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* DarkFic: All the way through. Seriously, this is essentially the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' equivalent of "[[Series/TalesFromTheDarkside The Geezenstacks]]".
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* DarkFic: All the way through. Seriously, this is essentially the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' equivalent of "[[Series/TalesFromTheDarkside "[[Recap/TalesFromTheDarksideS3E5TheGeezenstacks The Geezenstacks]]".
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* [[spoiler:LiterallyShatteredLives]]: Diamond Tiara.
* [[spoiler:ImMelting]]: Let's see... Filthy Rich turned into a porcelain doll... [[spoiler:gets placed on a hot plate... porcelain melts...]] ...yeah, this trope is in effect.
* [[spoiler:ImMelting]]: Let's see... Filthy Rich turned into a porcelain doll... [[spoiler:gets placed on a hot plate... porcelain melts...]] ...yeah, this trope is in effect.
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* [[spoiler:LiterallyShatteredLives]]: LiterallyShatteredLives: Diamond Tiara.
*[[spoiler:ImMelting]]: ImMelting: Let's see... Filthy Rich turned into a porcelain doll... [[spoiler:gets placed on a hot plate... porcelain melts...]] ...yeah, this trope is in effect.
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* AdultFear: What's worse? [[spoiler:Being melted to death on a hot plate]] or that ''plus'' [[spoiler:seeing your daughter get '''killed in front of you''']]?
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The newly coronated Princess Twilight suffers an abrupt tragedy. Having lost two loved ones, she begins to question her own mortality, and that of her friends: AJ, Dash, Rarity, Pinkie, Fluttershy. And they are just the beginning. Twilight will live for thousands of years, so every pony she cares about, every pony she ''will ever'' care about, will die. She can barely handle the pain of one funeral, let alone the thought of hundreds of them. Twilight finds a clever way to ensure all of her friends never die. They can’t all be ageless alicorns, but they can all move into [[TitleDrop Twilight’s Dollhouse]]. [[OhCrap Then they can be best friends forever.]]
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The newly coronated Princess Twilight suffers an abrupt tragedy. Having lost two loved ones, she begins to question her own mortality, and that of her friends: AJ, Dash, Rarity, Pinkie, Fluttershy. And they are just the beginning. Twilight will live for thousands of years, so every pony she cares about, every pony she ''will ever'' care about, will die. She can barely handle the pain of one funeral, let alone the thought of hundreds of them. Twilight finds a clever way to ensure all of her friends never die. They can’t can't all be ageless alicorns, but they can all move into [[TitleDrop Twilight’s Twilight's Dollhouse]]. [[OhCrap Then they can be best friends forever.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: The first installment; [[spoiler:Twilight's reign of terror is ended, Scootaloo has escaped and Lyra is set free. But the rest of Twilight's victims have gone missing and Celestia was forced to execute Twilight to finally put the situation to rest]].
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The sequel, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/120181/twilights-dollhouse-ii-lyras-quest Twilight's Dollhouse II]]'' has recently begun, and Kaidan says that he has plans for further sequels.z
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The sequel, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/120181/twilights-dollhouse-ii-lyras-quest Twilight's Dollhouse II]]'' has recently begun, and Kaidan says that he has plans for further sequels.z
sequels.
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** [[spoiler: The Crusaders certainly try. Too bad Silver Spoon ignored them.]]
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*** [[spoiler: The Crusaders certainly try. Too bad Silver Spoon ignored them.]]
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* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler: The Crusaders certainly try. Too bad Silver Spoon ignored them.]]
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** [[spoiler: The Crusaders certainly try. Too bad Silver Spoon ignored them.]]
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* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler: The Crusaders certainly try. Too bad Silver Spoon ignored them.]]
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The sequel, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/120181/twilights-dollhouse-ii-lyras-quest Twilight's Dollhouse II]]'' has recently begun, and Kaidan says that he has plans for further sequels.
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* DarkFic: Considerably so for a fanfic of a little girl's show. Seriously, this is essentially the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' equivalent of "[[Series/TalesFromTheDarkside The Geezenstacks]]".
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* DarkFic: Considerably so for a fanfic of a little girl's show.All the way through. Seriously, this is essentially the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' equivalent of "[[Series/TalesFromTheDarkside The Geezenstacks]]".
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The sequel, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/120181/twilights-dollhouse-ii-lyras-quest Twilight's Dollhouse II]]: [[spoiler:Lyra's]] Quest'' has recently begun, and Kaidan says that he has plans for further sequels.
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The sequel, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/120181/twilights-dollhouse-ii-lyras-quest Twilight's Dollhouse II]]: [[spoiler:Lyra's]] Quest'' II]]'' has recently begun, and Kaidan says that he has plans for further sequels.
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** AndIMustScream: Anytime Twilight leaves the dolls inanimate for long periods of time. [[spoiler: Also, when Silver Spoon freezes Lyra in a glass of water.]]
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** AndIMustScream: Anytime Twilight leaves the dolls inanimate for long periods of time. [[spoiler: Also, when Silver Spoon [[MoralEventHorizon freezes Lyra in a glass of water.water]].]]
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The sequel makes it clear she isn\'t dead yet.
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* KarmicDeath: [[spoiler: Twilight, an "immortal" alocorn who wanted to make her friends immortal because she fears them dying, gets killed by Celestia.]]
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* KarmicDeath: [[spoiler: Twilight, an "immortal" alocorn who wanted to make her friends immortal because she fears them dying, gets killed by Celestia.]]
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* StockholmSyndrome: Some of the dolls come to sympathize with their captor.
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* StockholmSyndrome: Some of the dolls come to sympathize with their captor. Lyra being the most prominent.
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* {{Jerkass}}: A lot of the dolls, Bon Bon especially - victims of kidnapping though they may be, their efforts to resist her only thwart Lyra's efforts to help Twilight work through her depression and result in Twilight crossing the Moral Event Horizon in retaliation.
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* {{Jerkass}}: A lot of the dolls, Bon Bon especially - victims of kidnapping though they may be, their efforts to resist her only thwart Lyra's efforts to help Twilight work through her depression and result in Twilight crossing the Moral Event Horizon MoralEventHorizon in retaliation.
