Defense), possessing the ability to burst into Cecelyne's signature sands. Also she has picked up Sandstrike Blast, which conjure the silver sands with the force horse of..well [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin a sandblaster]]. At one point, she's mugged by hired thugs and employs this to accidentally shred one of their faces to bloody gibs.



* ImportantHaircut: Louise cuts off most of her own hair in order to hide among the rebel forces, primarily because the women there all have short hair, but also because having [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair unusually-colored hair]] is a sure sign of being a mage and noble.

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* ImportantHaircut: Louise cuts off most of her own hair in order to hide among the rebel forces, horses, primarily because the women there all have short hair, but also because having [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair unusually-colored hair]] is a sure sign of being a mage and noble.



** Irukuwu also qualifies. In human form, she's quite fast, and can kill power armored soldiers with thrown food jars, even before she starts partial shapeshifting. In dragon form, well, she's a Rhyme Dragon. Those are [[TheDreaded scary as all hell, even for other dragons.]]

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** Irukuwu also qualifies. In human form, she's quite fast, and can kill power armored soldiers with thrown food jars, even before she starts partial shapeshifting. In dragon form, well, she's a Rhyme Dragon. Those are [[TheDreaded scary as all hell, malfeas, even for other dragons.]]



* MagicalGirlWarrior: Through a twisted, hellish lens, this is Louise's status in the story. A teenage girl, empowered by a strange being to work towards "fixing" the world, given special powers to do so even as she confronts the travails of growing up and society's expectations. It's the bit where she's a hell-empowered neo-titan, is where things get a bit less normal.

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* MagicalGirlWarrior: Through a twisted, hellish lens, this is Louise's status in the story. A teenage girl, empowered by a strange being to work towards "fixing" the world, given special powers to do so even as she confronts the travails of growing up and society's expectations. It's the bit where she's a hell-empowered malfeas-empowered neo-titan, is where things get a bit less normal.



* OurDemonsAreDifferent: Marisalon, as a neomah, plays a role similar to a succubus. However, from hints dropped about her past, she bought her citizenship in hell with bribes and profits made from trade with Creation. Louise has also summoned a sesselja, which is basically a smart animal which likes eating poisons and mending flesh.

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* OurDemonsAreDifferent: Marisalon, as a neomah, plays a role similar to a succubus. However, from hints dropped about her past, she bought her citizenship in hell malfeas with bribes and profits made from trade with Creation. Louise has also summoned a sesselja, which is basically a smart animal which likes eating poisons and mending flesh.



** Siesta's letter in Chapter 3 is full of references to Exalted.



* [[WellDoneSonGuy "Well Done, Daughter" Girl]]: Louise may be empowered by the cosmic force of the creators of linear time and all fixed reality. She still lives for her mother's approval.

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* [[WellDoneSonGuy "Well Done, Daughter" Girl]]: Louise may be empowered by the cosmic force horse of the creators of linear time and all fixed reality. She still lives for her mother's approval.
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